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高考英语应用文写作话题积累之动物描写写作微技能训练动物描写写作语料I.外形描写描写动物外形时,要抓住其特点,突出不同之处,例如皮毛上的斑点、蓬松的毛发、圆圆的眼睛等Tipsyisanadorablebrowndogthathasafewblackspotsspreadacrosshisbodyandtail.Afoxwasrunningoverthestonestogetadrinkofwater.Ithadsilkyfluffy(蓬松的)longfur.Thetipofitstailwaswhiteassnow.WhenIfirstsawmydogshewasaboutthesizeofasquirrelandsofluffythatIcouldbarelyseehereyes.Peterisawhitecat.Aroundhisfacethereisashadow-likepatchofblackfurinthemiddleofwhichyoucanseePetersbigbrightroundblueeyes..性格描写描写动物性格时,除了用到一些形容词,我们还需要通过一系列的动作细节描写,使其形象跃然纸上,更有说服力Thepuppywasfullofenergyandenjoyedplayingwithaballintheyard.(精力充沛)Inourfirstfewweeksasdogownersmyfamilywitnessedourdogusethehouseashertoiletchewonourchairseatoursocksandshoesandbarkatallhoursofthenight.(顽皮)Icantstandmyfatherscat.Shelikestoscratch(抓)thesofawithherpaws.(淘气)Afewminuteslaterthebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Heexposedhissharpteethglaring(瞪眼)atusasheranforward.Thebearagainstoodonhisbacklegsandroared(吼叫)repeatedly.(凶猛)Mangolovestoplayandinteractwithhersurroundingsandshesalwayseagertoexplorenewthings.SheIIclimballoverhercageandthesurroundingfurnitureandwilloftenplaywithtoysandotherobjectsthatshefindsaroundthehouse.(乐于探索).与人互动场景描写通过准确使用动词,恰当运用一定的修辞手法,如拟人,再现出小动物与人相处的情景描写人与动物的互动,既能够使文章内容丰富,又能凸显出动物的独特之处Darlasuddenlyawareofthehandspresencejumpedbacksuddenlytoeyethehandcarefully.Whenevermydogisworriedhelooksatuswithdesperateeyesthatappearasifhessad.Hedoessowhilewagging(摇摆)histailfromonesidetotheother.ButMarywasmorethanjustasimplepet.WheneverAllenfeltsadthebirdwouldalwaysbesingingandchirping(吱喳口U)almostasifshesensedhowhefeltandwantedtolifthisspirits.Aftermakingeyecontactwithustheraccoonbegansqueaking(吱吱叫)forourattention.Charlieisincrediblyattentivetomyneeds.WhenIfeelsadorstressedhewillcometomeandresthisheadonmylapofferingcomfortandsupport.Itsettledinmyarmsstilltrembling(颤抖)alloverbecauseofthecold.小试牛刀
(一)翻译下列句子.我的猫有柔软、光滑的毛,并且她喜欢被梳毛.露西从一个房间跑到另一个房间,上上下下,到处嗅来嗅去3每次我回到家,小狗就会兴奋地叫
4.我和它在公园里玩球每次我尽可能地把球扔远,它就会闪电般地去捡球Mycathassoftsilkycoatsandshelovestobebrushed.Lucyranfromroomtoroomupstairsanddownsniffingaround.ThepuppybarkedexcitedlyeverytimeIreturnedhome.Iplayballwithitinthepark.EverytimeIthrowaballasfarasIcanitIImovelikelightningtofetchtheball.
(二)从不同的角度,介绍一下你的宠物或你最喜欢的动物。
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