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年中考英语满分作文【2022篇一上海中考英语作文范文和点评】2022中考作文点评今年的中考英语作文题是“明年此时•黄浦区初中英语教”thistimenextyea,I研员周加有分析，这道题比较抽象，赋予了考生一定的想象空间，可以说是在意“料之外，又在情理之中”周加有表示，前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受，或者对一些事情进行评论，比较容易套题但今年的这道题不是很具体，加之时态是将来式，因此对学生来说不太容易套题，要写好必须有自己的想法，所以有一定难度无非，今年的这道作文题依然延续前几年的特点——以我为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便了学生有话可说、有情可抒年2022中考英语作文题目this time next yearthis time next year i will beenjoying mysenior schoollife
1.which i have expectedfora longtime.the lifethen will be
2.as colorfulas flowers.i willtake anactive part in allkinds ofactivities inghischool
3.because the saying goesall workand noplay makesjack adullboy”,in addition,making friends
4.willbeon topof thelist sincea realfriendships.is ofgreat importance to me.as for me,i willbedefinitely
6.turning anew leafof myfute lifethis time next year,and imreally looking.精彩亮点分丘forward toit亮点一定语从句修饰对高中生活的憧憬亮点二用的比较级结构，抓人眼球as...as亮点三用到了而且用的极其恰当idiom,亮点四永放在第一位on topof theli stS亮点五名词结构更高端be ofgreat importance亮点六翻开未来生活的新篇章写作小turn anew leafof myfuture1if etip今年中考是篇看似记叙却要叙中带议的文章全文的时态应全部运用普通将来时，对未来生活进行展望全文应表达积极阳光的信念年上海中考英语范文20221this timenextyearits excitingtoimagine what the happylife willbe like.at this timenextyear,i willbe a senior highstudent,and i will makea lot of newfriends,i hopeto bemore independentso
16.i mightsay thatsuccess iswon bythree things:first,effort;second,more effort;成防要靠三件事才干third,still moreef ot赢得:努力，努力，再努力有事.莫推明天.
17.dont put off tilltomorrow whatshould be done today熟.能生巧
18.practice makesperfect好事不出门，坏事传千里
19.bad newshas wings.做人以诚信为本.
20.honesty is the bestpolic y.你必须相信自己，
21.you haveto believein yourself,that9sthesecret of success.这是成功的关键.不可以貌取人.
22.don5t judgea manby hislook s.岁.月既往，一去不回
1.my（我的朋友）friend i have a good friend,her nameismay.she is12years old.her telephonenumber is87634966her birthdayis march5th.she isgood atenglish andchiese.she oftenplays thepiano.she likesreading books andlistening to the music,her hobbiesarereading andlistening tomusic,she is a nicegirl,we oftenhelp eachother,we aregoodfriends.请你写一篇短文介绍你的周末生活i have a goodweekend,on Saturdaymorning,i domyhomework,after lunch,i goshopping with mymother,at aboutfive oclock,i go to playbasketball withmy friend,onsunday,i watcha footballgame ontv.i oftenhelp mymother dohousework,i watchtv withmy parentsin theevening,then igo to bed atnine oclock,imvery happyon weekends.以为题,写一篇短文
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⑥h壮--------我-对-（文章所讨论主题的看法）.3）给出个旅行计划dear,i amvery gladto hearfrom you,its niceto knowthat youwill come to ourcity soon,（去哪里玩），当when you arrive,first,we willgoto then,we will haveavisit of（地著名旅游胜地）.at last,i willtake youto havea tasteof ourlocal food,hope youwillenjoy myplan,if you have anysuggestions,please let me know,i’m lookingforwardto yourreply.大话题sincerely yours,liminhg水污染
2.water pollutioneverybodyknows that there isserious problemof water pollution on theearth,yes,waterpollutionis becomingmore andmore serious,the waterin theriver isgettingdirtier anddirtier,most offish in theewahtave died,and we can’t swimin thewater.my grandfather says,when hewas verylittle,the waterin theriver wasvery clean,heoften swamin theriver withhis friends.that wasbefore,but nowwe can’t seesuch cleanrivers.let9s protectthe watr frompollution,because wecan’t live without water,the wateris reallyimportant to us all..元旦3new yearsdayJanuary1stis new yearsday.its agreat dayfor allthe peoplethroughout the world,asthe sayinggoes,a goodbeginning ishalf thebattle,so,many peoplego outto celebratetheimportant day.onthatday,i went to thebook shopwithmyclassmates,we boughtalot ofuseful referencebooksand interesting storybooks,i believeknowledge ispower,i hopei canlearn a lot fromthese booksand improvemy study,in theevening,myfamily hada bigdinner party,allthemembers in my familywished megood luckin thenew year..时间4time5that perhaps iwillbe takingpartina summercamp abroadto improvemy spokenenglish.also iwill helpmy parentsdo houseworkin orderto knowhow totake careof myselfwheni amalone.【解析】life willbe totallydifferent,but imreally lookingforwardtoit.这篇作文需要涉及三个方面变化、期望和自己的作为，因此文章中需要涵盖着二点第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化，第二句是期望及第一个作为，紧接其后的是第二个作为，而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态度年上海中考英语范文20222this timenext yearlifeis changeable,and thatswhy everyonelongs for the future,which isfull ofchallengeas wellas hope.perhapsiwillhaveachieved mygoal thistimenextyear,studying inaseniorhigh school,despite that,diligence willbe stillneeded tomake myselfgo furtherin english.basically,itis importantto concentratein classand takenotes carefully,then,iwillbenefit fromreadingenglishbooks,what ismore,going abroadis ofgreat usein improvingmy oralenglish.only inthis way can iprogress inenglish endlessly.make plansand gofor whati want,and ibelieve when the challengeis coming,the hopeisalso aroundthe corner.110words文章的标题告诉我们文章内容应该是与未来的生活相关的，生活在变化，一年后我将进入高中，但是学习还在继续，所以我仍有自己的目标文章主要立足于两点，我对未来的计划或者期待，以及我要如何去实现作为一位英语学习者，我会从三点去提高自己的英语英语学习是一个持续的过程，惟独不断努力才会有收获【篇二中考英语作文开头，结尾，经典句】2022中考英语作文写好作文五要素要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点.要点缺少要点就会扣分所以要点要做到全，环绕中心
1.结构中考最流行的结构就是三段式观“点一要点——总结”让人2一目了然三段式的第一段简单明了，开门见山，不超过句2话第二段可以分析原因第三段经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论但请注意，不能彻底照抄第一段，要有升华也可以提出希望和建议等.逻辑3通过使用逻辑词体现文章的思路.语法语法是硬性的如4单词的使用，时态等要注意.亮点高级一点的词汇，5词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招所以普通词汇要限量用如何开头.开门1见山”式开头普通来说，文章的开头应尽量做到开“门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容
①对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交待清晰如黄（山之旅）”的开头“atriptohuangshan可以是，last monthmy familywenttohuangshan bytrain,it tookus tenhours toget there,
6.as weknow,we studentsare verytired because of study.
7.just asthesayinggoes:every coinhas itstwo sides5\television hasboth advantages正.像谚语所说任“何硬币都有两面“，电视即有优点也有and disadvantages缺点
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14.the+〜est that+have ever+seenknown/heard/had/read,etc/形容词+名词+主词+.......the most+that+have ever+seen海伦known/heard/had/read,etchelen is the mostbeautiful girlthat ihave eversee n.是我所看过最漂亮的女孩来老.师是我曾经遇至最仁慈mr.chang is the kindestteacher that ihave ever hd U的教师yao mingisthetallest basketballplayer thatihaveever seen.姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员liu xiangisthe most hardworkingsportsman.刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员thatihaveever seen形容+词+
15.nothing is+〜〜〜er than to+v/nothing is+mo rethan to+v nothing is没•有比接受教育更more importantthan toreceive education重要的事没.有什么比环保更重要nothing ismore importantthan toprotect ourenvironment的事没•有什么比学习知识更重要的nothingismore importantthantogain knowledge事
17.there isno denyingthat+s+v・・・there isno denyingthatthe qualities of our livinghave gonefrom badto worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下there isno denyingthat linzhiling isthemostcharming actressihaveeverseen不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员句孑^^（全世界都知道？
18.it isuniversally acknowledgedthat）itisuniversally acknowledgedthat treesare indispensabletous.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可日者缺的句+子（毫无疑问的？）
19.there isno doubtthat〜〜there isno doubtthat oureducational systemleaves somethingtobedesired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意句+子（的优点是？？）
20.an advantageof〜〜〜is that（）an advantageof usingthe solarenergy is that itwont createproduce anypollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会创造任何污染an advantageof takingexercises isthat itcan makeus keephealthy.锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康句子句+子（的原因是？）
21.the reason why+〜〜〜is thatthereasonwhywe haveto growtrees isthat theycan provideus withfresh air.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气形+容词+主词+句子（如此？以致于？）
22.so be+that+时间.是如此珍贵，它经so preciousistimethat wecant affordto wastei不起我们浪费西施是如此漂亮，以致于我们都喜欢so beautifiilis xishi thatwe alllik eher.她靛主词）+（虽然）
23.adj+as+subje be,s+vrich asour countryis,thequalitiesofourliving areby nomeans satisfactory.二一点也不}虽然{by nomeans inno way=on noaccount我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意结尾五方式.自然结尾，点明主题1随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾如“helpingthe（匡助警察）”的结尾可以是policeman thetwo childrenwere praisedby thepolice再如（龟兔赛跑）”的结尾可以是and theyfelt happy.“the tortoiseand theharewhenthehare gotto thetree,the tortoisehad alreadybeen thereo.首尾呼应，升华主题2在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛”的效果如（我爱家乡）”的结尾可以是“i lovemy hometowni lovemy hometown,andiam proudof it..反问结尾，引起深思3这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思如学英语（能为我们带来许多乐learning englishcan giveus alotofpleas re趣）”的结尾可以是if welearn englishwell,wecandon，tyouthink learningenglishis greatfun.表达祝愿，阐述愿望4这砂方式的结尾常浮现在书信或者演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或者对将来的展望等如给•农民们的一封信”的结尾可以是“a lettertothefhrm Isi hopethe farmerslife willbe betterand better..止匕外，书信的结肩常有以下形式的祝福语5best wishes;i wishyouamerry等Christmas anda happynewyear;i wishyouhavea goodtime结尾常用句型、1taking allthese factorsinto consideration,we naturallycome tothe conclusion that把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论？、2taking intoaccount allthese factors,we mayreasonably cometothe conclusionthat考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论？、因止匕，我们最好得3hence/therefore,wed bettercometotheconclusionthat出这样的结论？、毫无疑问，4there isno doubtthat job-hopping hasits drawbacksas wellas merits.跳槽有优点也有缺点、5all in all,we cannotlivewithoutbut atthe sametime wemust tryto findout newwaysto copewith theproblems thatwould arise.总之，我们没有是无法生活的但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能浮现的新问题、该是我们住6itishightimethatweput anend tothe torend手这一趋势的时候了7^itistime totake theadvice ofand toput specialemphasis on the improvementof该是采用？的建议，并对？的发展赋予特殊重视的时候了、8only weinthiswaycanwe achievethe goal.惟独这样我们才干达到我们的目标常用过渡语.表起始的过渡语:1first ofall,to beginwith,inmyopinion,according to,so far,as far等s.表时间的过渡语:2first,at first,then,later,intheend,finally,afterwards,after that,since then,forthefirst time,at last,as soonas,the nextmoment,meanwhile,later on,soon,finally.表空间的过渡语3:on theright/left,totheright/left of,on oneside of...on theother等side of...,atthefoot/top/end of,inthemiddle/centre of,next to,far from,in frotof•表因果的过渡语:4for,becauseof,one reasonisthat...another reasonisthat...,thus,等so,as aresult of•表转折的过渡语:5but,yet,however,after all,in fact,while,onthecontrary,instead等of,unlike,although,otherwise,nevertheless,in spiteof,after all.表歹举的过渡语:6U forexample,such as,that is,like,as follows,in otherwords,等and soon.表推进的过渡语:7whats more,on onehand...ontheother hand...,in additionto,as等well,still,also,in otherwords,notonly...but also...,besides,furthermore,moreover.表总结的过渡语:等8in short,inaword,in general,in brief,inall,onthewhole常用的名言警句事.实胜于雄辩
1.actions speaklouder thanwords患难朋友才是真朋友
2.a friendin needisafriend inded.良.好的开端是成功的一半
3.agoodbeginning ishalf done有志者.事竟成
4.where there isawill,thereisawy条已条大道通罗马
5.all roadslead torom说.起来容易，做起来难
6.easier saidthan done来得快，去得快
7.easy come,easy go.人人者有缺点
8.every manhas hisweak side.B失败.是成功之母
9.failure isthe motherofsuccess三.思而后行
10.look beforeyou leap上无难事,只怕有心
11.nothing intheworldis difficultif youset yourminted toit.人.人遥无友.，就如同生命中没有太
12.a lifewithout afriend isa lifewithout1sn阳.万事开•头难.
13.all thmgsare difficultbefore theyare easy来.雨绸缪.
14.always preparefor arainy da机瓜得瓜，种豆得豆
15.as yousow,so shallyou rea。
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