读后续写个人成长类--Running+the+Crazy+Miles+讲义 高考英语作文复习

阅读下面材料.根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Running theCrazy MilesMylower backis tighterthan asquare knot.And awar isbreaking outin mystomach.My mindis runningout ofwords todescribe myfeelings.And Istill have35miles to go.（超跑），Im attemptingto completemy first100km ultraran andnow Tmrunningwhat Ilike tocall theCrazy Miles”.The Crazy Miles areany distancefather than amarathon.I callthem thisbecause anytimeI tellsomeone thatI mrunning fartherthanamarathon,they alwayssay thesame thing:Youre crazy!H.I dontknow ifits somethingIate,or the85T temperature,but asI reachthe aid station,I feellike Ivehit the wall.Withanother31miles to go,thewallis the last thingI want to behitting.When seeingan aidstation,I immediatelylie downon the ground tostretch,A coupleof minutesturn tofive,and fivebecome ten.My coach,Katelin,shows up.“What areyou doingshe asks.“Stretching.”I reply.“Are you here tostretch,or areyouhereto runShe,s right.I climbup to my feet,put somefood in my stomachand waterinmysystem,and hitthe trail.Suddenly,I haveasecond wind.It couldbe dueto thenutrients I*ve consumed,but*m guessingits Katelin*swords.Sometimes,a lovedone callingyou outis thebest motivation.As a runner intheschool team,I loveand respecther justas myteammates.The trailwinds througha thickforest.Its onlymid-afternoon,but thesun has alreadyfallen behindthe hills.I begintripping onexposed roots.I fightwith gravityto findmybalance beforemy bodyfalls to the forestfloor.At mile40,I insertmy earbuds,but musicisn*t enoughto maskthe achesandpains thathave spreadthrough myentire body.This isthe partof therun whereIll havetodig deepinto mysoul because,from hereonout,it willall benew tome.Ive neverrun this注意far before.续写词数应为左右；

1150.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答2So,I recallmy lifeas arunner before.原Before I know it,I reachthe lastaid station,which meansonly four miles more to go.文大意本文讲述作者“我”挑战前所未有的公里超跑，全文围绕作者跑步过程中的100心理活动展开离终点还有英里时就已经精疲力尽，因为自己从未跑过如此长35距离的马拉松，所以把这次挑战称为；在离终点英里的休息站“Crazy Miles”31处，“我”躺地上休息，累到不愿起来，这时教练出现并鼓励我aidstation Katelin继续前进；接下来的跑道是一段丛林路,“我”忍着全身的酸痛感，更艰难地保持平衡继续跑；在英里处，我带上耳机，可是音乐也无法减轻全身酸痛感，在这40关键时刻，我开始倾听内心的声音，回忆我作为跑步者的历程续写思路分析第一段给出的首句，关键词是所以接下So,I recallmy lifeas arunner before.recall,来续写回忆的内容，那么该回忆什么呢？结合原文的结尾处，这个回忆的内容应该是要让“我”有继续坚持到终点的勇气，所以我的思路是回忆对跑步的热爱和执着还有一路上教练给“我”的鼓励以及“我”愿意一次次自我挑战的勇气和决心这些心理活动鼓励着“我”继续跑下去，不知不觉来到了最后一个也就和aid station.第二段首句连接起来了第二段首句Before I know it,I reachthe lastaid station,which meansonly fourmiles来到最后一个休息处了，离终点只剩英里了接下来应该续写什么呢？moretogo.4结合原文第三段中提到了在一个休息处“我”躺地上休息，累到不愿起来那这里到了最后一个休息处，“我”的反应应该是不同了所以接下来，我续写作者稍作调整马上继续艰难跑向终点，最后成功完成此次的自我挑战在第二“CrazyMiles”段续写中，考虑到原文中丛林路段描写了道路崎岖、下午太阳被丛林遮住，我在第二段也刻意有一句环境描写，写路途变平坦、太阳高照，来侧面烘托“我”心理的变化最后一句点明主题，文章的主题应该就是坚持不懈就能到达终点所以以Destination is sure tobe reachedwith unyieldingperseverance andpursuit,and allthe pains结尾are worthit.基于以上分析，下水文是这样写的So,I recallmy lifeas arunner before.I rememberwhen Ifirst becamearunner,I alwaysfeltdiscouraged by the painsand achesI got.It wasKatelins guidanceand encouragementthatmade mebrave enoughto finishdifferent racesand marathons,thus ableto beoverwhelmedbytheof prideand achievementeach timeI reachedthe finishlinesense.Thinking ofthis,my bodyseems tobe fueledwith strengthto keeprunning andchallengemyself.Before Iknow it,I reachthe lastaid station,which meansonly fourmiles moretogo.I amonestep closertothedestination.This time,only takinga shortbreak,I struggleto standupand setoff again.The finaltrail stretchesflat,with thesun shiningbrightly.My feetkeephitting ontheground,my musclesaching andknees tremblinguntil Isee Katelinwave herarmscrazily atthe finish line,“you makeit!You arecrazy JDestinationissureto bereachedwith unyieldingperseverance andpursuit,and allthe painsare worthit.续写反思原文看下来，都是心理活动描写，没有太多的对话和互动，所以这篇文章续写一个人的独白和心理活动，比较有难度而且原文和给出的首句都是用的一般现在时态，这和以往写的大部分续写以一般过去时态为主不同，所以在写的时候要注意用对时态很多学生在续写第二段时，被给出的首句中的代词迷惑,在第before Iknow itit一段结尾处编造各种情节和困惑来和衔接，殊不知意为“不知不it beforeIknow it觉”这次的续写也提醒我们时态，情节故事山都不是一成不变的，具体问题要具体分析，不要思维固化了One possibleversion:So,I recallmy lifeas arunner before.I thinkabout thewoods behindmy parentshouse,and thetrails Iwould rundown asa child,pretending Iwas acowboy orsoldier.!thinkabout mytime onthe cross-country teamat school.and thosehills ourcoach wouldmake usrun-hills thatseemed sobig,so impossibleback then,and howthey nowseem tobe meresteppingstones inmy lifeasarunner.Before Iknowit,I reachthe lastaidstation,which meansonly fourmiles moretogo.Atthis point,I dontwant tostop fortoo long.I onlywanttofinish.I eata coupleof slicesofwatermelon andrun again.The lastfourmilesare someof theeasiest becauseIknowtheend isnear.I climbthelasthill andcross thefinishline,which wasmy onegoal fromthebeginning.My coachcheers forme,and Iknow Iwill beplanning morebig runs,alwayslooking forwardtomynext CrazyMiles.。