2025年英语四级作文评分细则与高分范文解析

Composition1Digital TVTelevisionhas alreadypresented avivid worldin front of thepeople.And now,with thedevelopment of modernsciences,a newtype of TV-digital TV has takenthe placeof traditionalTV.It notonly playsthe roleof theold-fashioned colorTV,but alsochallenges theold waysof TVstationbroadcasting programsand theviewers receiving.For example,one ex-change digital TVhasone part of thescreen whichcan showa menu,like news,TV programschedule,net worketc,while people can watchthe ordinaryTV programsatthe sametime.Digital TVcan alsoplay rolesof program-picking-up,advertisement-choosing,gameexchange play,internet online,shopping-on-TV,electric-commercial TV,remote TVeducationprogram,remote TVmedical care,long distanceworking office,TV bankingsystem,visualtelephone,and TV-conference,etc.Although digitalTV will be verypopular in the near future,and peoplewill benefita lot fromit,it willalso bevery beneficialto theTV producers.The TVbuyers willpay moreand spendmoretime infrontofthe newtoy.Also somepeople wouldcommit somenew kinds ofTVcrimes on them.The solutionis torestrict thedark sideand broadenthe brightside ofthe moderndigitalTV.Composition2作文评分样卷CET-4题目My IdealJob样卷分12——条理不清，思绪紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误.There areall kindsof jobon world.So peoplehave differentideal tojob.The teachertold methatshould havea ideal job whenFm achild.So I choice my ideal jobin allkindsof job.My idealjob isbecome aeconomicer.Because everyonehave itselfthink.So theiridealjob isdifferent.I choicethe jobbecause itfit to me.This jobhave moremoney.This isreal.But,ituseless toour countryimportant.Our countryis adeveloping country,need economicerverymuch.So,Ichoicethis job.My idealjob isbecome aeconomicer,so I musty learneconomic knowledgework hard.Learnknowledge fromteacher in the class.Learn knowledgefrom myselfafter class.Look atbook abouteconomic.Ready for my idealjob.use myknowledy abouteconomic inpractis.Become arealuseless men.样卷分25——基本切题体现思想不清晰，连贯性较差有较多的严重语言错误There area lot ofjob,such asteacher,work,doctor,nurse,driver andso on.Peoples idealjobare difficutly.Some want to be a teacher,teach a lot ofstudents,some want to be a bus-driver,helpother peoplego theplace wherethey intend to go,...What is my idealjob Sometimes I askmyself thequestion.I likemy teacchersvery much.So Ithink,My idealjob isteacher.I teach my knowlageto mystudent,they canbeauseful people.I think,I willteachmystudent thebooks andmany otherknowlage.So,now,I amstudyinghard andstudying otherknowlage.样卷分38一一基本切题，有些地方体现思想不够清晰，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相称多，其中有某些是严重错误Every peoplewhen hegrows up,will havea job.People have various aims.Some peoplewant toearn alot of money.Some peoplewant to be famous...So peoplehavevariousideal jobs:manager,doctor,actor,teacher andso on.I dontwant toearnalot of and to be famous.I hopeI can enjoy myjob.My idealjob isteacher.If Iwere a teacher,I wouldalways young.Because I will be able tooften staywith youth.Now Imust studyhard,and Iought tolearn alotfrommy teachersbesides knowledge.I shouldlearntheir virtue.Thus,I will bea good teacher.样卷分411一一切题体现思想清晰，文字连贯但有少许语言错误Each personhas hisor herown idealjob.For instance,men mightwant to be sailors,sportsmen,scientists,businessmen,etc.Meanwhile,many younggirls wouldlike to be nurses,filmstars,teachers,etc.To befrank,myidealjob isbusiness,that is,I wantto bea businesswoman.This jobbelongs tomenfor manycenturies.Although thereare morewomen inthis fieldthan everbefore,men arestillthe majority.Therefore Iwantto be goodexample forwomen.Now myspecialization isIndustry andForeign Trade.Im sureit cangive megreat helpandgood preparationformyfuture job.Whats more,I havejoined thestudent centreto getsomeexperiences aboutselling thing,which may be useful.On theother hand I knowthat myEnglishstill leftmuch to be improved,andImust andwill studyharder.样卷分514—一切题，体现思想清晰，文字通顺，连贯性很好基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误When we are askedabout what we wanttobein thefuture,we havedifferent answers.We maywanttobea doctor,a lawyer,a politician,a scientistor aworker andso on.My idealjobis tobean excellentteacher.This ideacame intobeing whenI wasvery young.Noone isborn withknowledge.If Iam a teacher,I will beable to turnan ignorantman into a learnedperson.I willteach whatI know to mystudents.SometimesIwill beable tolearn somethingfromthem becausestudents arealways activeand creative.So lifewill beinteresting andmeaningful.But Iknow it isnt easyfor metobea goodteacher.Being ateacher needsknowledge,patience,skills etc.First,Imuststudy veryhard sothat Iwillbeable toanswer mostof mystudents9questions.Second Imust learntobepatient I shall toleratestudents9slowness inacceptingnow knowledge.I shallnot berude to them.Third,Ishallhave goodskills.It doesntfollowthat ateacher withgreat knowledgecan makehimself understoodquickly andclearly.Perhaps studentsmay stillbe puzzledbecause theydont understandwhat hesays atall!So,you see,different jobsrequire differenttalents.Iwilllive up tothename of ateacher.Making FriendsFriendsare veryimportant inour dailylife.For onething,friends playan importantrole inonescharacter training.By makingfriends,one learnshow tolove,care and help other.Whilethose whogrow upwithout friendstendtobe lonelyand selfishand theyare anythingbuteasygoing.For another,when introuble,one canturn tohis friendsfor helpor advice.A truefriend should be loyal.Whoever canshare withus thejoys andsorrows oflife isourtrue friend.That isto say,he isproud ofus whenwe aresuccessful wealthy,and whenweareinneed poorhe isstill readyto supportus withoutbetraying usor desertingus.Just asthe sayinggoes,a friendin needis afriend indeed.Then,how to make friendsThe followingismypersonal opinion:above all,we shouldchoosegood peopletomakefriends withbecause makingbad friendsis worsethan havingnofriends,but thatdoes notnecessarily meanour friendsare perfect.Secondly,the onlyway tohavea friendistobe one.In otherwords,we should be honest,considerate andunderstanding,andtreat ourfriends theway wewanttobe treated.6On PayingUniversity TuitionAlthoughit has been arguedthat theuniversity tuition will adduptothe alreadyheavyburden ofthe parents,it isessential thatuniversity studentsin Chinapay theirown tuition.Since Chinais adeveloping countrywith thelargest populationin theworld,it isimpossiblefor thegovernment toallocate enoughfunds tosupport thedevelopment ofhigher education.Tocharge fortuitionwillpartly solvethe problem.The moneyraised couldbe usedto acceleratetheacademic researchesand toimprove thehousing conditionon thepart ofboth teachersandstudents.On theother hand,with tuitionbeing collected,Chinese universitieswill graduallyestablish asoundsystem ofscholarships,fellowships andloans,which willencourage studentsto workharderin theirchosen careerandhelpthose poorbut talentedstudents finishtheir undergraduatestudies.7My Attitudetoward KeepingPet DogsInthe pastfew years,the number of pet dogs hasincreased sorapidly in China thatit hasexceeded100million.Pet dogsmight begood companionsto some,while tothe others,they arenightmares.It seemstomethat thedisadvantages ofkeeping dogsoutweigh theadvantages.First,keeping petsis justa wasteof time and resources.When youare tiredof adays work,youwill haveto takecare of your dogsto keepthem clean.In addition,pet dogsconsume alotofgrainproducts eachyear.Second,the growingnumber ofpet dogshas causedserious hygieneproblem,which addsto theenvironmentalpollution inthe cities.Third,petdogsin publicplaces mayfrighten otherpeople;besides,a petdog bitemay leadtohydrophobia,a deadlydisease.In aword,keeping petdogs should be forbiddenor atleast restrictedinChina.8Self-respect andRespectability AreNot toBe ConfusedSelf-respect andrespectability arenot tobe confused.To haveSelf-respect meansto likeyourself,tobecomfortable aboutyour valuesand theway youpractice themin yourlife.It isentirelyan innerjudgment youmake ofyourself,which noone elsecan make ofyou.Respectability,on theother hand,is ajudgment othersmakeofyou.The personwithrespectability isone who,intheeyes ofthe others,adheres toconventional andaccepted values.For example,ateacherwith asense ofduty,responsibility andgentle dignityis oftenlooked uptoby hisstudents andthe womanwith respectabilitymayberegarded asagoodmother,a faithfulwifeofaconscientious careerwoman.Of thetwo judgments,self-respect ispsychologicallyhealthier andof utmostimportance.Only whenone showsself-respect canhe behonored bytheothers.Social Activities社会活动对我们大有裨益.但过多则有负面影响.因此，明智的做法是…

1.23Social ActivitiesSocialactivities benefitus inmany ways.To beginwith these activities canwiden ourknowledge,because we can learnwhatwe cannot learnfrom books.Second,these activitiescanserve asa bridgebetween theoryand practice,because wecan learnnowtoput ourbooktheoretical knowledgeinto practice.Lastly,these activitiescan enrichour experience,in that wecan getto knowthe societyso wellthatwecan adaptto iteasily whenwe graduate.Too manysocial activities,on theother hand,will causemany problems.Study is the mostimportanttask inour dailylife andsocial activitiescan only,and shouldalways bea supplement.If weinclude intheseactivities,we willnever beable tolearn knowledgewell.Consequently,wewont bewell-qualified students.Therefore,it issuggested thatwe studentsspend mostof ourtimeandenergy studying,andonce in a whileparticipate insome socialactivities.Only inthis waycan socialactivities benefitusa lot.12HealthAs theproverb says:No oneknows thevalue ofhealth untilhe losesit.In otherwords,nothing ismore valuablethan health.It isclear that health isthe foundationof onesfuture success.If youbecome sick,it isnearly impossibleto pursueyour careereffectively,much lessmake yourdreamscome true.On theother hand,if youare stoutand strong,you cango allout toovercomethe obstaclesthat lieahead ofyou.Now thatwe knowthathealth istheresource ofour energy,what shouldwe doto maintainandenhance our health First,we shouldexercise everyday tostrengthen ourmuscles.Second,wemight aswell keepgood hours.If weget upearly,wecanbreathe freshair andsee thesunrise.Thishabit cando wondersfor ouroutlook onlife.Third,there isa proverbthat says:Prevention isbetterthan cure.If wepay closeattention toourhealth,wecanavoid gettingsick,or atleast cureourselvesofadisease whileitisstill inits earlystage.In conclusion,health ismore importantthan wealth.Those whoare richbut losetheir healthareno morefortunate thanthose whoare poor.If youwant yourwish tocome true,healthisthemost importantpartofyour success.13Prospects ofPrivate Carsin ChinaAtpresent private cars inChina arefar lesspopular thanthose indeveloped countries.AsChina isstill adeveloping country,most peoples income isnot highenough toafford acar.Only asmallnumberofmovie stars,famous singers,rich managersand businessmencanenjoysuch aluxury.Besides,in denselypopulated cities,peoplecanhardly findany parkingspace evenif theycouldafford tobuy cars.But withthe rapiddevelopmentofour economy,peoplesincomehasbeensteadily increasing.Itis quitepossible thatinafew yearscity dwellerswith ahigher incomewillbeabletobuy carsontheir own.Then,they willnot besatisfied withtheir smallapartments incrowded cities.They willpreferto livein bighouses inopen suburbsthough theymay stillwork inthe city.As aresult,moreand morebicycle usersmay becomeowners ofprivatecarsinthenearfuture!This willgive risetoaseries ofproblems.For instance,the streetswillbejammed withcarsand trafficaccidents mayincrease accordingly.In addition,more carswill makegreater noiseandsend offmore poisonousgases intothe airThat willdo alotofharm topeoples health.To avoidsuchconsequences,effective measuresshouldbetaken inadvance.On theone hand,old narrowhighwaysshouldbebroadened andnow broadones shouldbe built;ontheother,the numberofcars importedor producedshouldbecontrolled;and ifpossible,new carswhich donot produceanypollution shouldbe developed.。