高考二轮复习开放性作文分析与练习

2011届高考二轮复习开放性作文分析与练习-高考开放性作文要求开放性作文字数不少于50个单词,要※文章扣题,内容充实、健康、思维活跃,逻辑清晰、语言规范,交际得体°这对学生构思、表达以及语句的组织运用能力有很高的要求二高考中常见的开放性作文文章类型有:

1.复述故事•One day,we werehaving anEnglish classwhen suddenlythere wasa knockon thedoor—（西城一模2004）Oneday,wewerehavinganEnglishclasswhensuddenlytherewasaknockonthedoor.Ourteacher wentout and soon returnedwith asmile onher face.She toldus thata groupofAmerican studentswere visitingour schooland theywould liketo chatwith usin English.We werevery gladto havethis opportunityto practiseour English.Soon pleasantconversationsbegan.•Today isMarch5th.To learnfrom LeiFeng,at3:30p.m.,my classmatesand Iwent一（西城二模2004）TodayisMarch5th.To learnfromLeiFeng,at3:30pm,my classmatesandI wentingroupsseparatelyto visitsome oldteachers whohad retiredfrom ourschool.We chattedwith themfora while,and thenbegan to do somecleaning for them.Everyone workedvery hardandwereallyfeltgladwe wereabletodosomethingfortheoldteachers.Wehopedtohavemorechances to take partin suchactivities.

2.解决方案•On themorning ofJune7,Li Mingis takinga buson hisyvay to take theentranceexamination.Unfortunately,heiscaughtinatrafficjambecauseofanaccident.Howcan hemanage toget therein timePlease thinkout twoor threedifferent waysforhim.（海淀一模2004）Firstofallhecanpersuadethebusdrivertoallowhimtogetoffsothathecanwalkoutoftheheavy trafficjam totake anotherbus ora taxi.Or hecan getoff andask anassistant inanearby shopto lendhim abike.Since it is animportant dayfor thehigh schoolgraduates,dialing110and gettinghelp fromthe policeis oneof thechoices aswell.•May31,No SmokingDay,is drawingnear.Now whatdo you want tosay tothesmokers tohelp themget ridof the bad habit（东城二模2004）Today more and morepeople carefor theproblem ofsmoking becauseit ispolluting theair,also itsharmful tothe peopleshealth and will causelung cancer.When youwant tosmoke,you caneat somethingdelicious ordo somesports instead.Alsoyou canask thedoctor forhelp.Whats theimportant,I thinkyou shouldmake aplan togetrid of thebadhabit.Itsourhope thatwe alltakeanactivepart intheactivity.Im sureyoullsucceedingivingupsmoking.

3.设计活动•Youare talkingwithone ofyour closefriends aboutyourplans forthe summer vacation.You sayto hint,“Vm goingto enjoymyself in thesummervacation.vHe asks,“whatexactly areyou goingto doto havefunYou tellhim whatyouwantto doto makeyour vacationgreat fun.Be sureto useone ormoreexamples toshow whatyoumean.（2003北京）ril goto abeach tosee theseabirds flyinginthedark-blue skyand drivea motorboat,sailingthrough clearwater towardthe risingsun.Then Illsurf thenba.com”website,play gameson“FreeEnglish.com,or chatwith friendsonline abouthot movieslike“The Lordof theRings”and HarryPotter”.

4.解释原因•Tellyourfriendswhyyouarelookingforwardtotheweekend（.宜武一模2004）Havinga goodrestandreadingsomebooksarethe mostimportantweekend activities.Besidesthesetwo,Isometimes goshoppingwithmyparents.Sometimes Igotovisitmyfriends.I canalsodosomething Ilike,such aswatching TV,playing ping-pong,etc.I enjoyweekends verymuchbecause onlyon weekendscan Ifind myselfa trueperson butnot onlya student.

5.发表评论•What doyou thinkof going online in our spare timeI thinkwe cango onlinein ourspare time.Through theInternet,we cangain plentyof thenewest knowledge and the latestnews athome andabroad.Whats more,network offerus aconvenientway tocommunicate witheach other.The Internetmakes ourlives outsideclasscolourful andvarious.But I dont thinkitisright thata lot of precioustime isspent inplaying computergames,oreven somestudents areoften absentfrom schoolfor days.I thinkwe shouldcontrol thetimeonline.•China should devote major efforts to developing car industry.Do youagree（±^2001）I agreethat Chinashoulddevotemajoreffortstodevelopingcar industry.Nowmore andmore familieshave theirown cars.Its veryconvenient forthe peopleto gotowork.In holidays,all thefamilies cantravel to some placeor goto visitexhibition farawayby car.They savea lot of theirsparetime.With thedevelopment ofcarindustry,theeconomy inchina isdeveloping rapidlytoo.But a lotofproblems arecoming about.Traffic incities isgetting heavierand heavier.Thecity isbeing pollutedmore andmore seriously.To solvethese problems,something mustbedone.三学生习作存在的问题

1.审题出现严重错误（时态、文体、人称）

2.文章结构混乱，逻辑不通，罗嗦不到主题

3.英语汉化

4.错误百出四解决方案

1.熟悉英语文章结构特点

2.朗读课文，背诵范文，大量课外阅读

3.强化基本句型的学习以及好词好句的积累五.高考开放性作文练习

1.Oneofyouclosefriendstellsyou:【amsufferingfromdepression（沮丧、消沉）.Ihavetrouble sleeping.Tm oftentired.When I think aboutthe futureI feelhopeless aboutit.Idont enjoyanything.I amnever happy.I dontlaugh orsmile anymore.You wouldliketo helphim/her tofind oneor moresolutions.Tell himor herwhat he/she shoulddo.（崇文一模2004）Mary,dont beupset.I havesome piecesof advicefor you.First ofall,whenever youfeelblue,try listeningto somesongs withbeautiful melody（旋律）.If youstill feeldepressed,look atyourself ina mirrorand smilefor noless than30seconds,then youHbelievethat nothingis seriousand havea goodmood.Of course,youd bettertry tofind anadultyou cantrust totalk to.I dohope thesehelp andnext daywill bebetter.

2.You wantto buya computer.Tell yourparents whyyou needa computer.As weall know,computers havebeen ofgreat useand will be usedmore andmore inourdaily life.Computers areuseful inmy Englishlearning.There arepiles oflearningsoftware I can use.Besides,we cangain plentyof thenewest knowledgeand thelatest newsathome andabroad throughthe internet.I dontsee anythingwrong forme tospend sometimeplaying games.After all,we needsomething toenjoy ourselves.

3.The footballmatch betweenClass Oneand ClassThree wasgoing on.You wereone oftheplayersof ClassOne.Inthe firsthalf,yourteam lostagoal.WhathappenedinthesecondhalfAlthough welost agoal inthe firsthalf,we didntlose heart.We encouragedeach otheranddetermined towin thesecond one.After itbegan,we didour besttotakeevery chance.About15minuteslater,I shottheballpassedbyXiaoniing.We gotit.Withmoreenthusiasm（热情）,finally wedefeated themat thescore2:

1.We becamethe winners.Although wewere nearlyworn out.We wereextremely excitedand happy.

4.The InternationalYouthArt Festivalis abouttobe heldinour city.As ayoungvolunteer,Tm goingto do a lotof gooddeeds fbrit.What willyou do（上海2001春）The International Youth Art Festival isabout tobe heldin ourcity.As ayoung volunteer,Im goingto doa lotof gooddeeds fbrit.Duringthe InternationalYouthArtFestival,I willdomybesttoworkfor thefestival.Forexample,1will help to keep orders,help theactors,clean thespots,and soon.It isa pleasureto doa lotof things forthe the InternationalYouthAri Festival.I thinkI cando thebest.

5.Nowadays,doing part-time jobshas becomea fashionto usstudents.Whats youropinionThere are manyadvantages indoing part-time jobswhile youare inschool.It canofferyoua chancetomakemoney.Youcanalsogainsome workingexperiencefromit.Therefore,you willbe ableto prepareyourself forthe future.However,part-time jobsalso havesome disadvantages.On onehand,it mightoccupysome ofyour time.On theother hand,if you dont knowhow todeal withthe money,it canhavea badinfluence onyou.Because ofthe advantagesand disadvantages,you shouldmaintain acorrect attitudeandchoose jobsproperly.Then you can benefitfrom it.五.高考开放性作文练习

1.Oneofyouclosefriendstellsyou:Iamsufferingfromdepression（沮丧、消沉）.Ihavetrouble sleeping.Tin oftentired.When Ithink aboutthe futureI feelhopeless aboutit.Idontenjoy anything.Iam neverhappy.I dontlaughorsmileanymore.^^Youwouldliketo helphim/her tofind oneor moresolutions.Tell himor herwhat he/she shoulddo.（崇文一模2004）Mary,dont beupset.I havesome piecesof advicefbr you.First ofall,whenever youfeelblue,try listeningtosomesongs withbeautiful melody（旋律）.If youstill feeldepressed,look atyourself ina mirrorand smilefor noless than30seconds,then youllbelievethat nothingis seriousand havea goodmood.Of course,youd bettertry tofind anadultyoucantrust totalk to.Idohope thesehelp andnext daywillbebetter.

2.You wantto buya computer.Tell yourparents whyyou needa computer.As weall know,computers havebeen ofgreat useandwillbe usedmoreandmore inourdaily life.Computers areuseful inmy Englishlearning.Therearepiles oflearningsoftware Ican use.Besides,we cangain plentyofthenewestknowledgeandthelatest newsathome andabroad throughthe internet.I donlsee anythingwrong forme tospend sometimeplaying games.After all,we needsomething toenjoy ourselves.

3.The footballmatch betweenClass Oneand ClassThree wasgoingon.You wereone oftheplayersof ClassOne.Inthe firsthalf,yourteam lostagoal.WhathappenedinthesecondhalfAlthough welost agoal inthe firsthalf,we didntlose heart.We encouragedeach otheranddetermined towin thesecond one.After itbegan,we didour besttotakeevery chance.About15minuteslater,I shottheballpassedbyXiaoming.We gotit.Withmoreenthusiasm（热情）,finally wedefeated themat thescore2:

1.We becamethe winners.Although wewere nearlyworn out.We wereextremely excitedand happy.

4.The InternationalYouthArtFestival isabout tobeheldinour city.As ayoungvolunteer,Fm goingto doa lotof gooddeeds forit.What willyoudo（上海2001春）The InternationalYouth ArtFestivalisabout tobeheldinourcity.As ayoung volunteer,Im goingtodoalotof gooddeeds fbrit.Duringthe InternationalYouthArtFestival,I willdomybesttoworkfor thefestival.Forexample,I willhelptokeeporders,helpthe actors,clean thespots,andsoon.It isa pleasuretodoalotofthingsforthetheInternationalYouthArtFestival.IthinkIcando thebest.

5.Nowadays,doing part-time jobshas becomea fashionto usstudents.Whats youropinionThereare manyadvantages indoing part-time jobswhile youare inschool.It canofferyoua chancetomakemoney.Youcanalsogainsome workingexperiencefromit.Therefore,you willbe ableto prepareyourself forthe future.However,part-time jobsalso havesome disadvantages.On onehand,it mightoccupysome ofyour time.On theother hand,if youdont knowhow todeal withthe money,it canhavea badinfluence onyou.Because ofthe advantagesand disadvantages,you shouldmaintain acorrect attitudeandchoose jobsproperly.Then youcan benefitfrom it.。