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世博会英文作文The World Expo in世博会The World Expo inThe World ExpoinShanghai willhost theWorldExpo.TheWorldExpo has a longhistory butit hasnever beenheld inAsia.So theWorldExpois anhonor for all ofthe Asians.ur governmenthas promisedthat itwill bethebest one.And Shanghai,asahost city,will havemore chancesto developquickly.As a student inShanghai,I shouldlearn Englishwell so that I can bea volunteerin theExpo to help foreignersknowmore aboutShanghai.怎样成为一种可爱的上海人How ToBe ALovely CitizenGreatchanges havetaken placein Shanghaiand moreand morepeople throughoutthe worldarefocusing theirattention onShanghai now.As acitizen ofShanghai,I feelI mustspare no efforts todomy bit.First,I decidetohelpplant moretrees tomake ourcity morebeautiful.Second,I shouldobeyseven nosand begood atlearning fromothers.Third,I shouldstudy hardsothatIcando somethingbetterfor mycity in the future.Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite acomposition on the topicCertificateCraze On Campus.You shouldwrite atleast120words,and baseyour compositiononthe outlinegiven in Chinese below:近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”1产生这一现象的原因2你的见解3Certificate CrazeOnCampus行文思绪本题属于提纲式文字命题提纲第点指出一种现象,提纲第点规定分析产生这种现象12的原因,提纲第点规定谈谈“我”对该现象的见解,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文3根据所给提纲,本文应包括如下内容描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取多种证书的重要原因;论述“我”对大学生“考证热”的见解高分范文Certificate CrazeOn CampusInrecent years,getting a certificate hasbecome anew crazeamong college students.[l]Justrandomly askastudenton campuswhat he or she is busydoing,
[2]quite possibly,you mayget theanswer
[3]that heor sheis preparing for acertificate
[2]of somekind.
[4]Why doesthis crazeappear|4|There aremainly tworeasons behindthis phenomenon.First,[5Jit isthe employmentpressurethat forcescollege students to getmore certificates.With theadmission expansionofcolleges,a lotmore graduateshave toface thefierce competitionin thejob market.How canone makehimselfmore competitiveMore certificatesat hand,maybe.Second,diploma andcertificates arestillimportant standards
[6]by which many employersmeasure apersons ability.In order to increasethequalifications fora job,the studentscompel themselvesto runfrom oneexam toanother.
[7]From mypoint ofview,we shouldbe morerational
[8]when it comes to certificates,
[9]sincecertificates
[2]do notnecessarily proveones ability.Being crazyin gettingcertificationsblindly is
[10]nothing butwasting time.To conclude,we shouldfocus onimproving ourability
[10]but notgetting acertificate ofno practicalvalue.【亮点点评]祈使句使用恰当意为“随意地,随机地”
[1]randomly限定词使用恰当,使文章体现更严谨,增强了说
[2]服力引导同位语从句,修饰
[3]that theidea设问句引出原因,轻易引起注后、
[4]o强调句型,此处是强调主语
[5]引导非限制性定语从句,充当介词
[6]which宾语用于引出“
[7]我’’的观点网”当谈至或IJ提及…时O引导原因状语从句,表达既定的原因,常译为“[9Jsince既然”只是,仅仅”“而不是[10FO佳句临摩佳句临摩离
1.You mayget theanswer thatheorsheispreparingforacertificateof somekind.婚率上升尽管令人难过,但却是不争的事实.佳句2Diploma andcertificates arestill importantstandards bywhichmanyemployersmeasure apersons ability.临摩在过去的三十年,发展中国家在许多方面都获得了很大的进步,其中包括健康水平的提高.佳句3From mypoint ofview,we shouldbe morerational whenitcomestocertificates.临摩我认为,对于我们来说,更重要的是尽量提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite acomposition onthetopicStudents,Pursuit for Famous Brands.You shouldwrite atleast120words,and baseyourcomposition onthe outlinegiven inChinese below:前诸多大学生都喜欢追求名牌目1产生这2种现象的原因是什么这一现3你怎样看待象Students Pursuit forFamousBrands行文思绪本题属于提纲式文字命题提纲第点指出一种现象,提纲第点规定分析产生这种现象12的原因,提纲第点规定谈谈“我”对该现象的见解,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文3根据所给提纲,本文应包括如下内容描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;论述“我”对大学生追求名牌的见解并提出提议高分范文Students9PursuitforFamous BrandsNowadaysmany college students liketo pursue famous brands.From clothesto mobilephones,even studyarticles likeelectronic dictionariesand pens,they[l]are inclinedto buyfamous brands.
[2]Moreover,many studentsfrom poorfamilies beginto
[3]follow thisconsumption trendas well.Thisphenomenon hasaroused wideattention.
[4]The followingreasons canaccount for college studentspreference forfamous brands.
[2]Aboveall,in manycollege studentseyes,a famousbrand isa symbolof sophisticationand taste.They expectothersto admiretheir highclass andgood taste.
[2]Whafs more,in modernsociety,famous brandstosome extent are equal to fashion,
[5]which hasa greatattraction to young college students.
[2]Besides,parents spoilingtheir childrenhelps formtheir badconsumption habit.
[2]As faras I am concerned,f6]it isirrational forcollege studentsto pursuefamous brands.
[3]After all,most offamous brandsare
[7]far beyond their consumptionability.
[3]Besides,
[8]it isnotfamous brandsbut apersons noblecharacter thatreally makeshim highclass.
[3]Therefbre,pursuing famous brands.[亮点[ir有⑵过渡衔接词语,follow表达“跟(趋原
[3]
[4]用于出定语为真
[5]which引导非性
[6]it为正主语形式主语定式
[7]“远远超过他们的消费能力”表达“超过・.・范围”beyond⑻强调句型,此处是而强调主语连接并列成分
[9]“not...but佳不是”
1.佳句It isirrational临摹对句临摹大学生来说,forcollegestudentstopursuefamousbrands.理解校园以外的世界是非常必要的collegestudentsshould attachmore importanceto cultivatinga goodcharacter
[9]rather than佳句
4.In modernsociety,famousbrandsto someextentareequaltofashion,which haveagreat attractiontoyoungcollegestudents.临摹在世界上或许没有什么游戏像赌博像赌博的那么有害和危险了,它常常会导致一种人破产,还会玷污人的心灵佳句
5.Therefore,collegestudentsshould attachmore importanceto cultivatinga goodcharacterrather thanpursuing famousbrands.临摹诸多同学常常玩电脑游戏,这是挥霍时间,而不是一种有益的放松方式Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite A Letter Applying fora Bank Loan.You shouldwrite atleast120words followingtheoutlinegiven belowinChinese1简朴简介个人状况阐2明申请助学贷款的原因、数额)保证理运用贷3会合款并表明还款的决心A LetterApplying fora BankLoan行文思绪本题属于情景式命题,规定写一封申请信根据所给提纲,本文应包括如下内容简朴简介自己的状况,表明写信目的申请助学贷款;阐明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理运用贷款并表明还款决心,最终表达感谢高分范文ALetterApplyingforaBankLoan Sep12th,To whomit mayconcern,I ama freshmanof LianheUniversity,[l]majoring in Applied Physics.I amwriting in the hopethatI mayobtain abank loanto supportmy studyinAppliedPhysics forthe followingfour years.My parentsare bothlaid-off workers,so its
[2]beyondtheirpower tofinance methrough thecollegeeducation.
[3]To makematters worse,my motherhas suddenlyfallen illand isexpecting amajoroperation.
[4]Therefore,
[5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family,I amcompelled to apply a RMB20,000bank loan.
[6]I giveyou mypromise thatthe loanwould beused properly.
[4]Meanwhile,ril
[7]spare noeffortto workhard bothinthestudy andmy futurecareer inorderto pay back the loan.I wouldbe greatlyobligedif myapplication isgranted.And Iam lookingforward tohearing fromyou soon.Sincerely yours,Song Xue【亮点点评】主修…”,目前分词作伴随状语[if
[2]“超过…的能力范围O使事情更糟糕的是[3;O过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密
[4]造「宾语+宾补的独立构[5with+句我保证…”,引导同位语从
[6]“that余力不遗
[7]“O句临摩佳佳句
1.To makematters worse,my motherhas suddenlyfallen illand isexpecting amajoroperation.临摩令人更困惑不解的是,诸多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了.佳句2Therefore,thecollegetuitionbecomingamuchheavierburdenonmyfamily,Iam临摩由于周围交通不便利,人们只好步行回家compelledtoapplyaRMB20,000bank loan..佳句3Meanwhile,Ill sparenoeffortto workhard bothinthestudy andmy futurecareer inordertopaybacktheloan.临摩全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举行奥运会。
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