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AlettertoLiuXingSuggestionsfornexttime:ForyoutoconsiderObjectives-focusonhandwritingstructurecontentsgrammarlanguageSelf-checkPeer-checkTeachersassessmentHandwritingMyhandwritingistidyandclear.2-3pointsStructurecontentsPara1:Myopeningparagraphstartedwithabriefandclearintroductiontothetopic.3-5pointsPara2:IhavegivenseveraldetailedadviceonLiusproblemandstatedthereasonsaccordingly.8pointsPara3:IsummarizedthetopicandgavebestwishestoLiu.5pointsGrammarlanguageIhaveusedthesimplepresenttenseproperly.3pointsIhavecheckedthespellingoftheuncertainwords.
0.5pointsfor1mistakeIhavecheckedmypunctuationandusedfullstopsattheendofeachcompletesentence.1pointIhaveusedlinkingwordsandconnectivesentencescorrectly.2pointsTotalscores30points。
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