2023-2024学年初中书面表达主题分类训练10篇-情感与情绪-教师版

学年初中书面表达主题分类训练篇•情感与情绪2023-

2024101.（2023•江西省赣州市・期中考试）正值青春期的你会与父母生气吗？你通常是在什么情况下会与他们生气，你觉得这样适合吗？如果不合适，除了文中提到的深呼吸和冷静几秒钟之外，还有其他方式应对吗？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对生气的看法和理解以及如何应对生气写作要点）1Do you get angry with your parents）2In whatsituations would youget angry with yourparentsDo youthink itsright）3Do you know someother ways to dealwith angerexcept takinga deepbreath and being calmdown forseconds要求）短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；1）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；2）词数不少于380o【答案】（我也和父母生气）I get angrywithmy parentssometimes.They alwaysonly careabout mystudy,sothey makeme takeall kindsof remedialclasses.They alsomade alot ofrules forme.It makesme very（什么’情况下生气）uncomfortable andtired.I knowmy parentswant me to goto a better universityand bea（生气是不对的）better person,so itswrong forme to be angry.So,T slowlydeveloped somemethods.First,It isvery importantfor us to keep happy.Because beinghappy is to behealthy.Butdo youknow the ways to keep ushappy

①First,listen to music.Music isvery importantin our life.If theresno music,our lifewont beso interesting.Second,do moreexercise.As isknown toall,sports can not onlykeep ushealthy,but alsomake ushappy.Third,make more

②friends.Sometimes,friends arethe peoplewho knowus best.You canshare yoursadness andhappiness with yourfriends.Finally,dont forgetto smile.If youvehad areally badday,you canlisten tosome funnystories.Then youllbehappy.I hopeyou cankeep happyeveryday.【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇提示性的命题作文，主题是一谈中学生如何在学习和生活中保持愉快的心情写作时主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称注意表达连贯，语法正确【结构布局】引言开篇点题，引出下文中心说明保持愉快的心情的方法结尾表达祝愿【高分词汇】

①听listen to

②多锻炼do moreexercise

①（引导条件状语从句）If theresno music,our lifewont beso interesting.if（（弓|导定语从句）DSometimes,friends arethe peoplewho knowus best.who

8.（2023•浙江省杭州市・模拟题）美国朋友Sam发来的邮件，请阅读后以电子邮件的形式回复要求

①可适当添加内容让行文通顺、连贯

②字数不少于词80To Li Ping FromSam SubjectWhat shouldI doDearLi Ping,How iseverything goingwithyouIm stressedout thesedays.My lastexam resultsdropped onceagain and I reallydontknow howto improvemy grades.Whafs worse,my parentsalways compareme withothers andexpect toomuchfrom me.lfs difficultto get on well with them.I amso upset.What shouldI doPlease giveme someadvice.Looking forwardto yourquick reply!Yours,Sam【答案】Dear Sam,Im sorryto hearabout yourproblems.First ofall,one test doesnt meananything.As longas wecontinue tostudyhard,Im sureyour gradeswill improve.If you have anyproblems,be sureto askyour teachersand classmatesfor help［高分句型】in time.Secondly,you canfind sometime tohave agood talk with yourparents.And they will surelyunderstandyou.Finally,you shouldlearn to relax yourself.You canrelax yourselfby listeningtomusic,doing【高分句型二】running,etc.,and doingsomething youlike.I hopeyou findthese suggestionshelpful.Looking forwardto yourgood news.【解析】【高分句型一】Yours,LiPing如果你有任何问题，一定If youhave anyproblems,be sureto askyour teachersand classmatesfor helpin time.要及时向你的老师和同学寻求帮助引导条件状语从句if【高分句型二】我希望这些建议对你有帮助宾语从句I hopeyou findthese suggestionshelpful.I hope+能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务•江苏省泰州市•模拟题成长中的青少年有着丰富的情绪体验当取得进步时，你也许会和人分

9.2023享喜悦；当日记被偷看时，你可选择冷静后再面对；当伤心时，或许你会运动流汗来稀释悲伤；当心中忧惧时，可设法强大自己……学校网站英文版在征稿，期待你的分享请根据提示，自拟题目，描述一次经历写作要点1What experiencewouldyoulike toshare2What haveyou gotfrom theexperience写作要求用英文表达，题目自拟；1积极向上，言之有理，结构完整，逻辑通顺；2语言流畅，符合英语表达习惯；3书写清晰美观，词数左右4120【答案】Be theMaster ofYour EmotionsLife isfull ofups and downs,and sometimesthings dontgo as[高分句型一]planned.When somethingunpleasant happens,we oftenfeel disappointedor evenangry.One ofourchoices isto acceptour emotionsand donftlet themcontrol us.One day,it wasour groupsturn toclean up our classroom.When schoolwas over,I wentto theteachefs officeto【高分句型二】ask some questions.When Ihurried backto the classroom,I foundthat therewas noone left.I feltveryangry andwanted togo homeimmediately.After leavingtheclassroom,the suggestionto controlanger suddenlycameto mymind.I startedto calmdown from1to10,and Isucceeded.Finally,I decided to putdown mybackpackand pickup thebroom.I spentalmost anhour cleaningupourmessy classroom,confident thateverything inour（我的经历）classroom hadreturned tonormal,and Iam proudof whatI havedone.I successfullycontrolled angerto bethe masterof myemotions.This experiencehas inspiredmetohave the（我学至了什么）courage toface negativeemotions inthe future.【解析】【高分句型一】.当不愉快的事情发生时,我们经When somethingunpleasant happens,we oftenfeel disappointedor evenangry常感到失望甚至愤怒引导时间状语从句when【高分句型二】.放学后，我去老师的办公室问了一When schoolwas over,I wentto theteachefs officeto asksomequestions些问题引导时间状语从句when能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务

2.（2023•广东省云浮市・期中考试）每个人都有生气、难过或失落的时候，每当这时你会如何排解这种不良情绪呢？请你根据写作要点及要求用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你如何处理不良情绪要点）1When doyouhavebad feelings）2How doyou dealwith thosefeelings）3Why doyou dealwith themin thatway要求）必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，词左右（结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；180）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；2）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名3These aremy waysof dealingwith bad feelings.I hopethey canbe helpfulto you.【答案］1would feelangry orguilty about things Idid ordidn*tdo,aboutthingsI couldnthave,and alot ofotherthings.lt seemsthat everyonehas theirown badmood.But guiltand angerwont help us.Over time,theywillbecome（什么时候有不好的心情）a burdenon myshoulders.Firstly,forgiveness isa powerfultool.I shouldforgive myselffirst.I shouldntkeep mybad feelingsto myself.I alsohave to forgive thosewho makeus feelguilty orangry.Its not【高分句型always easy.But when we learn to forgiveourselves,it becomeseasier toforgive others.Secondly,I will［高分句型二】listen tosome musicand do something Ilike tocalm myselfdown.Finally,I willalso tellthis story（如何处理的和为什么这么做）tomyfriends orparents.These aremy waysof dealingwith badfeelings.!hopethey canbe helpfulto you.【解析】【高分句型一】但是当我们学会原谅自己的时候，原But whenwe learntoforgiveourselves,it becomeseasier toforgive others.谅别人就变得容易了引导的时间状语从句when【高分句型二】其次，我会听一些音乐，做一Secondly,I willlisten tosome musicanddosomething Ilike tocalm myselfdown.些我喜欢的事情来让自己冷静下来表并列and能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务

3.（2023•河南省濮阳市・期中考试）过去的几个月，因防控在家的人形成了些许疫情心情，如何调试个人心情，你肯定有个人的观点，毕竟好心情有助于身体健康，好心情让我们享受工作和生活，请你根据表格提示及要求，以“为题写一篇英语短文Keep aGood Mood”Keep aGood MoodCOVID-19several monthsago,so nowget angryWhatto dosmile,helpful•••Advantageskeep healthy,enjoy our lifeFeeling・•・要求）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；1）词数左右短文第一段已给出，不计入总词数；280）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名3Keep aGood MoodNowadays,many ofus oftengetangry.Especially whenwe stayedat homeseveral monthsago becauseof theCOVID-

19.【答案］Keep aGood MoodNowadays,many ofus oftengetangry.Especially whenwe stayedat homeseveral monthsago becauseof theCOVID-

19.Then whatcan wedo to keep agood moodFirst,we cansmile oftenbecause itshelpful for ustokeep healthyand enjoyourlife.Second,try ourbest todosomethingfor otherpeople inneed.It can helpusfeel good.Third,［高分句型一］if wetake partin someoutdoor activities,we canmake newfriends andwell feelhappy,too.Last,we cantell othersour badmoods,they maygive ussome goodadvice.【高分句型二】（感受）In short,keeping agood moodcanhelpus learnand livemore happily.【解析】【高分句型一】第三,如果我们Third,if wetake partin someoutdoor activities,we canmake newfriends andwell feelhappy,too.参加一些户外活动，我们可以结交新朋友，我们也会感到快乐条件状语从句【高分句型二】.简而言之,保持良好的心情可以帮助我们In short,keeping agood moodcanhelpus learnand livemore happily更快乐地学习和生活简而言之In short能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务•广东省广州市•模拟题了请你以为题提前写好一份英文演讲稿

4.2023“Color andMood”内容包括⑴简单描述颜色对情绪的影响；你最喜欢的颜色及原因原因不少于两点；2⑶号召大家都要做情绪的主人，控制好自己的情绪作文要求⑴不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名⑵语句连贯，词数个左右80【答案】Color andMoodLast week,I readan articleabout colorand mood,let metell yousomething aboutit.There aremany colorsinourlife.They cannot onlymean differentthings butalso bringus differentfeelings.For example,peoplesometimes usepink todescribe aperson whois healthy.Color bluesometimes meansthat aperson whois blueis verysad.Of allthe colors,I lovewhite best.White isthe colorof snowand cloud.It representsof purityand calmness.Itcan makea beautifulpicture withany othercolors.It canoften makeme feelrelaxed.Everyone hashis favoritecolor.However,no matterhow colorschange yourmood,you shouldlearntocontrolyour moodandbeabetterperson.【解析】略

5.2023•吉林省长春市・模拟题希望中学近期举办英语征文竞赛，题目为“A smallact makesa big请你为其投稿，谈谈你对这句话的理解，并分享一件你自身或周围的人的故事，以及带给你的difference.%收获或启迪要求字数不少于词180文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名2条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整3【答案】A smallact makesa bigdifferenceA SmallAct OfKindness MakesA BigDifference.Last monthI wentthrougha veryhard time,because mydear mompassed away.I flewtomyhometown topay myrespects andsay mygoodbyes.Having spentdays withmy family,I hadto headback.After boardingthe plane,I foundmy windowseat takenby ayoung man.Usually itsnot abig dealto me,but Ireallywanted tosit there.As aresult,he wasasked tomove.My momwas nolonger there.I almostlost controlof my［高分句型一】emotions whenthe planetaxied tothe runway.Tears filledmy eyes.Suddenly Ifelt atap onmy［高elbow.lt wasthat youngman checkingon me.He askedme if I wasOK andsaid hewas thereif Ineeded to talk.分句型二】After all,we hada three-hour flightsitting inthe samerow.I assuredhim knowthat I wasnt readyto talk,but hiswords hadmade mefeel better.Although Ididnt takehim uponhis offer,I wastouched thata strangerknew Imight needsomeone atthat moment.People onplanes oftendo（经历）everything theycannottotalkto someone,I mean.But herethis manwas willingto giveme allof histime.That momentlast monthhas mademe activelylook forwaystoserve andhelp others.They maynot be big things,but（感受）they maybebigto thatperson.【解析】【高分句型一】当飞机滑彳亍至跑道上时，我几乎I almostlost controlof myemotions whenthe planetaxied tothe runway.U无法控制自己的情绪引导的时间状语从句when【高分句型二】他问我是否安好，并说如果我需要倾诉，他He askedme ifI wasOK andsaid hewas thereifIneeded totalk.就在那里引导的条件状语从句if这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕内容写作命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间写作时要结合内容对情况进行陈述，之后给出自己的看法和建议，看法和建议需要自主发挥

6.（2023•浙江省舟山市•模拟题）你校English Corner将进行“Control YourAnger andSolve YourProblem0的成长分享请你用英语写一篇发言稿，请根据表格内容讲述你控制愤怒的小故事，并分享你的感悟What happenedbetween Tomand meWhat Ihave learned...bought amuch-loved magazine......took the magazine withouttelling...communicate withothers ontime•••...felt angry......calmed down and talkedwith...要求（）短文须包括表格所有内容（至少补充一条感悟），可适当增加细节;1（）短文中不出现真实的地名和人名；2（）词数（开头已给出，不计入总词数）380-100参考词汇愤怒冷静anger calmdownHave youever controlledyour anger and solveda problembetter Hereis myexperience.Thanks forlistening.【答案】（弓|出Have youever controlledyour angerand solveda problembetter Hereis myexperience.话题）Last term,I boughta magazinethat Ihad alwayswanted.!liked itso muchthat I was carefulevery timeI carried【高分it.But oneday,my bestfriend Tomtook themagazine withouttelling me.When Ifound it,I wasvery angry.句型一】But Icalmed downsoon.I thoughtof howTom helpedme whenI wasin troubleand Ididn*t want to break［高分句型二】the relationshipbetween us.So Icontrolled myangeranddecidedtohave atalkwithhim.I toldhim（讲述控制that heshould tellme ifhe wantedto readthemagazine.After thetalk,our relationshipbecame stronger.愤怒的小故事）From thisexperience,whenweare angry,we shouldcalm ourselvesdownandlearntoreflect.The（感受）most importantistocommunicate withothers ontime sothat wecan solvethe problemsbetter.（感谢）Thanks forlistening.【解析】【高分句型一】.当我发现它时，我非常生气引导一个时间状语从句When Ifound it,Iwasvery angrywhen【高分句型二】I thoughtof howTom helpedme whenIwasin troubleandIdidnt wantto breakthe relationshipbetween us.我想起了汤姆在我遇到麻烦时是如何帮助我的，我不想破坏我们之间的关系表示想做某wanttodo sth事能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务

7.2023•广东省云浮市・期中考试2022年3月21日的东航客机坠毁事件和持续三年多的新冠肺炎疫情告诉我们人生在世，生命很重要，健康很重要但是在学习和生活中，我们会有一些不好的情绪badfeelings,坏的情绪会影响我们的健康，请以“为题，谈一谈中学生如何在学习和生活中Good Waysto KeepHappy”保持愉快的心情提示词listen tomusic,do moreexercise,make friends,smile often.•••要求语句通顺，表达连贯，语法正确，书写规范；1必须包含所给信息；2词数左右文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数370Good Waysto KeepHappyIt isvery importantforustokeephappy.Because beinghappy istobehealthy.But doyouknowthewaystokeepushappyI hopeyoucankeephappyeveryday.【答案】Good Waysto KeepHappy。