英语短文写作句子改错练习-高级综合英语含答案

2英语短文写作句子改错练习1指代方面.Sometimes teacherswill informstudents of1the heavyburden theyhave to bear.改为:Sometimes teacherswill informstudents of the heavyburdenthe studentshave to bear.People havebeen fightingagainst the2influence of TV commercials,but itoftenproves useless.改为:People havebeen fightingagainst theinfluenceofTVcommercials,whichoften provesuseless.Television provides us with a vivid,colorful3world,which enablesus toenjoy lifethoroughly.Television,which enablesus toenjoy life改为:thoroughly,providesuswithavivid,colorful world.

2.修饰方面To keepthe airclean,we mustmove1the factorieswhich giveoffpoisonous gasesto the countryside.改为:To keepthe airclean,we mustmovethe factorieswhich giveoff poisonousgases,to thecountryside.2Without television,people cantgetinformation whichcomes from other partsofthe worldimmediately.Without television,people cant改为:immediately getinformation whichcomesfromotherparts ofthe world.3At theage ofsix,my fatherbegan toteachme English.When Iwas six,my fatherbegan to改为:teach meEnglish.Having carriedout4economic reforms in ourcountry,peoples livingstandardhas greatlyimprove改为:Having carriedout economicreformsinour country,people havegreatly improvedliving standard.5To improveones writingskill,regularpractice isessential.To improveones writingskill,we改为need regularpractice.平行方面

3.1While wereduce thenumber ofvehicles,the speed of trafficcan beincreased.While thenumber ofvehicles isreduced,改为:the speed of trafficcan beincreased.fThe price of milkisn t2higher thangrain.1The price of milkisn1higher than that改为:of grain.3The energyproblem iscurrently ofgreatconcern to a nation,the world,and humanbeings.The energyproblem iscurrently of改为:great concerntoanation,to theworld,and tohuman beings.4But otherpeople arguethat everyonehas acertain opportunity anda wiseman willneverlose itwhenever itarises.But otherpeople arguethat everyone改为:has acertainopportunityand thatawise manwill neverlose itwhenever itarises.5Before Iselected thenew course,myteacher warnedme ofthe difficultyof thecourse and howlong itlasted.Before I改为selected thenew course,my teacherwarnedme ofthe difficultyofthecourseandof thelengthof it.6Making citiesgreener hasa lotofadvantages,such asits improvementofour environment,its contributionto ourindustryand itsmaking ourcitiesbeautiful.Making citiesgreener hasa lotof改为:advantages,such asitsimprovement of our environ-ment,its contributionto ourindustryand itsbeautification ofourcities

4.语法方面Narrow streetseasily causeto happen1many trafficaccidents.改为:Narrow streetseasily causemany trafficaccidents.A greatchange hasbeen taken2place sincethen.改为:A greatchange hastaken placethen.But itmay occursome new3problems.改为:But somenew problemsmay occur.Opportunities areonly belongedto those4who work hard.改为:Opportunities onlybelong tothose whoworkhard.Green treescan protectour airfrom5polluting.改为:Green treescan protectour airfrom beingpolluted.Comparing withother countries,China6pays littleattention to the energyproblem.改为:Compared withother countries,China payslittleattention to the energyproblem.5搭配方面.1However thespeedof a caris muchfasterthan thatof abicycle.改为However thespeedofa caris muchhigherthanthatofabicycle.2In thepast thepriceofmilk wassoexpensive thatmost familiescould notafford it.改为:In thepast thepriceofmilk wasso highthatmost familiescould notaffordit.3We shouldstudy/learn asmuch knowledgeas possible sothat wecan befully preparedfor the future.改为:We shouldget asmuch knowledgeaspossibleso thatwecan befully preparedforthefuture.4The opportunitytobepromoted ina jointventurewill besmaller ifone cannotspeakEnglish.改为:The opportunitytobepromoted ina jointventurewill beless ifone cannotspeak English.

6.赘言问题1In myopinion,I believethe freemedicalsystem is in need of reform.In myopinion,the freemedical system改为isinneedofreform.2People tryto finda solutionto solvetheproblem.People tryto finda solutiontothe改为:problem.3Many visitorswho visitour city have theimpression that there are few trees inthestreet.Many visitorsofourcityhavethe改为:impressionthattherearefewtreesinthe street.4The reasonwhy peoplechoose tolive inthecountry isbecause there is nopollution ornoise there.The reasonwhy peoplechoose tolive in改为:thecountryis thatthere isno pollutionornoisethere.51have torewrite mycomposition again.改1have torewrite mycomposition.为

7.汉化问题1Traffic isa seriousproblem,one ofthe reasonsisthat Shanghaihas overten millionpeople.改为:Traf行c isa seriousproblem,one ofthe reasonsis thatthereare overten millionpeople inShanghai.2My levelof Englishhas thusbeenimproved.改为:My Englishhas thusbeen improved.3Nowadays young people whoseek togo abroadarebecoming more and more.Nowadays moreand moreyoungpeople改为:seek togo abroad.4with thedevelopment ofcities,green landbecomesmoreandmore less.改为:With thedevelopment ofcities,thereisless andlessgreen land.5Smoking willdo harmto ourbody.改为:Smoking willdo harmto heath.6We shouldput outhearts intothe study.We shouldpay attentiontothestudy改为:。