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年中考英语作文评分标准及满分技巧曝光2024
一、结构要清晰结构清晰这点真的很重要,我们都知道,阅卷老师们要在规定的时间内批阅上千份作文,而清晰的结构,会让阅卷老师一目了然,自然就会喜欢你的作文什么结构好呢?那就是三段式第一段要开门见山,直接拿出主题给大家举个例子,比如,写我的妈妈,第一段直接就说My motheris aworker.She is明确自己的观点beautiful andshe is a goodmother.第二段就要说,她为什么是一个好妈妈
1.She workshard.
2.Sheis verystrict with me.
3.She alwaysencourages me and help详细说出妈妈的优点me when I amin trouble.第三段得出结论大家可以发表自己的观点,也可以提出建议和希望如,I lovemy mother.I lovemy family!
二、时态要准确2My Chineseteacher,Ms Li,not onlyteaches ushow tolearn,but alsoteaches ushow tobe aperson.I rememberImade aserious mistakesin Gracieseven,that wasto copyothershomework.Ms Liknew that.Instead ofbeing angrywith me,she toldme theimportance ofstudy andencouragedme tostudy hardto becomea talentedpersonin thefuture.3Last term,I failedmy exam.I wasso thatthat Icriedsadly in my room.When my mother camefrom worklate,she talkedwithmepatiently andcheered meup.Thatevening,whenIwoke upat night,mymotherwas stillworking.I wasdeeply moved.Then Imade upmy mindtostudy harderthan before.尾段As asunshine teenager,Xiao Huiis agood examplefor us tolearn from./I willtreasure thefriendship forever.7Now Iunderstand my father slove tome.I will never forgetwhatmyfatherdid for meandtry mybest tomake himpleased.He is an excellentteacher Iwillneverforget andlove himforever.
三、咨询建议类7r msorry tohear thatyou havedifficulty indoing....Donzt worryabout it!Here aresome usefulsuggestions Id liketoshare withyou.主体段主题句L:Actuallyjf you are careful,you IIfind varioussimpleways tohelp yousolve the problem..要点2First andforemost,It sadj/n.for/of sb.to do....So that...Inaddition,you aresupposed todo...,which cannot only...butalso...What smore,you hadbetter notdo...,because...Last butnot least,!suggest youshould do...,from7which,you reable todo...尾段With thesesuggestions carriedout,I firmlybelieve you willimprove...a lot.I sincerelyhope thatmy suggestionscan beof greathelp.Looking forwardto yourearliest reply.
四、观点看法类With thedevelopment ofthe scienceandtechnology/society...is becomingmore andmorezserious./theproblemabout...is undera heateddiscussion/...has becomea hottopic.As forthatjhere aredifferentopinions amongpeople.主体段On theone hand,some peoplehold theidea that....Thereasons areas follows.First,....Second,....Last,....On theother hand,others disagree.They supposethat....Because....More importantly,....尾段As faras Im concerned,every coinhas twosides,and...isnot an exception.As longas wetreat...properlyjt will be ofgreathelp.中考作文经典词句一.常用的名言警句事实胜于雄辩.
1.Actions speaklouder thanwords.英语作文除了结构,还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的那就是时态,这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应再根据内容要求,现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生,比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写,要用一般现在时;对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时;过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时一定不能乱用乱配
三、短语运用要灵活同学们在写作文的时候,要尽量使用有把握的词,避免不必要的失分当然,定语从句、宾语从句等句型,在关键的时候用上一两个,会增添你文章的文采在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思的短语这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味还有对关联词的使用,如first ofall,secondly,finally,last,so等还可以使that,in orderthat,not...but,not only...but also用高级点的如,(表示总结的),in aword,all inall but,yet,(表示转折)等however经验的阅卷老师很在意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了整个文章的思路
四、写全要点近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多,也就是说写作内容几乎都有要点提示,确切地说就是给出写作提纲,通常都是〜个提示点,35这种作文,同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译,但是提示点必须在文章中有所体现文章写得再好,如果缺少了要点就会扣分的所以要点也就是文章的第二段内容,同学们要把提示点写全,然后围绕提示点充分发挥,丰富自己所写的内容
五、书写要认真这一点同学们必须高度重视,作文的书写一定要保持规范整洁,同一篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有到分的差距25给阅卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写,最简单的得分点就是我们的认真书写工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情,在扣分时自然会手下留情〃大家切记不要涂改,在情况允许的前提下可以打些草稿避免不必要的丢分漂亮的字体是可以练出来的,只要大家在心里注意了自己的书写,都会写得很好作文评分标准中考作文一般从内容、语言、组织结构这三方面进行评分(总分20分)
(一)分内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整7-8分内容基本切题,意思大致连贯,表达基本清楚、但不够5-6完整分内容不够切题,意思不够连贯,表达不够清楚、有些离2-4题分文不对题,表达不清0-1
(二)语言(满分)8词数每少个单词扣分,以此类推只写出个别单词、词不
50.5成句不给分拼写每处错误扣分,同一错误不重复计数
0.5语法每处错误扣分,同一语法错误不重复扣分
0.5标点符号、大小写每两处错误扣分,但扣分总和不超过分
0.51
(三)组织结构(满分)4内容充实,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给分3-4内容充实,不写废话,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给分2一般情况下,内容和语言累计得分在分以上者(含),方可得15>到分组织结构分2内容和语言在分以下者,如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达,15可酌情考虑给分组织结构分1通篇句型句式单
一、词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般也不予给组织结构分分类作文提纲
一、活动介绍类1rmpleased toknow thatyou regreatly interestedin...,so rd liketo sharea pieceof goodnews thatthere willbea....Nowjet meoffer you some useful information.2It smy greathonor toinvite you to entera....Nowjetme offeryou someusefulinformation about it.3It stime forustosay goodbyeto ourschool lifesoon.Surprisingly,there isa/an...prepared forus.Now,let meofferyousomeinformationaboutit.主体段.时间地点o1The...will beheld inClassroom302at3clock inthe afternoonon June8th,
2019..内容2主题句1There willbe variousmeaningful activitiesincludedin it.要点:2First ofall,You willbe invitedto.../You willbe givenachance to....which will...After thatjtwillbemore thaninteresting foryouto.../It willimpressyoualot to...so that...At last,doing sth.will playan importantpart in....So...尾段That salLI firmlybelieve thatif youjoin init,youwill....7That salLI sincerelyhope thatyou cancome andshare thehappiness/fun withus.
二、写人叙事类首段月月友1A friendin needisafriend indeed.I havea friendjustlike thatwho oftenoffers memuch warmthinmy life.Let meintroduce himto you.父母:2If youask mewho isthe mostimportant onetome,without doubt,the answeris my....Let meintroduce himtoyou.老师:3In bothmylifeand studymy...teacher isspecial tozmebecause heis notonly myteacher but also myfriendwho hasmade agreat differenceto mycharacter.主体段外貌:...L is very beautifulbutalittle fatwith longhair andbigeyes..性格:
2...isanoutgoing womanwho alwaysgets alongwellwith peoplearound her./…isverykind toothers andeasy togeton with./is soready tohelp othersthat weall liketomake friendswith him..爰好3She isespecially goodat cookingand oftencooksdifferent deliciousfoods forme..事例41Linda islike anangel.Whenever Imeet trouble,she willalwaysbe there.When I fail mytest,She alwaysencouragesme toface thefact bravelyand thentries tohelp metocheck thereason whyIfail.At thesame time,she shareshergood waysof studyingwithme.。
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