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Section_Y Writing—:一想象类作文写作技法指导XIEZUOJIFAZHIDAO想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识,超越现实生活来勾画出从未见过或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章
一、基本结构想象类作文可分为三段首段,进行概述;中间部分,具体描述;结尾,对文章进行总结
二、增分佳句
1.My ideal robot in the futurewill belike...and...or perhapsit willhelp me...
2.My idealrobot in the future is called...
3..He/She doesall thework aroundthe house.
4.He/She isvery patientand nevercomplains...
5..He/She canbe with me wheneverI feel lonely.
6.My idealrobot in the futurecan workas/serve as/be usedas...
7.Great changeswill takeplace in the future.
8.I believeour dreamwill cometrue someday.
9.Have youever thoughtabout...in thenext30or50years五步写作规范WUBUXIEZUOGUIFAN
10.In addition,there willbe supercomputers orrobots whichcan helpus do...[题目要求]你们班进行了一次关于未来机器人的讨论作为你们小组的代表,请你以“My idealrobot inthefuture”为题写一篇英语短文,向同学们介绍你心目中的理想机器人第一步审题构思很关键
一、审题
1.确定体裁本文为说明文;
2.确定人称本文的主要人称应为第三人称;
3.确定时态本文的主要时态应用一般现在时态
二、构思开头对我理想的机器人进行总体说明主体对我理想的机器人的形态、功能作细致描述结尾再次概括评价第二步核心词汇想周全
1.look like看上去像
2.remind sb.of sth,提醒某人某事
3.feellonely感到孤独
4.emotion情绪
5.share thejoys andsorrows分享快乐和痛苦第三步由词扩句雏形现开头总体说明
1.我未来理想的机器人是个漂亮的小女孩,她是蓝色的,身高一米六My idealrobot inthe futureis a beautiful little girl,and sheis blue and about metres talL主体描述形态、功能用途
2.她是世界上最新的,并且看上去像一个真正的女孩She isthe newestintheworld,and shelooks likea realgirL
3.她很聪明,并且能懂我所说的全部,能做我让她做的事She isvery clever,and canunderstand allI say and do what]ask herto do.
4.不管我什么时候遇到困难,她都可以帮助我写作业并给我一些建议She canhelp mewith myhomework and give mesome advicewhenever]meet withdifficulties.
5.她能提醒我任何重要的事,比如考试,甚至是我的生日She canremind meofLanyChing important,such asexams andeven mybirthday.
6.她干的家务最多且不用休息She doesthe mostof thehousework withouthaving arest.
7.有了这样的机器人,我就不会再感到孤独,因为不管我什么时候需要,她都能给我唱歌,还会和我一起跳舞With such a robot,I wont feellonely anylonger becauseshe can sing and dance tome whenever
8.她会和我一起打网球,并能用话语和手势表达她的感情她也会分享我的快乐与痛苦She canplay tennis withme and can express heremotions withwords andgestures.She sharesmyjoys andsorrows aswell.结尾再次概括评价
9.在将来拥有这样一个机器人一定会很有趣It willbe veryinteresting toown sucha robot inthe future.第四步句式升级造亮点
1.用非限制性定语从句改写句1My idealrobot inthe futureis abeautiful littlegirl,who isblue andaboutmetres talL
2.用反问句改写句9Wouldn1_it_be veryinterestingjo own sucha robot inthefuture第五步过渡衔接联成篇My idealrobotinthe futureMyidealrobotinthefutureisabeautifullittlegirl,who isblueandabout metrestall.She_is_the_newest_in_the_world,_and_it_looks_like_a」eal_girL Sheis_very_clrver,_and canunderstandaH]sayanddowhat]ask herto do.She canhelp mewith myhomew orkandgiveme someadvicewhenevermeet withdifficulties.She canremind meof anything important,such asexamsancLeven mybirthday.She doesthe mostofLthe housework withouthaving arest.With suchaiobot,JLwon tfeel」onely anylonger becausesh ecansinganddanceto」Tie whenever[need.She canplaytenniswithmeandcanexpress heremotions withwords andgestuies.She sharesmy joysandsonows aswell.Wouldnt itbe veryinteresting toownsucharobotinthefuture。
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