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年中考英语作文“时间管理”解析及范文20232023年的中考作文偏向“任务型”和“实践性”,不但需要考生提出“想法”,还要给出“解决办法二考生首先需要冷静筛选题干信息,找到关键;动笔前明确篇章结构的分布和切入要点;否则,很容易洋洋洒洒,偏离写作目标原题假如你是李华Li Hua,所在社区计划在暑假期间组织一个关于“时间管理time management”的培训活动请给社区负责人写一封邮件,内容包含
①你是否愿意参加,为什么;
②下表是活动方案,针对表格里的一项内容,提出修改意见Training Plan目的教授时间管理的方法参与者participants13〜17岁的学生训练方式way oftraining阅读时间7月每周六上午700-1000地点社区广场审题格式参照信件开头,Dear Mr.Wang身份学生李华写给社区负责人内容和结构踩点回答
①和
②,头部用两句话点明
①重点在
②的修改意见一抓住一项内容,通过What+Why的模式深挖5-6句话结尾升华初步提纲回:思路体现踩点回答
①Id loveto...becauseI wouldbe morethan happyto...becauseTime managementhas alwaysbeen myproblem...so...Im eagerto bepart ofit...As astudent facingexams afterexams,I...
②的修改意见时间I stronglyrecommend thatwc shouldstart theprogram at8,because...The trainingprogram lastsfor threehours,which is...地点It willbe toohot forstudents toconcentrateThere aremany seniorsworking outon the community square.Outdoor activitiesarc welcomein summerdays,but sittingstill forhours issure todrawmosquitos.结尾I hope my suggestionsarc hclpftil.I wishyou asuccessful trainingprogram.(下水文)版本1BAN BEN1Dear Mr.Wang,As aGrade9student,Km eagerto signup foryour trainingprogram,because Ibadly needsome tipson timemanagement.But Ihave toget upataround6:15for breakfastand preparation.Km afraidthat/s waytoo early.For lackof sleep,we teenagersusually findit challengingto wakeup before
7.Besides,there areseniors doingmorning exerciseat thattime onthe square.We cantjust drivethem away,right Whynot startat5p.m.to avoidhot daytimeand callit aday before6:30to havedinner Ihopemysuggestions arehelpful.Yours,Li Hua版本2BAN BEN2Dear Mr.Wang,What greathelp yourprogram is!Mum alwayscomplains aboutmy poortimemanagement.I dontwant todisappoint herany more.So Imdefinitelyin!But isntit toohot totrain usoutdoors Andthere areannoying mosquitoseverywhere.It mustbe veryuncomfortable.In myhumble opinion,we canusethecommunitylibrary.There isa meetingroom bigenough tohold100people.Whats more,it isequipped withair conditioners,a bigscreen andcomfortablechairs anddesks.We aresure tolearn efficientlythere!Yours,Li Hua。
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