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高分作文的写作模式(六级)四六级写作技法和方略对应法
1.由于四六级写作都是提纲式写作,有时,我们可以采用对应法按照中文提纲分别写成三段如年月份考题966提纲)有人认为淡水是取之不尽的(雨水、河水、井水……)1)实际上淡水是非常紧缺的(人口增长、工业用水增长)2)我们应当怎么办?3Global Shortageof FreshWaterGenerally,people think that fresh water is inexhaustible.Every yearthere isenough rain.And there is plentyof fresh water in the rivers andlakes.Whats more,we have a lot of undergroundwater.Actually,fresh waterisin a shortsupply.Due to the rapidpopulation increase,freshwaterconsumption remainsgreat.Besides,with thedevelopment of industry,more wateris needed.Moreover,a lot of ourrivers andlakes have been sopolluted thatwater from them isundrinkable.We musttake somemeasures tosolve theproblem of water shortage.First,population growthshould beslowed downto reducefreshwater demand.Second,pollution shouldbe controlledto purifyfreshwaterin theriversandlakes.What ismost important,we shouldcherishevery dripofwaterin ourdaily life.再如年月份试题951(提纲)有人认为钱是幸福之本)1source of happiness)有人认为金钱是万恶之源())我的见解2root ofevil3Some think that money is the source of happiness.Once theyhave money,they willenjoy everything.They canuse themoney theyhaveto buy,a beautifulhouse oreven awife.Some othersthinkthatmoney is the rootof allevil.Due to the greed for money,people willdo variouskinds ofevil things,such asstealing,robbing oreven murder.Money caneasily changea kind,honest maninto acruel,cunning woe.In myopinion,both of the above-mentioned viewpointsgo to an extreme.Money itselfis neithergood norevil.It alldepends onhow welookat it.We cannot denythe importanceof moneyin themodern society.Meanwhile,we shouldnot ignorethe factthat somethingcan notbebought bymoney,such asfriendship,true loveand soon.这两例都是采用了对应写作方式,将提醒中的三句分别扩展成三段,三段之间互相衔接,构成一种完整的篇章调整法
2.尽管是提纲式写作,提纲所提醒的只是文章所要包括的重要内容,却不是文章的构造模式,一般状况下,同学们应根据英语文章的类型,重新安排文章如上面有关“钱”的一种写作,按照英语的体现习惯,最佳是加上一种引子What is money To this question,different people hold differently.Some thingmoney isthe sourceofhappiness,while someregard it asthe rootof allevils.As faras I am concerned,they bothhave theirreasons Those who considermoney as thesourceofhappinessargue thatmoneymeans massivehouse,beautiful clothes,or luxuriouscars,and canenable themand theirfamilies livecomfortably.They evenbelievethat moneycan bringpower,friendship,and love.But due tothetemptation ofmoney,there are many peoplewho becomethieves,robbers,ormurderers.It is also out of thegreedfor money thatsome officialsforget theirduty andcause enormouslosses tothe country,so somepeoplethink thatmoney isthe rootof allevil andsuggest thatwe keepaway frommoney.In fact,moneyismerely amedium ofexchange.It may bring youhappiness;it maylead youto alife ofcrime.Whether it is goodor bad
二、首段和尾段的写作depends onhow it is used.上一讲中我们简介了段落的扩展模式,也就是说,我们已经理解了文章中间一部分的论述模式根据四六级写作的特点,一般首段和尾段都要自己补上,那么怎么才能写好首尾段呢,下面我简介一下,首尾段的写作方式首段的写作
1.首段的写作方式一般为运用事实性信息、调查或故事等引出话题,)导入主题,然后提出自己的观点,也就是文章的论点首段开篇的方式常见的有2)谚语法1由于谚语一般已经被大家所接受,用谚语提出自己的观点也轻易被读者所接受As thesaying goes,Money makesthe marego,but there aremanythings we cant buywith money,such astime andtrue love....)定义法2定义法是通过对文章中的关键词做某些简朴或正面或背面的解释,限定其范围,这样比较有助于引出主题Practice makesperfect is an oldsaying.It tellsus that it doesnot matterif weare clumsyat doingsomething.As longas wekeep ontryingand practicing,we willdo a good jobin theend.)提问法3通过提问一种或一连串的问题,可以激发读者的爱好,从而引出主题a.Do youhave manyfriends Arethey similarto youor differentfrom youWhich kind of friendsdo youprefer b.What is agoodstudentDifferent peoplemay havedifferent answersto thisquestion.)概括法4概括法指先总结文章内容所波及的现实状况,然后引出主题In recentyears,with the development ofscience andtechnology,the Internet has comeinto more and morehomes andis playinga moreand more important role in our workand daily life.It has become amust to us,but at the sametime,Internet has also broughtwith ita lotofproblems.)故事法5故事法指用简朴有趣的故事激发读者的爱好,从而提出自己的观点如下面叮)引语法s Stressa BadThing”6Just aseating withoutliking harmsthe health,learning withoutinterest harmsthe memoryand cantbe retained,From Vinciswords wecan see howimportant it is tomotivate thestudents inlanguage learning.)调查法7为了得到读者的承认,文章的开始可以引出调查数据等,借以提出主题,如下面的)和“Is Stressa BadThing”1“Can SchoolchildrenStart的))假设法Using the Internet”4°8假设法是指通过假设提出一种选择,交代文章要波及的问题,从而提出文章的主题Suppose youwere offeredtwo jobs,one ishighly-paid butrather demanding,the otheris lessdemanding,but poorly-paid,which wouldyouprefer...)综合法9详细写作时,同学们没有必要拘泥于一种方式,可以将上述措施总和起来首段示例1题目Is Stressa BadThing提纲)有人胆怯压力1)有人认为压力并不是一件坏事2)我的见解3I cantstand thepressure andcompetition/1explained onefriend ofmine when asked whyhe decidedto quithis highly-paid butdemandingposition in his companyrecently.My friendmay havehis ownreasons,but I dont thinkhis decision is wise in reality.It istrue thatmy friendscase is not unique.In thelast few years quite a number of men and womenhave chosento dosomething lesscompetitiveat thecost of a comfortable,easy lifea highly-paid job can obtain.They areafraid thatthe stressesand strainsof workwill robthemof joyand happinessand dothem harmboth physicallyand mentally.In fact,however,stress isntthe badthing itis oftensupposed to be.Unlessit getsout ofcontrol,a certainamount ofstress isvital toprovide motivation and challenge,and to give purposeand significanceto anotherwisemeaningless,idle life.People understress tendto expresstheir fullrange ofpotential and to actualizetheir ownpersonal worth-the veryaimof ahuman life.Stress is a naturalpart ofeveryday life and there isnoway to avoid it.What we can dois todevelop ouradaptive abilitiesto dealwith itratherthan toescape fromit.就这一标题而言,根据所提醒的提纲,首段的写作还可以采用下列方式)1According toa recent survey,in thelast fewyears,quiteanumber ofyoung peoplehave chosento quittheir demandingbut highly-paid jobs.Although they may have their ownrespective reasons,Idont think theirdecisionis wiseinreality.)2Which jobdo youprefer,a highly-paid butvery competitiveposition or a poorly-paid but also lessdemanding jobYou maychoose thelatterand haveyour ownreasons,but Idontthinkthis choiceiswiseenough whateverreasons.)3Faced witha hardand demandingtask,peoples attitudevaries widely:some try toavoidit and others regarditasa challengeto their平庸之辈.abilities.In factthe choicewe makebetween flightor fightmake thedifference betweenleaders andmediocrities首段示例2标题Can SchoolchildrenStart Usingthe Internet提纲伴随科技的发展,网络越来越普及;1网络有其长处但也有缺陷;2我的观点3根据上面的提醒,首段可有下列几种方式1Nowadays,using the Internethasbecome afashion.Many parentsbegin toteach theirchildren to use the Internet.However,there arediverseopinions onthis.Some thinkit wise,but Idont agreewith them.2Today,the Internetis becomingmoreand more common.It beginsto playa moreand more important rolein our society and life.Its sousefulthat mostadults arelearning howto useit.What aboutchildren Ofcourse theycan start using it.3Today,with thedevelopmentofscience andtechnology,the Internetis beginningto playa moreand moreimportant rolein our life.Moreand morepeople arestarting touse the Internet,including schoolchildren.However,I think schoolchildren aretoo youngto start using theInternet.4According toa recentsurvey,Internet usersare becomingyounger andyounger,and Internetbars havebecome aresort forschoolchildrenwho login tochat orplay games.Faced withthis phenomenon,many peopleargue formeasures toprevent schoolchildrenfrom using theInternet,and I think theyhavetheirreasons.结论段的写作
2.结论一般采用归纳概括、主题重述或提提议等方式常见的方式有重述或总结主题1重述主题指于结论处以此外一种体现方式重中主题,与首段照应Families offerus warmthand care.Friends giveus strengthand horizon.They bothhelp usunderstand the world asitis.Both of them arethedearest partsin ourlife.提出提议2Since postcardsdo usmore harmand good,since wehave manyother waysto conveyour feelingsand promoteour friendship,I hopeeveryonewill takeactions nowto stopusing postcards.概括总结3As we canseefromtheabove,living in the suburbwe canstay awayfrom pollution,lead aneasy leisuretime,and needntinvest toomuchmoney,so Iprefer living in thesuburb toliving in the city.引用名人名言4In particular,I enjoywhat FrancisBacon saidStudies servefor delight,for ornamentand forability.综合法5与首段同样,结论段也可以是多种措施的综合一般说来,总结加提议的比较多尾段示例1如”网络”的结论段可以如下所示10As weall know,the nextcentury will become one of theInternet.Internet will become moreand moreimportant inboth ourdaily lifeandour work.So Isuggest thatschoolchildren should startusingtheInternet.11So Ithink schoolchildrennot onlycan startusingtheInternet,butalsoshouldstartusing itThey aresure to benefit alot fromthe internet.12Internet canhelp ourchildren know the world,get usefulinformation andenrich theirknowledge.So Ithinkschoolchildrencan startusingthe Internet.13In aword In conclusion/In summary/To sumup/In short,theInternetis playinga moreandmoreimportantrolein ourlifeanditis转承语的使用helpful forchildrens growthboth physicallyand mentally.It isbetter for them tostartusingtheInternetas earlyas possible.
3.根据不一样的段落规定,选择合适的转承语比较对照1比较like A,B...Just asA,B...A,similarly/correspondingly,likewise/in thesame way,B...对照Unlike/Contrary to/As opposedto A,B...A however/on the other hand/in contrast,B..zA B,however/on theother hand/in contrast,...列举2First/Second Next/Third Then/Last Finally,...The fist/The second/The third/The lastThe finalFirstly/Secondly/Thi rdly/Last FinallyOne/Another/Still another/The lastThe most essential/most important/primary/chief is...因果3asaresult,consequently,therefore,hence,so,because ofthis,for thesereasons,duetothe factthat起承转合常用语4”起”的常用语1When askedabout/When itcomes to/Faced with...some peoplezclaim/think/argue/believe thatbut/while others...differentlyNowadays there is much/general discussionas to....With thedevelopment/improvement/growth of...,Now,itiscommonly/widely/increasingly believed/thought/held/acknowledge thatAccording toa recentsurvey/investigation/poll,...Have youever thought/wondered...Suppose...As thesaying goes,...承“的常用语2”Thosewhohold....It istrue that...To besure..First/Firstly...The main/leading/underlying/root/primary/chief/essential....”承接上文”的方式与文章的段落构造有关,比较的与列举的不一样,与举例的也不一样同学们应根据详细的状况选择合适的承接语“转”的常用语3It soundslike agoodattractive ideasuggestion,but theyfail tounderstand see,noticeThere isprobably an element of truth in the arguments ideas,but theyignore amoreimportantbasic fact...Closer examination analysis,however,suggests showsthat thisargument claim,idea maynot beborne ofsupported by the followingevidencefacts,examples,statistics.局限Close carefulexaminationanalysisof theseargumentsideas,suggestions,however,would revealsuggest,prove howflimsy性信的,不严密靠不住的没有根据的fallacious,groundless theyare.有说月艮力However logicalsound,forcible thesearguments may be,they dontmake senseonly skimthe surfaceof theproblemwhen...is viewedtheotherway takeninto consideration.As opposedto Contrarytothewidely commonly,generally heldidea belief,view,new studiesfacts challengefail tojustify theopinionview.Good/Superior/Wonderful asit hasits owndisadvantages/it bringsits ownproblems.They may be rightaboutbut theyseem toneglect/fail tomention/take intoaccount...In allthe discussionand debateoverone important/basic factis ignored/overlooked/neglected.It istrue that/Admittedly,but itis unlikely/doesnt follow/doesn^mean that...There isanelementoftruthin thesearguments/statements,but theyignore adeeper andmore basic/essential/important fact/factor...In manycases,however,...As faras..is concerned,...合”的常用语4”Experience/Evidence/AII thefacts suggest/show/demonstrate/indicate that...From whathas beendiscussed above/Taking intoaccount allthese factors,we maysafely draw/reach/come to/arrive/the conclusion that...Inconclusion/To sumup/In summary/In short/To conclude....
三、四六级作文的谋It isimportant/necessary/essentiaI thateffective/proper/powerful actions/measure/remedies shouldbe takento...篇布局谋篇布局()1-将提醒的第一句作为文章的第一句-将提醒的第三句作为第一段的最终一句-将提醒的第二句展开成文章的中心段落-结论段归纳概括,提出提议例证标题City Lifeand SuburbanLife提纲)近来几年越来越多的人迁往近郊居住1)都市生活和近郊生活各有特点2)比较起来,我喜欢的是……3In recentyears moreandmorehomes arebeing pushedoutwards asthe activitiesof business,government andpleasure tendto beconcentratedin thecenters of the cities.Although mostpeople arereluctant tomove tothe outskirtsof thecities,I feellike livinginthesuburbs.It istrue thatthe citycan providemuch convenienceand entertainment,the veryreason whypeople cantbear topart withcity life.But thecostfor theprivilege of livinginthe cityis alsohigh.Whats more,thereismore gasand noisepollution inthe city,which isfull ofpetrol fumesand toxic gases,torn bythe roarof busesand taxies,and throngedceaselessly bygreat crowds.In contrast,living nearthe countrysideone canenjoythe cleanatmosphere,the closenessto natureand thequiet,peaceful surroundings-the essentialsofahealthy life.Although livingin thesuburbsone may suffer a little discomfortbrought aboutbythenecessity oftraveling milesto workevery day,it meansnearly nothingwhenthinking of the highcost andheavily pollutedenvironment of the city.The newsuburban lifeis fastbecoming apredominant patternoflivingin mostcities;and with the improvementof trafficand theperfectionof services,it willprove tohold greatsuperiority overcity life.(谋篇布局)2-根据话题加引段,于段尾提出自己的观点(也就是提醒中的第三句规定内容)-将提醒的第一句和第二句写成文章的中心段落-根据文章的论述重点,总结全文,提出措施等例证标题My Viewon CollegeStudents Part-time Jobs提纲)有人认为大学生做兼职工作很有好处;1)然而,有人认为大学生做兼职工作弊多利少;2)我的见解3Nowadays,an increasingnumberofcollege studentsare doingpart-time jobs.People holddifferent opinionsonthat.Some peoplethinkthatthere aremany advantagesfor college students tohave part-time jobs.Firstly,part-time jobsoffer themopportunitiesto applywhat theyhave learnedin schooland demonstratetheir abilities.Secondly,it enablesthem tobe moreindependent oftheirfamily andbuilds uptheir self-confidence.Thirdly,part-time experiencesmaybe of greathelp totheir futurecareers.Finally,part-time jobscanbroaden theircollege livesand helpthem knowmore of themselves andsociety.However,some otherpeopleholdthat doingpart-time jobshas moredisadvantages.The mainjob ofcollegestudentsis tostudy,not towork.If theyhave part-time jobs,they mayhave toreduce theirtime forsleep,rest,study and activities.Working severalhours aday consumesalotoftime andenergy andmay affecttheir studies.As aresult,they mayfind ithard toadjust towhat thecollege expectsofthemas wellastheir employersexpect,and finally,theymayfall behindor fail in theirstudies.In myopinion,students canchoose totake upa part-time jobaccording totheir ownsituation.Themostimportant thingfor themis tokeepa goodbalance betweenpart-time jobsand hisstudy.(谋篇布局)3-将提醒的第一句和第二句合为第一段,于段尾提出自己的观点;•阐明自己的理由;-结论段总结全文例文标题How toAchieve Success提纲)有人说成功重要靠运气;1)有人则认为成功重要靠勤奋,与运气毫无关系;2)我的观点3Some peoplesay thekey to success isthe luck,while othersclaim itis hardwork.As faras Iam concerned,therearemany factorscontributingto successand thethree fundamentalones arediligence,devotion andperseverance.Diligence isthe firstkey factorto success.Diligence helpsus removeignorance,overcome difficulties,and enlightenour minds.It makesafool wise,and apoor manrich.Devotion isanother factorto success.Whatever wedo,we mustlove itand do it wholeheartedly.Only whenweset ourminds on the job,can wedoitwell.Furthermore,perseverance,orastrong will,isthelast keytosuccess.Without astrong will,weare likelytogiveup whenwe meetsome difficulties,let aloneperform wonderfuldeeds.To conclude,all greatmen achievesuccess throughdiligence,devotion andperseverance.Just asthe famoussaying goes,No pains,nogains,Where thereisawill,thereisa way.(谋篇布局)4将提醒中的第一句做为第一段主题句,然后拓展开将提醒的第二句做为第二段的主题句,拓展阐明将提醒的第三句拓展成第三段,但注意与上面两段的照应,使其有总揽全文的作用例文标题On HousingReform提醒)旧房屋政策的弊端;1)房改带来的好处;2)我怎么办?3The oldhouse-allotting policyhad atleast twodisadvantages.First,the governmentspent alotofmoney buildingsome houses,but thesehouseswere allottedto peoplefree ofcharge.Thus,the governmentwould haveno moneyto buildmore housesfor peoplewho badlyneededthem.Second,the personswho werein powercould getmore housesthan thosewho werepowerless.This wasquite unfair.On thecontrary,the newsystem ofhouse allotmentmaybringabout manynew things.For example,the governmentwill havemore moneywhichcan be used inhouse construction.So,the housingindustry candevelop morequickly.Besides,because houseswill besold topeople,thechances theyget will be equal.When Ienter thesociety,I wouldget aloan fromthe bankto buymy ownhouse.Then,I wouldtrytopay backthe loanintheshortest timepossible.After that,I wouldproudly claim:Now,Iamthe masterof thathouse.(谋篇布局)5将提醒中的第一句作为文章的第一段,并提主题;举例阐明自己的观点;结论重述主题例文标题On Punctuality提醒)准时在现代生活中仍然很重要;1)试举例阐明2In ourmodern life,punctuality isoneofthe mostimportant qualitiesthat anyperson shouldpossess.Punctuality demonstratesthat you arereliable andcan betrusted withresponsibilities.Besides,it canmake aperson agood man.And ifyouarenot punctual,you mayinjure others.川We shouldpractice punctualityfor the sake ofothers,as wellas ourselves.He whois punctualw accomplishfar moreinaday thanhewho isnot so.Washington wasremarkable forthis virtue.His motherhad taughthim,whenaboy,or havecertain hoursfor everyemployment,andtodo everythingattheappointed time.This habithelped,inhislater life,to makehim agood man.Without it,he couldnever havemadesuch success.Neglect ofpunctuality mayinjure bothto othersandtooneself.An applicantmaybeturned awayjust for thesakeof beinglate fortheinterview.Students cominglate forclass willundoubtedly interruptthe teacher.Therefore,we oughtnever tosay It is onlyonce---1will notdoso againto excuseourselves;otherwise we willbetardier andwewillfailinour society.四参照范文In aword,if weform thehabit ofpunctuality atschool,it willbeofgreat advantagetousinourfuture life.近来几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍为何大学生打工
1.Why CollegeStudents Takea Part-time Joba.b.大学生打工的意义c.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about25percent ofChinese collegestudents nowhold a part-time ortemporary job,compared withnearlynone10years ago,and thisfigure increasesto72percent duringsummer vacations.College studentsare workingas tutors,salespersons,engineers anddoing whateverwork theycan find.Why dothey wantodd jobs---jobs usuallyrequiring littleskill andknowledge Theprimary reason,Ithink,ismoney.Feeling thefinancialpressure asbooks,movies andbus fareshave allgone upin price,thereisscarcely ayoung boyor girlwho doesnot want to earnalittlemoneyto helpcover theincreasingly highercollege costs,and atbest saveenough togo travelingor buythings theyhave longdesired.In thisway theyhopetobeeconomically independentand avoidthe indignityof havingto askformoneyagain andagain.Besides theywanttogain someexperienceintheways ofsociety.Students growingup fromnursery schoolto collegeonly knowabout booksand havetrouble dealingwithrealities.Working onapart-time basiscan providethem witha rareopportunity toknowtheoutside worldand preparethem fora futurecareer.The significancefor collegestudents ofdoing apart-time jobmeans morethan moneyand experience.It willbroaden theiroutlook andexerta profoundinfluence on their personalityandlife.
2.The JobI likeBest我最喜欢的工作是……我为何要选择这个工作结论a.b.c.In thepast threeyears ofmy collegelife I have neverceased tothink whatkindofwork Ishall takeup upongraduation.Although myideasare notconsistent,I havenow decidedonacollege teacheras my lifelong career.A varietyof reasonshave ledme tochoose thisoccupation overother morelucrative ones.First,teaching islearning.To make my lecturesmore constructiveand stimulating,Ihaveto readmore books,explore newknowledge andgaina betterunderstanding ofthe world---the verything Ienjoy inmylife.Second,teaching meansfreedom andindependence.As ateacher,Im freetousemy ownideas andmakemyown decisions,a privilegenot everyonecan have,even thosewith highly-paid positions.Finally,I liketeachingbecause itoffers acertain peace of mind.No morerushing tocatch amorning bus,no moreanxiety toplease aboss,no moreworriesabout yourpaycheck whichis steady,if nothandsome.Nothing,not evena bigsalary,can equalfortheopportunity tocontinue learning,the satisfactionof beingyour ownboss,andagentle(归纳全文,强化全文的中心论点)有人认为处理能源危机的方式是厉行节省有人则认peaceoflife.
3.How toSolve theEnergy Problema.b.为开发新的能源是最佳的措施我的见解c.When askedabout oneofthebiggest problemstoday,many peoplesay that an energycrisis isapproaching andis threateningmankindssurvival.They areafraid thattheworldis likelyto runoutofoil andmetals andto runshort offood inthe nearfuture.Tothisproblem,most countriesrespond with the demandfor morerigid conservationof ournatural resources.Indeed,this isurgentlyneeded,forthepresent wasteof energyin industrialand personalconsumption isso seriousthat ithasbecomehabitual andtraditional.If thenaturalresources areused economically,we cancertainly slowdown thepresent drainonthelimited energysupply.However,conservationalone isnot theanswer.Itisobvious thateven ifwecansave muchenergy,wecanonly delaythe energycrisis,but cannotsolve theproblemcompletely.However abundantcertain naturalresources maybe,they cannotreproduce themselvesand arebound tobeusedup ultimately.Soin thelong run,we mustdevelop newsources ofenergy insteadof merelyconserving theknown,limited supplies.Man ishighly adaptableand creative,and sincehe isable totap suchresources asoil andmetal,why canthedevelopand harnesssolarenergy,nuclear energyandotherunknown energyresources
4.The Internet什么是英特网英特网的作用英特网对社会的影响d.b.C.The InternetThelater partofthe1990s findsthe worldstheInternetbecome fashionablein peoplesdailylife.The Internetisanetwork ofthousandsof networks,linking schools,universities,businesses,government agencies,libraries andmillions ofindividuals.Something likeinformation superhighways,the internetcan bringmany conveniencesinto theschool,home andoffice.College studentscancheck thecard catalogueof Libraryof CongressintheUnited Statesto finishtheir papers.Housewives cando shoppingand paybills withoutleavingtheir homes.Businessmen cansign acontract andland anorder throughelectronic media.Patients canreach theworlds leadingauthoritiesand expertsonthedisease theymaysufferfrom.menandwomen canhaveaconversation withpeople allover theworld bysendingand receivingelectronic mail.With abasic computerand modemany individualcan callup informationabout almostanything fromalmostanywhere andalmost anytime.The Internetexerts sucha profoundeffect onourlifethatitrevolutionizes theway ofpeoples livingand thinking.
5.Advantages and家用电脑的普及家用电脑的好处家用电脑带来的问题Disadvantages ofHome Computersa.b.c.Just afewyearsago theidea ofhaving acomputer inones homeseemed far-fetched formost Chinese.Now,however,withtheadventzand popularityofthe home computer,its advantagesand disadvantageshavebeena subjectof discussion.There isno doubtthat likeTV,computers benefitpeople hugely.With the computer,thehomewill becomea library,a school,an officeandan entertainmentcenter.All transactions,from bankingto shopping,willbeperformed electronicallyand allinformation,form trainschedules todiscountprice goods,willbeas closeasthepress ofa key.In additionto providingus manyofthefacilities andservices wenow musttravel toobtain,withtheInternet,the computerwill evenlet uscommunicate directlywith otherhomes andwith informationsources worldwide.Despitethe increasein efficiencyand conveniencegenerated bythecomputer,the changesit bringscould verywell leadto potentiallyadverseconsequences.For example,as nearlyall activitiescould beconducted inthe comfortof ourhomes,we couldall becomehermitlike,never feelinganyneed toleave thehouse.This wouldbe unfortunatebecause ourchildren especiallywill becomeso addictedto computersthat theymightnever beexposed toeither peerpressure orsocial interaction.Unquestionably,the challengeofthehome computermeans weall shouldconsider howwecancontrol it,so thatit wontcontrol us.有人赞成实行安乐死.有人反对安乐死合法化我的见解
6.Should EuthanasiaBe Legalizeda.bc.Euthanasia,a quiteand easydeath,or mercykilling aswe callit recentlyhas madethe headlinesfrequently.Many peopleapplaud itandargue thateuthanasia shouldbe legalized.As ispointed out,to practiseeuthanasia canbenefit boththe patientand hisfamily.To aterminally illperson whois sufferingexcruciatingpains dayand nightor livinglike avegetable,tobeallowed toend his life painlesslyisagood release.To hisfamily itisalsoa bigreliefconsidering thefinancial andemotional drainon themthat havingto sustainhislifeentails.However,the legalization of euthanasiamay alsobringwith itproblems oursociety hasnot previouslyfaced.Is ithumane,for example,thataterminally illpatient isthus causedto feelguilty forremainingalive becausehe doesnot wantto dieIs itwise thata patientis killedalive simplybecause ofa mistakenterminal diagnosisAnd isitpossible thateuthanasia couldbe takenadvantage offor someulterior oreven criminalpurposesSince thelegalizationofeuthanasia willraise serousmoral andsocial issues,the decisionoursocietymakes abouteuthanasia willundoubtedlyhave tremendousconsequences insociety.同学们,写作能力的培养非一朝一夕的事情,不只是掌握某些固定的模式,某些常用的句式,背几篇范文就能处理的问题不过,在临考之际,我就我所能给同学们归纳出了四六级写作的某些规律,和常用方略,但愿能给同学们某些启示,某些协助祝同学们考个好成绩。
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