66 各地中考真题再现02 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国版）

2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

3..词数（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）480-100How toKeep SafeDoyou knowthat manydangerous thingswill happenif we are notcareful enoughAs astudent,how tokeep safeisvery important.不参与打架斗殴

2.面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护

3.参考词汇（自我保护）（欺凌）

1.self-protection

2.bully n./v.（人身安全）（打架斗殴）

3.personal safety

4.have violent behaviorsHow CanWe ProtectOurselves atSchool【写作思路】这是一篇话题作文，以为题，写一篇词的英语短文本文“How CanWe ProtectOurselves atSchool”80-100人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲短文必须包含提示内容字数词要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连80-100贯性根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）【参考范文】How CanWe ProtectOurselves atSchoolSchool bullieshappen in almost everyschool.In myschool,we sometimeshave bulliesand somestudents arehurt,so it is reallybad forus tobully othersor bebullied at school.We aresupposed tostop anyschool bullywhen we are in the troubleof it.For example,we shouldstay calmbefore abullyingbehavior happens.We should always be friendly andhelpful whenmaking friendswith others.Here are some ofmyideas aboutstopping school bullies.Firstly,we willlearn how to have a self-protectionbecause ourpersonal safety is the most important.Secondly,we shouldbe peacefulwith othersat alltimes andcant haveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeying schoolrules is also away toavoid schoolbullies.Pm hopingthat noschoolbullieswill happenatschoolin thefuture,do youthink so6每年三月的最后一个星期一是“全国中小学生安全教育日为了提高同学们的安全意识，学校决定在毕业前再举行一次以安全教育为主题的班会.请根据所给提示，就日常生活中需要注意的安全写一篇英语发言稿.提示上学、放学途中的安全；

1.校园里的安全；

2..家里的安全.3要求词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

1.80语法正确，语句通顺、流畅；

4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名.

5.Hello,everyone!The lastMonday inMarch everyyear isNational SafetyEducation Dayof PrimaryandMiddle SchoolStudents.As middleschool students,we shouldSafety is very important.We shouldalways keepit inmind.Thank you!【参考范文】Hello,everyone!The lastMonday inMarch everyyear isNational SafetyEducation Dayof Primaryand MiddleSchoolStudents.As middleschool students,we shouldpay moreattention tosafety.To besafe,we mustfollow rules.When wego to school orgo homefrom school,we mustfollow thetraffic rules.For example,we mustwalk onwalk-side.When wecross zebra-crossing,stop andlook rightand left,then goacross the road fast.【高分句型——（上学、IWe mustntrun throughred lightswhen crossingthe road.Dont playfootball ontheroad.放学途中的安全）At school,dont pushwhen wego upstairsor downstairs,or wemay hurtourselves or others.Never usesharp thingslikethe knifewhen weplay with our classmates.We shouldget onwell withour classmates.Dont fightwith them,or（上学、放学途中的安全）we*ll behurt.At home,we shouldbe careful when weuse electricity.If thereisafire ora thief,we shouldcall the police for help in（家里的安全.）time.Also,food satetyis important.Never eatthe foodthat goesbad.【高分句型二】Safetyisvery important.We shouldalways keepit inmind.Thank you!（）7根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以为题，提出你的建议“How toProtect Yourselfin aFire”要求.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名1书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于

2.

80.参考词汇遮盖乘坐电梯出口毛巾切断cover v.take thelift exitn.towel n.shutoff【写作思路】根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以为题，提出你的建议考生首先要认真阅读前面的“How toProtect Yourselfin aFire”提示认真审题，确定文章的中心注意文章文体、人称和时态要求介绍同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性温馨提醒考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等【参考范文】How toProtect YourselfinaFireAccording toa newsurvey,student safetyhas becomea bigproblem.You shouldknow someways toprotectyourself.It willhelp tokeep yousafe in the fire.First,you shouldshut offthe electricity.You should cover your mouthwith thewet towel.You mustnttake thelift orjump offa window,you shouldfind theexit.The mostimportant thingis tokeep calm.If youcant gointhehouse,the safestplace isclose towater,like washroom.If thefire isserious,you shouldcall119for help.These mayhelp us.这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实如First,You shouldshut offthe electricity.You等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理shouldcoveryourmouthwith thewet towel8建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全假如你是并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议Li Hua,书内容提示不带管制刀具到学校;不私自下河洗澡;不打架;上学放学的途中应该注意安全;12345遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师参考词汇管制刀具洗澡打架紧急情况交通安restricted knives or things;haveabath;fight;emergency;全pay attentionto thetraffic写作要求用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范可适当发挥，词左右，开头、结尾已给1280出，不计入总词数严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息3参考范文Dear students,As weknow,safetyisthe mostimportant thingin our lives.So,we shouldtry ourbest to make surewe aresafe.We mustntbring restrictedknivesorthings toour schoolbecause thesethings maycause seriousproblems.Do nothave abathin riversor pondsby ourselveswithout our parents9permission.And,we shouldbefriendlyto othersso fightingisstrongly banned.Make surethat we shouldalwayspay attentionto thetraffic onour waytoschoolor home.Furthermore,if wemeet someemergency,we mustcall for help fromthepolice or ourteachers.In aword,following thesesafeties rulesabove canmake uslive inpeace.Yours,Li Hua9校园暴力遇见或亲身经历过校园暴力吗？千万别以为这是危言耸听，在学校必须注意维护自己的人身安全近年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学初三班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会假定你是班长李华，8以为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容.校园暴力事件已引How toprotect ourselves in campus violence1起广泛关注.要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力.遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括23保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警注意词数左右；

1.100开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇增强一

2.enhanceHowto protect ourselvesin campusviolenceDear friends,This year,some seriouslyviolent incidentshappened incampus,resulting invery badresults.Thafs all.Thank you!参考范文How toprotect ourselvesincampusviolenceDear friends,This year,some seriouslyviolent incidentshappened incampus,resulting invery badresults.The incidentsof campusviolence havedrawn widespreadattention inour country.As astudent,we shouldlearn some knowledge abouthow todeal withthe violenceand enhancethe abilityof self-protection.Of course,if wemeet theviolence,we shouldtake appropriatemeasures toprotect ourselves.At first,wed betterkeepcalm,judge thesituation andbe aware of thepossible dangers.Then,we shouldtry ourbest toescape orprevent theviolence.At lastbut not least,we shouldcall thepoliceor teachers assoon aspossible toavoid thephysical injury.Thatsall.Thank you.After all,life isvery important.We shouldlearn somethingabout self-protection so that we can protect ourselveswell.【写作思路】近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢？我市正在举行以为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，给出的材料比较全面，“How toKeep Safe”我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯【参考范文】How toKeep SafeDoyou knowthat manydangerous thingswill happenif weare notcareful enoughAs astudent,howtokeep safeisvery important.First,we shouldobey thetraffic rules.When thelights arered,we shouldntcross theroad.And we shouldnt ridetheelectric bicycles.Second,we shouldnt swim inthe riverbecause itsdangerous.We cango swimmingwithour parents inaswimming pool.Third,we shouldnttell strangersour IDnumber orcode when wearesurfing theInternet.We shouldntsurfunhealthy websites.Whats more,we shouldntgo outwith friendswithout our parents1permission.If weare indanger,we canask forhelp fromour parents orteachers,even police.After all,life isveryimportant.We shouldlearn somethingabout self-protection so that wecan protect ourselveswell.文中用到了非常好的句型；we shouldobey thetraffic rules.When thelights arered,we shouldntcross theroad..这些给文章增色不少Third,we shouldnttell strangersour IDnumber orcode when wearesurfing theInternet2为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，政府出台了陪餐制，要求从月日起，学校领导陪同学生用餐41请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法学生吃得健康、安全；

1.及时发现就餐问题；

2.食堂提供食品多样；

3.父母更加放心

4.注意,词数词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；180可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.参考词汇:规定；食堂；营养的

3.regulation/.cafeteria/.nutritious adj.}A newfood safetyregulation wasput intouse onApril1to improvenutrition andfood safetyin schools.It askstheschool managersto eatwith studentsin theircafeterias.【写作思路】本文属于材料作文，就政府出台的“陪餐制度”谈谈你的看法根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容亮点说明这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句，如thanks to,take place,be able to,provide sthfor sb,in otherwords,worry about,以及增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确,句子通顺，行文连贯not...at all,carry on,first,second also,【参考范文】A newfood safetyregulation wasput intouse onApril1to improvenutrition andfood safetyin schools.It askstheschool managersto eatwith studentsin theircafeterias.Thanks tothe regulation,something greathas takenplace inour school.First,we eathealthier andsafer thanbefore.Second,if thereis anyproblem aboutfood safetyorother,our schoolleaders areabletoknow andsolve itquickly.Also,the cafeteriaworkers aretrying toprovide differentkinds offood forus.In otherwords,ourparentsneednt worryaboutour dietany more.We teenagersare stillyoung andneed togrow healthy,so Ithink thenew regulationis reallygood andnecessary.Ihope itwill becarried onforever.3根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于词的文段写作文中已给出内容不计入总词数所给提示词语50仅供选用请不要写出你的校名和姓名假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生给你发邮件询问相关事情请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的Peter一些想法提示词语design,safety rule,careful,protect,picture提示问题When shouldyou hand inthe posterWhat wouldyou liketo sharewith Peterabout designingthe posterDear Peter,Im gladto receiveyour email__________________________________________________________________If thereis anythingmore thatI canhelp with,please letme know.Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事Peter宜由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容首先告诉海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一Peter些设计海报的想法第二个内容应该是短文的主体题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点短文应以一般现在时为主、第

一、二人称来叙述写作时应注意首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如等等题目中给出的提示词应该First,Second,Last butnotleast在短文中用上其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅【参考范文】DearPeter,Im gladto receiveyour email.As it is required,you aresupposed tohandinthe posterbefore nextFriday.Being yourclose friend,I amextremely willingto share some ideasabout designingtheposterwith you.First andforemost,the basicsafety rulesareofgreat importance,which shouldbe includedin your poster.In thesecond place,following thesafety rulesis someaningful andcrucial thatyou hadbetter remindyour readersof its significance andadvisethem tobe carefulboth inand outof school.Last butby nomeans least,if Iwere you,I wouldadd afew suggestionsaboutsafety awareness,considering thatbetter safethan sorry.In addition,itisa goodidea foryou todraw afew pictureson yourposter so as tomake it more lively and acceptable.If thereis anythingmore thatI canhelp with,please letmeknow.Yours,Li Hua这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情短文Peter有以下几个优点首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容第一段用一句话告诉上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了Peter Firstand foremost,In the等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理其次短文中second place,Last butby nomeans least,In addition使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力短文中较好的句型有Being yourclose friend,I amextremely willingto sharesome ideasabout designingthe posterwithyou.In thesecond place,following thesafety rulesis someaningful andcrucial thatyou hadbetter remindyourreaders ofitssignificanceand advisethem tobe carefulboth inand outof schoolIn addition,itisa goodidea foryou to.等draw afew picturesonyourpostersoastomakeitmorelivelyandacceptable4每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How toProtect为标题写一篇发言稿Ourselves安全对每个人都很重要交通外出时遵守交通规则食品吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品活动体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己不私自下河游泳自救是重要的技能之一交友需谨慎远离危险之人遇到危险保持冷静然后要及时报警或向尽可能避免受伤害老师、家长求助保证自己的安全要求语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺

1.短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译

2.词数左右文章开头部分已给出，不计人总词数

3.80Dear friends,Everyone hasonly onelife,we shouldtreasure our lives.But howcan weprotect ourselvesHerearesomesuggestions.In aword,we shouldtry ourbest toprotect ourselvesand valueourlives.Thats all.Thank you!【写作思路】本文是根据材料提示写作，所以分析所给材料之后，首先要在头脑中确定文章的整体结构，然后逐步细化.就像盖房子一样，先有整体框架，然后是房间，最后是室内装修.【参考范文】Dear friends,Everyone hasonly onelife,we shouldtreasure ourlives.But howcan weprotect ourselvesHerearesomesuggestions.On theone hand,we shouldrealize the importance ofsafety andknow what to do.First,when wego out,we must；follow trafficrules.If wewalk,we mustuse sidewalksand mustntrun ared lightIf weride bikes,we mustride alongthe；right sideand shouldntcarry othersSecond,we shoulddevelop ahealthy eatinghabits.Eat regularmeals everyday andtrynot toeat junkfood oreat less.When foodsmells bad,dont eatit.Third,whenweplay sportsor games,be carefulnotto hurtourselves.Fourth,we mustn*tswimin riverswithout ourparentsorother adultsaround.On theother hand,we shouldlearn toprotect ourselves,which isone ofthe mostimportant livingskills.We mustbecarefulwhenmaking friendsespecially online.Some persononline arenot honest.They aredangerous,so we mustkeep awayfrom them.If wehappen tohave trouble,we shouldkeep calmand remember to askourparents,teachers orpolice forhelp sothat wecanprotectourselvesfrom dangeror beinghurt.In aword,we shouldtry ourbest toprotectourselvesand valueourlives.Thats all.Thank you!点评高分句型一我们应该意识到安全的重要性，we shouldrealize theimportance ofsafety andknow whatto do.并且知道如何去做短语结构；theimportanceof,whattodo高分句型二当我们外出时，必须遵守交通规则状语从句，whenwego out,we mustfollow trafficrules.情态动词；高分句型三我们应该学weshouldlearn toprotectourselves,which isone ofthemostimportant livingskills.会保护自己，这是最重要的生存能力之一定语从句；高分句型四我们必须远离他们短语wemustkeep awayfrom them.keep awayfrom高分句型五weshouldkeepcalmand rememberto askourparents,teachers orpoliceforhelpsothatwecanprotect ourselvesfrom dangeror beinghurt.我们应该保持冷静，并且记住及时向家长，老师或警察求助以便于保护自己远离危险，避免受伤害结构，短语；引导的目的状语从句，短语remembertodo ask...forhelp,in timesothatprotect.,from…5请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How CanWe ProtectOurselves at为题，写一篇词的英语短文文中不得出现真实校名和人名School”80-100提示谨慎交友

1.。