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春节作文高中英语Summerhascomewithitswarmsunnydaysmakingusthingofallsortsofnicethingssuchasholidaysinthecountrypicnicsandhaymaking©parties.WhenSpringcameshefoundtheearthcoldandbarebutshesoonchangedallthatandbythetimeSummerarrivestheworldisaverydifferentplace.Itisagreenworldnowgreenleavesonthetreesgreengrassinthefieldsgreenplantscrowdinginthehedges
②,andflowersopeningeverywhere.ThedaysarelongandthenightsareshortforthesungetsupearlyandgoestobedlateinsunnyJune.Itisoneofthebestandbrightestmonthsintheyear.Birdssingfromsunrisetilllongaftersunset.Asnightfallsoneafteranotherthebirdsstoptheirsingingandafterafewlastsleepysoundsputtheirheadsundertheirwingstorestforanhourortwobeforebeginningagain.Theydonotallsleephowever.Whenotherbirdsaresilentcomesasoftcrythenafterafewmomentsanotherlouderthistime;andsoonthenightingale@pouringouthiswonderfulsong.Notonlyatnightdoesthenightingalesing.OnalmosteverywarmdayinearlyJunethelittlebrownbirdsingsawayintheroadsandwoodsbutasalltheotherbirdsarealsosingingatthesametimewedonotnoticehisvoicesomuch.Itisatnightwhenhehasthefieldalltohimselfthatwehearthenightingaleathisbest.【词语解释】
①haymaking[heimeikiR]n.制备干草
②hedge[hedN]n.(矮树的)树篱
③nightingale[naitiRgeil]n.夜莺【写作指要】1)本文抓住绿的世界和歌的昼夜从视觉描写到听觉描写给读者描绘了一幅生气勃勃的夏日农村的美景2)其次段里green一词的多次重复使绿的世界深深留在人们的心里在第
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四、五段里,把歌声这一概念用不同的词表达出来,如singsongsoundscrypouringoutsingingvoice等,如此同义照应,使语义上下连贯,同时也加强和突出了夜莺唱歌的主题3)本文使用了拟人(personification)手法,文章显得非常生动其次段Spring和Summer两个词首字母大写,用she指代Spring;第三段中的getsup和goestobedbirdssing;第四段中的sleepcry;第五段中的hisvoicehe和himself都是拟人用法4)为了使描写生动美丽,使用了分词短语makingusthinkof独产主格结构greenleavesonthetreesflowersopeningeverywhere省略句法thenafterafewmomentsanotherlouderthistime以及传神的短语alltohimself和athisbest等。
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