2023英语专四作文讲评及写作指导

新题型写作TEM4题型变更Previously陈述观点-----论证观点------得出结论概括材料——提出观点并论证观点——得出结论重申观点或提Now出建议材料作文Tactics细致审题，分析材料

1.2-3mins列出提纲，确定布局

2.3-4mins引出话题，概括材料Para.

1.summarize,paraphrase提出自身观点，列出理由论证Para.

2.重申观点或提出建议Para.

3.正式写作

3.30-35mins检查并优化

4.2-3mins评分标准如何总结材料第一段Describe thephenomenon/introduce thediscussed topic+opinions fromboth sides/summarize orparaphrase thetopic sentencesin the excerpt.参考范文With IntelligentMachines toDo theThinking,Will OurBrains GetLazyNowadays,many aspectsof peoplesdaily lifehave undergoneconsiderablechanges becauseof therecent developmentin artificialintelligence.Obviously,artificial intelligencehas alreadycompletelyrenovated peopleslifestyle.On theone hand,the contributionof artificialintelligenceto thesociety isprominent andpeoples dependenceon it is anirreversibletrend.People enjoythe benefitsand conveniencebrought byintelligent machines.On theother hand,people arestill concernedabout itsnegativeimpact,for example,whether our brains willregress withintelligentmachines todo thethinking.其次段先表明自己观点Stance:as faras Imconcerned,as tome,from myperspective,in myview,personally speaking,from mypoint ofview再分条论证（灵敏运用连接词）

1.First andforemost,besides,last but not least

2.First,second,third

3.In thefirst place,inthesecond placeJast butnot least范文

4.Initially,besides,furthermore lastbutnotleast In my opinion,artificial intelligencewill enableourbrainsto getmore creative.Admittedly,a lotof workhas beendone byintelligent machines.It seemsthat thefunctionof peoplehas beenweakened andpeoples brainshave beenreplaced.As amatterof fact,thanks tointelligentmachines,people canexpand theircreativeenergy andadd newvarieties.Simply speaking,when peopleare freefromtedious,repetitive,sometimes evendangerous work,work efficiencywillundoubtedly beimproved.As aresult,people canspare moretime todowhat theywant andpursue whatthey dreamof,which isthe premiseofcreativity.Moreover,creativity stemsprimarily fromknowledge andthinking.Once peoplehave theopportunity todo morethinking andlearning,theirintelligence wouldbe enhancedrather thanweakened.第三段enrich yourrestatement/express yourhopes/give suggestionsAllin all,in anutshell tosum up,in brief,in short,in summary,inconclusion...Based onthe aboveexhaustive elaboration^its quitenatural tocome tothe conclusion that…范文Although artificialintelligence isthe exhibitionof peopleshighdegree ofcreative power,it shouldbe notedthat it is likea double-edgedsword.The sensiblechoice isto embraceits advantagesand copewith theproblemsit hasaroused.This iswhat anadvanced andrational societyshouldbe like.合理利用模板及范文例句题目陈述.Para.1It haslong beena contentiousissue asto whetherSome peopleare of观点——,观点二.（总结材料）the opinionthat whileothers pointout that现象，Nowadays,with peopleare becomingincreasingly awareof theproblem whether…（再总结材料）弓|出话题.Nowadays,itis a heatedlydiscussed topicthat Thisproblem ismuch debatedinthat itaffects almosteverybody intheir dailylives.Para.2:As forme,I agreeto theidea that...because itsadvantages outweighitsdisadvantages.There aredozen ofreasons behindmy belief...论据一.As faras Iam concerned,the opinionthat...holds moreweight.For onething,理由一.论据二.理由二.For another,把标题变为陈述句.Inmypoint ofview,There arenumerous reasonsto supportmy理由一.opinion.One ofthe primarycauses is that Anotherreason thatcan beseen by理由二.举例证明二.every personisthatA goodcase inpoint is论点.理由一.证明理由一.As acollege student,I thinkthat Tobegin with,A further理由二.证明理由reason whyI supportthis isthat Thereisagood evidenceto showthat二.结论.Para.3:From whathas beendiscussed above,a conclusioncan bedrawn thatI提出希望.wish总结观点.After closeexamination,itisnot difficultto drawtheconclusionthat。