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Writing——Write aSummary ofa NewsReport技法点拨/文体分析把握写作动脉---------------------N--------【写作指导本单元的写作任务是写新闻报道的摘要写此类文章时要注意以下几点,快速把握新闻报道的主要内容,找出新闻的六要素1以自然段为基础进行概括会防止遗漏信息并判断主要信息
2.要注意包含关键的支撑性信息,过于细节的信息要略过
3.新闻报道中会有一些核心词,这些词是报道的核心,写概要时不必替换
4.新闻报道的时态一般为过去时,写概要时,要以一般过去时为主;表达对事件的预测可用一
5.般现在时或一般将来时新闻报道一般使用第三人称,所以概要也用第三人称【常用表达
1.This article/passage mainlytells astory about...
2.This passagemainly dealswith/discusses/explores...
3.This articlefocuses on the topicsof...
4.This essaypresents knowledgethat...
5.This paperprovides/gives anoverview of...
6.In thispassage about...,the author...
7.The authorbegan theessay/passage bytelling/presenting...
8..First/Firstly/In thebeginning/ln thefirst part,the authorargues/explains/mentions/states/points outthat...
9.Secondly/Next/Further on/Then/In thenext part/In themain part,the authorgoes onwith...
10.Finally,the authorstresses that...写作训练/弄清文路写作妙笔生花--------------------------------------------------------N--------阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇词左右的内容概要60An
8.2-magnitude earthquakestruck offthe coast of northernChile lateon Tuesday,cutting powerandleading tosmall landslidesand atsunami.Four menand onewoman died-two whosuffered heart压死.attacks andthree whowere crushedAbout300prisoners escapedfrom thenorthern portcity ofIquiquein theimmediate aftershock.The quakestruck atabout846p.m.local time,some60miles northwestof Iquique.lt hada depthof
12.5miles.Chile sNational EmergencyOffice askedcoastal residentsto leavefor safeplaces.Thefact is,we willknow theextent ofthe damageas timegoes byand whenwe inspectthe areasin thelight ofday,“Chile sPresident MichelleBachelet saidearly onWednesday.The countryhas facedthese firstemergencyhours verywell.”Residents in the portcity ofAntofagasta walkedcalmly throughthe streetsto higherground astrafficbecame heavyin someplaces.Many peopleare fearfulafter experiencingthe powerfulearthquake in2010,so theyimmediately rushedto higherground whenthey heardthe tsunamiwarning,“said agovernmentofficial.u Therehave beenlots ofaftershocks andcommunications havebeen cut off in manyof theaffected areas.So peopleare waitinginthedark hills,not knowingwhat isto come,and hopingtheywill beable toreturn totheir homessafely.”The PacificTsunami WarningCenter sentout severaltsunami warnings,but calledoff allof thembyearly Wednesday.Tsunami wavesof more than sixfeet causedby the earthquake washed ashore onthe coastofPisagua.Iquique,with apopulation of more than200,000,saw seven-foot waves.审题谋篇【审题】本文的要求是写一篇关于智利地震的新闻报道的摘要写作时要注意确定文体新闻报道的摘要
1.主体时态以一般过去时为主
2.主体人称以第三人称为主
3.【谋篇】要点地震发生的时间、地点;1要点地震导致的结果电力中断、人员伤亡等;2要点余震导致的结果;要点地震导致了海啸34遣词造句核心词汇袭击
1.strike电力中断
2.power cut余震
3.aftershock切断
4.cut off超过
5.over/morethan【连词成句】一场级的地震在当地时间晚上袭击了智利北部海岸
1.
8.2846strike An
8.2-magnitude earthquakestruck offthe coastof northernChile at846P.m.local time.这场地震导致了电力中断、五人死亡()
2.causeThe earthquake caused powercuts and five deaths.在很多地震灾区通信中断()
3.cutoff】】Communications wee cutoff inmany oftheearthquake-hit aeas.地震导致了六英尺多高的海啸波浪()
4.cause】Tsunami wavesof morethan sixfeet weecausedby theearthquake.这些海浪席卷了皮萨瓜沿岸()
5.washThese waveswashedashore onthe coastof Pisagua.【句式升级】用非谓语动词连接句和句
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8.2-magnitude earthquakestruck offthe coastof northernChile at846p.m.local time,causingpower cutsand fivedeaths.用非谓语动词连接句和句
2.45Tsunami wavesof morethan sixfeet causedby theearthquake washedashore onthe coastofPisagua.组句成篇用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,组成一篇词左右的英语短文60【参考范文】An
8.2-magnitude earthquakestruck offthecoastof northernChile at846p.m.local time,causingpower cutsandfivedeaths.There werelots ofaftershocks andcommunications werecutoffinmanyof theearthquake-hit areas.Tsunami wavesofmorethan sixfeet causedby theearthquake washedashoreonthecoast ofPisagua.。
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