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记叙文之写人型01记叙文概要写作技巧记叙文Narration找出时间when,地点where,什么人who,做了什么事what,为什么做why,结果怎么样how六要素其中,最重要的要点是某人who做了何事what若是夹叙夹议的文章,还要加上作者的看法、观点、经验或感悟写人的记叙文Description o写人的记叙文总结要点主要抓住人物的主要特点或事迹,中考书面表达中对“人物介绍类的话题考查还是不少的,且形式比较统一这类话题作文,通常会在背景材料中给出所写人物的基本信息、兴趣爱好、性格特点等关键词,以及在学习、工作、能力方面的经历等相关信息大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开,或叙事抒怀,或表明个人对人物所持的情感此类文章以记叙文居多,也可夹叙夹议学生只需认真审题,发生联想,理清思路,就可以轻松应对特别注意
1.人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面,但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写,包括所给的全部信息点,既不能遗漏,也不能随意添加
2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息重点信息通常是写作的目的所在,比如求职要重点突出学历、经历,新闻报道要重点突出事迹,介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点,等等
3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型
4.注意运用正确的时态描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时,而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时在写人的时候,我们可以通过以下三部分来写作
1.简单介绍人物的概况一般包括姓名、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等写作时使用的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等2从多方面对人物进行刻面为了使人物的形象丰满起来,给读者留下深刻印象,我们可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写,并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性在具体写作时,要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法
3.对人物进行评价在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受,无论是喜欢还是讨厌,是称赞还是批评,都要明确地表达出来【写作注意事项】a.写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述;
5.In thepast...years...has impressedme deeply.在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象
6.In my life the person I will never forget is my father.在我的生命中,我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲【篇中句】
1.1was about to...when...我正要,突然,
4.Hardly had I done...when.../No soonerhadIdone...than...我刚……,就……/我一……,就……
5.He workedhard everyday to make money to keepour family.他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭
6.He alwayswears casualclothes likejeans andT-shirt.他总是穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装
7.Her eyesare verybig/bright/warm/attractive.她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力
8.One day,I...有一天,我【篇尾句】
1.It turnsoutto be...结果是
2.1was verytired,but I was happythat Idid a good deed.我很疲惫,但我很高兴自己做了一件好事
3.Now I understand my father\love to me.I will never forgetmyfather.现在我明白了父亲对我的爱我永远不会忘记我的父亲
4.From it,Iunderstand we shouldnot cheatanyone,especially my parents.从这件事中,我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人,尤其是我们的父母学真题链接
(一)(
2022.四川.宜宾市教科所中考真题)亲爱的同学,三年的初中学习生活即将结束,你一定有很多感慨在此之际,请你以“My FavoriteTeacher”为题,用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿内容包括
1.最喜欢的老师;
2.简单介绍该老师(外貌或性格);
3.喜欢他(她)的理由(两个);
4.最想对老师说的话注意
1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.不能出现真实姓名和校名(只用Mr./Ms./Miss+姓;学科);
3.词数100左右开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数My FavoriteTeacherHow time flies!My three-year juniormiddle school life will be over soon.Looking back,I havemanymemories of my teachers.【答案】例文My FavoriteTeacherHow time flies!My three-yeae Middleschool lifewillbeoversoon.Looking back,I havemanymemories of my teachers.As for me,my favoriteteacher isMs.Li,our English teacher.She is a bitthin butvery beautiful,with apair ofthick glasses.She isserious andstrict.In fact,she oftenmakes herclasses sointeresting andlivelythat weall enjoyher lessons.When weare tiredin class,she oftentells jokesto makeus relaxed.With the help of her,we havemade great progress in English.Ms.Li,I onlywant to say to you:My dream-to be a goodsenior schoolstudent-will come true in the()end.Thank you!I wishyou ahappy life in your life longjourney.【详解】
1.题干解读本文是一篇材料作文,以“My FavoriteTeacher”为题,介绍自己喜欢的老师
2.写作指导本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主文章可分为三段式第一段文章已给第二.段阐述喜欢的这位老师是谁、他(她)的外貌或性格、以及喜欢的原因最后一段介绍自己想对老师说的话写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误
(二)(2022・广西贺州・中考真题)假如你是李华,在过去的三年,英语老师教会了你很多英语知识和技能,开拓了你的视野你感激英语老师的付出,决定将来继续学好并用好英语请你结合以下提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文提示你的英语老
1.外貌
2.性格……师你学会了
1.唱英文歌,欣赏英文电影
2.用英语讲小故事
3.用英语进行简单交流…・・・感恩和决心
1.感恩老师的教导
2.继续努力学习英语
3.用英语向世界讲述中国故事要求
1.文章必须包括所给提示内容,可展开思路,适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息、;
3.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数Um Li Hua.My English teacher is【答案】例文Im Li Hua.My Englishteacher isMs.Zhang.She is a tall and outgoing lady who is very patient withall of us.Ms.Zhang hastaught meEnglish for3years.I likeher interestingclasses.Learning Englishhelpsme become more open-minded.Now I can talkwith othersin Englishfluently and read someEnglishbooks.I canalso tellsome storiesin English.Besides,enjoying Englishsongs andmovies hasbecomeone ofmy hobbies.Ms.Zhang is an excellentteacher,to whomI want to say thanks.I decideto learnmore Englishinthe future,and trymy best to tellthe storyof Chinain Englishto theworld.【详解】
1.题干解读本文是一篇材料作文根据要点提示,介绍下你的英语老师,描述你所学会的东西,以及感激英语老师的付出,决定将来继续学好并用好英语
2.写作指导本文时态以一般现在时为主人称以第一人称和第三人称为主叙述时可适当运用短语句型或从句,使文章出彩有亮点写作时确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误
(三)(
2022.湖北湖北.中考真题)在你的成长历程中,有许多值得感恩的人,如父母,老师,同学……他们或帮助过你,或影响到你,你最想感恩谁?请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文要点提示
1.他/她有什么特点(外貌,性格……)?
2.他/她对你影响最深的一件事是什么?
3.你想怎样感谢他/她?写作要求
1.词数90左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
4.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;
5.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名参考词汇:be grateful to对心存感激;have aninfluence on对有影响;care about关心;unforgettable难以忘怀的The PersonI Want to ExpressMy ThanksIn my life,many peoplehelped andinfluenced me a lot.The person I want to expressmy thanksmostis...【答案】例文The PersonI Wantto ExpressMy ThanksIn mylife,many peoplehelped andinfluenced mea lot.The personI want to expressmy thanksmostis my EnglishteacherMr.Lee.He istall andthin.He hasshort black hair andwears glasses.He isalwaysfriendly andpatient with us.When I was inGrade8,myEnglishwas verypoor.One day,he askedme totake partin anEnglishspeech contest.He said,“Your pronunciationis reallygood.Try yourbest.I believein you”.With thehelp of Mr.Lee,I gotthe firstprize.My Englishimproved a lot.Mr.Lee hasa greatinfluence onme,I amgratefultohim.I willwork hard to becomebetter.I thinkthafsthe bestgift for my dearteacher.[详解】
1.题干解读本文主要以“The PersonI Wantto ExpressMy Thanks”为题并结合题干中的问题进行写作,介绍你最想感谢的人,可适当增加细节
2.写作指导本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,人称以第二人称和第三人称为主第一段介绍自己想感谢的人的特点;第二段讲述他对你影响最深的一件事;第三段讲述你会如何感谢他写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误
(四)(
2022.四川四川・中考真题)假设你叫李平,你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去伦敦Linda家住一段时间°请你根据表格信息,用英语给Linda写一封邮件,介绍你姐姐的基本情况姓名Li Rong年龄16外貌中等身高、黑色短发性格随和、外向、友好爱好历史、博物馆、烹任、打篮球衣着T恤、牛仔裤注意⑴文中不得出现个人真实信息,如姓名、校名等;2文中应包含表格所给信息,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;⑶词数80-100oDear Linda,Yours,Li Ping【答案】例文Dear Linda,Im glad to writeto you.Today I want to introduce mysister LiRong to you.She is16years old.She isof mediumheight and she hasshort blackhair.She iseasy-going,out-going andfriendly.She likeshistory becauseshe thinksit helpsher learn about thehistory and cultureof thepast.She likesto go to museumsand shelikes thecultural atmosphereof themuseum.She likescookingand she always cooksfor us.She likesplaying basketballand sheoften playsbasketball onweekends.She oftenwears T-shirts andjeans.I hopeyou willhelp her and shewont giveyou anytrouble.Yours,Li Ping【详解】[总体分析]
①题材本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示写作要点已给出,要求根据表格内容介绍姐姐的基本情况,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图借用“介绍姐姐”来引出重点介绍的内容;第二步,具体阐述写作内容从“姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、爱好和穿着几个方面重点介绍;第三步,书写结语表达希望对方帮忙,姐姐不会给对方添麻烦[亮点词汇]©introduce...to...向介绍
(2)of mediumheight中等身高
③learn about学习关于
④on weekends在周末[高分句型]©She likeshistory becauseshe thinksit helpsher learnabout historyandcultureof thepast.(because引导的原因状语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
②I hopeyou willhelp herandshewont giveyou anytrouble,(and连接并歹U句)
(五)(2022・辽宁沈阳・中考真题)榜样是我们学习的楷模、努力的方向学校英语社团开展以“介绍我心中的榜样”为主题的社团活动假如你是李华,请你写一封英文发言稿来介绍你心中的榜样——李想内容包括
1.人物描写;
2.说明理由;
3.表达希望【注意】
1.词数80—100,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名Dear fellowstudents,I amLi Hua.Today Iwould liketo introduceLi Xiang,a modelstudent in my mind.Thanks foryour listening!【答案】例文Dear fellowstudents,I amLi Hua.Today Iwould liketo introduceLi Xiang,a modelstudent in my mind.He isvery kindand caring.At school,he studiesso hardthat heoften getsgood scoresin exams.However,I dontdo wellin studying.So henot onlyhelps mewith everysubject but also tellsme howtostudy inorder tocatch upothers.With LiXiangs help,I made great progress and I thank him very much.I thinkIm luckyto have such agood friend.From nowon,I willdo my best to study betterand better.And I hope I will learn from LiXiang to help othersin troubleand showthe actof kindnessto others.Thanks foryour listening!【详解
1.题干解读本文是一篇演讲稿,要求根据提示问题,介绍自己心中的榜样注意要点齐全,可适当发挥
2.写作指导文章以第
一、三人称,一般现在时为主,注意主谓一致问题;写作时要分别介绍榜样是谁,为什么是自己的榜样并表达自己的希望要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误
(六)(2021•甘肃兰州•中考真题)假如你是李华,通过你校外籍教师,你认识了一位英国的新笔友Richard,他很想了解你的一些情况请你根据下面表格中的信息,给他写一封邮件,向他介绍情况Personality outgoing,friendlyplay basketball,listen toPersonalinformation(个人信Hobbymusic...息)Family happy,warm...Dream(梦想)want to be,be going to...F riendship(友谊)between youlearnfrom each other,visit...and Richard要求
1.邮件包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息;
4.词数不少于80,邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,请抄写在答题卡的相应位置Dear Richard,Fm gladto knowyou.Yours,Li Hua例文Dear Richard,Im gladto knowyou.I heardthat youwanted toknow me.Now letme introduce myself toyou.I amoutgoing andfriendly.I amnice toeveryone andalways readytohelpothers.I likeplayingbasketball andlistening to music.Basketball helps me strongand musicmakes mefeel relaxed.I haveahappy andwarm familyandwelove each other.I wanttobe a teacherin the future.I amgoing tostudy hardandprepare tobeagood teacher.I am gladtobe yourpen paland I am surewe can learna lot fromeach other.I hopeyou willvisit mesoon.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1,题干解读本文是一篇电子邮件要求根据提示信息,写一封邮件给Richard,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥
2.写作指导写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态以一般现在时为主作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己的个人信息和梦想等内容;第三段展望二人的友谊并期待Richard未来可以来参观要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误
(七)(2021•内蒙古兴安盟•中考真题)正能量偶像宛如指路明灯,可以引导我们成为更好的人近期,你们学校的英语报刊以“My guidingstar”为题正在征稿,请你积极投稿要点
1.Who isyour guidingstar
2.What didhe/she do
3.What haveyou learnedfrom him/her
4.What areyou goingto doin the future要求L文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥;
2.文章应句式多样、语句流畅、意思连贯;
3.词数90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数注意
1.文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息;
4.不许抄袭、套改My guidingstarThe peoplewe admireare likeguiding starsthat guideus tobe better.My guidingstar is参考范文My guidingstarThe peoplewe admireare likeguiding starsthat guideus tobe better.My guidingstar isDoctorZhong Nanshan.He is one of the greatestdoctors that I respect.He devotedallofhis energyand time to themedical research.For example,during theCOVID-19outbreak,he wasso bravethat herushed tothe frontline andcame upwith valuableadvice offightingagainst thevirus.I havelearned hisspirit,his braveryand hispatience.Besides,I havelearned thatI shouldvalue mytime andreadmore booksto getmore knowledge.From nowon,Im goingtostudyharder andgoto mydream universitytomakemy dreamcometrue.Only inthis waycan Imake contributionsto ourgreatcountry.【详解】
1.题干解读本文是一篇材料作文以“我的引路之星”为题写一篇短文
2.写作指导本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时分为三段式第一段引出主题;第二段介绍相关事迹;最后一段描述自己从中学到了什么,以及打算将来如何做写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无标点和语法错误至模拟题型链接L
2022.江苏苏州•模拟预测初中三年的校园生活转瞬即逝,校园里总有人给你留下了深刻的印象最近,某英文网站正在举办以6CAperson I willneverforgef9为主题的征文活动请以“I willnever forget”为题,写一篇英语文章参加此次征文活动要求1中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;2文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;3词数80词左右【答案】例文I willnever forgetHowtime flies!Three yearshas passedsince Ibecame amiddle schoolstudent.I experienceda lotandhad verygood memoriesofmyfriends,teachers andso on.The teacherI willnever forgetis Mr.Li,anEnglish teacher.Hes atall manwith thickglasses.He likessports andoften playsfootball andbasketball withus.Heshumorous andalways makeshis classeslively andinteresting.Hes kindbut isstrict withus.About twoyears ago,Mr.Li noticedthatIwas worriedabout mypoor pronunciation.So heofferedme manysuggestions toimprove it,and healso gaveme everychance possibleto speakin class.With hishelp,my pronunciationhas greatlyimproved.Iwantto say thanks toMr.Li,and Iwish hima healthyand happylifein thefuture!【详解】
1.题干解读阅读题干,可知要求我们以“I willnever forget,为题,写一篇关于初中三年的校园生活里,给你留下了深刻印象的人的文章写作主要内容可以涉及人物的外貌、性格特征以及爱好等;留下深刻印象的原因;与他/她发生的相关事件等b.要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一;C.在描写人的外貌时,常用一般现在时,人称常用第一人称或第三人称;d.要抓住所描写人物的典型特征【写作方法】第一段人物介绍引出要写的人物并做基本介绍例如年龄、外貌、身份、性格等;第二段叙述典型事例通过事例说明这个人的性格、品质等;第三段对人物的评价或夸赞或指责或者从事例中得到的感受、启示等典例赏析(2022・江苏无锡・中考真题)生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人最近,无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The PersonI WanttoThank”的英语演讲比赛假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛Inrroducoon Experience;looks exdmpte/story;personalties...Influence...断注意事项
1.演讲稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3.词数在100个左右,演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
5.演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上[答案]例文The PersonIWantto ThankInmy juniorschoollife,many peoplehave helpedme.Ithankthem very much.But the
2.写作指导这是一篇话题类作文,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,人称以第三人称为主例文采取四段式的写作手法第一段感叹时间流逝,点明印象深刻的人是谁;第二段描述人物的外貌性格特征;第三段回忆与人物发生的事件,阐述留下深刻印象的主要原因;最后一段表示感谢与祝愿
2.(2022・河南•方城县基础教育教学研究室三模)三人行,必有我师你的身边一定有很多良师你心目中的“老师”是谁?是你的好朋友?你的同学?你的妈妈?还是?请以并根据要点和要求,用英语写一封电子邮件,参加学校的英语主题调查活动
1.要点1)你心目中的“老师”是谁;2)为什么说他(她)是你的“老师”;3)他(她)给你带来怎样的影响或改变
2.要求1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)A“teacher”in my heartDear Sir,Im pleasedto sharethe topic,a teacher“in myheart,with you.Yours sincerely,Kangkang【答案】[例文]A“teacher”in myheartDear Sir,Im pleasedto sharethe topic,a teacher“in myheart,with you.My best friend Mingmingissuch a“teacher“that hastaught mea lot.She alwaysplans whatneeds tobe doneahead of time.She setsagoodexample tome andhelps me tomake agood plan.She is also verycareful.She thinksthat detailsdetermine successor failureand alwaysremindsmeto do self-examination.She isquite patient.When Imeet problems,she keepsexplaining themtome untilI fullyunderstand.With thehelpofMingming,Tm gettingmore andmore confidentand makinggreater progressnotonly indealing with my subjectsbut alsoin gettingalong withthe peoplearound me.Best wishestoyou!Yours sincerely,Kangkang【详解】
1.题干解读本题为话题作文,要求就写一位在生活中或学业上影响了你的人,这位“老师”可以是父母、教师、身边的朋友
2.写作指导写作时人称应用第
一、三人称,时态应用现在时本文格式为电子邮件,写作时要注意电子邮件的标准格式文章应做到思路清晰,层次分明,语言流畅,不要出现单词拼写及语法时态方面的错误
3.(
2022.江苏.射阳县第四中学一模)同学们,回想这三年的初中生活,你一定感慨万千在初中毕业典礼上,学校将举行“感恩教育仪式”,请你根据以下提示,用英语为该活动写一篇短文,简述这三年来要感恩的人和事,以及你的感想和未来打算Saying th«nk$toyou|I]myparentsmy teacherjmyfriends andciM$mxeSprovide mewith_be patients,share…with...take careof.encouragehelp me.一MB注意事项
1.词数100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息、,并作适当发挥Saying thanks to youHowtimeflies!Three yearshas passedsince Icame tothe secondaryschool.During thepast threeyears,I have gained a lot and grown a lot.I mustsay thanks to many people whohavehelped me.【答案】例文Saying thanksto youHowtimeflies!Three yearshas passedsince Icame tothe secondaryschool.During thepast threeyears,1havegainedalotandgrownalot.I mustsaythanksto manypeople whohave helpedme.First,I shouldsaythanksto mydear parents.They provideeverything Ineed forme.They takegoodcare of me withoutany complaint.They workhardtosupport thewhole family.They arealways tryingtheirbest tomake melive abetter life.Second,Tm thankfulto allmy teachersfor theirgreat helpand support.They arepatient enoughtospends lotsoftimeexplaining problemstome.Besides,they alwaysencourage mewhen I am introuble.Its unselfishof themto devotetheir timeto education.Finally,I alsofeel gratefulto myfriends andclassmates.We worktogether andshare happinessandworries witheachother.We oftenhelp eachother andlearnfromeachother.As aresult,we havemadegreat progress.I thinkIm luckyto haveso muchlove andcare.Iwillnever forgetthese happydays.Iamgoingtodobetter in thefutureso thatthey canbe proudofme.【详解】
1.题干解读本题是一篇材料作文,根据题干提示,感恩父母、老师、朋友和同学,并谈谈自己未来的打算
2.写作指导本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称用第一人称和第三人称写作时可按照“总分总”的结构,首先点明要感谢那些曾帮助过自己的人,然后分段表达自己对父母、老师、朋友和同学的感激之情,最后进行总结和阐述未来的打算注意行文连贯、条理清晰、无拼写和语法错误
4.(2022・湖北咸宁・模拟预测)灿烂星空,谁是真正的英雄?在你心中,英雄是戍边战士吗?是载人航天寻中国梦的宇航员吗?是为国争光的运动之星吗?还是在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人呢?请你根据下面的提示,以The Herin My Heart为题,写一篇你心中的英雄的作文要点提示
1.简单介绍你心目中的一个英雄
2.阐述他能成为你心目中英雄的原因
3.你对英雄的定义是什么?写作要求
1.词数90左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名The Heroin My HeartAs weknow,most peoplehave heroesin theirhearts.For me,【答案】例文The Heroin MyHeartAs weknow,most peoplehave heroesin theirhearts.For me,Li Lianjieis oneof themost famousfilmstars inChina.And heis alsoa hero in myheart.He playeda role in afilm whenhe was a child.Through hishard workhe hasmade alot offilms.Heis sobrave andcareful thathealwaystries hisbesttomake theaction perfect.As aChinese hepromises tomakeevery foreignerknow Chinesekung fuculture well.He gaveaway muchmoneytohelp thechildrenin poorvillages.From LiLianjie Icanlearnalot,such asthe resolutionto succeedand thethoughts ofhelpingothers.I thinka personwho canbearole modelfor usis ourhero.【详解】
1.题干解读本文是一篇材料作文根据提示,以“The Herin MyHeart”为题,写一篇作文介绍你新心中的作文
2.写作指导本文时态采用一般现在时;人称以第三人称为主写作内容包括英雄是谁;为什么他/她是你心目中的英雄;你对英雄的定义写作时注意语言的连贯性,确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误
5.(
2022.河南驻马店.三模)拥有一颗感恩的心,会让我们成为更幸福和健康的人请以“『m thankfulto”为题,并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文
(1)要点1)你最感恩的人是谁?2)你为什么对他/她最感恩?3)你将如何表达对他/她的感谢?
(2)要求1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2)词数100左右Im thankfulto【答案】例文Im thankfultomy mother.There aremanypeopleto thankin ourlife.They arevery helpfulto ourlife.The personwho Iwanttothank mostis my mother.When Iwas ill,she lookedafter mecarefully.If Ifeltupset,she wouldtalk tomeandencourage me.She isnot onlymymotherbut alsomy best friend.I reallywanttosaythankstomymother.I alsowanttotell herIwilllove herforever.I learnedalotfrom her,suchas honesty,fraternity andcourtesy.【详解】
1.题目解读本文是一篇材料作文,要求补全题目,写一个你要感恩的人,介绍具体事情,以及如何感谢
2.写作指导本文可以采用一段式,时态是一般现在时和一般过去时讲述过去的事时,可以多采用状语从句
6.(2022•河南驻马店.二模)不论哪个时代,哪个行业,都会有驻留人心的英雄,因而诗人说“英雄儿女各千秋工你的心中也一定有一位英雄,他/她也许是阅兵场上的军人,也许是攻克难题的科学家,也许是一位感动大家的普通人,也许是疫情期间你身边的守护者请以“A Heroin MyHeart”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你心中的英雄
1.要点1)你心目中的英雄是谁2)他/她有哪些事迹让你感动;3)从他/她身上你学习到了什么
2.要求1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;2)词数100左右A HeroinMyHeart【答案】A HeroinMyHeartYuan Longpingisaheroinmyheart.Mr.Yuan spentnearly60years doingresearch onbetter riceinorder tomake peopleintheworld haveenough food.And hewas successful!He washonored as“Fatherof HybridRice”.He isso selflessand hard-working thatI respecthimvery much.Iwillneverforgethim.As astudent,I havedecided notto wasteany foodfrom nowon.Also,Til studyharder thanbefore sothatIcanmaster moreknowledge andskills.When Igrow up,Ill workhard forour countrylike him.【详解】
1.题干解读本文是一篇材料作文,在写作时根据题目要求,先介绍自己心目中的英雄是谁,然后再简单叙述他/她的事迹以及你从中学到了什么
2.写作指导本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容,时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主在介绍内容时,力求语句通顺,语法正确,保证上下文连贯,条理清晰
7.(2022•浙江松阳县教育局教研室一模)♦假如你是李华,你的笔友Peter想了解你初中三年来的成长和变化请根据表格中的要点,写一封Email告诉他参考词汇•内省要点In thepast NowPersonalityquiet andshy...outgoing andactive...Interests andhobbies listentomusic,...do sports...注意
(1)文中必须包含上表中的两个要点,可适当发挥;••••2文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息;3词数80〜100;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数ToSubject HowI have changedHi,Peter!Vm sohappy totell youhow I have changedinthepast threeyears.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Hi,Peter!Im sohappy totell youhow I havechangedinthepast threeyears.When Istarted junior high school,Iwasreally shyand quiet.I wasntbrave enoughto asktheteachers anyquestions.I wasntgood atEnglish andalways feltworried.I lostmyself inlistening tomusicall daylong.Luckily,I havemade greatprogressandbecomemoreconfident withthehelpofmyEnglishteacher.She alwaysencourages meand triesto bring out the best inme.Now Iam not only good at allsubjectsbut alsointerested insports.You willsee anoutgoing andactive youngadult when we meetnexttime.Yours,LiHua【详解】
1.题干解读这是一篇应用文写作,题目要求根据所给表格中的要点提示给你的笔友写一封信谈谈你初中三年来的生活变化注意要点齐全,可适当发挥
2.写作指导本文应以第一人称,结合一般现在时和一般过去时来行文邮件开头已给出,第二段主要写过去和现在的变化写作时,注意保持主谓一致,行文连贯,无单词和语法错误
8.2022•浙江・金华市成功学校三模假如你是Daming,你的美国笔友Mike问起你初中阶段最要好朋友的情况根据下表的内容要点,给他发一份邮件,向他介绍你的好友Lingling并说说她成为你好友的原因注意
1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80〜100;
4.邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数内容要点参考词汇Age15years oldAppearancea round face,big eyes...Character humorous,creative,...Hobbies reading books,playing table tennis...Others•••Dear Mike,Yours,Darning【答案】例文:Dear Mike,How areyou Iamgladto introduceLingling,my bestfriend injunior highschool.Inmyview,Lingling isa girlwho isendowed withboth beautyand talent.First ofall,with big eyesand a round face,15-year-old Lingling is amicable.Whafs more,she is,by nature,a humorousgirl whobringsme happiness.Iwasdeeply impressedby herhumor andbright smilewhenwemet forthe firsttime.Additionally,she isso creativethat shealways writepoems todescribe thingsand feelings.Friends arewho sharesimilar tastesand interests.We aregood partnersto playtabletennis.Besides,both of us arefond ofreadingbooks,especially worksby Bingxin.Do youagree thatLingling isan amazingfriend Ivementioned youto her,and maybewe threecanbe friends.Expect your early reply.Yours,DarningDear Mike,Glad to hear from you.Id liketointroducemy bestfriend injunior highschool toyou.My bestfriend isLingling,a15-year-old Chinesegirl.She istall with a roundface,bright eyes andlong blackhair.Also,she ishumorous andcreative soeveryone thatknows herspeaks wellof her.Shekeeps sharing her novel ideas,which isadmired byme.Besides whatI haveintroduced above.Lingling hasmanyhobbies in her spare time,such as,reading,singing,playing tabletennis andso on.Therefore,Ialways likestaying withherandwe have fun together.Inmyopinion,a realfriend isa personwho canbringoutthe bestin us.Linglingisthepersonwhohelps megrow up.Ihopeour friendshipwill lastforever.Do youhavesucha friendYours,DarningDear Mike.Im gladtohearfromyou.Ifs mypleasure tointroducemybestfriendinmyjuniorhighschool toyou.To beginwith she isa15-year-old girlcalled Linglingwitha roundface,bigeyesand long hair.In myeyes,she ishumorous andcreative becauseevery timeIamdown inthe dumps,she willgive mean openmindand cheersme up.Thafs oneofthereasons whysheismybestfriend.Additionally,Lingling enjoysreadingbooks andplaying tabletennis inher sparetime.I likedoing themto killtime,too.Actually,weshare thesame hobbiesand thesame features,which isanother reasonwe becomebest friends.Personally,thebestfriend playsan importantroleinourlife.Can youshare yourexperience betweenyouand yourbestfriendIm lookingforward toyourearlyreply.Yours,Darning【详解】[总体分析]题材本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;1
②时态时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中其他一项,适当添加内容,并突出写作重点[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图开门见山说明回信的内容是向对方介绍自己初中的好朋友;第二步,具体介绍朋友,包括题目中给的所有内容;第三步,最后阐明对友谊的看法并书写书信结语如期待对方的来信等[亮点词汇]
①inmyopinion依我之见a15-year-old Chinesegirl一个15岁的中国女孩2
③inhersparetime在她的空闲时间
④havefun过得愉快[高分句型]
①She istall witharoundface,bright eyesand longblackhair.(with表附带)
②She keepssharinghernovelideas,which isadmired byme.(which弓|导非限制性定语从句)personIwanttothank mostismyEnglishteacherMiss Lee.Miss Leeis beautifulwith longhair.She isatall andoutgoingladywhoisverypatientwith allofus.(介绍任务的外貌和性格)And sheis kind.She helps mealot.She oftenhelpsmewith myEnglish.When Iam introuble,shealways encourages metoface mydifficulties and gives megood advice.I stillremember thatonce Ifailedin animportant Englishexam andwas upset.She cheeredme upand toldme somegood waystoimprove myEnglish.(举例说明为何感谢他/她)With herhelp,I madegreatprogress inEnglishand becameinterested init.Tm verythankful forallthat shehas doneforme.She hasa greatinfluence onme,and herhelp isvery usefulformyfuturedevelopment.【解析】
1.题干解读本文是一篇演讲稿写作时要根据汉语提示的内容,写出最想感谢的人是谁;他/她的外表、性格;举例说明为何感谢他/她;以及对你的影响
2.写作指导本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容;叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时,叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时同时写作时注意语句的连贯性,保证词汇和语法的正确使用H写作模板模板
①Ihavemade manygood friends.(引出人物)isoneof them.She is(身材.).介绍人物的外形特征(总体给人的感觉).She istallandHer hairis(给人的印象).介绍人物的性格特征并记叙一is alwayswilling to(性格).She is good at(特长).Whenever Ihave problems个典型的事例I.Once(弓|出事例).To mysurprise,.We will,but Ihope(表达愿望).提出愿望(头发).She alwayswears(表情)andgivesustheimpressionthat模板
②人物介绍...isanine-year-old boy.He isvery...and...He isvery naughty.And he...(年龄、外貌、身份、性格等)V典型事例He often...One dayhe...(说明性格、品质等)V...like himverymuch.I thinkhe...人物评价(喜爱、夸赞等情感),希用表当
一、描写人物外形的常用词汇大的_________________明亮的难看的__________________超重的__________________挺直的__________________长的_________________年轻而且漂亮近视眼的_________________金黄色________________瘦的_________________约40岁乌黑的__________________美丽的__________________张圆脸帅_________________不但的直发长得好看__________________大既不高也不矮足够强壮—矮的_________________小的_________________一双大眼睛_圆的_________________卷发的关于人物描写的英语素材中等身材高的_________________【答案】ugly tallshort straightbig smallnear-sighted overweightround thinlong curlyblackgolden mediumheight handsomebeautiful brightgoodlooking notonly youngbutalsobeautiful neithertall norshortabout40years oldstrong enougharoundfacea pairof bigeyes longstraight hair
二、描写人物性格的常用词汇懒的善良的严厉的勇敢的________________有耐心的_________________仔细的有信心聪明的________________粗心的__________________的开心的无助容易相处的,随和的不诚实的_________________的活泼的受欢助人的,有益的努力的,勤劳的迎的幽默的________________诚实的________________有礼貌的_________________外向的________________安静的羞涩的可爱的滑稽的_________________【答案】lazy kindstrict patientbravecareful carelessclever confidentdishonesteasygoing happyhard-working helpfulhelplesshonest humorouslively outgoingpolitepopular quietshy lovelyfunny
三、表示人物间关系的词汇mother写出表示职业的词汇:student【答案】关系mother,father,parents,grandfather,grandmother uncle,aunt,schoolmate,cousin,classmate...职业teacher,doctor,nurse,policeman,dentist,cook,artist,scientist,soldier,manager,businessman,journalist,official...
四、表达情感兴趣和爱好的常用词汇非常喜欢游泳____________________________喜爱____________________________对画画感兴趣____________________________不喜欢下棋喜欢,欣赏音乐_____________________________擅长滑冰【答案】like swimmingverymuchlove beinterested indrawingdislike playingchess enjoylistening tomusic begoodat skating
五、描述人物心情的常用词汇难过的__________________高兴的_____________—兴奋的高兴的__________________满意的_____________—生气的担心的__________________失望的_____________—恐惧的有好的__________________焦虑的_____________—好奇的急切的在……方面帮助________________________________帮助某人做在严格要求某人________________________________鼓励某人做感谢__________________________多____亏T
六、表达感恩的常用词汇【答案】help sbwith...help sbdo sthbe strict withencourage sbtodothank for...thanksto
七、常用句型
1.他名字叫杰克______________________________________________________________________她叫丽丽_____________________________________________________________________
2.他戴眼镜_____________________________________________________________________
4.她1986年12月12日出生于北京
5.他20岁
6.他来自英国
7.我爸是个好医生
8.他身高
1.
723.苹果是我/他/她最喜爱的水果
9.他和我们相处得好
10.他教我们英语教得好
11.他学习努力他留短发*
12.他在中工作
13.她对我们要求很严格
14.他在英语方面经常帮我
15.张老师是个22岁、大眼长发的女孩
16.她不但喜欢唱歌而且喜欢跳舞
17.她是那么的友好和乐于助人以至于我们都很喜欢她
18.在他的帮助下,我在英语方面取得很大进步
19.李明擅长滑冰________________________________________________________________
20.他对打篮球感兴趣_____________________________________________
21.他喜欢放学后踢球_________________________________________________________________
22.她经常照顾奶奶_____________________________________________________________________
23.我感谢张老师帮助我学英语___________________________________________________________
24.妈妈经常鼓励我学好英语__________________________________________________________【答案】
1.His nameis Jack.Her Nameis Lily.
2.He wearsglasses.
3.Apples aremy/his/her favoritefruit.
4.She wasborn inBeijing onDecember12,
1986.
5.He is20years oldo
6.He comesfrom England.
7.My fatherisagood doctor.
8.He isabout
1.72meters inheight.He hasshort hair.
9.He getson wellwithus.
10.He teachesEnglish verywell.
11.He worksvery hard.
12.He worksin No.2Middle School.
13.She isstrictwithus.
14.He oftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.
15.Miss.Zhang isa22-year-old girlwith bigeyesandlonghair.
16.She likesnotonlysinging butalso dancing.
17.She isvery friendlyand helpful.So weall likeher.
18.With hishelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.
19.Li Mingisgoodatskating
20.He isinterested inplaying basketball
21.He lovesplaying footballafter school.
22.She oftenlooks after/takes careofhergrandmother.
23.1thank MissZhang forhelping melearn English.
24.Mother oftenencouragesmeto learnEnglish well.学亮点旬理【篇首句】
1.Once therewasa...从前,有一个
2.…was/were bornin/into apoor/rich family.……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭
3.As achild of....years old..还是个岁的孩子时
4.There willbea party/speech/contest/concert..tobeheld by...in.placeat..time.一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由……举办。
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