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阅读下面材料，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一篇完整的故事In mycommunity,theres amuch-loved streetcleaner namedPaul Spiery.Since2017,the63-year-old hasbeen dutifullycleaning ourstreets.As hesweeps,he alwayssings alongwiththe melodioustunes ofElvis Presley（猫王）.Pauls beautifulvoice floatsin theair,adding aunique charmto our community.Paul hasdeveloped deepand genuinefriendships withmany ofus locals.Im hisbestfriend aswe bothlove Elvis songs.Whenever weexpress ourgratitude tohim,he alwayssmilesbrightly andsays hesjust doinghis job.His presencehas not only keptour roadscleanbut alsolifted outspirits.We,the neighbours,were deeplytouched byPauls hardwork andpositive attitude.Sowe decidedto cometogether togive hima specialgift.We managedto raiseover£3,000tosend himon aholiday toPortugal aplace he had alwaysdreamed ofrevisiting sincehe hadonlybeen abroadonce,and thatwas toPortugal.However,our kindplan encountereda bigproblem.Pauls employer,a wastemanagement company,stated thatemployees couldntreceive anygifts inthe formofmoney otherthan theirregular salaryaccording tostrict corporaterules.At thisnews,Paulsaid,“Well,rules arerules.Its okay.Im gratefulfbr whateveryone hastried todo fbrme.He continuedto sweepthe floor,humming asong ofElvis Presleyas usual.We wereall disappointedthat Paul couldnt enjoythis well-deserved holidayas arewardfor allhis hardwork forourcommunityand determinedto finda proper way torecognize Paul.I postedPauls storyon socialmedia,Giving himthis incrediblegift wouldbe aheartfeltway toshow ourappreciation foreverything hedoes.Lets cometogether tomakethis dreamhappen fbrsomeone whotruly deservesit.The postwent viraland caughttheattention ofa packageholiday company,OnTheBeach.The managerof OnTheBeachgot intouch withme,and putforward aproperwaytorecognizePaul.注意
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答第一段OnTheBeach announcedonline thatit wasto holda specialsingingcompetition.第二段To Paulsrelief,the wastemanagement companyhad noobjection tohimaccepting the win.又早大忌-Din_L,在社区备受喜爱的清洁工保罗，多年来边清扫街道边哼唱猫王歌曲，与居民结下深厚情谊居民为表感激，众筹3000多英镑想送他去葡萄牙度假，却因雇主公司规定无法成行失望之余，“我”将保罗故事发在社交媒体，引发关注，OnTheBeach公司提出举办特殊歌唱比赛比赛要求唱猫王歌曲，各地人员踊跃报名，都想帮保罗圆梦最终公司同意保罗接受比赛获胜奖励，保罗得以踏上期待已久的葡萄牙之旅，归来后更热情地清扫街道，与社区共享快乐伏笔及续写回应伏笔保罗清扫时总哼唱猫王歌曲回应歌唱比赛要求参赛者唱猫王歌曲，与保罗日常爱好呼应，既贴合他的风格,又让比赛更具针对性，为他圆梦铺垫伏笔保罗只出过一次国，且是去葡萄牙，一直梦想再去回应比赛奖品设定为葡萄牙豪华度假套餐，精准对应他的梦想之地，满足他多年心愿伏笔居民众筹3000多英镑送保罗度假，体现大家的感激之情回应虽因公司规定受阻，但这份心意促使“我”发社交媒体求助，引发后续一系列帮助保罗的行动，是故事转折的源头伏笔保罗雇主有严格公司规定，员工不能收金钱形式礼物回应推动故事发展，让居民另寻办法，引出歌唱比赛这个创意，避免直接送钱违规，使情节更曲折伏笔“我”与保罗因都爱猫王歌曲成为好友，关系亲近回应“我”更积极为保罗奔走，发社交媒体讲述他的故事，串联起整个帮助保罗的行动，凸显友情力量续写要点第一段详细描述比赛现场，如参赛者们的精彩表现，观众的热情反应，评委的认真评判，强调比赛竞争的激烈程度，突出大家为帮保罗圆梦全力以赴可举例一些参赛者的特别表现，比如有小孩用稚嫩嗓音唱出经典韵味，有专业歌手也来助力展现高超技艺第二段写保罗得知能去度假后的准备过程，包括他激动的心情如何难以抑制，和邻居们分享喜悦，收拾行李时的小心翼翼，仿佛已经置身葡萄牙感受美好还可提及他在葡萄牙的难忘经历，像参观名胜古迹、与当地人热情交流，回来后如何将这份快乐回馈社区，如清扫更卖力，歌声更欢快，感染更多人情感线起初是居民对保罗辛勤工作的感激，众筹体现深厚情谊；遇阻时的失望；而后“我”发社交媒体求助的急切；比赛筹备时众人的期待；保罗得知能度假的惊喜、激动；度假归来的幸福、感恩，情感层层递进，丰富细腻故事线保罗日常清扫街道哼唱猫王歌曲获居民喜爱一居民众筹送度假遇阻一“我”发社交媒体引关注一OnTheBeach办比赛一保罗终获度假机会一度假归来更积极生活，故事线连贯曲折，引人入胜主旨升华句True kindnessknows nobounds andcan breakthrough anyobstacles tobring warmthtopeoples lives.（真正的善良无界限，能冲破任何障碍，为人们生活带来温暖）In acommunity,its thesmall actsof loveand unitythat createthe mostbeautiful stories.（在一个社区中，正是那些小小的爱与团结之举创造了最美好的故事）Sometimes,whenone doorcloses,another oneopens withthe powerof collectivekindness.（有时，当一扇门关闭，集体善意的力量会打开另一扇门）The spiritof givingback isnot onlyabout receivinga rewardbut alsoabout spreadinghappinessfurther.（回馈的精神不仅在于获得回报，更在于将快乐传递得更远）A simpleact ofappreciation canset offa chainreaction oflove thatenriches everyoneslives.（一个简单的感激之举能引发爱的连锁反应，丰富每个人的生活）写作示范两篇第一篇OnTheBeach announcedonline thatit wasto holda specialsinging competition.Contestants flockedto theregistration desks,their eyesshining withdetermination.Theday of the competitiondawned brightand clear.The stagewas bathedin colorfullights,andthe audiencefilled everyseat,buzzing withexcitement.A younggirl startedthe show,hersmall voicetrembling slightlybut hittingevery noteof theElvissongwith passion.As thecompetitionprogressed,professional singersand amateursalike wowedthe crowd.Thejudges,renowned musicexperts,scribbled notesintently.In theend,it was aneck-and-neck race,but onewinner emerged,securing thedream holidayfor Paul.To Paulsrelief,the wastemanagement companyhad noobjection tohim acceptingthe win.When Paulgot thenews,he wasspeechless fora moment,then ahuge grinspread acrosshisface.He rushedto tellhis neighbors,who huggedhim tightly.Packing hissuitcase,hishands shookwith anticipation.In Portugal,he marveledat theancient castles,tasteddelicious localcuisine,and madefriends withthe locals.Returning home,he sweptthestreets withrenewed energy,his Elvistunes echoinglouder,spreading thejoy hehadexperienced.弟—篇4OnTheBeach announcedonline thatit wasto holda specialsinging competition.Wordspread likewildfire,and soonthe auditionhall wasfilled with aspiring singers.The dayofthe eventarrived,and theatmosphere waselectric.Contestants fromall walksof lifetookthe stage.An elderlygentleman,withavoice fullof nostalgia,brought theaudience backintime withhis renditionof theElvis classic.The cheersand applausewere deafening.Thejudges hada toughtime deciding,as eachperformance wasunique andheartfelt.Finally,the winnerwas announced,and thecrowd eruptedin jubilation.To Paulsrelief,the wastemanagement companyhad noobjection tohim acceptingthewin.Paulcouldhardly believehis ears.Tears streameddown hisface ashe thankedeveryone.He spentdays preparingfor thetrip,sharing hisexcitement withthe community.InPortugal,he walkedalong thesandy beaches,watched thesunset,and collectedseashells assouvenirs.Back inthe community,he wasa changedman.His cleaningwork becamean art,his songsa melodyof gratitude,inspiring everyoneto cherishthe simplejoys oflife andthepower ofkindness.【答案】OnTheBeach announcedonline thatit wasto holda specialsinging competition.Thisevent,which wasdesigned fbrpeople wholove ElvisPresleys music,offered agrand prizeofa dreamvacation toPortugal.Anyone whocould singElviss songswas welcometo join.Paul,who hada passionfor Elvisand oftensang whileworking,was encouragedby hisfriendsto enterthe contest.To everyonesdelight,Paul performedwonderfully andwon theheartsof thejudges.As aresult,he becamethe winnerofthecompetition,earning thetripthat hehad longedfor.To Paulsrelief,the wastemanagementcompanyhad noobjection tohim acceptingthewin.The companythought itwasaprize forhis talentrather thana directgift ofmoney.After learningabout hisvictory,Paul feltoverjoyed andgrateful.The newsspread quickly,and manyneighbors cameto congratulatehim.Paul,who wasalways modest,thankedeveryone fortheir support.With thisunexpected opportunity,Paul finallygot torevisitPortugal,the placehehaddreamed ofseeing again.His achievementnotonlybrought himpersonaljoy butalso madethe wholecommunity proud.。
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