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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文Pip,once apoor boyliving in the forgewith Joe,a blacksmith,was nowaLondon gentleman.Yet,a question-Who mademe a gentleman,Miss Harvishamorsomebody else”一was botheringhim.He didntfind outthe answeruntil onenight,an unwelevisitor came to his house.That night,Pip wasreading aloneat the top ofhishousenear theriver whenheheard footstepson thestairs.Remembering that the staircaselights wereblown out,the gentlemantook uphis readinglampand wentout tothe stairhead.What floordo youwantHThe top,Mr.Pip.H saida voicefrom thedarkness.The lampPip heldover thestairs interror litup amans face.He didntrecognizeit,but theexpression onit showedthattheowner waspleased tosee Pip.The manwas dressedwarmly butnot elegantly.He hadlong greyhair andhis skinwasbrown fromspending alot oftime outside.Pip guessedhe wasabout sixty.Taken inside,the manlooked aroundthe roomand smiledat whathe saw.Thenhe didsomething strange.He heldboth ofhis handsout to Pip.Thinking hemightbe mad,Pip steppedback,which madethe manconfused,pushing hishandsthrough hishair.The mansat downin achair nearthe fire.Suddenly Pipknew whohe was!Thehungry convictin themarshes!The thenconvictnow looked at Pipwith greataffection,but Pipcould feelnone forhim.nYou actednobly tohelp me,a prisonbreakerwith aniron ringon aleg sixteenyearsago,Pip,the convictcontinued,nI havenever forgotit!H注意L续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答The sceneof helpinghim jumpedbefore Pipseyes.“A gentlemanHow haveyou doneso well”asked the convict.文章梗概本文讲述了Pip,一个曾经贫穷的铁匠铺男孩,如何变成了一位伦敦绅士然而,他心中一直有一个疑问是哈维沙姆小姐还是其他人让他成为了绅士?这个问题一直困扰着他,直到一个不受欢迎的访客在夜晚来到他的家中Pip在河边的家中独自阅读时,听到楼梯上有脚步声他拿着阅读灯去楼梯口查看,发现一个他不认识的男人,但这个男人似乎很高兴见到Pip这个男人穿着暖和但不优雅,长着灰色的头发,皮肤因长时间在户外而变得棕色Pip猜测他大约六十岁当这个男人进入房间并环顾四周时,Pip突然意识到他是多年前在沼泽地里的那个饥饿的囚犯这个曾经的囚犯现在用深情的眼神看着Pip,但Pip对他没有任何感情囚犯继续说,Pip十六年前帮助了他,一个带着腿上铁环的逃犯,他从未忘记过这件事伏笔
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1.Pip在沼泽地帮助逃犯时,逃犯的感激之情被暗示为未来可能的回报
2.逃犯身上的铁环和他对Pip的称呼,预示了他与Pip命运的交织
3.Pip对逃犯的同情和帮助,可能预示着他内心善良和正义感的特质,这些特质在未来可能会得到回报或引发事件回应
1.逃犯突然出现在Pip的生活中,回应了之前Pip对他的帮助,形成了故事的闭环
2.逃犯对Pip的称呼和回忆,回应了Pip当年的行为,揭示了逃犯对这段往事的记忆和感激
3.Pip的内心挣扎和对逃犯的复杂情感,回应了他当年的行为和成长过程中的变化
4.如果逃犯提出报答Pip,这将是对他当年善行的直接回应,同时也可能引发Pip对自己身份和价值观的反思续写要点第一段回忆与重逢
1.Pip回忆起当年在沼泽地帮助那个逃犯的情景
2.描述Pip当时的感受和动机,以及他如何克服恐惧去帮助逃犯
3.逃犯对Pip的感激之情,以及他如何一直关注Pip的成长和变化
4.Pip对逃犯突然出现的复杂情绪,包括惊讶、困惑和可能的不安第二段逃犯的报恩
1.逃犯透露他一直在暗中观察Pip的生活,了解他如何从一个穷小子变成绅士
2.逃犯表达他想要报答Pip的愿望,提出他可能的报恩方式
3.Pip对逃犯报恩提议的反应,包括他的犹豫、感激或拒绝
4.两人之间关系的转变,以及这次重逢如何影响Pip对过去和未来的看法参考答案The sceneof helpinghim jumpedbefore Pipseyes.Driven bya greatsense ofhelplessnessand dangertheconvictgave,Pip stolesome wittiesfrom thekitchenand a file fromamong Joestools.Then heopened thedoor andran forthe mistymarshes,where theprisonbreaker enjoyedhis breakfast,cutting offthe ringwith thefile.But sixteenyears later,under differentcircumstances,either the mans visitorhis thankstoPipwere unwele.If youveetothank me,it isntnecessary.Surelyyou mustunderstand Imagentlemannow and...“Pip said.“A gentlemanHow haveyou doneso well”asked theconvict.Pip hesitatedbeforesaying,“I dohave abenefactor,but Idont knowthe personsname.Watching Pipand everythingin the room,the manwent onto makea right“guessat Pipsguardian,ine and...In everysingle thingI wentfor,I wentfor you,saidthe convictfinally.Now,it dawnedon Pipthat itwas thisman whoworked hardforyears tomake hima Londongentleman.Ashamed butgrateful,Pip couldnthelpasking himself,“Was heonly aconvict^^下水文1The sceneof helpinghim jumpedbefore Pipseyes.It wasa coldwinter day,and theyoungPip,full offear yetdriven bya senseof duty,had slippedfood andafiletothe desperate man hidingin themarshes.The memorywas vivid,the fearand thecoldbiting throughhis bonesas hefaced theconvict.Now,years later,Pip couldhardlybelieve thatthe manstanding before him,weatherbeaten andaged,was thesameperson he had onceaided.The gratitudeinthe mans eyeswas unmistakable,and Pipfelt astrange mix of emotions-surprise,perhaps evena bitof pride,butcertainly noaffection.“A gentlemanHow haveyou doneso wellasked theconvict.Pip hesitated,unsure ofhow muchto revealto thisunexpected guestfromhis past.He chosehis wordscarefully,Tve hadsome fortunateencounters/*hereplied,glossing overthe detailsof MissHavishams influenceand theplex journeythathad ledhim tohis currentstatus.The convict,however,seemed tounderstandmore thanPip leton,his eyestwinkling with a knowinglook.Well,Im gladforyou,Pip,“he said,his voicerough yetsincere.nFve keptan eyeon you,you know.Ive watchedyou risefrom themire tothe heights.And Fveetorepay mydebt toyou.Pip wastaken aback,the notionof thisman repayinghim inany waybothforeign andunsettling.下水文2The sceneof helpinghim jumpedbefore Pipseyes.It wasa fatefulencounter thathadshaped thecourse ofhis life.The recollectionof themarshes,the cold,and thefearhehadfelt asa childcame floodingback.He rememberedthe passionthat hadpromptedhim toassist thedesperateman,unaware ofthe profoundimpact thatactwould have.The convictsgaunt face,the desperationin his eyes,and theiron onhisleg wereetched intoPips memory.Now,as helookedatthemanbeforehim,Pipwas filledwithamixofemotions,from theshock ofrecognition tothebewilderment ofthemanssudden appearancein hislife.“A gentlemanHow haveyou doneso well”asked theconvict,his voicefilledwith genuinecuriosity andperhaps ahint ofadmiration.Pip,taken abackby thequestion,struggled tofind theright words.He thoughtabout theyears ofstruggle,the mysteriousbenefactor,and thelessons hehad learnedalong theway.Its beenalong journey/*Pip began,his voicesteady despitethe turmoilwithin.nOne ofunexpectedturns andhard lessons.Ive beenfortunate,yes,but itsalso beena pathofgrowth andselfdiscovery.n Theconvict nodded,hiseyesreflecting adepth ofunderstandingthat Piphad notanticipated.Life hasits waysof surprisingus,doesnt ithe said,a smileplaying onhis lips.And herewe are,two soulsfrom thesamemarsh,bound bya pastact ofkindness.H Pipcould onlynod inagreement,theweight oftheir sharedhistory settlingheavily intheroom.。
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