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主题学习方法导读本单元的主题是用英语谈论如何学习和如何学会学习.同学们可通过教材所提供的听力对话和阅读材料提炼句式,进而用于介绍某一学科的学习方法和心得.围绕学会学习的主题,可以介绍学习中遇到的困难及解决办法,分享英语学习的方法及其优势,发表对自主学习、合作探究等学习方式的看法.可适用于本单元的主题有很多,如HowIlearnEnglishHowtolearnmathAdviceonhowtoreducelearningpressure等.题目回放在学习英语的过程中你一定有很多心得体会.请以HowIlearnEnglish为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习方法和建议.写作要求.最少提出三种你学习英语的方法或建议;.语句通顺流畅;.不得出现你的真实姓名和校名;.词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁介绍说明个人的学习方法和体会属于说明文.2审内容从三个方面介绍自己的学习方法.3审时态主体时态为一般现在时.4审人称以第一人称为主.框架设计开头从谈论英语学习重要性引出英语学习方法的话题.中间中间主体内容分为三段,每段分别表述不同的英语学习方法.段落素描Firstparagraph:ItisimportanttolearnEnglishinproperways.IwouldliketosharesomeofmyideasonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Itistruethat...Herearesomesuggestions......Thebody:First...Second......Lastparagraph:AllinallifyouputyourheartintoEnglishlearningyouwill......范本淬炼AHowIlearnEnglish
①ItisimportanttolearnEnglishinproperways.IwouldliketosharesomeofmyideasonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Firstitisagoodway
②tolearnEnglishbyreadingaloudeveryday.
③Themoreyoupracticethebetteryouwilllearn.SecondyoucanlearnEnglishbywatchingEnglishmoviesandlisteningtoEnglishsongs.Thesemethodswill
④stimulateyourinterestinEnglishlearningandhelpyou
⑤acquiremoreknowledgeaboutEnglishlanguageandculture.LastbutnotleastyoucanaskyourEnglishteacherforhelpifyou
⑥findanydifficultyinlearningEnglish.Allinallifyou
⑦putyourheartintoEnglishlearningyouwillcertainlylearnitwell.
①It为形式主语,指代后面的动词不定式.
②tolearn…,此处动词不定式充当后置定语,修饰agoodway.
③Themore...thebetter…是形容词比较级的句式.
④stimulate激发.
⑤acquiremoreknowledge获取更多知识.
⑥findanydifficultyin发现在…方面有困难.
⑦putsb.sheartinto全心投入.亮点点评L这篇作文能紧扣主题展开,层次分明,逻辑清晰第一段点明主题,中间一段集中介绍如何学好英语,最后一段归纳总结.整篇文章内容充实,要点齐全.2彳钉接词运用适当使用了firstsecondlastbutnotleast等连接前后句,语句衔接自然.
3.文章语言丰富,如使用了inproperwaysstimulatesb/sinterestinacquireknowledge.languageandculturefinddifficultyinputsb/sheartinto等提升了文章的档次.BHowIlearnEnglishWecannotlearnEnglishwell
①withoutproperways.HerearesomesuggestionsonhowtolearnEnglishwell.
②FirstandforemostIthinkitagoodwaytoreadEnglishaloudeveryday.
③Ibelievethatthemoreyoupracticereadingthebetteryouwilllearn.SecondwhenyoufinddifficultyinlearningEnglishdonot
④hesitatetoseekhelpfromyourEnglishteacher
⑤whowillbegladtoofferhelp.Mostimportantlytostimulate
⑥yourinterestinEnglishlearningyoucantrytofindsomeinterestingmethods
⑦suchaswatchingEnglishmoviesandlisteningtoEnglishsongs.Hopefullytheaboveadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.
①withoutproperways没有适当的方法.
②firstandforemost首先也是最重要的.
③Ibelievethat后为宾语从句.
④hesitatetodosth.犹豫做某事.
⑤who引导非限制性定语从句.@yourinterestin你对的兴趣.
⑦suchas比如.亮点点评•这篇作文紧扣主题,采用“三段式”框架,清晰表达了文章主题.首段引出主题,中间主体段落集中说明如何学英语这一主题,尾段总结..句子和句子间的衔接自然恰当使用了firstandforemostsecondmostimportantly等衔接词,使得文章衔接紧密,逻辑性强..文章句式多样,采用了宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等,增强了文章的可读性..比起上一篇作文该作文用语更为丰富,如使用了hesitateseekhelpfromstimulateonesinterestin等,提升了作文的语言表现力.佳作赏析AdviceonhowtolearnEnglishAsweknowEnglish
①iswidelyusedintheworldanditisimportantforustolearnitwell.Nowletme
②giveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglish.First
③gooverwhatwehavelearnedbeforetakenotesinclassandreviewthemafterclass.SecondtrytotalkwithyourclassmatesinEnglish
④asoftenaspossibleanddonotbeafraidofmakingmistakeswhenyouarespeakingEnglish.Thirdread
⑤EnglishmaterialsandkeepanEnglishdiaryeveryday.Iamsurethatyouwill
⑥makeprogressifyoufollowtheaboveadvice.
①iswidelyused是被动结构.
②givesb.someadviceon针对・・・・・给某人提些建议.
③此处连用几个祈使句,使文章简洁精炼.
④asoftenaspossible尽可能经常.
⑤Englishmaterials英语资料.
⑥makeprogress取得进步.亮点点评L文章布局合理,段落清晰集中叙述了提出英语学习建议这一主题.2用表顺序的firstsecondthird等衔接词,自然、顺畅衔接句子.3句式较为丰富,恰当运用了宾语从句、状语从句等句式.
4.英语短语的使用也为本文添彩,如gooverbeafraidofmakeprogress等.AdviceonhowtoreducelearningpressureAs
①ninth-graderswespendmuchtimestudyingourlessonsandpreparingfortests.Hereissomeadviceonhowtoreduceourlearningpressure.Firstwecanlistentoourfavoritemusic
②beforegoingtosleepatnight.Secondwecantakeexerciseinoursparetime3torestourbrainsandeyes.Finallywecantalkaboutourdifficultiesorworriesinourstudieswithourparentsorfriends.
④IhopethattheaboveadvicewillbehelpfultoGrade9students.
①ninth-grader九年级学生.
②before+动名词充当时间状语,简洁明了.
③torest…动词不定式表目的.@1hope后为宾语从句.亮点点评L本文围绕减轻学习压力这个主题,分段叙述,逻辑清晰..文中动名词、动词不定式等运用恰当,语句通顺流畅..衔接词firstsecondfinally等使用恰当,语句过渡自然.CWhydowestudyAsstudentswegotoschooleverydaybut
①haveyoueverthoughtaboutwhywestudyInmyopinionwestudyforthefollowingreasons.Firstwecanbecomeknowledgeablethroughourstudiesatschool
②whichwillenableustomakewiserdecisionsandactmoreeffectively.Secondbymeansofstudyingwecan
③broadenourhorizonsandknowmoreabouttheworld.Thirdwestudy
④tokeeppacewiththerapidlychangingworld;otherwisewewill
⑤lagbehindinthedevelopmentoftheworld.Inshortstudyingisanimportantwayforustoimproveourselves.
①现在完成时运用准确.
②which引导非限制性定语从句;enable使能够.
③broadenourhorizons开阔我们的视野.tokeeppacewiththerapidlychangingworld跟上快速变化的世界.lagbehind落后.亮点点评L主题鲜明,段落清晰,主次分明.主体段落详细说明了学习的益处.2定语从句、动词不定式、动名词等的运用使这篇作文句式丰富多样.
3.衔接词firstsecondthird等运用得当,段落衔接自然.素材宝库.好词妙语firstandforemost首先也是最重要的acquiremoreknowledge获取更多知识givesb.someadviceon针对给某人提些建议alifelongjourney终生的旅行Itiswellknownthat…众所周知・・・・・・dependonlearninghabits取决于学习习惯makeuseof使用haveabetterunderstandingof...更好土也理解・.broadenourhorizons开阔我们的视野.提分佳句Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧.Nothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.世上无难事只怕有心人.Themoreyouspeakthefewermistakesyouwillmake.你说得越多,犯的错误就越少.Learningisalifelongjourney.学习是终生的旅行.Itiswellknownthatsuccesscannotbeachievedovernight.众所周知成功不能一蹴而就.Onlybyreadingbookscanweunderstanditssecrets.只有通过读书我们才能理解它的奥秘.Whetheryoucanlearnitwelldependsonyourlearninghabits.你是否能够学好它取决于你的学习习惯.ThebestwaytolearnEnglishwellistouseitallthetime.学好英语最好的方法就是一直使用它.AgroupdiscussionhelpsmehaveabetterunderstandingofwhatIhavelearned.小组讨论有助于我更好地理解我所学的东西.写作预热句式变换InclassIfeltsleepyandIcouldnotlistentotheteachercarefully.用when引导的时间状语从句和so...that...句式改写句子Icannotmanagemytimeproperly.用havetroublein改写句子Goodlearnersmusthavesomegoodlearninghabits.Theyhelpthemlearnbetter.改为含定语从句的复合句IfwearenotafraidofmakingmistakeswecanlearnEnglishwell.改写成含onlyif的倒装句答案WhenIwasinclass1feltsosleepythatIcouldnotlistentotheteachercarefullyIhavetroubleinmanagingmytimeproperly.Goodlearnersmusthavesomegoodlearninghabitswhichhelpthemlearnbetter.OnlyifwearenotafraidofmakingmistakescanwelearnEnglishwell.实战练笔假如你是李华,你的美国好友Lucy对中文感兴趣,发邮件向你请教学习中文的方法请你自拟标题回复信息,就如何学好中文发表你的看法.写作要求.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名;.词数90左右.范文AdviceonhowtolearnChinesewellDearLucyIamverygladtoreceiveyouremail.SinceyouareinterestedinlearningChineseIwouldliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnitwell.FirstitishelpfultoreadChinesenewspapersandmagazines.Inthiswayyourreadingabilitywillbeimproved.BesideslisteningtoyourfavoriteChinesesongsisaneffectivewaytoimproveyourlistening.MoreovertrytospeakChineseasmuchaspossibleanddonotbeafraidofmakingmistakes.FinallykeepingadiaryinChineseisagoodwaytoimproveyourwriting.HopefullytheaboveadvicewillhelpyoulearnChinesewell.YoursLiHua。
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