第一部分应用文写作05感谢类（解析版）2021-2022学年新教材新高考英语写作新题型三合一解读训练（高考专用）

第一部分应用文写作类型05感谢类感谢信是向帮助、关心或支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信，耍表达出诚挚的谢意其结构一般如下

①、直接表示感谢并点明事由

②、详述具体过程，说明感谢理由

③、再次致谢并表达回报之意素材精粹【高分句型】首段表明写信目的Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysincerethanksfor../Iwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltthankstoyoufor......我写这封信是为了表达我对……的真诚感谢/我想为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意Uponleaving.…./graduationIdliketoexpressmyhcartfelt/sincercthankstoyoufor.…离开….时/毕业之际，我想向你表示我诚挚的感谢，感谢你…主体部分解释感谢的原因WithoutyourtimelyhelpIwouldnothavebeen../ThankstoyourhelpIhavemaderapidprogressin...../ButforyourhelpIwouldnothavemadesomuchprogressin没有你的及时帮助，我就不会……/多亏了你的帮助，我在……方面进步很快/要不是你的帮助，我在……（方面）不会取得如此大的进步Theresnodenyingthatitisverydifficultformetowithoutyourhelp.不可否认，没有你的帮助，对我来说……是非常困难的WheneverIhavedifficultyinyouaretheonethatIwillturntofirst.每当我在……（方面）遇到困难时，你就是我首先要求助的人尾段再次致谢并表达回报意愿Yourkindnessandhelpwillalwaysberememberedbyme.我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助Mygratitudeisbeyonddescription./Wordsfailtoexpressmythankstoyou.感激之情，无以言表Youhavecoveredallessentialelementsofreadingstrategyandyourdescriptionofhowtoexecuteitisremarkable.Ionceagainwouldliketothankyouforsuchawonderfulspeechandhopetogetachancetohearsuchspeechesfromyouinfuturealso.YourssincerelyLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设考生是李华，曲靖师院（QujingNormalUniversily）外籍教师John上周五到考生所在校校做了一场精彩演讲，请你根据如下内容给他写一封感谢信【详解】.词汇积累表达show—*extend提高promote—improve精彩的excellent—►wonderful机会opportunity—*chance.句式拓展简单句变强调句原句Yourviewsondevelopinganeffectivereadingstrategyanditsexecutionhavebroadenedourhorizonsandimprovedourreadingcomprehension.拓展句Itisyourviewsondevelopinganeffectivereadingstrategyanditsexecutionthathavebroadenedourhorizonsandimprovedourreadingcomprehension.【点睛】[高分句型1]Ionceagainwouldliketothankyouforsuchawonderfulspeechandhopetogetachancetohearsuchspeechesfromyouinfuturealso.（动词不定式作后置定语）[高分句型2]Youhavecoveredallessentialelementsofreadingstrategyandyourdescriptionofhowtoexecuteitisremarkable.（疑问词+动词不定式作宾语）

3.IdeeplyappreciateyourhelpandIhopetohavetheopportunitytorewardyourkindness.我非常感谢你的帮助，并且我希望有机会回报你的好意佳作共赏DearAlexItsreallyhardtosaygoodbyetoyou」eYencanifndwordstexpressmyappreciMiQnQfalLyQUhaYedQncLme.Honesllyspeakineitssoniceofyoutooffermeagreatdealofpracticallearningskills.UnderYQUrgUidance，IvemadegreatprogressinEnglish.ltsabigsurpriseformetohaveevenrankedfirstinarecentEnglishspeechcontest.When£yeLlgIl£QHmeLdiffi£il垣矮一，~5@1短因野£11点LIO最口区一级观JfeJpinequLqyhichfydmyfnthusjasmrlearningEnglish.MLWQnissaiexpressJi0ygiatefuLLam.Thanksagainand必ishyQUapleasantjourneyhome.Yours»LiHua实战突破Test1假定你是李华，在美国做交换生期间受到寄宿家庭主人Mr.Johnson的照顾现在你已经安全同国，但发现相机落在他家里请给他写封邮件，内容包括.感谢对方的照顾；.请对方把相机寄过来；.希望对方来中国旅游并当他的导游注意.写作词数应为80左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置.作答DearMr.JohnsonYoursLiHua【答案】DearMrJohnsonNowIhavereturnedhomesafely.Twanttothankyouforeverythingyoudidforme.IreallyenjoyedmydaysintheUS.HoweverIregrettotellyouthataftercomingbackIsuddenlyfoundthatIhadleftmycamerainyourhome.Tmreallysorrytotroubleyouagainbecauseofmycarelessness.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsendmethecameraatyourconvenience.Imissyouandyourfamilyverymuch.IdohopeyoucancometoChinasomedayandIwillbeatourguideforyou.YoursLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给寄宿家庭主人Mr.Johnson写封邮件，感谢对方的照顾，顺便请对方把他遗留的相机寄过来，同时希望对方来中国旅游【详解】词汇积累回家returnedhome—wcntbackhome感谢thankyoufor—showmygratitudetoyoufbr感激appreciate—showmyappreciation你方便的时候atyourconvenience=whenitisconvenientfbryou

2.句式拓展合并简单句原句Iwanttothankyouforeverythingyoudidforme.IreallyenjoyedmydaysintheUS.拓展句Iwanttothankyoufbreverythingyoudidformeand1reallyenjoyedmydaysintheUS.【点睛】[高分句型I]HoweverIregrettotellyouthataftercomingbackIsuddenlyfoundthatIhadleftmycamerainyourhome.（运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句）[高分句型2]Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsendmethecameraatyourconvenience.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）Test2假定你是高三学生李华，即将毕业之际深感自己的父母对自己的关爱之情，决定写封信给父母表示感激，要点如下.高三将是辛苦忙碌的一年，自己和父母都很辛苦，感谢父母多年来无微不至的关心；.近段时间自己的学习情况及取得的进步，自己会继续努力，希望父母放心；.高考过后一定多帮父母做家务注意

1.词数80左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯DearParentsYoursincerelyLiHua【答案】DearParentsNowIamabouttograduate.IfeeldeeplythatyoulovemesomuchthatIdecidetowritealettertoexpressmygratitudetoyou.Theyearofseniorthreewillbeahardbusyyear.BothyouandIaregoingtohaveahardtime.Thankyouforthemeticulouscareyouhavegivenmeovertheseyears.RecentlyIhavebeenfocusingonthestudyofEnglishandhavemadegreatprogressinit.Iwillcontinuetoworkhardonothersubjects.Ihopeyoucanfeelateaseaboutmystudy.AfterthecollegeentranceexaminationIwillhelpyoudomorehouseworksoyoucanhavearestorgoouttotravel.Thankyouforyourcareandhelpinmystudyandlife.YoursincerelyLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给父母写封信，向父母表示感激【详解】.词汇积累表达express—convey感谢gratitude—♦thankfulness专心的focus—♦concentrate将要beabouttodo^begoingtodo.句式拓展合并简单句原句Theyearofseniorthreewillbeahardbusyyear.BothyouandIaregoingtohaveahardtime.拓展句TheyearofseniorthreewillbeahardbusyyearwhenbothyouandIaregoingtohaveahardlime.【点睛】[高分句型1]IfeeldeeplythatyoulovemesomuchthatIdecidetowritealettertoexpressmygratitudeloyou.运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句[高•句型2]Thankyouforthemeticulouscareyouhavegivenmeovertheseyears.运用\that弓|导的定语从句，省略了引导词thatTest3假如你是晨光中学的李津你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期请你用英语回复内容包括1表示感谢并问候；2计划与家人一起做的事情；3你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备注意1词数不少于100；2可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯;3开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数DearNancyYoursLiJin【答案】DearNancy1amverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourinheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudiesmyparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.ImgoingtoTiananmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatWall.InadditionIwanttogotoQinghuaGardentoenjoytheelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecidedtoregisterfbrthecomputermajor.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustrythehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.Beforechoosingconsultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.Onlywithacleargoalwewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuturewhichwillbemoreefficient.YoursLiJin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期请你用英语回复，内容包括表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备【详解】.词汇积累照顾takecareof—lookafter另夕卜，止匕夕卜inaddition-besides—whatmore雇佣employ—hire既然nowthat—►since.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustrythehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.拓展句AstheInternetindustrydevelopsrapidlythehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.【点睛】[高分句型1]Onlywithacleargoalwewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuturewhichwillbemoreefficient.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudiesmyparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.（运用了nowthat引导的原因状语从句）Test4假定你是英语爱好者李华，给美国汉语爱好者，朋友John写封电子邮件，内容包括1感谢送你的生日礼物，一本英语故事书2分享读英语故事书后对你的影响3回赠一本中国散文集，表示谢意注意I.词数100词左右；.开头和结尾己为你写好.散文（essay）oDearJohnYourssincerelyLiHua【答案】DearJohnIfeelhonoredtohavereceivedyourgiftDiaryofawimpykidwrittenbyJeffKinneywhichmakesmybirthdaymeaningfulandunforgettableandthankyoufromthebottomofmyheart.AsanEnglishlearner1likereadingtheEnglishstorybookverymuchbecauseithasconsiderableinfluenceonme.Foronethingmyvocabularyincreasinglygrows.ForanothereverytimeIthinkofittheinterestingplotmakesmelaughalot.Soitguidesmetoreadmoreforeignculturewidely.InreturnIllsendyouacollectionofessayswrittenbyJiaPingwaandhopeitisusefilltoyou.YoursSincerelyLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是英语爱好者李华，给美国汉语爱好者，朋友John写封电子邮件【详解】

1.词汇积累懦弱的coward—wimpy喜欢befondof—»like直到lead-guide希望wish—*hope

2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句Soitguidesmetoreadmoreforeignculturewidely.拓展句Soitguidesmetoreadmoreforeignculturewidelywhichcanbroadenmyhorizon.【点睛】[高分句型1]IfeelhonoredtohavereceivedyourgiftDiaryofawimpykidwrittenbyJeffKinneywhichmakesmybirthdaymeaningfulandunforgettableandthankyoufromthebottomofmyheart.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]ForanothereverytimeIthinkofittheinterestingplotmakesmelaughalot.（时间状语从句）Test5假设你是李华，曲靖师院（QujingNormalUniversity）外籍教师John上周五到你校做了一场精彩演讲，请你根据如下内容给他写一封感谢信.演讲内容高效阅读策略；.演讲效果；.表示诚挚谢意注意

1.词数110左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；.信的开头与结尾已经写好，不计入词数DearMr.JohnYourssincerelyLiHua【答案】DearMr.Johnwouldliketoextendmysincerestgratitudetowardsyouforyourmotivationalspeechduringtheconferenceheldinourauditorium.Yourviewsondevelopinganeffectivereadingstrategyanditsexecutionhavebroadenedourhorizonsandimprovedourreadingcomprehension.Pleaseacceptourappreciationforsuchacommendablejob.Wewilltakeyourwordsintopractice.。