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51社会热点作文之课外实践2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略(全国通用版)
(一)为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想活动内容上午游览人民公园欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;
1.下午参观市民广场观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡年巨变
2.70你的感想.师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;
1.倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习报效祖国;2(考生自己发挥)3……要求词数左右开头已给出,不计人总词数
1.100所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息
3.参考词汇市民广场Civic SquareIn order to enrich Junior3students1after-school life,our schoolorganized asocial practiceactivity lastweekend.All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it.【写作思路】这是一篇材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想主要从上午游览人民公园欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;下午参
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2.观市民广场观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡年巨变以及表达师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;倍受鼓舞,70决心勤奋学习报效祖国;(自己在发挥一些)这几个方面去介绍时态为一般过去时,人称为第一人称注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性【参考范文】InordertoenrichJunior3students1after-school life,our schoolorganized asocial practiceactivity lastweekend.Allthe teachers andstudentsof ourgradetookpartinit.In themorning,we visitedthe PeoplesPark.In thepark,we enjoyedthebeautiful scenery,danced andsang,and tookpictures.I would like tothank myteachers andclassmates fbrtheir help.In theafternoon,we visitedthe CitizensSquare.In PeoplesSquare,we watchedthe photoexhibition andlearned aboutthe great changes ofour country andhometown in the past70years.After seeingthese photoexhibitions,I wasinspiredand determinedto studyhard toserve mycountry.【名师点评】【高分句型一】我要感谢我的老帅和同学们的帮助该句话用到I wouldlike tothank myteachersandclassmates fortheir help.了丰富了语言wouldliketo dosth.【高分句型二】In PeoplesSquare,we watchedthe photoexhibition andlearned aboutthegreatchangesofourcountryand在人民广场,我们看了年来的摄影展,了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化该句话hometown in the past70years.70的语言简练,层次分明,语意明确,用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵使人读起来朗朗上口
(二)假如你参加了学校组织的“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动请根据要求,向某英语网站投稿,分享活动经历要求词,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
1.80〜120文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称
2.参考信息:Have youever gotclose to the countrysideand hada specialexperience Letme sharemine!【写作思路】本文属于一篇图表作文,根据表格提供的信息来介绍“走近乡村寒假社会实践活动的经历人称为第一人称,时态主要为一般过去时动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容;文章必须包括要点中所给的信息,既要写活动的过程,又要总结活动感受与收获并补充两条个人的观点表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采高分句型l.We experiencedthe lifein thecountryside,learned somethingthat我们经历了农村的生活,学到了一些我们以前从中得不到的东西we couldnt get from books before.|5that we是定语从句,修饰不定代词couldnt getfrom booksbefore.something
2.We reallyhope we41have anotheractivity likethat this wintervacation!我们真的希望今年寒假还能有这样的活动!hope后面是省略that的宾语从句【参考范文】Have youever gotclose to the countiysideand hada specialexperience Letme sharemine.During thewinter vacationmy classmatesand Ijoined inthe schoolactivity“Get closetothecountryside”.We liveinthe famers9homes.Their greatliving conditionssurprised usa lot.Do youknow wherevegetables comefrom Wegot theanswerwhen workingwith the farmers.Besides,we learnedabout otherplants andsome farmanimals.How interesting!We experiencedthe lifeinthecountryside,learned somethingthat wecouldntgetfrombooksbefore,and feltthewonderful changesof thecountryside.We realizedhow hardthe farmersworked anddecided tosave food.We werehappyto seethefarmers9life wasgetting betterand better.We reallyhope wellhave anotheractivity likethatthiswinter vacation!
(三)人生中有很多第一次第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次……请根据提示,就你的第一次……写一篇短文内容包括第一次……的整个过程;
1.你的感受
2.要求词数(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
1.80-100文中不得出现真实的校名和人名
2.As weall know,everyone hashis unforgettablememories.I stillremember thefirst time【写作思路】这是一篇材料作文,根据提示信息,选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受时态主要为一般过去时,人称主要为第
一、三人称写作思路考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文首先开门见山,介绍自己的第一次活动是什么,接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程,最后谈一谈自己的感受写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性注意注意紧扣主题,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范,避免出现拼写错误;词数在80—100【参考范文】The first time to learn to swimAs weall know,everyone hashis unforgettablememories.I stillremember thefirsttime tolearnto swim.Last summervacation,my fathertook metothe swimming poolin ourneighborhood andtaught meto swim.It wasthefirst formetoswim.At first,I couldnot swimat all.My fatherwas verypatient.He encouragedme andtaught me howto swim.He taughtmehowto breatheinthewater first.Then,He threwme intothe deepestpart oftheswimmingpool.Iwas sofrightened thatI couldntmove.But Inever gaveup.I feltsafe withmy dadaround.Three hourslater,with thehelpof myfather,I couldswim bymyself.Although Icouldnt swimvery well,I wasvery happy.I willnever forgetthis experience,because Inot onlylearned howtoswim,but alsolearned tobe brave!
(四)月日是国际博物馆日,下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感518受,写一份报告,并在英语课上汇报PersonMuseums OurClass HaveBeen to40353035252015191050■MuseumScience museummuseum museumTeaOthers注意词数(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数);
1.80-100文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名
2.【写作思路】这是一篇图表,是同学参观博物馆的情况,结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受,写一份报告,并在英语课上汇报动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点根据材料注意人称和时态的不同,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯【参考范文】Visiting museumshas becomeone ofthe mostpopular waysfor usstudents tospend ourspare time.According tothesurvey madein ourclass,almost allthe studentshave been to museums,such asscience museums,tea museumsand filmmuseums,etc.Among them,the sciencemuseum isour favorite.I vebeentoHuzhou ScienceMuseum andLu YuTea Museum.I likethe teamuseum verymuch,because Ican learnaboutthe historand developmentof teaand watchtheteaart performancesthere aswell.What Iminterested inmost istheshow ofbeautiful teasets,which hasleft adeep impressionon me.Museums makeit possiblefor usstudents tolearn knowledgeand experiencecultures atthe sametime.Why notvisitmore
(五)近几年,旅游已经成为一项全民活动初中生们旅游的机会也有很多,因此,旅游也是初中生们津津乐道的话题你的美国朋友非常喜欢中国文化,去年暑假你和他一起从桂林出发去北京旅游了几天,你们参观了一些Tom著名景点,还品尝了一些有名的小吃,请把你们的旅游经历写成一篇不少于词的短文80参考范文A Tripto BeijingMy Americanfriend Tomand Iwent to Beijing byplane lastsummer.On thefirst day,we visitedthePalace Museumand TiananmenSquare.The nextday,we climbedthe GreatWall.We tooklots ofphotos.Although wefelttired,it wasa fantasticexperience.The thirdday werelaxed.Then wehad theBeijing roastduck forlunch.I thinkit isthemost deliciousfood inthe world.Tom isinterested inChinese culture,so wedrank teaand sawBeijing Operain LaoSheTeahouse inthe evening.Finally,we didsome shoppingand flewback toGuilin.The triptoBeijingwas short,but itwaswonderful.Tom saidthat hewould neverforget it.。
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