2023-2024学年高中书面表达主题分类训练10篇-购物-教师版

学年高中书面表达主题分类训练篇2023-202410购物

1.（2023•陕西省西安市•月考试卷）假定你是李华，你从国外网站购买了一辆健身自行车，后来发现其问题较多请你就此向美国总部写邮件投诉，内容包括⑴购车情况；⑵存在的问题（车身重，刹车失灵等）；⑶解决方案；注意⑴词数100词左右；⑵可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇健身自行车an exercisebike刹车brakeDear Siror Madam,

5.2021•江苏省泰州市•同步练习假如你是李华，上周你在海外购物网站Amazon上购买了一个书包,但是寄到后发现存在质量问题，请你给该网站负贵人Smith先生写一封信，要点包括⑴反应质量问题；⑵你的诉求注意1词数80左右；⑵可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；⑶开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数Dear Mr.Smith,I amLi Hua,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr.Smith,I amLi Hua,a regularcustomer ofAmazon.

①Im sorry to troubleyou,but Ihave tomake acomplaint aboutthe school bag I purchasedlast week.When receivingthe schoolbag,I wasdisappointed tofind thecolor wasquite differentfrom whatwas showninthe advertisement.

②What alsoannoyed mewas that there wereseveral blackspots onthe bag,whichcouldnt be wiped away.For thereasons above,I stronglydemand eitherthe schoolbag beexchanged orI becompensatedwith fullrefund.Looking forward to yourreply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文，话题为投诉信，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】

①make acomplaint about就.......投诉

②wipe away擦掉，擦去

③looking forward to期盼【高分句型】

①Im sorry to troubleyou,but Ihave tomake acomplaint about theschoolbagI purchased lastweek.（省略关系词的限制性定语从句）

②What alsoannoyed mewas that there wereseveral blackspots onthe bag,which couldntbewipedaway,（what引导状语从句；that引导表语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句）【结构布局】引言说明写信目的中心介绍以下一些方面如反应质量问题以及你的诉求结尾表达愿望，期待回复【拓展词汇】

①compensate补偿，赔偿

②unqualified不合格的

③advisable明智的,可取的【拓展句型】

①Im mostunwilling to complain,but sth./sb.is reallyannoying/annoyed.我非常不愿意投诉，但某事/某人确实让人恼火21do hope you willgive dueattention tothe matter.我真的希望对此事您能给予足够的重视

6.2021•河南省郑州市•单元测试假设你是李华，你在5月2日去一家商店买衣服当你请一个王姓服务员帮你找适合你的型号的衣服时，她以忙为借口让你自己找，你说你找不到才来让她帮忙,她说你找不到就说明没有你对这位服务员的服务态度十分不满，并写信向该商店的销售经理投诉该服务员注意⑴词数120左右;2信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；⑶可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Dear SalesManager,This letteris acomplaint concerningthe actionsof one of yoursalespersons.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear SalesManager,This letteris acomplaint concerningthe actionsof one of yoursalespersons.On Tuesday,May5,2012,around2p.m.I wentto your store to look fora T-shirt.When Iasked asalesperson,Ms.Wang forhelp inzfindingmy size,she informedme thatshe wasbusy and I wouldhave tofind onemyself.

①I explainedthat thereason why I came to her was that I couldnt find one.

②inform告知

③lookinto调查【高分句型】

①I explainedthatthereasonwhyIcame toherwasthatIcouldnt findone.（why弓I导限制性定语从句；that表语从句）

②She thensaid ina rudetone thatif Icouldntfindone,it meantthatthestore didnthave it,and thatIneeded tolooksomewhereelse,（that引导宾语从句；if引导条件状语从句）【结构布局】引言表明写信目的中心描述事件经过结尾表达期待【拓展词汇】

②make upfor弥补

③advisable明智的，可取的【拓展句型】

①To improvethe situation,it is advisable foryou to take thefollowing measures.为了改进这种情况，您最好采取以下措施21would appreciateit ifyou couldgive mea satisfactoryreply assoon aspossible.如果您能尽快给我——个满意的答复，我将非常感激

7.2021•安徽省蚌埠市・单元测试如今网上购物因其诸多优点备受欢迎，但同时也伴随着安全问题某英文报社正就这一话题征稿，请你写一份稿件，就如何保证网购安全提出你的建议要点如下⑴使用熟悉的购物网站；⑵设置安全强度高的密码；⑶勿使用公共电脑设备注意⑴词数100词左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；⑶标题和开头句已写好，不计入总词数How tostay safewhen shopping onlineThere are several reasons for so many people around theworld toshop online.【答案】How tostay safewhen shoppingonline Thereareseveralreasonsforsomanypeoplearoundtheworld toshop online.For example,it isfast,economical,and convenient.But alwayskeep inmind thesafetyrules ofshoppingonline.

①To beginwith,use ashopping websitsyou arefamiliar with,and choosereliable online shop ownerswithgood reputationsonly,for wewill haveto providesuch privateinformation asour address,telephone numberandeven bankaccount for them.Besides,use astrong password.A strongone shouldinclude characters,numbers andother signsthat cannotbe easilyguessed,or broken.Whats more,dont usepublic computers.Ifso,your owninformation iseasy tobe givenout.

②Have youhad anybad experiencewhen shoppingonline Hopemy tipscan behelpful toyou!【解析】【思路点拨】本文要求写一份稿件，话题为就如何保证网购安全提出你的建议，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】

①keep inmind记住

②be familiar with熟悉【高分句型】

①To beginwith,use ashopping websiteyou arefamiliarwith,and choosereliable onlineshop ownerswithgood reputationsonly,for wewill haveto providesuch privateinformation asour address,telephone numberandeven bankaccount forthem.（祈使句；省略that/which的限制性定语从句；for引导的原因状语从句）

②Have youhad anybad experiencewhen shoppingonline（when引导的时间状语从句的省略）【结构布局】引言网上购物备受欢迎，但也伴随安全问题中心提出建议结尾表达愿望【拓展词汇】

①reasonable合理的

②appealing吸引人的【拓展句型】

①With thedevelopment andpopularity of the Internet,online shopping has becomemore andmore commoninChina.随着互联网的发展和普及，网上购物在中国变得越来越普遍

②All inall,I holdthe beliefthat highschool studentsshould havea cautiousattitude towardsonline shoppinginorder toavoid wastingmoney orbuying thingsof poorquality.总之，我认为中学生应该对网购持谨慎的态度，以免浪费金钱或购买质量差的东西

8.（2021・月考试卷）假定你是李华，两个月前你从海外代购网店订购了一套书虫系列读物，昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足请你根据以下提示，给该店店主Bob写一封投诉信⑴介绍购物情况；⑵反映存在问题；⑶提出解决问题的方案注意⑴词数100左右；

（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇书虫系列读物Bookworm Series；投诉complaintDear BobLooking forwardto your coming!【答案】Dear Bob,I amoneof your customers.I ordereda set of BookwormSeries onyour websitetwo monthsago,but I didntreceive themuntil yesterday.@And muchto my disappointment,the bookswere so poorly packedup thatthecover of one bookwas torn.To makematters worse,it is not acomplete set,as Ifound onebook missing.I amsorry tohave receivedsuch poorservice,and Ibelieve Ihave every right to ask you to deal with thisproblem.

②I hopethat youeither returnmy money or delivera newset ofbooks to me.Besides,Idlike to beinformed of the process ofyour dealing with my complaint.Looking forwardto yourreply.Yours,【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文，话题为假定你是李华，两个月前你从海外代购网店订购了一套书虫系列读物，昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足请你根据以下提示，给该店店主Bob写一封投诉信写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接语，以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】

①to my disappointment让我失望的是；

②To makematters worse更糟糕的是；

③deal with处理【高分句型】

①And muchto mydisappointment,the bookswere sopoorly packedup thatthe coverofonebook wastorn,s…that…如此……以至于……，引导结果状语从句

②I hopethat youeither returnmy moneyor delivera newsetofbooks to me.that弓I导的宾语从句【结构布局】引言介绍购物情况中心反映存在问题和反映存在问题结尾期待回复

9.2021,江苏省南京市•月考试卷假定你是李华，两周前你在某英国网店订购了一套《哈利・波特》Harry Potter系列丛书，但直到昨天你才收到货，且发现封面破损，册数不足请你给该网店客服写封邮件内容包括⑴反映问题；2协商解决办法注意⑴词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,Im writingto expressmy dissatisfactionover thebooks bought from your online store.You claimedId getthe HarryPotter serieswithin oneweek.However,two weekshad passedbefore Ifinallyreceived thebooks.Besides,they were sopoorly packed thatsome coversgot broken.Whats worse,I didntreceivethe exactnumber Idordered.Can youchange themfor new ones oroffer mea fullrefund Looking forwardto your early reply.【解析】略

10.假设你叫李华，最近在某英文购物网站上购买了一双鞋子，但出现了一些问题申购情况实际情况里伊颜色白色、、1号数

98.5到货日期4月10日4月20日请给网站写一封投诉信，包括以下内容:【答案】Dear Siror Madam,CD Im sorryto write to complain about the exercises bike thatIpurchased from youronlineshop ten daysago.It shouldhave reachedme lastSunday,but itarrived today.There wasone weeksdelay in delivering theexercisesbike.

②After unpackingand tryingit out,I wassurprised tofind the bike didntconsist withwhvt youadvertised.First ofall,it ismuch heavierthan described,so it is notconvenient formetolift itupstairs.Even worsethanthat,its brakesdont workonce ina while.Last butnot least,I find thebikeis notstable andis extremelybadlymade.

③Therefore,Im worriedthat itwill break down whenI amcycling atfull speed.For theabove reasons,I stronglydemand either a newone shouldbe postedto meor my money shouldberefunded.Thanks for your consideration.And Imlooking forwardto yourearlyreply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】这是一封投诉信主要内容为假定你是李华，你从国外网站购买了一辆健身自行车，后来发现其问题较多请就此向美国总部写邮件投诉要以一般过去时和第一人称为主用词要简洁，段落耍清晰，重点要突出可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯卷面要整洁【亮点词汇】

①try out实验；

②first ofall首先;

③once ina while偶尔；

④breakdown发生故障【高分句型】

①Imsorrytowriteto complain abouttheexercisesbikethatIpurchasedfrom youronlineshoptendays ago.（that引导的定语从句）⑴写信的目的；⑵投诉内容⑶要求重新邮寄或退款；⑷询问若寄回，谁承担寄费Dear Sir/Madam,Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,Im writingtocomplain about a pair ofshoes Irecently purchasedfromyour website.

①What I ordered wasa pairof black size-nine shoesbut Ireceived apair ofwhite」size-

8.5shoes instead.

②Worse still,there wasa ten-day delayindelivering my shoes,which shouldhave beenreceived onApril

10.

③For theabove reasons,I demandeither enew pair of blacksize-nine shoesbe postedto meimmediately orI beRivena fullrefund.Also,if Isend backthe wrongshoes,will yourcompany payforthepostageThank youforyourconsideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】这篇文章要求写一封投诉信，对在某网站上买的一双有问题的鞋子进行投诉，鞋子出现的问题以表格形式呈现，再根据提示要求应确立一般过去时和一般现在时两种时态，适当增加过渡词使文章连贯【亮点词汇】©complainabout关于……进行投诉；

②deliver递送，派送【高分句型】（

①What Iordered wasapairof blacksize-nine shoesbut Ireceived apairofwhite,size-

8.5shoes instead.what引导的主语从句）

②Worse still,there wasa ten-day delayindeliveringmyshoes,which shouldhave beenreceived onApril

10.（which引导的非限制定语从句）

①Im mostunwilling tocomplain,but sth./sb.is reallyannoying/annoyed.我非常不愿意投诉,但某事/某人确实让人恼火

②A代er unpackingand tryingit out,I wassurprised tofindthebike didntconsist withwhat youadvertised,（what引导的宾语从句）.©Therefore,Im worriedthat itwill breakdown whenI amcycling atfull speed,（that弓I导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句）【结构布局】引言写信目的中心存在的问题以及解决方案结尾期待【拓展词汇】©complainabout投诉

②bad quality质量差【拓展句型】

①Im writingtocomplainaboutthe...which Iboughtfromyour website.我写信是想投诉我从你们网站上买的……

②I hopethat youeither returnme themoneyorhave this.・・replaced.我希望你要么把钱退给我，要么把……换掉

2.（2022•福建省龙岩市・月考试卷）假定你是李华，你校英文报拟刊登有关网购利弊的文章，现面向全校征稿，请以“应不应该网购”为题写篇英语文章投稿，内容包括⑴网购的现状；⑵网购的利弊；⑶你的观点注意⑴词数80左右；⑵投稿体裁议论文；⑶可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯【答案】Dear Editor,

①As weall know,online shoppinghas becomenn inseparablepart ofour life.However,opinions ononlineshopping aredivided.

②Some peoplethink thatit hasbrought us convenience,because thereis a wide varietyof products availableonline forus tochoose from.We cando shoppingwithout goingout.Especially duringthisterrible epidemic,online shoppinghas playeda greatrole inensuring thesupply ofdaily necessities.While othersthink that online shoppinghasmany disadvantages.For instance,we canttouch thegoods ortry thempersonally.The qualityof goodsisnotguaranteed.Anyway,every coinhas twosides.We canmake thebest useofonline shoppingsadvantages andavoid itsdisadvantages.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本文要求写一篇英文报投稿作文，话题为“应不应该网购”，写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容【亮点词汇】

①awide variety of各种各样的

（2）for instance例如

③make thebest useof充分利用【高分句型】

①As weall know,onlineshoppinghas becomean inseparablepart ofour life.（as引导的非限制性定语从句）

②Some peoplethinkthatit hasbrought usconvenience,because thereisawidevarietyofproductsavailableonline forus tochoose from,（that引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）【结构布局】引言开篇点题，说明网购的现状中心阐述网购的利弊结尾表达你的观点【拓展词汇】

②have easy access to容易接触到

①With thedevelopment ofthe Internet,many individualsfavour onlineshopping becauseitismore convenientandcan savetime.随着网络的发展，很多人喜欢网上购物，因为它更方便且节省时间

②There isno doubtthat modernscience andtechnology bringusconvenienceand comfortin life.毫无疑问，现代科学技术给我们的生活带来了便利和舒适

3.（2022•江西省宜春市•月考试卷）假定你是李华，一个月前你从网上订购了两双运动鞋，今天才到货，且包装破损，尺码不符.请就此事向网店客服写邮件投诉，要点如下⑴介绍购物情况；⑵反映存在问题；⑶提出解决方案注意1词数100左右;2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Sir/Madam,Yours truly,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I amoneofyour customers.Iorderedtwo pairsof sportsshoes onyourwebsiteone monthago,but Ididntreceive themuntil today.Much to mydisappointment,the shoeswere sopoorly packedup thatthe coverofthem was torn.To makematters worse,they areofthewrong size.I amsorrytohave receivedsuch poorservice,andIbelieve Ihave theveryrighttoaskyoutodealwiththisproblem.I hopethat youeither returnmy moneyor delivernewonestome.What ismore,Id liketobeinformedoftheprocessofyourdealingwithmycomplaint.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本文要求根据所给提示内容正确表达适当展开还应该注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系也不要拘泥于要点的表达，可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词语等【亮点词汇】

1.tomydisappointment让我失望的是

2.To makematters worse更糟糕的是

3.pack up包装【高分句型】

1.Much tomydisappointment,the shoesweresopoorlypackedup thatthe coverof themwastorn.（so.・・that・・.句型）

2.You caneither returnmymoneyor exchangeanother pairand postit tome assoon aspossible.（either…or…要么.......要么，连接两个并列的谓语）

4.（2021•辽宁省大连市•月考试卷）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Charlie打算今年7月到中国旅游，他发邮件向你询问有关情况，请根据以下要点用英语给他回复⑴高铁、飞机等交通方式方便且快捷；⑵人脸识别即可进入景区；⑶移动支付随处可用注意⑴词数80左右；

（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；⑶开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数参考词汇人脸识别facial recognition；高铁high-speed railway；方便且快捷方式quick andeasy access；景区tourist attraction；移动支付mobile paymentDear Charlie,Yours,Li Hua【答案】DearCharlie,How iseverything Imdelighted toknow youreplanning atrip toChina inJuly.Here issomething abouttravelling.

①When inChina,you canchoose totravel byhigh-speed railwayor plane,which allowsquick andeasy accesstomost bigcities.

②More amazingly,unlike previousyears whenyou gotinto sometourist attractionswith theID card,now youcar make it just through a facial recognition app,which ismore convenient.Besides,mobilepayment insteadof payingin cashis widelyused.So,dont bothertotakea lotof cashwith you.With artificialintelligence,travelling inChina willbe anunforgettable experience.Lookingforwardtoyourearly arrival.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文，话题为介绍说明，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯【亮点词汇】

①be delighted to高兴©tourist attractions旅游景点

③pay incash用现金支付【高分句型】©When inChina,youcanchoose totravel byhigh-speed railwayor plane,which allowsquick andeasyaccesstomost bigcities,（when引导的省略句；which引导非限制性定语从句）

②More amazingly,unlike previousyears whenyou gotinto sometourist attractionswith theIDcard,now youcanmakeitjustthroughafacialrecognitionapp,which ismore convenient,（when弓I导定语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）【结构布局】引言说明写信目的中心介绍主要信息结尾表达愿望，期待到来【拓展词汇】

①appreciate感激

②relevant相关的

③punctual准时的【拓展句型】©Delighted toknow youshow greatinterest inIm writingto informyou ofsome relevantdetails.彳艮高兴得知你对……感兴趣，我写信来告诉你一些相关细节

②As foryour lastletter askingabout Imdelightedtotell yousomething indetail.对于你在上封信中问及的……，我很高兴告诉你一些详细的情况。