2025年大学英语四级真题模拟作文训练

英语四级模拟作文例一Part IWritingDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitied MaltingFriends Online.You shouldwrite at least120wordsfollowing the outline given below in Chinese:

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1.网上交友现象越来截止普遍

2.这种做法有利有弊

1.有人认为学校应当开设书法课

2.有人则反对

3.我的见解答案［范文一］Should SchoolsOffer HandwritingLessons1Nowadays,some primaryschools andmiddle schoolshave offeredhandwriting lessons to their students,2which haslead toa heateddebateamong peoplefrom allworks oflife.3Some peoplebelieve thatit istheschools obligationto cultivateall-rounded individuals.Therefore,handwriting lessonsshould bemade a compulsory course.4However,there are still somepeople whohold thebelief thatitis uselessfor thestudents to learn handwriting at all.With thedevelopmentof thecomputer age,the chancesthat we use pensare becomingslimmer.Sincealmost alldocuments aretyped,we onlyneed tolearn typing.5As faras Imconcerned,learning handwriting is7of essentialimportanceto youngstersin threeaspects.6To beginwith,being abletowrite Chinese characters isa basicability as a Chinese,since thelanguageis an7indispensable elementof the Chinese culture.6Moreover,the practiceof handwriting can helpdevelop manycapabilities,such as the capabilityof concentratingand learning.6Last butnot least,asthe Chinesecharactershave anaesthetic function,handwritingcanbe a7crucial way to showthe differencesof individuals.［审题］分析标题和提纲可知，应写一篇议论文在构造上，根据提纲分三段行文首段提出正方观点，第二段论述反方观点；文章重点为第三段，提出自己的观点并给出理由［思绪一］第一段指出有些中小学开设书法课这一现象，并指出正方的观点；第二段指出反方的观点，即开设书法课毫无用处第三段分三点分析自己支持开设书法课的原因［点评］1引出文章主题2非限制性定语从句3引出正方观点4转折，引出反方观点5引出自己的观点6分三点论述自己的观点，层次分明7“重要”的不一样体现法，词汇富于变化［范文二］Should SchoolsOffer HandwritingLessons1In recentyears,a numberof primaryschools andmiddle schoolsareoffering handwritinglessons to their students.A heateddebate arisesoverwhether it is reasonableto makehandwriting acompulsory lesson.2Some peoplehold theopinion that the schoolsneed handwritingclasses inorderto cultivateall-rounded talents.3Other people,however,tend to believe thathandwriting isof littleuseto thestudents nowadays.In thiscomputer age,4all thestudentsneed todo ishaving agood knowledgeof computerprograms.Kids todayneedn，t bothertolearntheout-of-date handwriting.5In myview,the schoolsshould openup handwritinglesson as aselective courserather thanacompulsoryone.6On theone hand,theburdens that the kidsare undertakingare nearlyunbearable,thus weshouldntmake thingsworse byadding hand-writinglessonsinto theircurriculums.6On theother hand,some studentswho areinterested inhandwritingcan chooseto attendthe coursein theirfree timeor duringtheholidays.［思绪二］第一段指出有些中小学开设书法课引起热议，并指出正方的观点；第二段指出反方的观点，即在电脑时代没有必要开设书法课；第三段指出自己的观点，即应设书法课作为选修课而不是必修课，并分两点给出理由［点评］1开门见山地提出现象2引出正方观点3转折，阐明反方观点4定语从句5引出自己的观点6从两方面论述理由例十一Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite ashortessayonthetopicBetterEarlythanLate.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.大学里诸多学生总是到考试之前才开始努力学习

2.这种做法的危害

3.提出自己的提议答案Better Earlythan Late1It isa commonphenomenon thatcollege studentsonly study hardright beforeexams.2With thefinal exaesapproaching,they becomemorediligent thanever andtry torecite someimportant factsor rules.They stayupall nightstudying duringthe lastfew daysof asemester.However,memorizing somuch insuch ashort timeis3incrediblydifficult.4As aresult,some students are notcapable ofgetting higherscores.4Even worse,college studentsend upnever learningthe materialstheyare supposedto master.In myopinion,it is5better tostudy earlythan latebecause itwillgive usa thoroughdigestion of the knowledgewe have learned.6Asan oldsaying goes,“The earlybird getsthe worm.〃Thus weshall makegooduseof our timeand studyas earlyas possible.［解析］1此句式常用来引出某一现象2with引导的状语从句,表达伴随3incredibly难以置信地”，加强语气4as aresult用来引出危害，even worse用来表到达果的严重性5紧紧围绕标题，提出自己的观点Better earlythan late6谚语“早起的鸟儿有虫吃”，使语言生动活例十二Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite ashortessay entitiedAbility orDiploma.You shouldwrite atleast120wordsfollowing the outline given below:

1.诸多人认为文凭能阐明一切

2.然而当今社会越来越看重能力

3.你的见解答案Ability OFDiplomaIn thepast,few peoplecould receivehigher educationand acquirecorrespondingdiplomas.So thatpeople withdiplomas1were regardedastalents2without anydoubt.However,in today，s society,diplomas cannotstand foreverything anymore.Ability isbecoming anew judgeof talents.3To beginwith,college expansionallows moreand morepeople toreceivecollege educationand getdiplomas,which makesdiplomas notso rare.Moreover,there areeven people who buyfake diplomas.And thatbehaviorfurther lowersthe valueof diplomas.4As aresult,practical abilityisreceiving moreattention thandiplomas.5As faras I am concerned,diploma ison thewhole useful,becauseit isa kindof symbolof ability.We stillneed tostudyhardto getthenecessary diplomas.And besides,we alsoneed toimprove our6an-roundability toadapt ourselvesto therequirements oftoday5s society.［解析］1regard...as将…看作…2withoutanydoubt毫无疑问3to beginwith,moreover使行文愈加条理清晰4asaresult用来引出成果5表述作者观点常用句6all-around ability全面的能力例十三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitiedWillE-mailReplaceHand-writtenLetterYoushouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowing theoutline given below:

1.许多人认为电子邮件将会取代老式书信

2.也有人对此持不一样意见

3.你的观点答案:Will E-mail ReplaceHand-written Letter1Email isbecoming moccand morepopular asthe internetspreadsinto oureveryday lives.With thewide useof internet,Email has2nn easyaccessfor all.What ismore,it isgreat forspeed andconvenience sothatit savesa lotof time,energy andmoney.Considering allthe benefitsofemail,people suspectemail willreplace letterwriting.3There are still otherpeoplewhohold differentviews.They believethata hand-written letterhas amore lastingand significanteffect.Thetime,love,and carethat oneputs intoa hand-written lettermake itmorevalued to the maintenanceof arelationship.While anemail mightend upunreadin afull inbox,4somehow vanishedor justdisregarded.5Even thoughemail ise greatform ofcommunication,I amcertainthat letterwritingisirreplaceable.6In noway cana quickemail conveyandaccomplish asmuch asa7deliberate,well一worded letterdoes.Inmy eyes,there seemstobeno betterchoice thanwritingaletter toexpressdeep,heartfelt andprofound love.［解析］1开篇点明电子邮件的好处以及人们支持使用的原因2access意为“使用权”3反对电子邮件者的观点4注意vanish及disregard的使用5陈说作者观点6注意in noway引导的倒装构造的使用段，我们应当好好运用它，而不应当成为其受害者亮点词汇有render,convenientand efficientmeans,fall victimto例二Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite anessayentitledOnConservingEnergy.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingthe outline givenbelow in Chinese:

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1.能源短缺问题已经非常严重；

2.可以采用节能措处理能源短缺问题；

3.你的见解答案［高分作文］Nowadays there is growingconcern on the serious problem of energyshortage.Many peopleworry thatenergy resourcesontheearth will beexhausted ifweusethem in an uncheckedway.And theybelieve thatthe energyshortagewill causeserious problemsandevencrisis.Conserving energyis oneof themeasures whichhave beentaken tosolvethe problemofenergyshortage.For example,some countrieshave adaylightsaving system to useless electricityfor lighting.Also,some citieshaveenforced somefacilities forsaving waterat publicplaces such as restroomsand bars.Still more,some haveenforced seriouspenalties onoveruse ofelectricity,water,and farmingland.By thesemeans,people hopethe drainonenergy resourcescould beslowed down.In aword,it ishigh timethat seriousconsideration wasgiven toconservingenergy.Only throughimmediate andeffective action,can wehumanbeings surviveand enjoylife asdesired.［评析］节能是目前备受关注的一种话题，因此可说的内容诸多，紧紧围绕提纲规定进行论述是本文的鲜明特点文章首段直截了当地提出能源短缺这样一种话题，中间段概括阐明节能是处理能源短缺问题的重要措施之一，运用并列型扩展法简介了几种节能措施末尾段重申主题，再次强调问题的紧迫性和严重性本文词语和句型运用自如如第二段的列举法虽然没有使用first,second等词语，但使用了Also,still more,使整个段落看起来内容充实，条理清晰结尾段使用了此类分析问题的作文的经典结尾句型“itishigh timethat…o例三:Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite anessayentitiedOnEnglishLearning.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingthe outline givenbelowin Chinese:

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1.你认为在英语学习过程中存在的重要问题是什么？

2.导致这些问题的原因有哪些？

3.对于处理这些问题，你有何提议？It is obvious that there are some problems in college English learning.Inmy opinion,something mostdiscouraging is that manystudents finddifficultyin communicatingwith anative speakeralthough theyhavelearnedEnglishfor manyyears.There aretwo reasonsexplaining thisphenomenon.Firstly,most ofthestudents,even manyteachers ofEnglish paylittle attentionto the useof thelanguage.To them,the mostimportant thingof learning English istomemorize somegrammatical rulesand enlargethe vocabulary.Secondly,manystudents havenot realizedthe realpurpose oflearningEnglish.They holdthatthey studyEnglish to pass tests,not tomaster auseful toolfor theirownuse.To changethis situation,my suggestionisthatmore emphasisbe putonimproving communicativeabilities inEnglish.For example,why notadvocatethatthelistening andspeaking shouldbe includedin thetest ofEnglishat variouslevels［评析］作文首先直接提出英语学习中存在的问题，即通过数年英语学习之后，学生仍然不能用英语进行交流第二段揭示并分析产生这种现象的两个原因主题句为There aretwo reasonsexplaining thisphenomenon.扩展句的重要内容一是对语言运用的学习不够重视；二是学习英语的目的只是为了通过考试最终提出处理问题并且现实可行的提议，用问句结尾，引起阅卷老师对本文的注意本文的语言体现精确，三个段落的过渡自然文章开头句子明确提出问题It isobvious thatthere aresomeproblemsincollegeEnglishlearning,第二段首句提出产生这种现象的原因有两个There aretwo reasonsexplaining thisphenomenon,末段的首句用To changethis situation来承接上文，最终用forexample引出自己的提议例四Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite anessayentitiedCheatingonCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingthe outlinegivenbelowin Chinese:

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1.在大学里存在着考试作弊的现象；

2.你是怎么看待这一现象的；

3.怎样才能制止这种现象答案［高分作文］Cheating onexams isbecoming aseriousproblemon campus.23%ofstudents haveever beenfound doingso ontheir exams.Some of them copyfromeach other,some takeout theirtextbooks orreference booksto copy,stillsome usethe moderncommunication toolssuchasmobile phoneasawaytogetrelated information.It isobviousthatcheating onexams hasbad effectonstudents academicperformances aswell asmorality practice.Many remarkablefactors contributetothecheating inexams.First,some studentsjust playtime awayand wanttopassthe examwithout efforts.And somestudentsareunder greatpressure fromparents andthey fearto failtheexams.Second,college oruniversities mustbear theb1ame fortheirplacing moreemphasis ongrades thanlearning.Rigid gradingsystem promotescheating.How cansuch anunhealthy phenomenonbe eliminatedIn myopinion,therearetwo wayswe canadopt.First ofall,a severepunishment shouldbeput intoeffect toprevent studentsfrom cheating.In addition,we shouldreformour examinationsystem to make ita realeffective toolto measurestudents5abilities.［评析］本文的第一段指出考试作弊在诸多大学里是一种很严重的问题，通过数字阐明问题的严重性，主题句的提出显得有理有据接着列举了学生的多种作弊手段第二段主题句uMany remarkablefactors contributetothecheating inexams.显示本段的重要内容是分析考试作弊的原因，分别从学生和学校实行的制度两个方面进行分析第三段提出根除作弊现象的措施本文段落之间的衔接自然得体，如第三段开头用了一种问句How cansuch anunhealthy phenomenonbeeliminated^,很自然地将话题转到怎样制止作弊上来了各个段落内部扩展句之间的逻辑层次清晰，分析透彻如结尾段在论述采用何种措施根除作弊时，用firstof all,in addition体现了两种措施逻辑与意义上的关系例五Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite anessayenti tiedOn Interne t-based Instruction.You shouldwri teatleast120words followingtheoutlinebelowinChinese.

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1.近年来网络化学习发展迅速;

2.网络教育蓬勃发展的原因;

3.我怎样运用这种形式充电The pastdecade haswitnessed aboom inInternet-based instructionbothat homeand abroad.Online educationwith orwithout recordof formalschoolingis readilyavailable.The attractionofthefenceless schoolfor studentsisobvious.Learners cancast asidethe restrictionof age,profession oreducationalbackground andselect freelyaccordingtotheir ownneed thestudying contents.Additionally,withtheinstructors postingsyllabi,reading assignments,andschedules onWebsites,and studentssending in their assignmentsonline,timeand spaceare noobstacles toanyone.Meanwhile,expenses andresources areaccordinglysaved forboth studentsand schools.Obviously,webucationbroadens thechannelof knowledge reception,realizes learner-centeredauto-study andenhances thelearners abilityofknowledge acquisition andknowledgeupdating.As forme,to enhanceintegrated qualityby selectingsome popularwebcourses annuallywillbe a long-term mission.［评析］这是一篇重点在于分析某现象的原因的文章第一段用两句话简朴阐明了过去十年里国内外网络化学习发展迅速这一现象亮点词汇decade“十年”，比用ten years显得有水平；witnessed”见证”，以时间地点作主语，事件作宾语，表达在某个时间或者地点发生了某事，属于拟人化的使用方法；boom“蓬勃发展”；at homeand abroad“国内外”Internet-based,instruction和Online education是网络教育的两种不一样体现，体现了用词的多样性第二段分析这一现象的原因第一句是承上启下的过渡句第二句详细阐明了第一条原因学习者可以不受年龄、职业、教育背景等的限制，自由选择课程随即一句用Additionally引出了第二条原因由于教学活动都在网上进行，师生都不受时空限制紧接着用Meanwhile引出了第三条原因费用和资源得到节省最终用Obviously进行升华、小结网络教育拓宽了接受教育的渠道、实现了以学生为中心的自主学习、提高了学习者获取知识和更新知识的能力这一段中的thefenceless school和webucation又是“网络教育”的此外两种体现其他亮点词汇尚有cast aside,obstacles,accordingly,broadens thechannel,learner-centered,enhances theability,knowledgeacquisition,knowledgeupdating等第三段简要叫要地阐明自己的打算每年选几门受欢迎的网络课程来提高自己的综合素质亮点词汇有enhance,integrated,annually,long-term missiono例六Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite anessayentitied Howto Livea ColorfulLife onCampus.You shouldwrite atleast120words followingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

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1.许多大学生但愿自己的校园生活可以丰富多彩；

4.有许多方式可以丰富大学生活；

5.对此你有什么提议？Nearly allstudents wanttomaketheirlife on campusas colorfulas possible.With a colorful life,a studentcan feelmeaningful andconfident.So itisnecessary-for studentsto enrichtheir campuslife.There areseveral waysto liveacolorfullife oncampus.It isa goodchoicefor studentsto joinvarious clubsand groups.By doingso,studentscan makea lotof friendswhose interestsare similarto theirs.Besidestaking partintheactivities oncampus,students canalso dosome socialpractice,which isnecessary forthem toexpand theirhorizon.Taking myselfas anexample,I loveto danceand jointhe danceclub.I enjoydancing withmy friendsand learna lotfrom them.Moreover,I takeanactive partin socialpractice.Both arehelpful tomake mylifeoncampusmore enjoyable.［评析］文章的第一段提出丰富多彩的校园生活可以让学生感到自信，生活得故意义，随之自然地引出学生有必要学着使自己的校园生活丰富多彩第二段提出使校园生活丰富多彩的两种措施一种是参与多种俱乐部、学生团体；另一种是参与社会实践最终一段作者重申主题以自己为例，让读者懂得自己的提议是有据可依的短文的第二段在简介两种才昔施时没有用first、second一类的词，而是用了besides；最终一段用了分词短语taking myselfas anexample开头，通过这种方式，可以让阅卷老师觉得语言运用不落俗套例七Part IWritingDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitied CollegeStudents,sense ofResponsibility.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

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1.有的大学生有很强的责任意识，有的却连最基本的责任感都没有；

2.大学生肩负些哪责任；

3.大学阶段是大学生成长的重要阶段，呼吁大学生加强责任感Our timeswitness astriking differencebetween twogroups ofcollegestudents:those who bear a strong sense of responsibilityand thosewithouteven aslightest one.Perhaps somearestillwondering-what obligationsare undergraduatessupposedto takeObviously,all adultcitizens shouldbe responsibleforthemselves,their families,their societiesand theirnations.We universitystudentsare noexception.Besides,we areexpected tobe responsibleforthe institutionwhere weare beingeducated.Years atcollege arethe mostimportant periodinaperson，s growth,when weacquire knowledgeand findour rolesin life,so wemust enhanceourobligation senseat thiscrucial momentin orderto fulfillour dutieswellas individualsand membersofourfamilies,our schools,our societyand ourcountry.［评析］本文开头段只用了一句话就阐明了提纲中的差距有的大学生有很强的责任意识，有的却连最基本的责任感都没有其中动词witness的拟人法使用、短语astriking difference（明显的不一样）、strong与slightest形成的强烈对比以及responsibility和one实虚词结合，都是亮点体现而两类人的定语分别使用了定语从句whobearastrongsenseofresponsibility和介词短语without evenaslightest one,体现了句型的变化多样第二段虽然不长，不过段首过渡句Perhaps somearestillwondering-whatobligations areundergraduates supposedto take的使用，承上启下，十分自然地引出段落主题大学生肩负哪些责任随即给出四个答案成年公民都应当承担自我责任、家庭责任、社会责任、国家责任大学生也不例外而为了突出大学生和一般成年公民的区别，还用Besides补充了“学校责任”尾段强调了大课时期在人生中的重要性，并呼吁为了很好地履行我们作为个人以及家庭、学校、社会、国家的组员的职责，我们要加强责任感的培养，呼应第二段全文以主人公的形象论述，有说服力例八:Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayon thetopic ofOn BeingVolunteers.You shouldwrite atleast120wordsfollowing theoutlinegivenbelow.

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1.目前诸多大型活动都需要志愿者；

2.做志愿者的利弊；

3.假如我有机会做志愿者的话，我会……答案［高分作文］On BeingVolunteersWith Chinabecoming increasinglyprosperous by the day,large-scaleevents suchas worldexpositions andsports gamesfrequent thishot land,virtually allof whichare thirstyfor alarge numberof volunteers.Apart fromgaining someworking andsocial experiences,the realisticadvantagesto servingasavolunteer are also obvious.Volunteers fortheWorld Expoin Shanghai,for instance,may visitany pavilionafter work,whichmakes themthe envyof billionsof queuers;likewise,volunteers ofBeijingOlympics gotallowances,quality uniforms,free ridingof busand metro,etc.More beneficially,their experiencemay addluster totheir resumeinjobhunting.But asthe sayinggoes,“A pennyhas twosides.〃Thedisadvantages tobeing volunteersarealsoelephants inthe room.Doingvoluntary jobsis undoubtedlytime-consuming,and tothose students,themajority ofvolunteers,the sacrificeisnotonly timebut theirschool work.Besides,longtime exposure to variousunexpected weathermay dogreat harmtotheir health.But anyway,if Ihave achance tobeavolunteer,Iamsuretotry myutmost,because duringthe course,I willlearn how to carryout betterteamwork andhowtocope withemergencies,etc.,thus Iwill maturesooner thanotherwise.［评析］这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的阐明文第一段用一句话阐明了目前诸多大型活动频频在中国举行（with引导的短语简要指出原因中国日益繁华），它们都需要志愿者这一现象其中语言亮点有increasingly修饰形容词prosperous,表达“越来越”；bytheday表达“日益”；large-scale events表达“大规模的活动；frequent作动词，表达“频频发生；virtually修饰all,表达“几乎”；of which介词+关系代词，引导定语从句，使句型出现变化；be thirstyfor使用了拟人的手法，体现“迫切需要”第二段分析了做志愿者的利弊第一句以Apart from开头，引出了两个“利”一一获得工作、社会经验以及某些现实性的好处，随即举了北京奥运会和上海世博会作为后者的例证（likewise自然地把两个例子衔接到了一起），并用Morebeneficially阐明前者对找工作更有协助在转折到“弊”时，用了谚语But asthesaying goes,〃A penny,has twosides.〃，而成语elephants inthe room表达“明显的”，也是闪光用词Besides连接了两个弊端一一花费时间、影响健康最终一段表明了自己的态度一一假如有机会，将竭尽全力做好志愿者，同步简要阐明了理由学会合作和应急以便更快地成熟起来开头的But anyway但不管怎样尽管有上述的弊端”属于过渡词，把第二段和第三段自然衔接到了一起例九Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofShouldForeignAbbreviationsBeBannedonTVYoushouldwriteat least150words accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.目前有些电视台严禁在节目中使用外来缩略语

1.对这种做法有人表达支持

2.有人并不赞成

3.我认为……答案［范文一］Should ForeignAbbreviations BeBanned onTV1Recently,CCTV bannedthe useof borrowedEnglish abbreviationssuchas NBA,WTO andCPI inall itsprograms.2Some peopleapplaud themove,maintaining thatit helpspreserve thepurity oftheChinese language.The mediais deeplyengaged inthe ongoingWesternization ofChineselanguage.3If thephenomenon isnot stopped,Chinese willbe graduallyreduced fromanindependent expressionsystemtoa mixtureof languages.4Others,however,shake theirheads.It isnot persuasive,they say,thatthemedia shyaway fromforeign abbreviationsto preservethe purityoftheChineselanguage andculture.5After all,languages integrationisa verycomplicated processand itsirrational toimpose asimple banoncertain words.5Besides,the useof foreignabbreviations wont shakethestatus ofChinese asan embodimentof andthe basisofthe5,000-year-oldChinese culture.6As faras Iam concerned,thereisno needto bantheuseof。