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8.2022John的学习生活情况，请给他写一封回信包括以下要点对学校做简要介绍（拥有多年历史）；
1.80学校的设施（拥有现代化的教学楼、办公楼；学校环境优美等）；
2.教师们爱岗敬业、和蔼可亲
3.参考词汇作简介学习和生活情况现代化的make abrief introduction;learning and living conditionmodern;爱岗敬业的:和蔼可亲的diligent anddedicated;amiable【答案】Dear John,Thanks foryour letter.How isit goingwith youIn yourletter,you askedme aboutour school.Let memake abriefintroduction about my learning andliving condition.My schoolhas ahistory ofabout80years.However,it doesntlack ofmodem teachbuildings oroffices in ourschool.Besides,the environmentin our school isgood.There aremany treesin our school.And you can seeno trashonyour roadto teachbuildings.Last butnot least,my teachersare alldiligent anddedicated.They arevery conscientious.Meanwhile,they areamiable,you canask themfor helpat anytime.Im lookingforward tomeeting youin ourschool.If youhave time,welcome tomy school.Yours【解析】本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友回复邮件，介绍自己的学习和学习状况【详解】第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构总分总开头给出问候，引出主题中间段描述主要内容，结尾段表示期待回复要求问候和引入主题
1.主要内容
2.）对学校做简要介绍（拥有多年历史）；180）学校的设施（拥有现代化的教学楼、办公楼；学校环境优美等）；2）教师们爱岗敬业、和蔼可亲3期待对方回复
3.第二步:列提纲（重点词组）第三步make abrief introduction;learning andliving condition;modern;diligent anddedicated;amiable;conscientious连词成句
1.Let memake abrief introductionaboutmylearning andliving condition.
2.However,it doesntlack ofmodern teachbuildings oroffices inourschool.
3.My teachersare alldiligent anddedicated.They arevery conscientious.
4.Meanwhile,they areamiable,you canask themfor helpat anytime.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇（衔接词）.表文章结构顺序1First ofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second...And then,Finally,In theend,At last.表并歹补充关系（）2U Whatis more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In additionAs wellas,not only...but also,including,,表转折对比关系（从句）,3However,On thecontrary,but,Although+clause Inspite of+n/doing,On theonehand…,On theother hand...Some...,while others...,as for,so...that...,表因果关系4Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As aresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系作者在范文中使用了较多的固定搭配，如等全文中没有中国式英语make abrief introduction;learningandlivingcondition的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩（.黑龙江.牡丹江一中高一阶段练习）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“我理想的高中生活”，请
9.2022根据下列要求和你的畅想完成短文.在校学习情况；
1.老师与同学；
2.学校活动3注意.词数左右；
1100.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数3I oftenimagine whatmy life will belike inmy dreamhigh school.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【答案】I oftenimagine whatmy lifewill belike inmy dreamhighschool.As faras I can imagine,First ofall,in highschool I should have a good study environment so that I can obtainsufficient knowledge.This studyenvironment shouldencouragestudents to learn tothink,analyze andunderstand thedaily life.The teachersthere will be friendlyand knowledgeable,with whosehelp notonly canI enrichmy knowledge butalso I can broadenmy horizons.In addition,Ill havelovely andcaring classmates.Well competeinourstudy andbeclose friendsinourdaily life.In ourfree time,various activitieswill beheld to build upour courageand experience,suchas partiesand competitions,Tm suremy highschool lifewillberich andcolorful.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇说明文【详解】根据提示可知，本篇为说明文，时态应为一般现在时关键要点如下
①在校学习情况；
②老师与同学；
③学校活动；
④自己的感受第二步根据关键要点，确定关键词，如（好的学习环境），good studyenvironment friendlyand knowledgeable（友好的和知识渊博的），（增强勇气和增长阅历）等build upour courageand experience第三步根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整第四步连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型的结构使用，so thatFirst ofall,in highschoolIshouldhavea goodstudyenvironmentsothatI canobtain sufficientknowledge.非限制性定语从句的使用,The teachersthere willbe friendlyand knowledgeable,with whosehelp notonly canIenrich myknowledgebutalso Ican broadenmy horizons.第页共页1414Im Li Hua fromClass6,Grade LFm gladto hear that new members are wanted in the English society.Fm willingtojoin it.Im interested in Englishand havea goodknowledge ofit.Having learntEnglish for more than ten years,I cancommunicate with others in English fluently.Whafs more,Im good at singingsongs,telling storiesand makingspeeches.Above all,Tm easyto get along withand enjoyworking with others.Im lookingforward to being accepted.Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生给社长写一封自荐信，申请加入学校英语社团Johnson【详解】第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时结构总分法总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容要求.说明写作目的，愿意参加；
1.个人情况介绍（兴趣、英语情况、技能以及性格等）；
2.期待回复3第二步列提纲（重点词组）；；；；；Be gladto dobe willingto dosth.be interestedin havea goodknowledge offormore thanten years communicate；；；；；；；；with whatsmore begoodatmake speechesabove allget along with enjoydoing sth.work withlook第三步连词成句forward tol.Fm Li Hua fromClass6,Grade
1.
1.1mgladto hearthat newmembers arewanted inthe Englishsociety.
3.Fm willingto join it.
4.Pm interestedin Englishand haveagoodknowledge ofit.
5.Having learntEnglish formorethanten years,Icancommunicate withothers inEnglish fluently.
6.1m goodat singingsongs,telling storiesand makingspeeches.
7.rm easyto getalongwithand enjoyworking withothers.
8.1m lookingforward to being accepted.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题第四步连句成篇（衔接词）表并列补充关系；Whats moreabove all连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步润色修改【点睛】[高分句型1]（弓|导宾语从句）Pm gladtohearthatnewmembersarewantedintheEnglishsociety,that[高分句型2]Having learntEnglish formorethantenyears,Icancommunicate withothersinEnglishfluently.（为现在分词的完成式作状语）having leant（.四川.雅安中学高一阶段练习）假定你是李华.你的英国笔友询问你进入高中后的学习和生活
4.2021Jenny情况请用英语给他回一封信，主要内容包括学校印象；
1.校园活动；
2.学习情况
3.注意词数左右；
1.100可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
2.【答案】Dear Jenny,Knowing that you areinterestedinmy newschool life,T feltdelighted to share itwith you.Its my honor to be admittedto thisschool.The firsttime Ientered thecampus,devoted teachers,friendly classmatesand the beautifulscenery fascinatedme a lot.Colorful activities and recreations,such assports meeting,speech contestsare always held to cultivate our personalities and strengthen our friendship.Whats more,Icanput myheart intostudy inharmoniouscooperation withmy classmates,which makesthe schoollife hereunforgettable.How aboutyour schoollifeYours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文要求你给英国笔友写一封信，介绍你的高中生活和学习Jenny情况该信应该明确三方面的内容学校印象；校园活动；学习情况L
2.
3.【详解】这篇作文内容非常贴近学生的生活，难度不大考生可以根据自己的实际情况，介绍高中生活和学习情况文章应以现在时态为主，间或夹杂着过去时态考生可以先根据要点提示列出大纲，然后对大纲进行遣词造句，细节等方面的扩展【点睛】所给范文要点齐全，条理清楚长短句交叉使用，表达自然顺畅适当运用了一些较好的句式，例如定语从句；被动语态which makesthe schoollife hereunforgettable Colorfulactivitiesandrecreations,such assports；非谓语动词meeting,speech contestsarealwaysheldtocultivateourpersonalitiesandstrengthenourfriendship,为文章增色不少.江西省靖安中学高一阶段练习假设你是李华，你收到朋友李磊的信，他告诉你他不适应高一数学老
5.2022师讲的课，在学习数学方面有些困难，以至于跟不上其他同学，因此他感到非常着急请你给李磊写一封信，想办法帮助他解决这方面的困难参考词汇适应adapt to要求不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
1.词数左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
2.100Dear LiLei,I havegot yourletter.________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,LiHua［答案］Dear LiLei,I havegot yourletter.And I am veryglad thatyou believeme.I haveknown youhave somedifficulty inlearningMaths becausecant adapt to what your mathsteacher teaches.Dont worryabout it.I thinkthe followingmay beof helpto you.Firstly,youd betterlisten totheteachercarefully inclass andpractisemore.You canask yourMaths teacherto explainwhatyou cant understandafter class.You shouldbe confidentandbelieve inyourself.I thinkyoucanmake it.Finally,youcancommunicatewithyour classmatesand getsome adviceonMaths.Best wishes!Yours,LiHua【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求用英语写一封回信【详解】要注意书信的格式和特殊用词考虑用一般现在时来写这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如做某事有困难，适应还使用了宾语从句have somedifficulty indoing sth.adapt toAnd Iam veryglad thatyou believe.和宾语从句已等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性in me.I thinkyou willadapttoit anddo wellinitin futur（.贵州黔东南.高一期中）假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为
6.2022“What to的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会请根据以下提示准备一learn in senior highschool”份英语发言稿.学会学习方法，习惯等；
1.学会做人真诚，友善；
2.学会其他考生自拟3注意.词数左右；
180.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数2Good morning,everyone!It ismyhonortobehere toshare withyou my opinions on what tolearn insenior highschool.Thank you!【答案】Good morning,everyone!It ismy honourtobehere toshare withmy opinionsonwhattolearn insenior highschool.In thecoming threeyears,ourschoollifewillbe challenging.First,we shouldlearn tolearn efficiently.Personally,I usedto tryeffective methodto achievemy academicgoals.Developing agood habitis alsoof importance.It reallybenefited me alot to preview lessons,get activelyinvolved inclass,and reviewwhat hadbeen taught after class.In addition,we shouldlearn howto getalong well withothers.In school,I respectedteachers andwas friendlywithclassmates.It waswith sincerityand faithfulnessthat wecreated aharmonious atmosphere.Finally,we shouldtake partin sportsand outdoorsactivities frequently.They werereally helpful to build up mybodyand enrichmy schoollife.No painsno gains.1am sure that with great efforts,you willenjoy acolorful andfruitful lifehere.Thank you!【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What tolearnin的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会seniorhighschool”【详解】.词汇积累1在个人来看一Personally Inmyopinion止匕夕卜In addition—whafs more和相处好一getalongwell withget onwellwith参力II participatein—take partin.句式拓展合并简单句原句2Finally,we shouldtake partin sportsand outdoorsactivities frequently.They werereally helpfultobuildupmy bodyand enrichmy schoollife.拓展句Finally,we shouldtake partin sportsand outdoorsactivities frequently,which werereallyhelpfultobuildupmy bodyand enrichmy schoollife.【点睛】【高分句型1]It reallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessons,get activelyinvolved inclass,and reviewwhat hadbeen（运用了引导的宾语从句）taughtafterclass.what【高分句型（运用了弓|导2]Iamsurethatwithgreatefforts,you willenjoy acolorful andfruitful lifehere.that的宾语从句）
7.（2022•江西・南昌市外国语学校高一阶段练习）假定你是李华，下学期你的美国朋友Jim将作为交换生到你所在的高中学习一年请写信向表示欢迎，并简要介绍中国教育和美国教育的不同要点如下Jim班级学生数量不同课堂上课方式不同在校时间长短不同注意.词数词左右
1100.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯2【答案】Dear Jim,Im morethan gladto knowthatyouare goingtobean exchangestudent inour highschool fora wholeyear!Next,Id liketo introducesome differencesbetween Chineseand Americanteaching andlearning.First,we havemore studentsin eachclass thanyou do.In China,the numberof studentsin eachclass isusuallymore than
50.Second,we havedifferent teachingstyles.The teachersusually givelectures inthe classandthestudents willsetdown whatthe teachershavesaid.Third,the timewhen westayatschool ismuch longerthan yours.We mayspend atleast8hours atschool eachday.Thafs allTd liketoshare.I cantwaittomeetyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】下学期美国朋友将作为交换生到李华所在的高中学习一年，要求写信向表示欢迎，并简要介绍中国教Jim Jim育和美国教育的不同要点包括班级学生数量不同，课堂上课方式不同，在校时间长短不同【详解】。
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