03 良师益友2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国版）

03良师益友2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略全国通用版素材储备与相关话题写作指导看到关于良师益友的话题，首先要确立哪些人属于这一范围叔叔/舅舅/伯伯uncle、阿姨/姑姑aunt、表/堂兄弟/姐妹cousin、老师teacher、同学classmate、朋友friend亲朋好友的选择范围比较广，但要写出特色，一定是给作者留下深刻印象的人如果写亲戚，多以写亲情为主;如果写师长，多以写恩情为主;如果写同学、朋友，多以写友情为主无论是写哪-一种，都围绕着和作者之间发生的故事展开其实这个话题和家人的话题很相似在文章中可以叙述事例，来增加文章的真情实感实践案例题目My favorite______________审题看题目是半命题作文，可写内容很多、可以写人也可以写物，重点在favorite±,这里我们以写人为例:Myfavorite teacher/friend就要写出人物和我之间发生的事，用事例结合议论，说明为什么是favorite.my favorite teacher/friend应该是夹叙夹议的文章，文章可以分三段第-段:点明主题，即谁是my favoriteteacher/friend第二段:通过生动的语言写出这个老师或者朋友对我的特别之处，可以写2:-3个方面，个方面详o细写可以举例，其他方面略写如果是描写人物品质，多用一般现在时，如果是记叙曾经发生的事情，用一般过去时第三段:总结段，抒发感情，可以表达对人物的喜爱、感谢、怀念等情感核心语汇get alongvery well相处得很好teach inan unusualway用一种不寻常的方式教书She and IWhen Ifirst metmy roommate,I didntexpect herto becomeone ofmy bestfriends.She lookedrather timidbecause she didnttalk much.People thoughtone ofher parentswas aforeigner forshe hadbig andpretty eyes.Shewas slightlyfat and she wasvery good-looking.However,as soonas Iget toknow her,she becomesa completelydifferent person.It turnsout that she is verytalkative,and shelikes tolaugh,just likeme.She is a hugesoccer fan,and sheeven namedherself afterone ofherfavorite soccerplayers,Andrea.Playing trickson meis probablyone ofher favoritethings to do,but Ienjoyspending timewith herbecauseshealways getsmy jokesand she is alwaysthere tosupport me.She is the bestroommateI couldpossibly askfor.My goodfriendEverybody hasfriends.Friends playan important role inour life.They canhelp us,inspire usand comfortus.The personthat leftme thedeepest impressionis agirl calledElizabeth.Elizabeth isnot myclassmate inschool.We firstmet ina speechclass.We alwaysdiscuss aboutour speechestogetherduring recessand talkabout manythings.By takingwith her.I knewthat shewas bornin America.Wealways speakEnglish toeach other.I improvedmy spokenEnglish throughtalking withher.We alsohelped each other throughlearning Oncewe entereda speechcompetition together.We helpedeachother duringthe competitionand wegot goodmarks1won thesecond placeand shewon thethird place.This is my goodfriend-Elizabeth Shealways helpsme andencourages meShe nevergets angryand isveryhumorous I will never forget her.I never forget him/herThe person Ill neverforget is my Englishteacher Mr.Peterson.He isof mediumheight andhas athick beardHetouches itwhenever heis thinking.It isfor hisknowledge that I admirehim most.His eyesoften shinewith wisdomwhen hetalks tome.He is alife mentorwho givesme guidanceand helpsme growboth academicallyand personally.He oftentells usthat itsnouse memorizingnew wordswithout understanding.My Englishhas greatlyimproved withhis helpUnfortunately.He isleaving theschool andmoving toHongKong nextyear,but Imsure I will payhim avisit sometime inthe nearfuture.I will remember himforever..be knowledgeable矢口识渊博的be strictwith对…严格be good at teaching擅长教书.show greatinterest in…表现出强烈的兴趣an experiencedteacher一位经验丰富的老师show greatlove to.对・・・・表现出强烈的爱make greatprogress取得很大进步spend thehappy timewith与….一起度过愉快的时光.with oneshelp由于某人的帮助in onesspare time在某人空闲时improve rapidly快速提高.try onesbest to do sth.尽某人最大力量做某事.a strongdesire forknowledge强烈的求知欲treat everystudent fairly公平对待每位学生参考句型1ismy bestfriend,who growsup withme,和我一起长.・・・・是我最好的朋友eg Tomismybestfriend,who growsup withme.和我一起长大的汤姆是我最好的朋友

2.最高级+名词+that+1+have ever+seen/known/had/heard/read...是我看到过的了解的/听说过的/读过的最・・・・・・・・e.g.She is the mosthardworking classmatethat I have everseen.她是我见过的最用功的同学

3.There isno denyingthat・•・不可否认・・・・・e.g.There isno denyingthat heis the most knowledgeablepersonIhave everheard.不可否认，他是我所听说过的最有学识的人Of themany teachersI hadin primaryschool,...istheone I will neverforget.在我小学的许多老师里面，…是我永远不会忘记的e.g.Of themany teachersI hadin primaryschool,Miss Fangistheone Iwill neverforget.在我小学的许多老师里面，方老师是我永远不会忘记的■・・used disciplineto makesure thatwe learned..well...用练习确保我们把・・・・学好e.g.Miss Fangused disciplineto makesure thatwe learnedour mathwell.方老师用练习确保我们把数学学好■He is a manwith..and always friendly to us.他是一…的人，总是对我们很友好e.g.He isa manwith agoodsense ofhumor andalwaysfriendlyto us.他是一个很幽默的人，总是对我们很友好One ofthe mostimportant reasonsthat I like heris...我喜欢她的重要原因之一是,.…e.g.One ofthemostimportant reasonsthat Ilike heris that she isvery sincere.我喜欢她的重要原因之是她非常真诚■A friendin needisafriend indeed.患难见真情范文一My favoriteteacherMy favoriteteacher ismy Englishteacher Jane.Although Ihaven*t seenher forseveral years,Ihaveneverforgotten her

①charmingimage.

②[was sodeeply impressed by herdevotion toteaching.Her lessonswere alwayswell preparedand clearlydelivered,so Icould benefita lotfrom herclass.Her livelyway of teaching attractedme.Through hersense ofhumor,every classbecame arelaxing one.She madelearning moreenjoyable andmoreentertaining.Besides,she isvery kindtous.

③Whenever Iencountered difficulties,she encouragedme andcheered meupwith heitender look.

④She isa respectableteacher as well asa warm-hearted friendwho Iwill keepin mymind forever.注

①charming迷人的

②be deeplyimpressedby对一印象深刻

③让步状语从句

④定语从句；aswellas也点评:段首即点明了主题favorite,随后在第二段中顺理成章地用了一般过去时，来讲述这位老师受小作者喜爱的地方第二段中用besides表明作者写了老师的两个方面her wayofteaching和her kindness,在两方面中又侧重于第一点，有详有略最后-段点题升华:Iwillkeep herin mymind forever.范文二My favoritefriendAs anold slanggoes,“

①Good coffeeisapleasure,good friendsare treasures.”There mustbe onewho willalways beinthe firstplace in my heart,and hername isAnnie.

②I metAnnie whenwe firststarted ourmiddle schooljoumey.As sheisaclassmate andthe sportpartner ofmine、

③she not only helpsme alot withmy studybut alsoplays animportantroleinmylife.Both ofus arequite communicative,outgoing andsensitive.And wehave afew mutualhobbies such as piano,opera anddrama.Just likethe thingsall commonfriendswould liketo do,we oftenshare secretsand strangeideas with each other.We encourageeach other and arealwaysthere foreach other.I reallylike herandIwillrememberall thedays wevewalked through.注

①谚语

②时间状语从句

1.老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等；

2.以事例描述喜爱的原因；

3.表达对这位老师的感激和祝福要求

1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；

2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；

3.卷面整洁，书写美观，课适当加2-3分；

4.词数80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数My favoriteteacherIts timeto graduate from juniorhigh school.Td liketo writesomething aboutmy favoriteteacher.【参考范文】My favoriteteacherIts timeto graduatefrom juniorhigh school.Id liketo writesomething aboutmyfavoriteteacher.Of allthe teachers,Ilikemy Englishteacher best.She isa lovelyand outgoing girl who loves singing and reading.She isof mediumheightand has long straight hair.When I was inGrade Seven,I wasso shythat Iwas afraidto take part inthe English competition.She encouragedmenot togive upany chanceto showmyself toothers.Thanks toher,I changed my attitude and won the first prize.Iwillneverforgetthe wonderfultime wewere together.Best wishestoher!【名师点评】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如graduatefrom,of allthe teachers,of mediumheight,so that,be afraidtodo,takepartin,give up,encourage sb.todo,at theweekends,thanks tosb.,the firstprize等而并歹ij结构She isof mediumheight andhaslongstraighthair./1changedmyattitudeandwonthefirstprize.和She isa lovelyandoutgoinggirlwholovessingingandreading./When Iwas inGrade Seven,Iwasso shythatIwas afraidtotakepart intheEnglishcompetition./Iwillneverforgetthe wonderfultime wewere together.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理满分作文必背。