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选择性必修第二册unit5作文关于急救的写作写作题目假设你和你的同学李明一起去锅炉房打开水在回寝室的路上，李明的热水瓶突然破裂开水烫伤了他的脚于是你对他实施了必要的急救请你结合此事，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文向学校英文报Teens投稿，主要内容包括L描述事故发生的经过；.你是如何实施急救的（冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步的处理）;.简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识参考词汇:锅炉房boilerroom热水瓶Thermosbottle思路点拨处理烫伤，实施主题体裁急救第一人称和第人称时态三人称第一部分:描述事故发生的经过；布局第二部分:实施急救的措施；第三部分:简述对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识遣词造句I.用本单元所学单词或短语填空.〃力身体部位肿起的;肿胀的.6•.切实可行的;实际的;实践的.近.减轻;缓解.立刻;马上答案
1.swollen
2.practical
3.ease.rightaway/atoncen.本单元语块、语法运用.完成句子1烫伤非常严重Thewasverysevere.2那片皮肤又红又肿Theskinwasredand.3我设法保持镇静，并快速回想在急救课上学到的内容ImanagedtoandquicklyrecalledwhatIhadlearntinmyclass.4我立即把他的脚放到流动的冷水下，以减轻疼痛Iplacedhisfeetunderthecoolrunningwaterthepain.⑸直到那时我才意识到基本的急救知识是多么重要和实用OnlythenwasIawareofthebasicknowledgeaboutfirstaidwas.答案1burn2swollen3remaincalm;first-aid4rightawaytoease5howimportantandpractical.句式升级6将句⑴和句⑵合并为含有“so...that...”结构的句子⑺将句⑶升级为含有现在分词短语作伴随状语的句子答案6Theburnwassoseverethattheskinwasredandswollen.71managedtoremaincalmquicklyrecallingwhatIhadlearntinmyfirst-aidclass.参考范文OnedayLiMingandIwerewalkingbacktothedormfromtheboilerroomwhenhisThermosbottleburstandtheboilingwatercausedaninjurytohisfeet.Theburnwassoseverethattheskinwasredandswollen.HoweverImanagedtoremaincalmquicklyrecallingwhatIhadlearntinmyfirst-aidclass.Iplacedhisfeetunderthecoolrunningwaterrightawaytoeasethepain.AfterwardsIcalledataxiandrushedhimtothehospital.OnlythenwasIawareofhowimportantandpracticalthebasicknowledgeaboutfirstaidwas.写作积累有关避免/处理紧急状况的一些表达
①Bleeding:Trytostopthebleeding.Pressahandkerchiefontothebleedingpointandholditthere.Holdupthepartofthebodywhichisbleedingifpossible.
②Sprain（扭伤）Itisbettertoavoidwalkingwiththeinjuredankle.Itiscorrecttouseanicepackforrelievingthepain.
③Choke:Makehim/herspit（Pi）itoutbyslappinghim/herontheback.Toavoidthisweshouldnttalkorlaughwheneating.©Nosebleed:Staycalm.Situpbowtheheadandleanslightlyforward.Pinch（捏）bothnostrils（鼻孔）togetherbetweenthethumbandforefinger.Breathethroughthemouthnotthenose.实战演练假设你是李华，你们班最近在英语课上学习了有关急救方面的一些常识，同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣大家都认为学校有必要提供相关的课程作为班长请你给校长写一封信，提出你的建议并写出建议的理由内容包括.学习急救知识的意义；.具体建议及原因；.重申建议的重要性注意
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考范文DearPrincipalOurclassstudiedsomeknowledgeaboutfirstaid.Weareallinterestedinitandfeelthatbeingabletogivefirstaidwhenneededcanmakeadifferencebeforepropermedicaltreatmentisgiven.Thereforewesuggestthatcoursesonfirstaidshouldbeofferedinourschool.Postersaboutfirstaidfordifferentinjuriescanbeputupineverycomerofourcampus.Whatsmoreourschoolcanorganizetherescuedrillstoprovideastageforstudentstopracticeandgainexperienceinfirstaid.Ibelievehavingaknowledgeoffirstaidisofvitalimportance.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakeoursuggestionsintoconsideration.YourssincerelyLiHua。
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