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高中英语一一作文讲解
一、考点、热点回顾写作技巧
1.首先,要避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型其次,多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型第三,注意语法句法的灵活运用语态、时态要准确无误主谓语要一致第四,描写人物时,要生动具体,可以选择使用下列词汇第五,上下文要连贯同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节、故事发生的先后次序(时间或空间).使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理.使文章连贯、自然、流畅同学们应注意下面过渡的用法一并列关系:、转折关系时间关系即、正and as well or,but yethowever,when whileafter beforeth er因果关系、目的列举总结性:、that,so thereforeoin orderto.for examplesuch as,in generalin allin a避免病句word generallyspeaking.注意事项:2
(1)在整篇文章中,避免只是用
一、两个句式要灵活运用各种句式如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等().使用不同长度的句子,通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力2().改变句子的开头方式,不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序可以把状语至于句首,或用分词等3().学会使用过渡词4递进furthermore,moreover,besides,in addition,then,etc.转折however,but,nevertheless,afte rwards,etc.总结finally,at last,in brief,to conclude,etc.强调really,indeed,ce rtainly,surely,above all,etc.对比in thesame way,just as,on theotherhand,etc.
(5).避免重复使用同一单词或词组(),确定文章用第几人称写,基本时态是什么6检查错误
3.⑴看字数是否达到要求,看有无遗漏要点()看文体格式是否正确规范2⑶看有无语法或用词上的错误
(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错.标点符号是否有无遗漏或用错等等Dear Editor,Im writingto tell you about the discussionwe recentlyhad aboutwhether weshould knowour parentsincome.We havedifferent opinionson thismatter.Most ofus about70%think weshould knowour parentsincomesince itwill helpus understandhow hardour parentshave towork,no matterhow muchthey earn.Then wewillstudy harderand will not wastemoney anymore.We mayalso learnto shareour parentstrouble.About30%of my classmates thinkit unnecessaryto letthe childrenknow howmuch their parents earn,If theyknowtheir parentshave enoughmoney tosupport thefamily,they willnot studyhard sincethey needntworryabout thefuture.It issaid,especially whentheirparentshave arelatively highincome,the childrenwill easilyforma wastefulhabit.Yours truly,Li Hua()注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致5常用短语
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②一些精彩亮点连接词in addition,whafs more,furthermore(另外)moreover(最重要的是)last butnot leastimportant,most important(最糟糕的是),worst ofall(更糟的是)to makematters wores(我个人看来)as faras Iconcerned,personally(然而)however,nevertheless
二、典型例题英语书信的常见写作模板
1.开头部分How niceto hear from you again.Let metellyousomething about the activity.Im gladto havereceived yourletter ofApr.9th.Im pleasedto hearthat yourecoming to China fora visit.Im writingto thankyou foryour helpduring mystay inAmerica.结尾部分With bestwishes.Im lookingforward toyour reply.rd appreciateit ifyou couldreply earlier.例文假设你是李华你的外国笔友打算于七月来中国,特来信了解中国的社交习俗请你用英语Jane回一封信,从以下几个方面做具体介绍见面时的问候方式;L.对赞美的回答方式;
2.接受礼物时的回应方式;
3.餐晏礼节4注意.词数左右,信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)1100•可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯2Dear Jane,Glad tohear fromyou andyou123456789re welcometo Chinain July.Anyhow,different cultures,different customs.If you“Do asthe Romansdo whenin Rome,youll enjoymoreof yourstay here.I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful and wish youa good journey.Yours sincerely,Li Hua.议论文模板2().正反观点式议论文模板1导入1hopewhatsmentionedabovemightbehelpfulandwishyouagoodjourney.YoursSincerely,Li HuaDearJane,Glad tohearfromyou andyoure welcometoChinain July.The followingare someChinese customs.Firstly,we greeteach otherby saying“Hello“or askingsuch questionsas Whereare yougoing”or“Are youbusy”to expressour care.Secondly,when praised,we replywith“Oh,no!or“Im over-praised^^toshow goodmanners.Next,when receivinga gift,we usuallysay Itsunnecessary“besides Thanks”toshow politenessand thenput itaway.Finally,at dinnerparties,we talkloudly andtouch glasseswhen drinkingtosomeones healthor successto showthat werewarm.第段(导入话题)1Recently wevehadadiscussion aboutwhether weshould...(观点有分歧)Our opinionsare dividedon thistopic.正文第段(正方观点)2Most ofthe studentsare infavour ofit..(歹出个赞成的理由)Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally..U2〜3第段(反方观点)3However,the othersare stronglyagainst it.(歹出个反对的理由)Their reasonsare asfollows.In thefirst place...Whafs more...In addition…U2〜3结论第段4Personally speaking,the advantagesoverweigh thedisadvantages,for itwill dous moreharm than(个人观点)才good,so Isupport it.例文最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论讨论的主题是公园要不要收门票请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况的同学认为不应该收门票.公园是公众休闲的地方.如收门票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城60%
1.23市形象的同学认为应收门票,但票价不要太高支付园林工人工资购新花木40%
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3.注意.信的开头已为你写好c1词数左右
2.100参考词汇门票---
3.entrance feeDearEditor.Im writingto tellyou aboutthe discussionwe havehad aboutwhether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Dear editor,Im writingto tellyou aboutthe discussionwe havehad aboutwhetheran entrance fee shouldbechargedforparks.Sixty percentof myschoolmates are for the idea that an entrance feeshouldnot beforced onthe public.Theybelieve parksaretheplace wherethe publicenjoy themselvesat theirleisure.They thinkthatagat eand wailsare tobebuilt ifanentrancefee isto becharged.The citywillnotlook sobeautiful asit shouldh ave.Forty percentof myschoolmatesarefortheideathat anentrancefeeis OK,but itshouldnt beout ofco ntrol.Entrance feecan beusedto paythe gardenersand buynew typesof flowersand trees.For myself,I dlike tosay thatif weall workhard tobuildour cityinto aflower garden,who caresabouttheentrancefeef orparksYours truly,Li Hua.观点论述类议论文模板:22导入:第段提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题1(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)As astudent,I amstrongly infavour ofthe decision.(过渡句,承上启下)The reasonsfor thismay belisted asfollows.正文第段(列出个赞成或反对的理由)2First ofall...Secondly...Besides...2〜3结论第段(照应第段,构成”总一分一总”结构)3In conclusion,I believethat...1()或者类议论文模板3A B”导入第段1Some peoplehold theopinion thatA issuperior toB inmany ways.Others,however,argue thatB ismuch better.Personally,I wouldprefer Abecause Ithink Ahas moreadvantages.正文第段:•(赞同2There aremany reasonswhy Iprefer A.The mainreason is that...Another reasonis that•的原因)A第段(歹」出个的优势)3Of course,B alsohas advantagesto someextent…I1〜2B结论第段4But ifall thesefactors areconsidered,A ismuchbetterthan B.From whathas beendiscussed above,wemay finallydraw theconclusion that.・.(得出结论)才图表作文写作模板
3.图表主题.图表最大特点.The chartgives usan overallpicture ofthe Thefirst thingwe noticeisthatThis(进一步说明).means thatas图表细节一动词细节一中的第一个We cansee fromthe statisticsgiven that.After-ing变化,动词幅度+口寸间(紧跟着的变化).图表细节二.the-ed+The figuresalso tellus thatIn(进一步描述).the column,we cansee thataccounts for(结论).Judging fromthese figures,we candraw theconclusion thatThe reasonfor this,as faras Iam(给出原因)./(发出倡议).concerned isthat It is hightime thatwe、图画类写作模板:
4.开头1Look atthis picture./The pictureshows that.../From thispicture,we cansee.../As isshown in the picture.../Asis seeninthepicture...彳钉接句2As weall know,.../As isknown toall,.../Itiswell knownthat.../In myopinion,.../As faras Iamconcerned,.../This sightreminds meof somethingin mydaily life..结尾句3In conclusion.../In brief.../On thewhole.../In short.../In aword.../Generally speaking.../As hasbeen stated...例文你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报,主题为保护环境从我做起请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文What canI dofor our environmentEveiyone cando somethingfor ouienviionment.What canI dofor ourenvironmentEveryone cando somethingfor ourenvironment.For me,I shouldtry tosave electricityin mydailylife.For example,if Iam thelast personleave theclassroom inthe evening,I willalways remembertoturn offthe lights.In orderto protectour forests,I willuse paperwisely.I shouldtry touse bothsides ofpaperwhenever itis possible.I willnot usethings likepaper cupsand disposablechopsticks becausetheyare madeof wood.I believethat doingall thesesmall thingswill improveourenvironmentand helpmakeour worlda betterplace tolive in.
三、课后练习假设你是刘英最近你就流行节目“超级女生”或“快乐男生”收集了同学们
1.SuperGris HappyBoys的不同看法请根据下表内容给征稿的某英语报刊编辑写封信,并谈谈你自己的观点一些同学的看法另一些同学的看法有助于发现自己的优缺点能挑战自我并丰富生易误导年轻人活经历会带来一些问题,如学习受到影响注意词数个左右,信的开头和落款已为你写好不计人总词数;
1.100可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
2.参考词汇
3.误导-----mislead挑战-----challengeDear Editor,Yours,Liu YingDearEditor,Recently,Fve collectedsome differentopinions frommy classmatesabouttheprogram SuperGirls orHappyBoys.Some ofthem arguethat itoffers agood chancefor youngpeopletodiscover theirown strongpoints aswellas weaknesses.Meanwhile,it canget themready forany challengesand enrichtheir lifeexperiences.However,stme ofmyclassmatesdont thinkso.They feelthat itcould misleadthose youngsters.Especially tothe schoolgirlsand boys,it maycause sometroubles.For example,it mayaffect theirstudy badly.In myopinion,every coinhas twosides.So longaswehave acorrect attitudeand goodself-control,its stillOKto joinin it.Yours,Liu Ying假如你是某中学学生李华最近,你班同学正在参加《世纪报》“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论本次活21动题目为父母的收入有没有必要让孩子知道?请根据下表所提供的情况给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况的学生认为的学生认为70%30%父母的收入应该让孩子知道父母的收入没有必要让孩子知道知道后,知其来之不易,能够更加努力学习如果知道父母收入好,会助长乱花钱风气知道后,可以理解家长的艰辛,学会节省,为知道父母的收入后,会以为能靠父母,不用努大人分忧力,影响学习动力信的开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数1词数左右2100参考词汇收入3income.。
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