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[转]英语四六级新话题新范文(为今年六月份的四六级准备)The World Expoin(世博会)英文作文The WorldExpoin(世博会)The WorldExpoinShanghai willhost theWorldExpo.TheWorld Expohas along historybut ithasnever beenheld inAsia.So theWorld Expoisan honorfor allof theAsians.()ur governmenthas promisedthat itwillbe thebest one.And Shanghai,as ahostcity,will havemore chancesto developquickly.As astudent inShanghai,Ishould learnEnglish wellso that I canbea volunteerin theExpo to helpforeigners knowmore aboutShanghai.How ToBe ALovely Citizen(怎样成为一种可爱的上海人)
[1]O“有…倾向”
[2]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、意义连贯
[3]follow表达“跟随,追求(趋势或时尚)”
[4]用于引出原因
[5]which引导非限制性定语从句
[6]it为形式主语,不定式为真正主语
[7]“远远超过他们的消费能力”beyond E表达“超过…范
[8]not-but强调句型,此处是强调主语连接并列成分
[9]“而不是”佳句临摹
1.It isirrational for佳句college students to pursuefamous brands.临摹对大学生来说,理解校园以外的世界是非常必要的
2.In modernsociety,佳句famous brandsto someextent are equal tofashion,which havea great attraction toyoungcollege students.临摹在世界上或许没有什么游戏像赌博像赌博的那么有害和危险了,它常常会导致一种人破产,还会玷污人的心灵
3.Therefore,college佳句students shouldattach moreimportance tocultivatinga goodcharacter rather thanpursuing famous brands.临摹诸多同学常常玩电脑游戏,这是挥霍时间,而不是一种有益的放松方式Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite A LetterApplying for a Bank Loan.You shouldwriteat least120words followingthe outlinegivenbelow in Chinese1)简朴简介个人状况2)阐明申请助学贷款的原因、数额3)A保证会合理运用贷款并表明还款的决心Letter Applying for a BankLoan行文思绪本题属于情景式命题,规定写一封申请信根据所给提纲,本文应包括如下内容简朴简介自己的状况,表明写信目的申请助学贷款;阐明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理运用贷款并表明还款决心,最终表达感谢高分范文ALetterApplyingforaBankLoan Sep12th,To whomit mayconcern,I ama freshmanof LianheUniversity,[l]majoring inApplied Physics.I amwritingin thehope thatI mayobtain abank loan tosupport mystudy inAppliedPhysics forthe followingfour years.My parentsare bothlaid-offworkers,so its
[2]beyond theirpowerto financeme throughthe collegeeducation.
[3]To makematters worse,mymother hassuddenly fallenill andisexpecting amajor operation.
[4]Therefore,
[5]with the collegetuition becominga muchheavier burdenonmy family,I amcompelled toapply a RMB20,000bank loan.
[6]I giveyou mypromisethat theloan wouldbe usedproperly.
[4]Meanwhile,P11
[7]spare noeffort towork hard both in the study andmy futurecareer in order to pay back theloan.Iwould begreatly obligedif myapplicationis granted.And I am lookingforwardto hearingfrom yousoon.Sincerely yours,Song Xue【亮点点评】
[1]“主修…”,目前分词作伴随状语
[2]“超过…的能力范围”
[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”
[4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密
[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立构造
[6]that“我保证…”,引导同位语从句
[7]“不遗余力”佳句临摩
1.To makematters worse,my佳句mother hassuddenly fallenill andisexpecting amajor operation.临摩令人更困惑不解的是,诸多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了2Therefore,thecollege.佳句tuition becominga muchheavier burdenonmy family,Iamcompelledto applyaRMB20,000bankloan.临摩由于周围交通不便利,人们只好步行回家3Meanwhile,I11spare no.佳句effort toworkhardbothin thestudyandmy futurecareerinordertopaybacktheloan.临摩全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举行奥运会Great changeshave takenplace inShanghaiand moreand morepeople throughouttheworld arefocusing theirattention onShanghainow.As acitizen ofShanghai,Ifeel Imust spareno effortsto domy bit.First,I decidetohelpplant moretreesto makeour citymore beautiful.Second,I shouldobey sevennos andbe goodatlearning fromothers.Third,I shouldstudyhard sothatIcan dosomethingbetter formy cityinthefuture.Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite acompositionon thetopic Certificate Craze On Campus.You shouldwrite atleast120words,andbase your composition on the outlinegiven inChinesebelow:1近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”2)产生这一现象的原因3)你的见解Certificate CrazeOnCampus行文思绪1本题属于提纲式文字命题提纲第点指出2一种现象,提纲第点规定分析产生这种现象的3原因,提纲第点规定谈谈“我”对该现象的见解,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文根据所给提纲,本文应包括如下内容描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取多种证书的重要原因;论述“我”对大学生“考证热”的见解高分范文CertificateCrazeOn CampusInrecent years,getting acertificatehas becomea newcraze amongcollege students.
[1]Just randomlyask astudenton campuswhat heor sheis busydoing,
[2]quite possibly,you mayget theanswer
[3]that heor sheis preparingfor acertificate
[2]of somekind.
[4]Why doesthiscraze appear
[4]There aremainly tworeasonsbehind thisphenomenon.First,
[5]it istheemployment pressurethat forcescollege students toget morecertificates.With theadmission expansionof colleges,a lotmore graduateshave toface thefiercecompetition inthe jobmarket.Howcan onemake himselfmore competitiveMorecertificates athand,maybe.Second,diploma andcertificates arestillimportant standards
[6]by which manyemployers measure a person s ability.Inorder toincrease thequalifications forajob,the studentscompel themselvestorun fromone examto another.
[7]From mypoint ofview,we should bemore rational
[8]when itcomesto certificates,
[9]sincecertificates
[2]do notnecessarily proveones ability.Being crazyin gettingcertificationsblindly is
[10]nothing butwastingtime.To conclude,we shouldfocuson improvingour ability
[10]but notgettinga certificateof nopracticalvalue.【亮点点评】
[1]randomly祈使句使用恰当意为“随意地,随机地”
[2]限定词使用恰当,使文章体现更严谨,增强了说服力
[3]that the引导同位语从句,修饰ideao
[4]设问句引出原因,轻易引起注意
[5]强调句型,此处是强调主语
[6]which引导非限制性定语从句,充当介词宾语
[7]用于引出“我”的观点⑻“当谈到或提及…时”
[9]since引导原因状语从句,表达既定的原因,常译为“既然”
[10]“只是,仅仅”“而不是”佳句临摩
1.You mayget theanswer thathe佳句or sheis preparingforacertificate ofsomekind.临摩离婚率上升尽管令人难过,但却是不争的事实2Diploma andcertificates are,佳句still importantstandards bywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson sability.临摩在过去的三十年,发展中国家在许多方面都获得了很大的进步,其中包括健康水平的提高3From mypoint ofview,we.佳句shouldbemore rationalwhen itcomes tocertificates.临摩我认为,对于我们来说,更重要的是尽量提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite acompositionon thetopic Students Pursuit for FamousBrands.You shouldwrite atleast120words,and baseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)目前诸多大学生都喜欢追求名牌2)产生这种现象的原因是什么3)你怎样看待这一现象Students Pursuitfor FamousBrands行文思绪1本题属于提纲式文字命题提纲第点指出2一种现象,提纲第点规定分析产生这种现象的3原因,提纲第点规定谈谈“我”对该现象的见解,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文根据所给提纲,本文应包括如下内容描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;论述“我”对大学生追求名牌的见解并提出提议高分范文StudentsPursuitforFamousBrandsNowadays manycollegestudentsliketo pursuefamous brands.From clothestomobile phones,even studyarticles likeelectronicdictionaries andpens,they[l]are inclinedto buyfamous brands.
[2]Moreover,many studentsfrom poorfamiliesbegin to
[3]follow thisconsumptiontrend aswell.This phenomenonhasaroused wideattention.
[4]The followingreasons canaccountfor collegestudents preferenceforfamous brands.
[2]Above all,in manycollegestudents eyes,a famousbrand isasymbol ofsophistication andtaste.They expectothers toadmire theirhighclass andgood taste,
[2]What smore,inmodern society,famous brandsto someextentareequalto fashion,
[5]which hasagreatattractionto youngcollegestudents.
[2]Besides,parents spoilingtheirchildren helpsform theirbadconsumption habit.
[2]As faras Iam concerned,
[6]it isirrationalfor collegestudentstopursuefamous brands.
[3]After all,most offamousbrands are
[7]far beyondtheirconsumption ability.
[3]Besides,
[8]it isnotfamousbrandsbut apersonsnoblecharacter thatreally makeshim highclass.
[3]Therefore,collegestudentsshouldattach moreimportance tocultivating agoodcharacter
[9]ratherthanpursuingfamous brands.【亮点点评】。
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