英语六级写作7——综合改错

综合改错Errors Correction

一、语法错误

二、词汇错误

三、逻辑错误

四、多词少词Example:Television israpidly becomingthe literatureofour periods.Many ofthe arguments1,time/times/agehavingused forthe studyfor literatureas a2,/school subjectare validfor Astudy oftelevision.

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一、语法错误、平行结构1not only...but also\both...and\either...or\and1A professorssalary ishigher thana secretary.[secretarys].[去2One ofthese isinformative,interesting,and iseasy tounderstand掉]3Defining aproblem iseasier thanto provideasolution.[providing]、连词错误21Candle willlater bereplaced bylamp,that couldburn longerand lighter,[which]2The childrenattended asmall elementaryschool oftenof justone room前只to that they hadto walkevery day,possibly for a fewmiles,[which,that能有和除止匕以夕卜;因为,体现在]except inexcept thatin that3It willbe interestingto discoverhow manyyoung peoplego touniversities相当without anyidea ofthattheyare goingto doafterward,[what,what于the thingthat]4It appearsthat weall findcompany insound,if wedemand a little quiet或转折，所以不能用from timeto time,[but yet]if5They arelikely totravel moreand towant moreeducation.Nevertheless,或因果many morejobs areavailable inthese services.[Therefore So]、分词错误31Polices recordsshow asurprisedlink betweenchanges inthe seasonsandcrime patterns,[surprising]2Even thequiet ofour carefulprotected wildernessareas canbe invadedatany momentby apassedjet.[passing]3So asportsmans individualway ofwalking withraised shouldersisimitated byan admiredfan.[admiring]、指代错误41A breakin theiremployment,oradecision to work parttime,will slowitsraisesand promotions-as itwould formen.[their]2Clearly somerisks areworth taking,especially whenthe rewardsare high:a mansurrounded byflames andsmoke generallyconsiders thatjumpingout ofa second-floor windowis anacceptable riskto saveits life,[his]3The modernlight-house alsoidentifies itin acode knownto allships,主语宾语相重叠用反身代词[itself]、形容词、副词略

5、谓语错误主谓一致、时态、语态61Business todaywhether it is runningalittlegas-station ora bigfactorytakegood management.ftakes]2Advances intechnology hasalso changedpeoples lives,[have]3But if98percent ofus doesntneedtowork,what arewe goingto dowith复数ourselves[dont]4Whether womenwho havestarted acareer willattain payequality with句子做主语为单数men reston atleast twofactors,[rests]5In someplaces allthe treeshavecut down,[have been]

二、词汇错误搭配错误、用词错误

三、逻辑错误肯定否定乱用1Blood pressuredrugs definitelyhelp somepeople liveafter aheartattack,but thesesame drugsmay beboth necessaryandharmful forthosewith onlymild bloodpressure problems,[unnecessary]2In everycase,the influentialperson mayconsciouslynotice theimitationbut hewill feelcomfortable inits presence,[unconsciously]

四、多词少词少介词、冠词、形式宾语；多介词和副词1When twoAmericans meetfor firsttime,itisnormal forthem tocall eachotherby theirgiven nameimmediately,[the first]2In fact,until recentlyseawater hasalmost beconsidered tobe uselessandno value,[of no]。