36 信函、信件 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国版）

36信函、信件2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）相关话题体裁解读信函和信件是中考中最常见的应用文写作类型，是人们相互交流信息的书面通讯方式从写作对象上看，信函和信件通常分为公开信和私人信从写作内容上看，信件（信函）主要有建议信、推荐信、求助信、告别信、感谢信等，中考中曾经出现过的写作类别为建议信此外，信件（信函）还分为初次写信和写回信因此，考生应当仔细审题，根据不同的信件（信函）类别写作书信格式组成在英语信件（信函）写作中尤其要注意书写格式:英文书信由信头、称呼、正文、结束语、结尾谦称几部分组成信头指写信人的地址和写信日期，写于信纸右上角地址由小到大写，日期写在地址下称呼顶格写

1.在左上角，后面的标点用逗号称呼常以开头，如果不清楚收信人性别，则写

2.Dear DearSir orMadam正文在称呼下一行开始，可顶格，也可段首缩进正文的开头通常有两类

3.（）主动给对方写信，开头应当写明写信的目的或背景，再详细叙述常用开头有我1:1am writing to you to…写信给你是为了..…I amsorry to hearthat.・・得矢口・・・・我彳艮难过…很高兴写信给你，最近我们正在I amvery glad to writea letterto you.These dayswe aretalking about

（四）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的Tony体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解地位最受欢迎的颜色之一代表幸福，可以带来好运使用场所婚礼，春节等表达方式剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼提示词婚礼中国结红包代表wedding,Chinese Knot,red packet,stand forDear Tony,Its greatto receiveyour letter.Tm writingto tell you something about Chinese red.I trulyhope myletter willhelp youunderstand betterabout Chinese red.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】DearTony,Its greatto receiveyour letter.Im writingto tell you somethingabout Chinesered.Chinesered,considered asthesymbolic colorof China,is extremelypopular withChinese people.It usuallyrepresents happiness,and webelieve thatitcan bringus goodluck.People in our countryattach suchgreat importanceto Chinesered that they usemany redobjects insome importantevents.For instance,in awedding,you cansee that the brideis ina redwedding dressand thewedding roomis decoratedwithred.Whats more,the housesare alsofilled withred papercuts,lanterns andChinese Knotsduring theSpring Festival.Children will get redpockets forbest wishesas well.Obviously,Chineseredplays asignificant roleand enjoysthe highestpopularityin China.I trulyhope myletter willhelp youunderstand betterabout Chinesered.Yours,Li Hua

（五）假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助Nathan他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历.用英语回信开导他ToFrom SubjectsLearning frommistakesDear SuHue,Im unhappythat Ivemade somemistakes recently.Theyre troublingme alot thesedays.I reallyneed yourhelp.Would youplease shareyour experiencewith meDoyou agreethat everyonemakes mistakesCanyou tellme oneof yourmistakesHow didyou dealwith yourproblemWhat haveyou learnedfrom themistakeIm lookingforward to hearing from you soon.All thebest,Nathan注意:词数左右开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；

1.90回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;

2..文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息3Dear Nathan,Im sorry to knowthat youare nothappy thesedays.________________________________________________I hope my experience can help you out.Best wishesSu Hua【写作思路】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数【参考范文】Dear Nathan,Im sorryto knowthat youare nothappy thesedays.You needntworry too much.Its truethat everyonemakesmistakes.Take me,for example.One day,I spentso muchtime playingfootball withmy friendsthat Iforgot to do myhomework.I saidsorryto my teacherand finishedit thenext day.I foundit important to achievea balancebetweenschoolwork and hobbies.It doesntmatter whether or not you make mistakes.What mattersmost isto correctand learn from them.In thisway,others willunderstand you.Then youwill feel much better.I hopemy experiencecan help you out.Best wishes.SuHua【名师点评】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如toomuch,makemistakes,for example,so much,等spend timedoing,forgot todo,say sorrysb.,between and,whetheror not,learnfrom,in thisway,feelmuchbetter而固定句型.和I foundit important to achievea balancebetween schoolworkandhobbiesIts truethat everyonemakes.等复杂从句结构mistakes./It doesntmatter whetherornotyou makemistakes./1hopemyexperiencecan helpyouout的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理

（六）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表Mike示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给写一封回信向他描述你们曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动Mike要求内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受；1文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数280〜100Dear Milk,生态公Im gladto hearthat youare interestedin our environment protectionactivities.To be an ecologicaleitizen民，we dida goodjob.Last______________________________________________________________________Now theenvironment aroundus becomesbetter and better.Welcome tomy hometownone day.Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题C【参考范文】Dear Mike,Im gladto hearthat youare interestedin ourenvironment protectionactivities.To bean ecological citizen,we didagood job.Last Sunday,I wentto ourcommunity withmy friendsto givethe peoplethere aspeech.It wasabout how toprotect ourenvironment.After thespeech,they knewthey shouldtake abus orride abike instead of drivingto cut down airpollution.To cutdown wastepollution,they shouldtake bagsto go shopping.And theyalso knewto putlitter indifferentbins.Finally,we calledthem up/called onthem tomake adifference toourenvironmenttogether.We weretired buthappythat day.Now theenvironment aroundus becomesbetter andbetter.Welcome tomy hometownone day.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be gladtodo,be interestedin,ecologicalcitizen,give aspeech,howtodo,take abus,ride abike,insteadof,cutdown,goshopping,call themup,make adifference,等而become betterandbetterPm gladto hearthat youare interestedin ourenvironment protectionactivities./After the.等复杂从句结构的运speech,they knewthey shouldtake abus orride abike insteadof drivingto cutdown airpollution用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理

（七）邀请函假如你叫和是同学请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上点来你家参加你的生日聚Tom,Jack7会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）提示聚会内容唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏；

1.内容要涵盖提示中的信息，字数词

2.30-50Dear Jack,I thinkwe willhave agood timeTom【写作思路】假如你叫和是同学请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上点来你家参加你的生日聚Tom,Jack7会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）虽然主要内容已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识另外，写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅【参考范文】Dear Jack,Fil have a birthdayparty at7:00p.m.this Friday.Id liketo inviteyou tomy home.Let me tell youthe wayto myhome.Walk alongGreen Streetand takethe second crossing onthe left/tum leftatthe second crossing.At theparty,wecan sing,eat abirthday cakeand playgames.I thinkwe willhaveagood time.Tom【名师点评】这是一篇比较不错的作文文中需要发挥的内容写的不错，一些比较好的句型，如「d liketo inviteyoutomyhome.Let metellyouthe waytomyhome.Walk alonggreen Streetand takethesecondcrossing onthe left/turn leftatthe等secondcrossing计..…我们已经好久不见了Its beena longtime sincewe metlast time.写回信给对方，开头应当先表明感谢收到来信常用开头有2Thank youfor your letter Fromyour letterI learntthat..感谢你的来信，从你的信中，我得——・.抱歉没有早些回信I amsorry fornot writingto you sooner感谢你向我求助I amglad youask mefor help..结束语在正文下自成段，表达祝愿或希望常用的结束语有4请接受我的美好祝福！Best wishes!期待你的回信！Looking forward to yourreply!期待不久能收到你的回复I hopeto hear fromyousoon.希望我的建议能帮到你Hope mysuggestions willbe helpful.希望我说的对你有所助益I hopewhat Isaid canhelpyou.过得愉快！Have agood time!.结尾谦称写于结束语下一行如正文左顶格写，结尾谦称也左顶格如正又段结尾谦称则从信偏右的5地方开始写注意首字母大写，后面使用逗号常用的谦称有:Yours,Yours ever,Yours sincerely,Truly yours,Yours respectfully,书信信函写作格式示例（写信人地址）11Nanjing Road,Shanghai,China（写信时间）May1st,2017（称呼）Dear Mr./Ms.…（正文开始写明目的或背景）I amwritingto…（正文）（结束语）Hoping tohearfromyousoon!相关话题中考满分作文解析

（一）随着我们不断成长，生活不仅给予了我们许多快乐时光，同时伴随不少烦恼.仔细阅读下面小华写给英语报社的信，结合自己的实际，运用所学知识，请你以编辑的名义，就他的频恼在回信中给出好的建议.Dear sir,Fm Xiaohua,15,a middle school student.I havesome problemsto tellyou,my parentsalways sayto me,“Study,study,do homework,do yourhomework.when Icome back.However,they don*t knowhow hardI studyat schoolfrom700am to830p.m.every day.And lastSunday,my3-year-old brothertroubled meagain andagain whileI wasstudying forthe comingexam.Ireally wantedto getbetter grades,so Icouldnt standhim anymore,I shoutedat himin anger,thus hecried loudly.Thenmy mothercame in,she blamedme withoutasking why”.My eyeswere fullof tearsat thattime.It wasnot myfault.Why didshe treatme likethat Didntmother lovemeAfter all.Im alsoher birthchild,My deareditor,what canI doCould yougive mesome suggestionsSincerely,Xiaohua要求（）卷面整洁（无污迹），书写工整（有美感）.1

（2）全文字数不少于90词.书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入单词总数.（）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确.3

（4）内容尽量就小华的烦恼给出好的建议，并适当发挥文中不能出现真实的人名、地名.Dear Xiaohua,Im gladto receiveyour letter.I haveever hadthe sameexperience.I evenhad afight withmy parents.But now,Ifully understandthem.____________________________________________________________________________I hopethese help!Tony【参考范文】Dear Xiaohua,Im gladto receiveyourletter.I haveever hadthe sameexperience.I evenhad afight withmy parents.But now,I开篇表明自己也碰到过fully understandthem.First,As parents,their dreamis thatone dayyou canget goodgrades.So theyput emphasison homeworkevery day.高分句型——Why nottalk with your parents11you cantell themthat youfinished yourhomework ifyou reallydid it.Or you canhelpthem do some houseworkafter school.Second,For yourlittle brother,He isjust ababy.He isgladtoseeyou afteryour comingback fromschool.So hewants toplay withyou.Why don!tyouplay withhim fora fewminutes.And youalso cantell himthat youhave somethingimportanttodo.Maybe hewill getyour point.At last,Believe yourparents.They alllove youforever.All youneed todo iscommunication.Then youwillgeton wellwithyourparents and【高分句型一】.针对对方的信提出三点建议brother结尾给出期望I hopethese help!Tony假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议写作要点欢迎他们来到新学校

1.介绍学校

2.课程有趣；1有多名外教；2活动丰富

3.请对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出具体建议3qualified写作要求:不得使用真实的姓名和学校名

1.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯

2.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰

3.至少词

4.80Dear newfriends,Its mypleasure towrite youthis letter.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ping【写作思路】这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就是本文的写作要点这些要点构成写作的基本框架我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象提出自己的建议不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题在写作过程中，要注意句与句段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误【参考范文】Dear newfriends,Its mypleasure towrite youthis letter.Welcome toour newschool.Our schoolis cleanand beautiful.The classroomsarebig andbright.All thesubjects arevery interesting.I amgood atEnglish.There are many foreignteachers inour school.In ourspare time,we cancommunicate withthem andimprove ouroral Englishskills.Our afterclass activitiesare alsorichand colorful.There aredifferent clubsinourschool.You cantake partin allkinds ofactivities youlike.Now youare goingto bemiddleschool students.How tobeaqualified middleschoolstudentAt first,you shouldfollowthe schoolrules.Its alsoimportanttohave goodstudy habits.You mustlisten tothe teacherscarefully inclass.Ithink youshould learnto sharethings withyour classmatesand helpeach other.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ping

（三）假如你是遵义育才中学的大明，你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施“山与海对话”Dialogue Between项目.今年暑假，你的“手拉手”活动伙伴小海将来遵义进行首次交流活动.请根据下列提示给Mountain AndSea他写一封词左右的书信.内容包括80自我介绍年龄、性格、爱好……校园生活介绍社团活动……家乡介绍自然环境，名胜古迹……你的建议上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化……注意文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;L可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

2.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数.

3.提示词遵义海龙囤遵义会址Zunyi HailongtunCastle Zunyi Conference SiteDear Xiaohai,Im gladtohearthat youare comingto Zunyibecause ofthe projectDialogue BetweenMountain AndSea.Now letmetellyou somethingabout me and my city.Welcome tomy city!Im lookingforward tomeeting you.Yours sincerely,Darning【写作思路】本题是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文注意书信格式本文人称主要是第一称，时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）【参考范文】DearXiaohai,Im gladtohearthat youare comingto Zunyibecause ofthe projectDialogue BetweenMountain AndSea.Now letmetellyousomethingaboutmeandmy city.I amfourteen yearsold.I amoutgoing andlike makingfriends.I likesports,like playingballs andrunning.I alsolike collectingstamps.Our schoollife isvery colorful.We cannot onlystudy veryhardbut alsodo allkinds ofactivities afterclass.After school,we oftendosomesports suchas playingbasketball,volleyball,Pingpong andso on.I joinbasketball club.I playbasketball everyThursday afternoonafter school.The naturalenvironmentin Zunyiis beautifuland there*remanyfamous scenicspots andhistorical sitesin Zunyi,like ZunyiHailongtunCastle andZunyiConferenceSite.If youwant toknow moreabout Zunyishistory andculture,youcangoonline forit.Welcome tomycity!Im lookingforwardtomeeting you.Yours sincerely,Darning【名师点评】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理注意书写的规范大小写、标点符号等的正确运用注意检查单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等写作六步法审题文体，时态，人称

1..抓住要点要点是否齐全，适当补充2•扩充句子通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实3,连句成文，合理使用连词4,改正错误拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等

5.誉写作文注意书写工整美观整洁6。