英语写作指导-如何用英语写游记

英语写作指导-如何用英语写游记【写作任务】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友得知你上周乘坐京沪高铁去上海旅游，发来邮件问你旅游情John况请你用英语给他回一封邮件，介绍你一路上的所见所闻及你的感受注意词数左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）120参考词汇:京沪高铁Beijing-Shanghai high-speed trainDear John,Im gladto hearfrom youand Idlike totell yousomething aboutmy visit to Shanghai.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】

一、审题定调本写作任务要求以电子邮件的形式写一篇游记游记是日记的一种，是描写游览中的所见所闻和表达自己思想感情的一种文体，属于记叙文写游记时，一般要交代清楚游览的时间、地点、所乘交通工具、在每个景点的活动等，并且要适度地抒发自己的情感或发表自己的看法游记类文章的时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主

二、谋篇布局本写作任务可分为三部分第一部分简述旅行概况；第二部分描述旅行中的所见所闻；第三部分表达对此次旅行的感受

三、组织语言第一部分简述旅行概况普通表达高级表达I visitedShanghai with...by Beijing-Shanghai high-speed trainlast week.I,together withpaid avisit to Shanghai byBeijing-Shanghai high-speed trainlast week.第二部分描述旅行中的所见所闻普通表达高级表达We goton the train in...and passed through...along the way.As soonas thetrain leftwe saw which were covered with...Then therewere...covered with...as far as the eye could see.After wereached thebig moderncity ofShanghai,we weredeeply attracted by...There were...everywhere and all kindsof carspassing by.We visitedsuch as...and...and then we went home.From we caught thetrain bound for Shanghai and it passed through...along the way.No soonerhad weleft...than wewere greetedby...covered with...After that,as faras theeye couldsee,...covered with...came intoview.On ourarrival in the destination,Shanghai,its...almost tookour breathaway....were everywhere and avariety ofluxury carspassed byus.第三部分表达对此次旅行的感受普通表达高级表达After visitingsuch as...and we returned home.What awonderful journeyit was!Although I was tired,I feltvery happyand Iwill neverforget thisexperience.Exhausted asI wasfrom thejourney,I definitelyhad fun.The journeynot onlybut also...【范文展示】［普通范文］Dear John,Im gladto hearfrom youand Idlike totell yousomething aboutmy visitto Shanghai.I visitedShanghaiwith myparents byBeijing-Shanghai high-speed trainlast week.We goton thetrain inJinan andpassedthroughmuch differentscenery alongtheway.As soonas thetrainleft Jinan,wesawa seriesof mountains,whichwerecovered withthick forests.Then therewere wideplainscovered withcrops as faras theeye couldsee.After wereached thebig moderncity ofShanghai,wewere deeplyattractedbyits appearance.There werehigh-rise buildingseverywhereandall kindsof carspassingby.We visitedmany interestingplaces,such asthe OrientalPearl Tower,the Bundand Disneylandandthenwewenthome.What awonderful journeyit was!Although Iwas tired,I feltvery happyand Iwill neverforget thisexperience.Yours,Li Hua［高级范文］DearJohn,Im gladto hearfrom youand Idlike totell yousomething aboutmy visittoShanghai.I,together withmyparents,paid avisittoShanghai byBeijing-Shanghai high-speed trainlast week.From Jinan,wecaughtthetrainboundforShanghaianditpassedthrough manydifferent landscapesalongtheway.No soonerhad weleft Jinanthan wewere greetedby mountainranges coveredwith thickforests.After that,asfarastheeyecouldsee,vast plainscoveredwithall kindsof cropscame intoview.Onour arrivalinthedestination,Shanghai,its prosperityalmost tookour breathaway.Skyscrapers wereeverywhereandavariety ofluxury carspassed byus.After visitingsome interestingplaces,such astheOriental PearlTower,the Bundand Disneyland,wereturnedhome.Exhausted asIwasfrom thejourney,I definitelyhad fun.The journeynot onlyentertained me,but alsobroadenedmy horizons.Yours,Li Hua。