33 幸福 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国版）

33幸福2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）相关话题解读幸福，是-种心理感受，一种满足的心态它可以是父母无微不至的关爱，也可以是假日里悠闲地品茶读书的惬意不同的人对幸福也有着不同的理解此话题的写作内容比较广泛，既可以让学生谈谈什么是幸福，什么让人感到幸福，也可以具体记叙-一个幸福的瞬间，一件让人感到幸福的小事等此话题的写作体裁多为记叙文和说明文时态以现在时和过去时为主相关话题写作示例指导实践案例题目Write atleast60words aboutthe topicmakes me happy,.（请以“使我快乐”为题，写篇不少于60个词的短文）Questions forreference:

①I liketraveHing.It makesme happy.During thewinter andsummer holidays,my parentsoften takeme tomanyplaces athome andabroad.I canenjoy a lot ofamazing landscapesand historicalinterests,delicious food,excitingexperiences andso onduring myjourney.Furthermore,travelling isalso aprocess ofdiscovery,which Ienjoyalot.More importantly,travelling canhelp toreduce mystudy pressure,tell mehow bigand beautifulthe worldis,and letme knowmore abouthistory andculture.Thats whyit makesme sohappy.注

①这两句话可以合并成travelling makesme happy点评本文围绕“旅游使我愉快”这一主题展开写作，条理分明，结构合理，甸式多样文中从几个层面阐述了旅游给作者带来的愉悦，内容充实，表达清晰，总的来说是一篇佳作个别语句可以合并为-句，比如第一“、第二句话，可以改成travelling makesme happy,显得更为简洁习作2Reading makesme happyIve formedthe habitof readingbooks sinceI was a littlegirl Forme.,2530reading hasbeen anenduring pleasurein

①my life.I enjoy the company of[he magicworld inHarry Potter,of evilcriminals aedthrilling casesin SherlockHolmes,of thousandsof interestingpeople I would havenever metin】eal life.Reading notonly providesme withknowledge,butalso enablesmetounderstand theworld aroundme.It isan educationin aclassroomthat hasno walls.It isreading thatalways bringsme funand joy.注

①这句话体现了学生的写作功底点评:本文清晰明了地阐述了“阅读使我愉快的理由文章的时态、语态以及人称的使用都非常娴熟，其中enjoythecompanyofthe magicworld..in reallife”这句句子的表述，不仅增加了说服力，也体现了作者很强的语言表达能力文章以一句强调句收尾，既增添了文采，也起到了点题的作用相关话题满分作文必背

（一）题目Write atleast60words on the topic“My Secretsof Happiness.（以“我的快乐秘诀”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分短文开头已给，所给部分不计人字数）Everyone has his or her own secrets of happiness,so doLOutline forreference:

1.Tell yoursecrets ofhappiness.

2.Give thesupporting details.My secrets of happinessEveryonehashisorherownsecret ofhappiness,so doL Oneof mysecretofhappinesstodo sportsregularly.Iusually doyoga withmy sisteron Saturdaymorning.1enjoy yogavery muchand atthe sametime,I canrelax myselfandbecome healthier.Another secreteis thatI make an everydaylist ofall thethings andpeople amthankful to,so thatI canbe contentwithwhat Ialready have.1would enjoymy liferather thancomplain abouteverything Theseare mysecretsofhappiness,andI hopeit canbe helpfulto others.

（三）题目Write apassage onnA happymemory inmy juniorhigh schoolin atleast60words accordingto thegivensituation.（似“我初中时期的一次快乐的回忆”为题，写不少于60个词的文章）Phrases forreference（以下短语仅供参考）:a springoutinga classmeetinga partytakepart inplaywithbe happy优秀范文A happymemory inmy juniorhigh schoolThehappy memoriesI havehad inmy juniorhigh schoolare countless.The mostimpressive oneis thecelebrationof myfourteenth birthday.Our schoolheld aparty ina hallfor thestudents ofour grade.On thatday,I sangand dancedwithmy classmatesonthestage.Our performancewasabig success,which mademehappyand excited.After that,wehad abig dinnertogether inthe schoolcanteen.The foodwas deliciousand weliked itvery much.I hada goodtime.Itwas reallya happyand unforgettablememory forme.。