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•、四六级写作高分三大要素通过对六级考试中高分作文、低分作文、中间作文的对比分析，以及和阅卷老师的沟通、交流，我们发现，一篇作文能得高分，必须具有如下三大要素，否则很难得到考官青睐要素一构造清晰
（一）、文章框架要合理要写出一篇相对成功的文章，首先要树立一种框架意识，各段的安排必须合理，否则虽然语言运用得再好，也很难得高分一般来说，六级作文都是由三个段落构成，有时也可以是四段，其构造和内容必须根据文章主题和提纲中给出的段落提醒来确定，不能随意安排
（二）、文章构造要完整六级作文尽管有字数限制，但它必须是一篇在构造和意义上完整的文章开头段交待全文主题；正文段围绕全文主题进行论述；结尾段与开头段相呼应，或总结、或提出提议、或提供处理措施，这三部分缺一不可此外，每个段落的构造也规定完整性一种段落必须有若干个扩展句，使主题思想得到充足展开假如只有主题句而没有扩展句来深入阐明和论述主题，就不能构成一种完整的段落
（三）、文章主题不偏离全篇各个段落都为一种中心思想服务，并且每个段落都要围绕一种主题句来展开，假如有游离于中心思想之外的段落或句子则会使文章零碎杂乱止匕外，句子的构造杂乱也会导致段落松散，从而导致文章主题不明确，令读者不知所云下面的两段文字体现的是同样的思想，注意两者构造上的区别
（四）、段落衔接要自然一篇文章必须具有连贯性，段与段之间、句子与句子之间的衔接要自然流畅，而这种连贯性既包括意义连贯又包括形式连贯前者是指内在的逻辑性，后者是指使用转换词语一篇成功的文章是两者的有机结合要保证文章意义上的连贯，句子的排列应遵照一定的次序，在下笔之前应当对文章的构造有合乎逻辑的安排，常见的安排方式有准时间先后排列、按重要性、一般到特殊或特殊到一般等逻辑关系排列等但假如一篇文章只具故意义上的连贯，而形式上比较松散，也很难突出Some peoplesay thatsome numberswill bringthemgood luck.Take8for example.The Chinesepronunciation ofthe number8has almostthe samesound asthat of the“发”,Chinese characterwhich meansmaking afortune,Therefore,many Chinesepeople spareno moneyto gettheirtelephone numberor carnumber toinclude thisnumber n8H.They believewithout anydoubt that thenumberwill bringthemmoney.However,others dontbelieve thatnumbers have anyconnection with good luck.They thinksuch kindof idea is only anignorant andsuperstitious belief.They willsay:How canyou everhave any good luck simplybecause ofsome lucky numbers,evenif youdont workhard,dont have good opportunitiesand dontgetalong wellwith thepeople aroundyouSo faras I am concerned,I agreewith the latter.Obviously,such beliefis onlya kindof superstition.Perhaps itholds trueforsome cases,but oftenit doesnot.Numbers cannever bringgoodluck toa person at alland ourfortune is in ourown hands.Therefore,everyone canhave goodfortune onlyif hetries hisbest.Lets alwaysremember Opportunitiesare onlyfor thepreparedmindand Nopains,no gains.【点评】本文之因此可以得到分，除了构造清晰、句式多变以外，尚有诸多语14言上的亮点首先，遣词用语精确地道如第一段第四句中（吝惜，节省）一spare词就用的很准，形象地刻画出此类人的心态紧接着第五句中的without any（不假思索）的使用也非常恰当，提醒读者不假思索地相信幸运数字doubt是缺乏辩证思维的此外，最终一段中的也是经典的英语体现方式，hold true显现出本文用语的地道另一方面，合适运用修辞手法第二段第四句运用反问使问题的答案不言自明，观点的体现愈加有力而该句中三个构成排比，愈加强了气势，dont使论证到达高潮再次，恰当使用警句格言本文的最终以两句谚语作为结束，运用恰到好处，又突显出作者的文采最终，开头结尾突破常规开头运用例证为主题提供充足验证，说服力很强结尾用谚语收尾，使人眼前一亮
二、大学英语四级考试大纲规定写作题型根据教育部颁布的大学英语教学大纲的规定，大学英语四级考试的命题形式有
（一）、首尾句作文
（二）、提纲作文
（三）、关键词作文
（四）、图表作文
（六）、
（五）、命题作文
（七）、书信体作文图画作文如下几种首尾句作文、提纲作文、图表作文、命题作文、书信体作文等
三、大学英语四级写作常见八大类话题四级题目波及到社会生活的各个方面，但可大体归纳为几种方面,下面就是对各个重要方面常见的内容的简介工、环境（Environment）
2、大学生活学习（Colleges andUniversities）
3、体育锻炼（Exercise）
4、人类疾病（HumanDisease）（
5、压力Stress）
6、人际交往与通讯科技（InterpersonalCommunication）
7、网络科技（Internet）
8、平常生活Everyday Life
四、新四级写作考试作文框架正反观点对比题目
1.第一段一般只写三句第一句It is widely believedby many people forsome timethat...第二句One reason they thinkis that...第三句The otherreason theyhold is that...第二段一般只写三句第一句While othersargue that...第二句They maintainthat...第三句They alsoclaim that...第三段写四句第一句From whathas beendiscussed above,we maycometo theconclusion that...第二句On theone hand第三句On theother hand,...第四句Only inthis waycan we...图表作文
2.第一段只写三句第一句As isshown in the graphabove,we cansee clearlythatgreat changeshave takenplace in...from...to...第二句The first…years saw...第三句The last...years witnessed...第二段只写四句第一句What hascaused thisproblem Itseems to me thatthere are…reasons.第二句Firstly,...第三句:Secondly,...第四句Finally,...第三段只写四句第一句How to solve theproblem hasbecome ahot issueamongmany people.第二句For onething,...第三句For another,...第四句Only inthis waycan wesuccessfully solve theproblem.现象作文
3.第一段只写两句第一句In recentyears,there hasbeen...第二句How tosolve theproblem hasbecome ahot issueamongmany people.第二段只写四句第一句What hascaused thisproblem Itseems to me thatthereare...reasons.第二句Firstly,...第三句Secondly,...第四句Finally,...第三段只写四句第一句How tosolvetheproblem hasbecome ahot issueamongmanypeople.第二句For onething,...第三句For another,...第四句Only inthis waycan wesuccessfully solvetheproblem.书信作文
4.第一段只写两句:第一句:I amwriting thisletter todayto...第二句:My nameis...and I am...第二段按照题目规定写:第三段只写三句第一句［sincerely hopeyou cantake myletter seriously.第二句Your promptresponse will be highlyappreciated.第三句Thanks a lot for your time and consideration.谚语作文
5.第一段只写四句:第一句第is...that...第二句You cannot...until you...，第三句The moreyou…the more...，第四句If you…you...第二段举例写第一句Examples can be easilyfound to make acasefor thisproverb.第二句Lets take...for instance.第三句Another illustrationof thisis...记叙文
6.按照课堂上的举例去操作when时间，place地点，who人物，事件的通过自己努力编故事二.描述地点Location,population,advantages anddisadvantages,main attrationsclimate,etc.z
五、英语四六级写作个加分句型
351、~~~the+z est+名词+that+主词+have ever+seen known/heard/had/read,etczzz the most+形容词+名词+that+主词+have ever+seen known/heard/had/read,etc例句Helen is themostbeautiful girlthat I have everseen,海伦是我所看过最漂亮的女孩Mr.Chang isthe kindestteacher that I haveeverhad-张老师是我曾经碰到最仁慈的教师
2、Nothing is+~~~er than to+V Nothing is+more+形容词+than to+V例句Nothingis more importantthantoreceive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事
3、222cannot emphasize the importance of~~~too much.（再看么强调…的重要在也不为过）例句We cannotemphasizetheimportance ofprotectingour eyestoo much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过
4、There isno denyingthat+S+V.■.（不可否认的・・・）例句There isno denyingthatthe qualities of ourliving havegone frombad toworse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下
5、It isuniversally acknowledgedthat+句子~~（全世界都懂得…）例句［t isuniversally acknowledgedthat treesareindispensable tous.全世界都懂得树木对我们是不可或缺的
6、There isno doubtthat+句子~~（毫无疑问的・・・）例句There isno doubtthat oureducational systemleavessomething to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意（
7、An advantageof~~~is that+句子…的长处是）・・・例句An advantageof usingthe solarenergy isthat itwonftcreate（produce）any pollution.用太阳能的长处是它不会制造任何污染（
8、The reasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子…的原因是）・・・例句The reasonwhy we have to grow trees is thatthey can provideus withfresh air./The reasonwhy wehave togrowtreesisthat theycan supplyfresh airforus.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气
9、So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子（如此…以致于・・・）例句So preciousis timethat we cant affordto wasteit.时间是如此宝贵，我们经不起挥霍它10Adj+as+Subject（主词）+be,S+（虽然）・・・例句Rich asour countryis,thequalitiesof ourlivingare by no meanssatisfactory,{bynomeans=in noway=on noaccount一点也不}虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意11The+~er+S+V~~~the+~er+S+V~~~fThe+more+Adj+S+V,~~~the+more+Adj+S+V~~~（愈…愈…）例句The harderyou work,the moreprogressyou make.你愈努力，你愈进步The morebooks weread,the morelearnedwe become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问
12、By+Ving,~~can~~（借着■…■.可以■■）例句By takingexercise,wecanalways stayhealthy,借着做运动，我们可以一直保持健康
13、enable+Object（受词）+to+V（■.使■.可以・・）例句Listening tomusic enableus tofeel relaxed,听音乐使我
14、On noaccount canwe（我rvrvrv们可以感觉轻松们绝对不能…）例句On noaccount canwe ignorethe value ofknowledge.我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值
15、It istime+S+过去式（该是…的时候了）例句It istime theauthoritiesconcerned tookproper stepstosolvethetraffic problems.该是有关当局采用合适的措施来处理交通问题的时候了（
16、Those who〜〜〜…的人■■■）例句Those whoviolatetraffic regulationsshould bepunished.违反交通规定的人应当受惩罚17There isno onebut~~~（没有人不…）例句There isno onebut longsto go to college.没有人不渴望上大学
18、be+.forced/compelled/obliged+to+V（不得不…）例句Since theexamination isaround thecorner,I amcompelledto giveup doingsports,既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动[
9、It isconceivable that+句子（可想而知的）It isobvious that+句子（明显的）It isapparent that+句子（显然的）例句It isconceivable thatknowledgeplays animportant rolein ourlife.可想而知，知识在我们的毕生中饰演一种重要的角色
20、That isthe reasonwhy（那就是…的原〜〜〜因）例句Summer issultry.That isthe reasonwhy I dontlike it.夏天很闷热那就是我不喜欢它的原因
21、For thepast+时间，S+目前完毕式…（过去…年来，…一直…）例句For thepast twoyears,I have beenbusy preparingfor theexamination.过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试
22、Since+S+过去式，S+目前完毕式例句Since hewent tosenior highschool,hehas workedvery hard.自从他上高中，他一直很用功
23、It paysto+V〜~〜（・・■是值得的）例句It paysto helpothers.协助他人是值得的24be based on（以…为基础）例句The progressof theesociety isbasedonharmony.社会的进步是以友好为基础的
25、Spare noeffort to+V（不遗余力的）例句We shouldspareno effortto beautifyour environment.我们应当不遗余力的美化我们的环境主题为了可以使文章主题明确、线索明了，句与句之间、段与段之间都需要一定的连接手段写作中常用的连接手段是使用过渡性词语或句子、运用代词指代上文提到过的事物等
五、各段详略要得当大学英语六级考试写作部分规定考生在分钟内写出一篇不少于词的30120文章由于时间和字数的限制，考生一定要有布局观念，根据主次关系，对段落进行合理分派一般来说，各段的比例应当是中间部分稍大，两头部分稍小既要防止头重脚轻〃，也要防止头轻脚重〃，即各段的比例不能过度悬殊，主次详略安排要得当、【实考作文例析】Directions:For thispart,you are allowed30minutes towrite acomposition on thetopic HowI FinanceMy collegeEducation.Youshould write at least120words,and base your compositionon theoutlinegivenin Chinesebelow:上大学的费用可以通过多种途径处理1tuition and fees哪种途径适合于我阐明理由2【分作文】5College students can gettheir tuition and feesin variousways.They can get itfrom theirparents.They canearn moneyafter classtoget it.If theystudy hard,the schoolwill givesome studentsscholarships.My parentscan giveme somemoney.I willearnmoney afterclass to pay othersthe rest.I think that isthesuitable wayfor me.I dontlike apply applying forloansfrom school.I willstudyhard totry toget scholarshipsfrom school.I havewon thefirst-class scholarshipsfor twoyears.I likedo doingpart-timejobs such as a tutor.I cansolve my tuition and fees andmakewellgood/better useof time.Many studentsalso paytuition andfeesthrough othermethodmethods.【点评】本文之因此只好到分，除了出现某些语法错误斜体部分之外，在很大程5度上是由于构造问题首先，文章框架不合理本文虽然也是三段式的安排，但第二段明显与第三段陈说的是同一主题，应当合为一段
26、bring home to+人+事（让…明白...事）例句We shouldbringhome topeople thevalueofworking hard.我们应当让人们明白努力的价值
27、be closely related to~~（与…息息有关）例句Takingexercise isclosely relatedto health,做运动与健康息息有关28Get into the habitof+Ving=make ita ruleto+V（养成…的习惯）例句We shouldget into the habitof keepinggood hours.我们应当养成早睡早起的习惯
29、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to+N/Ving,~~~（由于…）例句Thanks to his realizedencouragement,I finallymydream.想由于他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦
30、What a+Adj+N+S+V!=How+Adj+a+N+V!（多）么！・・・例句What animportant thingit is to keepour promise!How importanta thingit is to keepour promise!遵守诺言是多么重要的事！31Leave much tobe desired（令人不满意）例句The conditionofourtraffic leavesmuchtobedesired.我们的交通状况令人不满意
32、Have a great influence on（对…有很大的影响）例句Smoking hasa greatinfluenceonour health,抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响
33、do good to（对■■.有益），do harm to（对..■有害）例句Reading doesgoodtoour mind.读书对心灵有益Overwork doesharmtohealth.工作过度对健康有害
34、Pose a great threat to~~（对.■■导致一大威胁）例句Pollution posesagreatthreattoour existence.污染对我们的生存导致一大威胁35do onesutmost to+V=do onesbest（尽全力去）・・・例句We shoulddo ourutmost toachieve ourgoal inlife-我们应尽全力去到达我们的人生目的
六、大学英语四级写作预测及范文
1.助学贷款申请Directions:For thispart,you are allowed30minutes towrite ALetterApplying for a BankLoan.You should write at least120words followingthe outline given below in Chinese.⑴个人状况简介⑵申请贷款的原因、数额及用途怎样保证专款3专用以及你的还款打算Dear Sir/Madame,I ama sophomorein ShanghaiUniversity,majoring incomputersoftware.In theprevious oneand ahalf yearsI havebeena modelstudent andmonitor ofmy class.However,since Iregistered here,the expenseshave becomeaburden formy averagefamily.You know,my parents are bothlaidoff workers,and,to makematters worse,my motherhassuddenly fallenill and is expectinga majoroperation.It willbebeyond theirability to finance methrough myremainingeducation.It isnow amust formetohelp relievetheir financialpressure.So Imapplying toyour bankfor aloan of10,000yuan.If my application isapproved,all themoney willgo tomy tuitionandfees for the coiningacademic years.Ive madea detailedplan toarrange myschool life.A parttimejob asa familytutor will not bedifficult tofind and somework studyprograms forstudents likeme arealso providedinour university.From thesesources Iwillbeable toearn morethanenough tosupport myself.I guaranteethatIwill repaytheloan withinfive years,that is,within twoyears aftermygraduation.Please haveconfidence inme:I havea verygoodcredit record.I wouldbe greatlyobliged ifmyapplicationis granted.Manythanks.Yours sincerely,Li Ming2,找工作的时候选择爱好还是高工资Salary orInterestUpon graduation,virtually allcollege studentswill confronttheproblem of the careerchoice.It istruly atough choice.Students opinionsdiffer greatlyon thisissue.Some holdthatpriority shouldbe givento theirinterest injobs,but otherstakethe attitudethat salary isthemost criticalfactorinfluencing theircareer choices.As tomyself,I preferthelatterview.A wellpaid jobexertsa tremendousfascination onagreat number ofpeople,with noexception tome.Although itmight beimpossible tomeasurethe valueof onesjob interms of money,salary countsmostwhen Ichoose myfuture career.In myview,our careerchoiceslargely dependon howand wherewehave been broughtup,Icome froma poorurban familyand myparents wereboth laidoffworkers.In ordertofinancemy tuition,they havebeenworking hardover thepast fouryears.As theonly sonin myfamily,I haveto shoulderthe burdenof supportingmyfamily.In short,salaryisthe firstand onlyconsideration inmychoice ofcareer..拥有手机的长处和缺陷3Advantages andDisadvantages of the MobilePhoneWith the rapideconomic development,the mobile phone hasfoundits wayinto campusesand ahost ofstudents takeadvantageof thiswonderful gadgetto communicatewith eachother.This phenomenongives riseto thisquestion Whatarethe advantagesand disadvantagesof the mobile phoneIt iswidelybelieved that it greatlyfacilitates studentscampuslife.Many instancescould befound tosupport thistypeof opinion.A graduatingstudent in our universitybought amobile phone in the courseof huntingfor hisjob.He toldmethat throughthe mobilephone hecould easilykeep intouchwith theemployer of the companyhe intendsto workwith andwouldnot missany opportunities.However,everything hasboth positiveand negativefacets.Themobile phonealso hasmany disadvantages,For instance,theringing ofthe mobilephone oftendisturbs theteachers teachingand other students7learning.Personally,the advantagesofthe mobilephoneoutweighthe disadvantagesof itas longas wedont interferewith otherswhileusing it.
4.给中国的航天英雄杨利伟写信，体现你的祝贺和对中国太空事业的见解Dear Mr.Yang,June19,It iswith themost sincerepleasure I write tocongratulateyou onyour becomingthe firstChinese greetingto mankindsmotherplanet fromouter space.Today,our countryscenturiesold dreamof journeyingto outerspace hasfinally cometrue.People fromall walksof life,with noexceptiontome,take apridein beingChinese andyour fellowcountrymen.As therocket soaredintothesky,your namejoined thosefiguressuch asGagarin inspace history.You deservethishonor,foryouwere subjectto unimaginablehardships andchallengesbefore the successful launchoftheShenzhou5spacecraft.I amfully convincedthat itmakes a lot ofsense forourcountry toattach importanceto spaceexploration.The spaceindustryhas hadandisgoing tohaveagreat impacton Chinainscientific,political andmilitary areas.May youhave health,happiness andoutstanding successinall yourventures.Respectfully yours,Frank
5.有一种会议在你所在的都市召开，你想去参与给会议的组织者写一封信说一下你想参与的原因，并简朴简介一下自己并请他提供某些会议的有关信Dear ProfessorHuang,Iwritefor informationregarding theforthcomingInternational EducationConference tobe heldat yourprestigiousuniversity.Iama firstyear studentfrom NanjingUniversity majoringinEducation,and havea particularinterest inthe teachingofwork placeskills andemployers perceptionsof newgraduates,I planto attendthe conferenceand wouldlike informationaboutthe contributoryspeakers,the contentof theirtalks,andtheir researchinterests.However,although I havebeenliving inNanjinginthepast fouryears,Iamunfamiliar withNanjing.Therefore,if youcould pleasealso sendthe details of howto gettoyour universityit wouldmake myarrangements mucheasier.In addition,if youcould letme havedetailsoftheaccommodation thatis availableI wouldbe morethan grateful.I lookforward toreceiving theinformation andmeeting youinperson.Sincerely yours,Frank
6.Direction:For thispart you are allowed30minutes towritea compositionon thetopic Cars and AirPollution.You shouldwrite no less than120words and base yourcomposition on theoutline below:.私家轿车越来越多，有些问题随之产生.比较明显的大问题有……
12.我对这种现象的见解3CarsandAir PollutionToomany carshave createdalotof serious problems inourworld.Besides congestion,accidents andfast fuelconsumption,cars areresponsible fora goodpart of air pollutionin bigcities.All thetime,they arepumping hugeamounts ofwaste gasesintothe atmosphere.These gasesare veryharmful,causingdisease andeven death.One possiblesolution isto designand developclean carsandclean fuels.In Shanghai,some ofthe publicbuses begintorun onnatural gas,which doesnot giveoff asmuch carbondioxideas thepetrol.But itmay takedecades forthe newmodelsof cleancars completelyreplace thetraditionalones.Another solutionistodevelop modernpublictransportation systemsand restrictthe useof privatecars.Ifthe priceof petrolrises constantlyand the public vehiclesareefficient andconvenient enough,most peoplewillnotbuyprivate cars.And the total numberof carsin bigcities willreducegreatly.On thewhole,the eliminationofairpollution needsthecollective effortsfrom the government,thepublicand theenvironmentalists,
7.Direction:For thispart you areallowed30minutes towritea compositionon thetopic Overseas Study at anEarly Age.You shouldwrite noless than120words andbaseyour compositionon theonline below:.目前诸多父母在孩子高中毕业前就送他们出国学习.导致这种趋12势的原因是什么.我对此的见解3OverseasStudyat anEarly AgeNowadaysmore andmore parentsare eagerto sendtheirchildren tostudy abroadbefore theyfinish highschool bywhatevermeans and at whatevercost,It isquite understandablefor parentsto sendtheir childrentostudy overseasbecause theyplace highexpectations on theirchildren.They areencouraged bythesuccessstories ofthosewho havecompleted theiroverseas study.With thedevelopment of economy,companies andinstitutions at homeare givingmore andmore emphasison overseasexperiences,too.Consequently,pursuing overseas study becamea kindofshort cutin gaininga betterfuture.Moreover,thereis stillone underlyingreason forthis rusheconomicreason.The rapideconomic progressinthepast fewyearsin Chinahas enabledmore andmore parentstoafford thehuge costfor theirchildrens overseasstudy,As forme,overseasstudyis surelya helpfulway togetboth advancedknowledge andnecessary experiences,butoverseas studyatanearly ageis neithernecessary norbeneficial.The students may betoo youngto eithertend forthemselvesor thinkfor themselves.I dothink thatoverseasstudy cancontribute to ones selfimprovement,but itsbetterto bepursued afterone hasfinished hiscollege studyathome,when heismorecapable oflearning andliving onhis own.
8.Statistics ofFamily Expensesin Shanghai19801990Recreation3%5%8%Education6%16%22%Health Care6%10%16%Others17%24%35%FoodClothing68%45%20%,根据上表描述该都市家庭支出的变化.分析产生这些变化的原因.123阐明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响？As isshown inthe tableabove,dramatic changeshave takenplacein familyexpenses inthe Cityof Shanghaiwithin twodecadesfrom1980to.The mostobvious changeisinexpenseon food and clothing,which hasdropped by48%,while thoseonrecreation,education andhealth carehave increasedrespectivelyby5%,16%and10%,Expenses onother thingskeep risingfrom17%to35%.The statisticsof riseand fallseem toexist inisolationbut are in factcloselyrelatedtooneanother.The mostlikelyfactors accountingfor thesechanges areas follows:Development ineconomy isthe fundamentalone.Theincreased incomeresults inthe loweringpercentage offood andclothing.That isto say,a smallpercentage ofthetotalincome isenoughto coverfoodandclothing expenses.Another factorlies inthe developmentof peoplesconcept.When people are wellfed andwell dressed,they beginto interestthemselvesin recreationand education.These changesshould alsobe attributedto socialreforms.Inthe1990s,college educationwas not totally freeas itwas before,which alsoaccounts forthe risingexpenses oneducation.Soonafter,thegovernmentgradually stoppedoffering housesto itscitizenswithout charges.People hadto savea largeproportion oftheirmoney forhousing.Thats partlywhy theexpenses forothers doubled.As forthemore expenseson healthcare,I figuretherearetwo mainreasons:the cancellationof freemedical careand peoplesawarenessoftheimportanceofhealth.The changesreflect thedevelopmentofthecity andindicate thatpeopleareenjoyingmore.
9.On SpaceProject给《**周刊》宇航专栏的编辑写一封信，阐明你对太空探索项目的态度（支持或反对），并简朴陈说你的理由Dear Editor,Thank youfor yourstarting aspecial columnforthediscussionon spaceprojects.Frankly,it seemstomethat ourspace projectssofar havebeen inthe mainawaste ofmoney,time,energy,human livesandresources.The richercountries arepouring largesums ofmoney intospaceresearch programswhich areof nobenefit tohumanbeings whilein underdevelopedcountries thousandsof peoplearedying ofhunger.Besides,many scientiststime andenergyare wasted,which couldhavebeendevoted toimproving ourlivingcondition.Whats more,many astronautshave diedcompletelyuselessly inspace vehicleswhich havebeen faulty.They wereyoung peoplewho hadntenjoyed thefruit oflife yet.Apart fromhuman wastage,there isthe wastageof resourceswhichare finiteand essentialif manistosurvive.I thinkits hightimewe stoppedthese meaninglessprograms.
10.Turn offYour MobilePhoneDirection:For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite acompositionon thetopic Turn Off Your Mobile phone.You shouldwritenolessthan120words and baseyour compositionon theoutline below:另一方面，文章构造不完整提纲虽只给出两点，但直接交待处理上大学费用的途径有些突兀，应在第一段前给出该问题出现的背景，这样构造才比较完整再次，主题有些偏离第
二、三段只是简朴陈说自己喜欢哪种方式、不喜欢哪种方式，而没有充足地阐释理由，并且还出现个别与主题不有关的句子，如结尾一句最终，文章的连贯性很差第一段中列举了三种处理上大学费用的途径，但给人一种信息堆砌之感，缺乏必要的衔接；第二段和第三段逻辑次序比较混乱，条理不清，整段的内容显得杂乱无章，缺乏必要的衔接【分作文】7The newtuition policyis adopted.College studentsmust affordtheir tuitionandfees forthemselves.They mustpay anaveragesum of2,500yuan eachyear astuition.They mustpay manyfees.For example,they mustpay for their accomodation.They mustpayfor theirdiseases.College studentscangettheirtuitionandfeesinvarious wayssuchasparents,part-time jobs,scholarships andloansfromparents,from part-time jobs,from scholarshipsandfrom loans.My familycant affordmy allall myexpenses atcollege.Butmy familyis notpoverty-stricken.Ihaveno rightto seekhelp fromtheloan programs.And Iwish topractice self-reliance.Then Iofferinstruction asatutor.It helpsalotfinancially andI makegreatprogress instudy.Ihavewon thefirst-class scholarshipsfor twoyears.【点评】本文整体构造还算完整，语法错误斜体部分也不算太多，语言的运用方面也还可以，但却只拿到了分，究其原因，重要还是构造问题7首先，文章的连贯性较差第一段简介背景，但各句之间缺乏必要的衔接，没有从背景很好地过渡到交学费这一问题；第三段无论从主题句的创作还是理由的陈说方面都欠缺逻辑性和条理性，导致文章不够连贯，主题不够突出另一方面，各段详略安排不妥第一段是作为背景出现，其目的只.移动电话给我们的生活带来了便利1,移动电话有时也会影响他人.在某些场所请关掉你的手机23TurnOffYourMobilePhoneWiththedevelopmentofinformation technologyandreduced priceof communicationproducts,the mobilephone hasbecomea necessityfor mostpeople.Obviously,it shortensthedistance betweenpeople andmakes ourlife moreconvenient.Thanks toit,its easyfor usto contactor becontacted byothersanytime andanywhere.We willnever missany importantmeetings,great dealsor admirableopportunities.But,have younoticed sometimesthemobilephone alsobringsembarrassment tous Itsnot rareto seesomeonepressing themobilephonetohisear andshouting loudlyinpublic as if therewere noone elsepresent.And Imsure eachonehas hadsuch anexperience thatthemobilephone ringcontinuouslyonaformal occasion.Perhaps thesePeople havemanylife anddeath reasonsto keepthe phoneworking at alltimes,but itinterrupts peoplearound themwho haveto hearwhatthey dontcare whenthey want to concentrateon whattheyredoing.So ifyou areone ofthem,please shutoff yourcell phoneinpublic,especially ona quietand seriousoccasion.Its arespectfor bothothers andyourself.附录月四级写作真题及答案12Part IWriting30minutes注意此部分试题在答题卡上1Directions:For thispart,youareallowed30minutes towrite acompositionon thetopic SelectingCourses.You shouldwrite atleast120words accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowin Chinese:各大学开设了多种各样的选修课学生由于多种原因选择了不一样的选
1.
2.修课以你自己为例……
3.［范文］Selecting CoursesRecently,people ingrowing numbersshow theirconcern aboutselecting courses.In somecolleges,students arepermitted topickout theircourses professorsfreely.The reasonsare listedasfollows:In thefirst place,studentscanchoose theteacher accordingtotheir interests,which willbe helpfulfortheirfuture careers.Besides,selectingcoursescan reducethe rateof studentsabsenceindirectly forstudents usuallychoose theirfavoriteteachers.As faras Iam concerned,every coinhas twosides.On theonehand,studentsmaylearn thecourse better,because theymaychoose theprofessor theyliked.On theother hand,if theprofessorwho is very popularandagreatnumberof studentswouldlike toattend his/her course,the classroommust beovercrowded.It willhaveabad impacton theclass.是引出主题，不需要详细论述；而第二段是针对所给提纲的第二点进行论述，是文章的重要内容之一，应当展开阐明，但本文第一段有五句话，第二段却只有一句话，明显是主次颠倒，详略安排不妥【分作文】10Nowadays,if wewanttogotocollege,well haveto paya bigsumofmoney.Its aproblem tomany students.Many wayscansolve thisseriousproblem.First,you canask yourparents forhelp.Second,you cando part-time jobstomakemoney.In addition,you canapplyapplyfora bank loan.Finally,weyou cangetscholarships fromthe school.For me,I preferabankloan.My reasonsof choiceMy reasonsforthis choice/The reasonswhyIchoose thiscanbelisted asfollows:First ofall myparentsarenot veryenough richto affordzmeaffordmytuitionandfees.Secondly,if Ido somepart-timejob,Ill nothave enoughtime tostudy.In addition,I thinkI cangeta goodjob inthe futuretopayback theloan.【点评】本文虽出现某些语法错误斜体部分，句式上也比较单一，显得有些拘谨，也没有什么出彩的亮点，但却也可以得到分，重要原因如下10首先，文章框架合理经典的三段式文章另一方面，构造比较完整包括提纲中所列要点，并交待背景，引出现象和问题再次，时刻围绕主题通篇都是围绕主题展开论述，没有多出的与主题不有关的内容第四，段落衔接自然文中标下划线的部分均起到了很好的衔接作用，使整篇文章条理清晰，过渡自然，形成一种意义连贯、形式统一的整体第五，各段详略得当首段简朴交待背景，第
二、三段分别针对提纲中所给出的两点展开论述，主题论述充足，详略得当要素二句式多变
一、长句短句错落有致都是短句的作文略显水平稚嫩，写作功力尚需磨炼，都是长句的作文又显得啰嗦冗赘，卖弄不成反到做作真正的优秀文章应做到长短句搭配合理，难简结合，曲径通幽，平实中见功力大批考生缺乏写作训练，往往在作文中忽视运用长句或是长句运用不妥，因此考生在平时训练时就应当故意识地在每段中都设置出至个有特色的长句，如并列句、排比句、主从复合句等，使12得文章错落有致、行文流畅并体现出语言功底
（二）、积极被动合理运用在汉语写作思维中，我们习惯于体现动作执行者，当把这种思维应用于英语写作中时，就会出现一种明显的缺陷，由于英文在写作过native speaker程中，更重视事情的执行，因此在他们的文章里，使用被动语态或者不体现动作执行者的句子更多某些当然，在写作过程中，并不是要一味地追求被动语态的使用，在什么状况下用积极，什么状况下用被动，这与陈说对象有亲密的关系，英语写作中强调论述对象的一致性，因此在实际写作中，一定要合理运用积极和被动
（三）、倒装强调合适穿插强调句式是一种突出重点的有效句式止匕外，倒装句式也常用于到达强调的目的因此，在写作中合适穿插使用强调句和倒装句，不仅可以突出强调重点部分，并且可以丰富句式，起到修饰作用，到达意想不到的体现效果
（四）、比较构造巧妙使用比较构造是英语中使用频率频率较高的一种句式，假如可以恰当地运用，可以增长文章语言的地道味道，对多种类型作文的写作都大有裨
（五）、句式之间衔接紧密英语中十分重视句与句之间的形合，在写作中虽然上下句之间的意义联络紧密，逻辑关系很明显，也不能省略连接词或过渡词，否则就不符合英语的思维与体现习惯恰当地使用连接词，尤其是表达附属关系的连接词（如who,等），不仅能which,that,because,since,although,if,unless,asif丰富句型，并且也许将意思体现的愈加清晰，使句与句之间衔接紧密，意义愈加连贯O【实考作文例析】Directions:For thispart,youareallowed30minutes towrite acompositiononthetopic ReadingSelectively orExtensively Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionon theoutlinegivenin Chinesebelow:有人认为读书要有选择1有人认为应当博览群书2我的见解3【分作文】8People allknow that reading isvery important.But peoplehavedifferent opinionstowards howto read.Some peoplesay weshould read selectively,andotherpeople believe that we shouldread extensively.Some peoplethink thatreading selectivelyisveryimportant.First,some booksare harmfuland notworthy worthreading.Second,after workpeople havedo nothave enoughtime to readextensively.Some peoplethinkthatpeople should read extensively.Now,different branchesof knowledgeare closelyrelated.If onewantsto makegreat achievements,he willhavetoread booksnot onlyinhis ownfield of study but also other fields concerningnot onlyhisown fieldof studybutalsootherfieldsofstudy,Readingextensively cangive usexperience,and broadenour view.I thinkwe shouldread bothselectively and extensively.As tobadbooks,we shouldnever readthem.As forgood books,weshouldreadas extensivelyas wecan.【点评】本文在构造安排上没有问题，通篇看来，也没有出现什么严重的语法错误斜体部分，之因此只拿到分，重要是由于句式比较单一，文章显得毫无8生气首先，长短句搭配不够合理文章中所用句式比较简朴，并且有些雷同，缺乏可以体现出语言功底的特色长句，没能很好地将长短句合理搭配使用首段的引言部分显得苍白无力，除第三段以外，其他各段中无论是主题句还是扩展句句式都比较简朴，甚至有些反复另一方面，没能很好地运用被动首段开头句使用的是积极语态，首先不太符合书面语的文体风格，另首先给人感觉过于平淡，假如改成被动构造…就会使句子的体现愈加贴切Itiswidely accepted that第三，缺乏倒装强调等特色句式整篇文章中几乎没有使用任何有特点的句式，显得句式单
一、平淡无味最终，句与句间衔接不够紧密虽然本文从整体上看行文还算流畅，但诸多句子之间只做到了意义上连贯，形式上缺乏必要的连接，如第三段的两点理由的陈说，既没有与主题句有很好的衔接，两点理由之间也没有合适的过渡【分作文】12Nowadays,it isgenerally acceptedthatreadingis ofquitemuch importance.But when it comes to howtoread,there hassprungup aheated discussionas towhether we should readselectivelyor readextensively.Some peopleareinfavor ofthe ideaof readingselectively.First,they believethatit is nothow muchone readsbut whathereads thatreally counts.In addition,since onestimeandeffortefforts arelimited,we heshouldreadbooks thatare suitedtoour hisinterests andneeds.However,those whoinsist onreading extensivelyargue thatitis throughreading extensivelythat onecan broadenhis horizon.Only whenone readswidely,can hereally makeremarkableachievements inhis study.In myopinion,weshouldread selectivelyonthebasis ofreadingextensively.For onething,by readingwidely wecan keepourselveswell informedof asmuch knowledgeas possible.Foranother,without selection,reading maybecome aimlessand blind,which makesreading ineffective.Therefore,weshouldcombineselective readingandextensivereading.【点评】本文虽出现个别语法错误斜体部分，但构造清晰，句式多变，行文流畅，不失为一篇优秀的作文首先，长句短句错落有致本文中句式多样，，各段长短句搭配合理，如首段中第一句话简洁明了引出事实背景，然后通过…whenitcomesto句型自然过渡到要讨论的主题文中对长句的运用，体现了作者较强的语言功底另一方面，积极被动运用合理本文首句使用被动构造itisgenerally引出普遍存在的事实，恰当精确，符合书面语的文体风格acceptedthat...而文中其他地方尽管没有更多地运用被动语态，也是从实际的体现需要出发，并不影响本文的整体效果再次，倒装强调穿插得当文中穿插了倒装、强调等特色句式，起到了突出强调、增长气势的作用第四，句与句间衔接紧密本文无论从意思上还是形式上都非常连贯，过渡自然，连接词运用恰当精确，整篇文章给人感觉逻辑清晰，浑然一体要素三出现亮点
（一）、遣词用语精确地道词语的选用直接关系到句子的优劣，也势必关系到段落的主体思想，进而关系到整篇文章的质量，因此把恰当的词用到恰当的地方〃成了写作者的至理名言在写作中选择精确的词汇、使用地道的语言，不仅可以使文章的体现愈加到位，更重要的是能起到点睛〃的作用，成为作文获得高分的亮点之一
（二）、开头结尾突破常规文章开头段除了要表明主题外，尚有一种重要的任务就是要引起读者的爱好，使文章具有与众不一样的吸引力，
四、六级写作阅卷往往根据第一段确定文章分数档次，假如能在开头就体现出不一样凡响的语句，对于提高整个文章的分数档次会有很大的作用此外，文章的结尾也同样不容忽视结尾篇幅虽然不适宜过长，但却也是决定文章成败的点睛之笔，因此可以故意识地采用某种突破常规的写作手法，让考官在读到结尾时能眼睛一亮
（三）、合适运用修辞手法精确恰当地使用修辞手法，会极大地增强文章的体现力，使文章愈加生动形象、意蕴丰富并且引人入胜英文写作中常见的修辞手法有比方、平行构造、修辞问句等
（四）、恰当使用警句格言一篇好的作文除了要有合理的构造和布局之外，假如能有一定的文采，一定会锦上添花，而体现出文采的一种重要手段就是恰当地使用警句格言【实考作文例析】Directions:For thispart,youareallowed30minutes towrite acompositiononthetopic DouLucky Numbers“Really BringGoodLuck Youshouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyourcompositiononthe outlinegiveninChinesebelow:有人认为某些数字会带来好运1我认为数字和运气无关……2【分作文】10Some peoplesay that luckynumberscan bringthem goodluck.They believethatluckynumbers makethem feelsafe orenergeticandsotheycandeal withproblems better.However,others dontbelievethatnumbers haveanyconnection withgoodluck.They thinksuch ideasuch kindofidea/such anideaisonlyasuperstitious belief.In fact,numbersis onlynumber.Luck isonly luck.There isno relationsrelationshipbetween them.So faras Iam concerned,Hluckynumbers11have nothingto dowithgoodluck.If luckynumbersreally worked,we werenottofail anything.Numbers canneverbring goodluck toa personatalland ourfortune isinourownhands.Therefore,everyone canhavegoodfortune onlyif hetrieshis best.【点评】本文构造比较清晰，句式变化也还可以，语法错误也很少斜体部分，但从整篇文章来看缺乏语言上的亮点首先，遣词用语缺乏特色全文在用词方缺乏深度和特色，几乎都是某些过于大众化的单词，如等，不能给人留下深刻的印象believe,think另一方面，没有恰当运用修辞全文未运用任何恰当的修辞手法没有使用警句格言全文未出现任何警句或格言最终，开头结尾平淡无奇开头结尾均没有出既有特色的句式，无法激起阅卷老师的兴奋点【分作文】14。
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