读后续写练习写作导学案-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习

根据该故事的情节发展脉络，我们可以分析一下故事的情节走向故事的开端本不小心打碎了妈妈心爱的祖传花瓶，为了掩盖自己犯的错,他急忙把花瓶的碎片粘回去并把花瓶放回了原处故事的发展本的妈妈发现了花瓶上的裂纹，便问本是不是他打碎的问题的出现由于担心受到惩罚，本便撒谎，说是一只猫打碎了花瓶问题的解决本的妈妈在他的房间留下了纸条，让他立马去书房一趟结合续写段落所给出的首句可以推测出故事的结局通过和妈妈谈心，本逐渐认识到了自己的错误并勇敢地向妈妈承认是自己打碎了花瓶续写第一段展开语言和动作描写细节时，可以结合原文语言协同点尝试回答以下问题1How didBen feelupon hearinghis motherswords NervousSurprisedEmbarrassed2What shouldwe writein paragraph1to showBenszzbad attitudez/mentionedin paragraph23Why didBen havesome chocolatesin hishand inparagraph2What otherrewardsmight bementioned inparagraph1根据以上问题和给出的段首句内容一一“这块巧克力糖是对你想象力的奖励:一只会开窗的猫！〃，续写第一段的具体情节可以这样安排本一开始仍然试图撒谎，到后来一点点卸下防备妈妈找了几个理由来奖励本巧克力糖，一步步戳穿他的谎言但又巧妙地维护了孩子的自尊，让他放下恐惧具体情节的设计应该以妈妈的奖励理由和孩子的内心活动变化为主续写第二段展开语言和动作描写细节时，可以结合原文语言协同点尝试回答以下问题1How didBen feelnowAshamedRegretful2How wouldBen tellhis motherthe truth3What wasthe mothersreaction to the truth4How canwe designthe endingto teachthe readersa lesson根据以上问题和给出的段首句内容一一〃手里拿着一些巧克力糖，男孩的糟糕态度消失了〃，续写第二段的具体情节可以这样安排本逐渐认识到了自己的错误并勇敢地向妈妈承认是自己打碎了花瓶然后在续写内容的最后升华文章的主题参考范文Paragraph1:The mothersaid/This chocolate is areward for your imagination:a〃window-opening cat!What madeBen quitesurprised wasthe humorousbutintelligent remarks,which destroyedhis liesso easily.A mixedfeeling ofembarrassment,shame andfear crowdedin onhim,but hestill muttered/But youforgetto closethe windowllnsteadof arguingwith him,the mothertook outanotherchocolate andsaid calmly/The secondchocolateisgiven foryour effortto repairthevase!The cracksand theglue willalways remindme of your carefor mei^Hearingthis,the boysface flushed,too awkwardto uttera word,which wasinterrupted by hismothers remarks/zAnd thethird oneis foryour courageto facethe problem,though itsalittle delayed!,7She thenhanded thechocolate gentlyto him.Paragraph2:Now withsome chocolatesin hand,the boysbad attitudedisappeared.He thoughtof all thesedays whenhis motherwas tryingto teachhim tobe honestand toberesponsible.He thoughtofallthe troublesomeproblems causedbyhislies andfear ofpunishment.All ofa sudden,he realizedthat itis honestyand couragerather thanliesand cowardlinessthat canfix theproblem.With thisthought,he gatheredhis courageandapologized/zSorry,Mum,it wasme whobroke thevase.The catwas wrongedand Ilied...z,Well,my son,these areforyourfinal admissionofyourmistake/said hismother,gathering himto herchest affectionately/Honesty faroutweighs anythingelse—whether anantique orsomeones favourite/7【跟踪导练】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文（溜冰场）Laurie satquietly in the emptydressing roomat theice-skating rink.Shehad notbeen skatingin anycompetition sinceher leftknee wasbadly injuredin anaccidentsix monthsago.As shewaited forher turnto skate,Laurie wasverynervous,with herlegs trembling.She knewthat todaywas avery importantday,in hercomeback.“If Ican wintoday,“she thought,z/l canskate inthe WorldCup nextyear andthenmaybe Ican makeit to the Olympics//Laurie wasjust toldthat shehad atough competitionthis year,a girlfromConnecticut namedJinny Jordanwho wasreally strongin everything.She isthe oneyouhave tobeat thisyear//the coachsaid.Minutes later,the dooropened andLaurie sawa youngwoman whowas aboutherown age.The youngwoman putsome ofher belongingsonto achair.However,the bagfellto thefloor.Laurie glaredat Jinny/zSo thisis mycompetition/thought Laurie/Because ofher,Imay losetonight/7“This costumewas mymoms idea,Jinny startedthe conversation,looking downather red,white,and blueskating dress.zzl looklike aflag.”Laurie couldntkeep fromsmiling.She pointedto Jinnysskating bag/zSome stufffellout ofyour bag/Taurie said.Jinny lookedat theclothing andequipment thatlay scatteredon thefloor.As shebeganto gatherher belongings,the dooropened.“Jinny/called someone/youd bettergive thetape ofyour musicto thesoundengineer rightaway.”/zl thoughtI gavehim mymusic tapehalf anhour ago/said Jinny.zzTell himits thegreenbox withmy initialswritten inwhite inthe right-hand corner/7“He claimsyou nevergave itto him,and heis gettingangry//“Then Idont knowwhat Idid withit//said Jinny,hurrying out.Laurie knewthat musicwas nearlyas importantto theprogram asskating itself.lfshe losther musictape,she mightas wellforget aboutskating.Laurie stoodup andwalkedtothechair todo afew moreknee bends.注意续写词数应为左右150Paragraph1:Suddenly shesaw somethingsmall anddark greenbehind theleg of the dressingtable.Paragraph2:Feeling relieved,Laurie skatedquickly tothe centerof therink afterthe announcerfinallycalled hername.Paragraph1:Suddenly shesaw somethingsmall anddark greenbehind theleg ofthe dressingtable.She pulledit out,and sawthe whiteinitials JJ.inthetop right-hand corner.ItsJinny*s musictape!,7she exclaimed.Lauries heartstarted beatingfast.All Idhave todois forgetthat Ifound this/she thought/zlf Jinnydoesnt haveher music,she mightaswell notskate.And thenI wouldwin.z,Laurie shiveredslightly asshe thought aboutthis.Then shewondered/Does winningmean somuch tome thatId bewilling tocheatfor it,She walkedtothedoor andcalled Jinnyloudly.Paragraph2:Feeling relieved,Laurie skatedquickly tothe centeroftherink afterthe announcerfinallycalled hername.The musicfilled thestadium andshe skatedgracefully andbeautifully.Her leftknee wasfine andshe feltherself glidingon theice.The audienceapplaudedfrom timeto time,enthusiastically supportingher inher comeback.Whenshe finished,her coachran upto herand huggedher/zYou didit,Laurie!”she said.Lauriesmiled andthoughtaboutJinnys musictape/zNo onewill everknow howclose Ireallycame tolosing/she saidsoftly toherself.。