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单元话题满分范文必背Unit1(名校最新真题)假如你叫李华,新学期开学两个月了,你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你
1.到新学校后的感受交流内容要求包括以下要点、校园环境和教学设施;
1、师生给你的印象;
2、给学校的两点建议3注意、词数词左右;
1100、信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入词数;
1.100可设当增加细节,以使行文连贯
2.【答案1Life inSenior HighLife in senior high school is exciting,happy andtiring.As everyoneknows,senior highis far from relaxingand easy.Every minutecounts.Working late at nightis oftenthe case.There ismuch homeworkand we have totake manyexams,such asmonthly exams.We have to meetwith andovercome a lot ofdifficulties in our studies.To ourdelight,we havemade constantandgreat progress with the help of the teachers.Besides ourlessons,of course,we alsomanage to make fulluse of our free time torelax ourselves.Though wearebusy and tired,we stillfeel happy and confidentof ourfuture.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文题目要求考生用英语以为题写一篇短文,叙述高中生活“Life inSenior High”【详解】第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时结构总分总法总分总法指把开头提出论点,中间若干分论点,结尾总括论点的写作方法,并以这种方式安排所写内容要求总体印象激动、快乐、辛苦;实际生活时间紧,常熬夜;作业多,考试多;设法放松,看书打球;克服困难,不断进步;展望未来充满信心第二步:列提纲(重点词组)exciting;happy;tiring;farfrom;relaxing;counts;lateat night;monthly exams;overcome a lot ofdifficulties;to ourdelight;make greatprogress;constant;withthehelp of;manage to do;make fulluse of;freetime;relax oneself;busy;tired;confident.第三步连词成句
1.Lifeinsenior high schoolisexciting,happyandtiring.
2.As everyoneknows,senior highis farfrom relaxingand easy.
3.Working lateatnightis oftenthecase.
4.There ismuch homeworkand we havetotake manyexams,such asmonthly exams.
5.We haveto meetwith andovercome a lot ofdifficulties in our studies.
6.To ourdelight,we havemade constantand greatprogresswiththehelpofthe teachers.
7.Besides ourlessons,of course,we alsomanage to make fulluse of our freetime torelax ourselves.
8.Though wearebusy andtired,we stillfeel happyand confidentofourfuture.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇(衔接词).表并列补充关系1Besides.表转折对比关系:(供参考)2However,On thecontrary,but,Some...,while others...,so…that….表因果关系(供参考)3Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As aresult连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰【点睛】[高分句型.(由引导限定性定语从句)1]As everyoneknows,seniorhighis farfrom relaxingand easyas[高分句型(由引导让步2]Though weare busyandtired,we stillfeel happyand confidentofourfuture.though状语从句)假定你是李华,最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题你给笔友写了一封信,希望得到他的帮
9.Allen助内容如下.学习热情减退;
1.作业太多,疲于应付;
23.......注意.词数左右;
1100.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯2参考词汇减退weaken【答案】Dear Allen,How areyou These days I am faced with some problems aboutmy English study,which hasconfused melong.SoI amwriting thisletter for your advice.First of all,my wishto study hard and get goodgrades hasbeen weakenedwith timegoing by.More often,I findEnglishso boringthat Ifall asleepin class.Besides,it seemsto haveendless homework,andI havetocopy others9tofinish it.Whats worse,I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject.Is itnecessary forme tofind atutor whocanhelp me with my EnglishThafs all.I wouldappreciate itif youcould lendme ahand.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文假定考生是李华,最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题你给笔友写了一封信,希望得Allen到他的帮助【详解】.词汇积累1建议advice—suggestion首先first ofall—first andforemost止匕夕卜besides—whats more无聊的boring—dull.句式拓展2简单句变复合句原句Whats worse,I ambecoming weakerand weakerin thissubject.拓展句Whats worse,because I ambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject,Iam very anxiousabout it.【点睛】【高分句型1]ThesedaysIamfacedwithsomeproblemsaboutmyEnglishstudy,which hasconfused melong.(运用了引导的非限制性定语从句)which【高分句型】(运用了作形式主语2Is itnecessary forme tofind atutor whocan helpmewithmyEnglishit和引导的定语从句)who.假定你是李华,下学期你的美国朋友将作为交换生到你所在的高中学习一年请写信向表示10Jim Jim欢迎,并简要介绍中国教育和美国教育的不同要点如下班级学生数量不同课堂上课方式不同在校时间长短不同注意,词数词左右
1100.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯2【答案】Dear Jim,Im morethan gladto knowthat you are goingto be an exchange student inour highschool fbra wholeyear!Next,rd like to introducesome differencesbetween Chineseand Americanteaching andlearning.First,wehavemore studentsin each class thanyou do.In China,the numberof studentsin each class isusuallymore than
2.Susan孤独请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件.学好英语,从而增加和别人交流的机会;
1.多交一些朋友,友情会使她忘记孤独;2•积极参加各种活动,使自己的生活更加有趣3注意词数左右;可适当增加细节
1.
1002.提示词适应adapt to【答案】Dear Susan,Im sorryto hear that you are having trouble adaptingto your new schoollife inAmerica,but thissituation canbe easilychangedif you take myadvice.First,you shouldwork hardat English,which cangive youmore opportunitiestocommunicate with others.Secondly,why not make some friends Theycan help you toforget yourloneliness.Thirdly,itwould bea goodidea ifyoutake an active part in all kinds of activities,which willhelp tomake lifemore interesting.Bydoing so,you willbe happierwith yournew lifesoon.I hopeyou willfind theseideas useful.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生把自己当成李华,你的好友前不久随父母去了美国,她写信告诉Susan你她很不适应美国的校园生活,感到很孤独给她回复邮件提出建议全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主【详解】第步审题根据提示可知全文是一封电子邮件,给回邮件提出适应新生活的具体建议全文以一般1Susan现在时和二三人称为主第步组织要点.学好英语,从而增加和别人交流的机会;.多交一些朋友,友情会使她忘记孤独;
3.John下.鼓励其广交朋友;
1.积极参加体育活动,强身健体;
2.努力奋斗进入理想大学3注意.可加入一些细节,使文章更加通顺合理;
1.词数左右(信的格式已给出,不计入总词数)2100Dear John,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear John,Im sopleased to hearthat youve beeninSeniorHigh School.And maybeyou needa coupleof monthsto adjustyourself.Here aresome goodtips foryou.Firstly,a lifewithout afriend isa lifewithout asun,so why not makealotof goodfriends andenjoy helpingeachother.Secondly,we cantake anactive partin sportsinourspare timeso thatwecanget intoshape,which willsurely begood for our further study.Besides,its ourduty tostudy hardtomakesure thatone dayour dreamof enteringa keyuniversity will come true.I believeyoull get used toit soonand waitforyourgood news.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生给对刚进入高中生活不太适应的美国笔友提出建议John【详解】.词汇积累1首先一firstly firstofall一定一止匕夕卜习惯于一,句式拓展surely certainlybesides—whats moregetusedto beaccustomed to2简单句变复合句原句Firstly,a lifewithout afriend isa lifewithout asun,so why not makealotof goodfriends andenjoy helpingeachother.拓展句Firstly,a lifewithout afriend isa lifewithout asun,so why notmakealotof goodfriends andenjoy helpingeachother,which willmake youhappy.【点睛】[高分句型1]Secondly,wecantakeanactivepartin sportsinourspare timeso thatwecanget intoshape,which will(运用了引导的目的状语从句和引导的非限制性定语从句)surely begoodforourfurtherstudy.so thatwhich[高分句型2]Besides,its ourduty tostudyhardtomakesure thatone dayour dreamof enteringa keyuniversitywill(运用了引导的宾语从句)cometrue.that.假定你是李华,你的外国好友将作为交换生到你市的一所高中学习因担心自己不能快速适应这里的4Eric学校生活,特写信向你求助,请就此给他写封回信要点如下乐意提供帮助;提出具体建议;希望能够帮到对方
1.
2.
3.注意词数左右;
1.100可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2..信的开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数3Dear Eric,I feeldelighted tolearn that youarecoming tostudy inour cityas anexchangestudent.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Eric,I feeldelighted tolearn thatyouarecoming tostudy inour cityas anexchangestudent.As forhow toadjustyourself to the new schoollifehere quickly,Td liketo giveyousome advice.First,I recommendthatyoulearn theschooPs rulesby readingits handbookfirst.If possible,you mayas wellvisitthe school in advance,so thatyou willknow theschool better.Besides,its quite necessary to communicate with yourclassmates andschoolmates,which enablesyou tomake morenew friends.Whafs more,participating inafter-classactivities canbe ofgreat helptoo!By doingthis,not onlycan youimprove yourselfbut you will getyourself involvedinthe groupquickly.I hopeyou willfind thesuggestions practicaland donthesitate toturn tome anytime youneed help.Lookingforward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本文为提纲式作文,内容为回复求助信,提出建议【详解】首先确定文章的主要要点,确定文章的时态为一般现在时,人称可用第二人称文章可分三段首先表达对的欢迎和乐意提供帮助;然后提出具体建议;最后希望能够帮到对方写作时要注意态度诚恳,要点全面,Eric表达正确,条理清晰【点睛】本文运用了较多从句,如宾语从句I recommendthatyoulearn theschoofs rulesby readingits handbookfirst.状语从句If possible,you mayas wellvisit theschoolinadvance,so thatyou willknow theschool better.作形式主语的主语从句中it itsquitenecessarytocommunicate withyour classmates andschoolmates,定语从句.彳到装句which enablesyou tomake morenewfriendsnot onlycan youimprove yourself.此外,文章注意各层次之间的衔接使文章很有条理first,besides,what^more,假定你是高一学生李华,你叔叔家的弟弟小明也是一名高一学生,但是他觉得不太适应高一的学习生活,想
5.让你给他一些学习建议请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括与老师交流,征求老师意见;
1.上课积极参与讨论,专心听讲,做好笔记
2.其它方面
3.注意词数左右;
1.100可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
2.Dear Jim,Im delightedto hear from you.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im delightedtohearfrom you.Now,Id liketo sharemy studytips withyou.First,youd bettercommunicate withyour teachersoften.In thisway,they mayoffer somegreat adviceon bothyourstudy andlife.Second,whynotmake yourselfactive ineach class,listen tothe teacher attentively and take notescarefullyso thatyou canreview laterThird,it sa goodidea todo yourhomework ontime soon after school,which willhelp you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.I sincerelyhope myadvice canbe helpfulto youand thatyou can enjoy yournew schoollife.Best wishes!Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇应用文,要求写一封信【详解】第一步审题审题的目的是获取重要信息通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息第一,与老师交流,
1.征求老师意见;上课积极参与讨论,专心听讲,做好笔记其它方面第二,人称为第
一、
二、三人称
2.
3.第三,时态以一般现在时为主,兼用一般将来时第二步布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量这篇写作段落数量为三段第一段,引题第二段,与老师交流,征求老师意见;上课积极参与讨论,专心听讲,做好笔记其它方面第三段,希望
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2.
3.自己的建议对有所帮助Jim第三步确定关键词汇和短语:offer,attentively,carefully,practice,enjoy,be delightedtodosth,hearfrom,share sthwithsb,communicatewith,make yourselfactive,listen tothe teacher,take notes,take itfresh inyour mind,be helpfultosb.第四步确定较为高级的句子:引导的目的状语从句so thatSecond,whynotmake yourselfactive ineachclass,listen弓|导的非限制生定语从句totheteacherattentively andtake notes carefullyso thatyou canreview laterWhich tThird,it sa goodidea todo yourhomework ontime soonafter school,which willhelpyoupractice what you have弓导的宾语从句learned andmake itfresh inyour mind,thatII sincerelyhope myadvice canbe helpfulto youand thatyou canenjoy yournewschoollife.第五步连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First,Second,Third.第六步注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰使用了较为高级的句式:如引so that导的目的状语从句Second,whynotmake yourselfactive ineachclass,listen totheteacherattentivelyandtakenotescarefully引导的非限制性定语从句so thatyou canreview laterWhich Third,it sa goodidea todo yourhomework ontime弓导的宾soonafterschool,which willhelpyoupracticewhatyouhavelearnedandmake itfreshinyourmind,thatI语从句I sincerelyhope myadvice canbe helpfulto youand thatyou canenjoyyournewschoollife.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力假设你是李华,你收到朋友李磊的信,他告诉你他不适应高一数学老师讲的课,在学习数学方面有些困难,
6.以至于跟不上其他同学,因此他感到非常着急请你给李磊写一封信,想办法帮助他解决这方面的困难参考词汇适应adapt to要求不要逐字翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
1.词数左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
2.100Dear LiLei,I havegot yourletter.__________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear LiLei,I havegot yourletter.And Iam veryglad thatyou believeme.Ihaveknown youhave somedifficulty inlearningMaths becausecant adapt to whatyour mathsteacher teaches.Dont worryabout it.I thinkthe followingmay beof helptoyou.Firstly,youd betterlisten totheteachercarefully inclassandpractisemore.You canask yourMaths teacherto explainwhatyou cant understandafter class.You shouldbe confidentandbelieve inyourself.I thinkyoucanmakeit.Finally,youcancommunicatewithyourclassmatesandgetsomeadviceonMaths.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求用英语写一封回信【详解】要注意书信的格式和特殊用词考虑用一般现在时来写这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如.做某事有困难,适应还使用了宾语从句have somedifficulty indoingsthadapt toAnd Iamveryglad thatyou believe.和宾语从句..等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性in meI thinkyouwilladapttoitanddo wellin itin future.很多学生进入高中以来,因饮食不规律,导致了一系列健康问题,你校英文校刊饮食栏目针对这一问题,7向全体同学征稿,请你以为题目,为该栏目投稿,主要内容如下“Be aSmart Eater”健康饮食的重要性;
1.如何做到健康饮食;
2.向同学们发出呼吁
3.注意词数左右
1.80可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
2.Be aSmart Eater【答案】As ahighschoolstudent,I noticedthat manystudents hada seriesof healthproblems becauseof irregulardiet.Now Idliketocall onyou tobeasmart eater.For usstudents,eating healthyfood isofgreatimportance becausewe needenough nutrientstokeepour bodyfunctioningwell.Having mealsregularly isa goodway tokeep fitand preventdiseases.Besides,we shouldeat lessjunkfood.By eatingjunk food,we mayget sickeasily.。
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