15 说明文之人物类 - 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战2023年中考英语高分作文

说明文之人物类15研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战年中考英语高分作文（通用版）2023第一部分说明文之人物类体裁解读及写法点拨体裁解读说明文是中考书面表达题中常见的写作形式说明文是以说明为主要表达方式来解释说明事物或阐明事理的文章在初中阶段，说明文主要要求考生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚的描述，考查考生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示转化为完整文字信息的能力写法点拨人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等首先要全面了解这个人，然后根据需要选取写作素材，简明扼要又重点突出地去介绍，力求真实准确，恰如其分人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格，或从一般经历到创造性的贡献，在最后常有结论性的评语写人物说明文一般包括以下几点出生年月；主要经历；事迹成就；影响、评价

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4.叙述方法一般按照时间顺序，从外形到性格，从一般经历到创造性的贡献，最后常有结论性的评语语言简洁生动说明文的目的是向读者介绍他们不了解、不熟悉的人物、事理等，因此说明文的语言要浅显、简洁、生动时态语态说明文常用一般现在时如果说明的是人物、事物过去或将来的情况，则要用过去或将来的有关时态另外，由于说明文重点放在被说明的人物、事物上，故有些说明文被动语态的使用频率相对比较高第二部分说明文之人物类万能黄金模板【参考范文】（彳禺像）My idol is Eileen Gu.Can youtell ussomething abouther Do you want to know something more about herNow I introduceher to you.She wasborn onSeptember3,

2003.She is

1.75meters tall.Her fatheris anAmerican person.Her motheris a Chinese person.She hasmany hobbies,such ashorse riding,piano,skiing andso on.She studiedskiing atthe ageofthree andsoon showedher talent.When she was9years old,she becamea champion.In the2022Beijing WinterOlympicGames,she wontwo goldmedals andone silvermedal.She willenter StanfordUniversity inthe fall of

2022.I thinkGu Ailingsachievements andtalents areonly partof it.Most of them arehard trainingand self-discipline lifestyle.She isself-conscious andself disciplined.Ambition andlove arethe wingsof GuAilings success.【详解】.题干解读该题目属于记叙文写作，要求根据所给英文提示介绍中国天才少女谷爱凌，包括她的生1日、家庭、爱好以及经历和成就写作指导本文人称以第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主，用过去时描述经历同时注意文章的连贯

2.性，保证条理清晰（•山东聊城•三模）2022老舍是世纪中国最伟大的作家之一，请根据以下提示，以为题，介绍一下老舍的经历和作品20“Lao She”人物经历作品《茶馆》年出生在北京；1899戏剧有三幕；年母亲把他送去师范学院；1913展示中国普通人的生活；老舍年毕业后，变成小学校长；1918讲述了王利发和他北京茶馆顾客的故年，离家去英国；年后回国；写19245事了戏剧、小说、短篇故事注意短文词数词左右

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2.【参考范文】Can youtell ussomething aboutLao SheDo youwant to know somethingmore about himNow I introduce him to you.Lao She is one of the greatest Chinesewriters ofthe twentiethcentury.He wasbom inBeijing.His mothersent himto ateachers school in

1913.After finishingschoolin1918,he becamea headmasterof aprimaryschool.In1924,Lao Sheleft homeand wentto Englandand returnedto Chinafive yearslater.He wrotemany plays,novels andshortstories aboutpeoples lives.Teahouse is one ofLao Shesmost famousplays.The playhas threeacts andshows thelives ofcommon people in China.It tellsus thestory ofWang Lifaand thecustomers ofhis teahousein Beijing.It describesthe changesin Chinesesociety.He wascalled thePeoples Artist”.We alllove himand hisworks.【详解】［总体分析］1题材本文是一篇记叙文；2时态时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；3提示根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主［写作步骤］第一步，对老舍进行整体的评价介绍；第二步，具体介绍老舍的个人经历；第三步，最后是介绍老舍的作品［亮点词汇］

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③回到return to［高分句型］1Lao She isoneofthe greatest Chinesewriters ofthe twentiethcentury.（oneof的最高级的结构）2The playhas threeacts andshows thelives ofcommon people in China,（and并列两个动词短语）引出人物.A Can you...Do youwant toknow...介绍人物introduce himto you.He is...He wasborn...He典型事迹A He often...One day...Not only...but also...作出评价»He is called...We all...第三部分必备词汇与套用句型必备亮点词汇表示夕卜貌特征

1.beautiful,big nose,black eyes,fat,good-looking,handsome,healthy,near-sighted,ordinary-looking,pretty,short,strong,tall,thin,with abig smile,white-haired,curly/straight hair,medium height...表示‘性格特点

2.absent-minded,attractive,bad-tempered,bright,confident,friendly,generous,humorous,kind,kind-hearted,lazy,naughty,smart,warm-hearted,wise,outgoing,quiet...表示兴趣爱好

3.be goodat,be interestedin,be fondof,be pleasedwith,enjoy doing,expect to do,look forwardto doing sth,put onesheart into...

4.表示经历事迹become amember ofthe・••，concentrate ondoing sth,devote oneselfto,encourage sbto do sth,fight for,have agood wayof doingsth,make upones mindto do sth,try onesbest to do sth...表示他人评价

5.a modelbe consideredas,be famous/known as,be regardedas,make great contributions toour country,seta goodexample toallofus...经典套用句型

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4.参考词汇:高大健壮tall andstrong最喜欢的科目favourite subject风趣幽默funny andhumorous运动听音乐do sportslisten tomusic乐于做某事相处be ready todosth.get on withDear Jack,How iseverything goingNow Iam writingto introducemy classmateChen Dongto you.Pm sure youd like to have such a person as your friend.With mybest wishesYours,Li Hua【写作思路】【参考范文】Dear Jack,How iseverything goingNowIam writingto introducemy classmateChen Dongto you.Now Tam writingto introducemy classmateChen Dongto you.He is a16-year-old boy.He hasround face,black hairand（高分句型一）（要点一,介绍男同学的外貌及特征.）bright eyes.He istall andstrong.He likessmiling verymuch.He likesdoing sports.reading andlistening tomusic.His favouritesubject isEnglish.because hethinks itis veryinteresting.He【要点二，介绍同学的性格.】is humorousand funny.He isreadyto help othersand easyto getonwithothers.He likesdoingsports.reading andlistening tomusic.His favouritesubject isEnglish,because hethinks itis veryinteresting.He alsospends（高分句型二）much time taking part in after-school activities.He likeswinter verymuch,because hethinks winterisaseason，【要点三，介绍同学的喜好.]todomany funthings,such asskating makingsnowman andso on.His dreamis becomingan【要点四，介绍同学的理想.English teacher,because hewants hisstudents to get goodgrades.J Imsureyou^liketohavesuch（要点五，美好的祝愿.）apersonasyourfriend.With mybest wishes!Yours,【名师点评】Li Hua高分句型一此句是一般现在时的陈述句.运用短语”喜欢做某事”，短语He likessmiling verymuch.like doingsth verymuch”非常，很二此句可翻译为“他很喜欢笑.”注意后加like doing高分句型二此句是一般现在时的陈述句.运用短语He alsospends muchtimetakingpart inafter-school activities.spend sometime（）”花时间做某事”.短语”参加二此句可翻译为他还花大量时间参加课外活动.”in doingsth takepartin第五部分中考真题黄金模板运用满分作文A（•湖北咸宁•中考真题）短文写作2018“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演讲者上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以“Huang Xuhua-the Father of为题，写一篇人物介绍写作要点Chinas Nukes”他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇；

1.在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造；

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3090.他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱4写作要求文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名；

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3.80核潜艇国家安全隐姓埋名nuke;national security;conceal one^identity一Huang Xuhuathe Fatherof ChinasNukesLast Fridayafternoon,all theteachers andstudents inthe schoolwatched thevideo aboutHuang Xuhua-the fatherofChinas nukes.We wereall inspiredby hisheroic deeds.【参考范文】Huang Xuhua—the Fatherof ChinasNukesLast Fridayafternoon,all theteachers andstudents inthe schoolwatched thevideo aboutHuang Xuhua-the fatherofChinas nukes.Do youwant toknow something abouthimNow Iintroduce himtoyou.He wasborn ina richfamily.In orderto makeour countrystronger,he gaveup thechance tobea doctor,but triedto learnhow to make/build thenukes.Although theconditions werevery hardat thattime,he concentratedonstudying theknowledge ofmaking/building thenukes.To protectthe nationalsecurity,he usedto conceal/concealed hisidentity.For about30years,hewasunknown forothers.And nowhe stillkeeps workinghard evenif heis over90years old.And nowhe doesntstop working/struggling evenif heisover90years oldHisstory explainsto uswhat isthegreatlove forthe peopleand country.We wereall inspiredby hisheroic deeds.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文根据要点提示，写一篇人物介绍根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，人称为第三人称所给出的写作要点比较具体，并给出了作文的开头和结尾，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系写作中要用到的重点词组有为了，放弃,in ordert giveup tryto设法做某事,,专心做某事过去常常做某事,不为人所知dosth.concentrate ondoingsthusedtodosthbe unknownforB（•广西桂林•中考真题）2021年月日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种2021522不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatesthero inmy heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹1930be born,in Beijing;1964start a special study about rice;1974develop anew kindof rice;1980begin to,help people grow more生平事迹Facts abouthis liferice,not only...but also...,China,many other areas aroundtheworld;2021die,in Changsha;•••solve,the problemof food,for millionsof people,（杂交水稻之call,the fatherof hybridrice”;成就贡献Contributions父）…己One ofthe bestways to remember himZshould,save food,never wasteany food...念他最好的方式之一【写作要求】、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节、文章词数在词左右，开头已经1290给出，不计入总词数、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名3The greatesthero inmy heart——Yuan LongpingYuan Longping isthe greatesthero inmy heart.【参考范文】The greatesthero inmy heart-Yuan LongpingYuan Longping isthegreatesthero inmy heart.Do youwant toknow somethingmore abouthimNow Iintroduce himtoyou.He wasborn in

1930.He startedaspecialstudyaboutrice.Heoftenworked onit dayand night.In1974,he developeda newkindof rice,Hybrid Rice.In1980,he begantohelp peoplegrowmore ricenot onlyin Chinabut alsoin manyotherareasaroundthe world.Tn2021,he diedin Changsha.Yuan Longpingmade agreatcontributionto theagriculture ofthe world.He solvedthe problemof foodfor millionsofpeople.So heiscalledthe fatherof hybridrice”.We alllove him.I thinkwe shouldsave foodin ourdaily lifetorememberhim.Never wasteany foodfrom nowon.【详解】.题干解读题目要求以一为题，根据表格信息来介绍袁1“The greatesthero inmy heartYuanLongping”隆平院士的生平世界，要包含生平事迹、成就贡献、纪念他的方式三部分可适当增加细节写作指导写作时可分为三段，第一段引出主题并介绍袁隆平的生平，第二段总结袁隆平的贡献，第三段提出

2.为纪念袁隆平，要节约食物介绍袁隆平的生平以一般过去时为主，写如何纪念要使用一般现在时要做到无单词拼写和语法错误C（•江苏无锡•中考真题）2021今年以来，数位中科院院士相继离世，在社会各界纷纷表达惋惜之余，“谁是真正的偶像”的话题被再度热议为此，英文报特辟了主题为的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿以下信息非限定性内Teens“Who YouAdmire Most”容，仅供参考Actors/Singers/...Scietists/Doctors/...•Jackie ChanChinese kungfii superstar•YuanLongpingFatherofHybrid Rice•Date ofbirth:Apr.7,1954Hong Kong•Date offirth:Sept.7,1930Beijing•Achievements:act inmearly100films;many•Achievements:develop anew typeof hybridriceawards;many yearsof charitywork;helppeoplein1970s;20%more perunit;the WorldFoodover30countries Prize2004;save millionsof lives注意事项短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;

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3.【参考范文】After learningthe Englishtext booksof JuniorThree,Im luckytogettoknowmany famouspeopleindifferen tfields.Among whom,Jackie Chanhas impressedme most.He isthe personI admiremost.Canyoutell ussomethingaboutJackie ChanDoyouwanttoknowsomethingmoreabouthimNowIintroducehimtoyou.He isthe personI admiremost.He isaChinesekung fusuperstar.He wasborn inHong KongonApr.7th,

1954.He issuch awell-known actorand directorthat manypeople likehim.He hasacted innearly100films andhas wonmany awards.His moviesare veryexciting.In ordertomakethe moviesrealand excellent,he alwaysplays theroles ofthe moviescarefully.So1admire himverymuch.Sometimes,he canhurt himself.He doesmany yearsof charitywork.He helpspeopleinover30countries.We alllove him.I shouldlearn strongspirits fromhim.【详解】.题干解读题目要求根据提示内容，写出自己最敬佩的一个人，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用1正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语写作指导写作时要与主题紧密结合，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单

3.词拼写和语法错误D（•河北•迁安市教研训中心模拟预测）2022北京冬奥会赛场上，中国天才少女谷爱凌因超人的运动天赋、乐观的个性和不断挑战自我的形象，成功收2022获了众多粉丝的喜爱谷爱凌曾直言，天分仅仅是一部分，而大部分是努力以及自律的生活方式请你根据下面的表格，介绍一下这位人气偶像，并谈谈你从她身上学到了什么Name EileenGu4二Birth September3rd,20034一即一，（）father American,motherN我Family（）ChineseHobby horseriding,piano,skiing3years old-start skiingExperienceand9years old-become achampion the（冠军）（成就）achievement2022Beijing WinterOlympics-（金牌）—two goldmedals提示l.What doyou knowabout EileenGu

2.What canyou learnfrom her要求短文须包括表格中所给的全部信息和提示中的两项要点，可适当发挥L文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名

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4.80参考词汇天赋自律（偶像）talent self-discipline MyidolisEileenGu.。