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Module8Story time.单元话题满分范文必背从前,树林里住着一只老虎所有的动物都怕他,因为老虎有一天会吃掉它们一只猴
1.子决定不再让老虎住在这里最后,猴子想了一个办法,把老虎引到河边,老虎在河里看到了另一只老虎……请续写下面这个故事Once upona time,there liveda tigerin the forest.All theanimals wereafraid ofhim.A monkeydecidednot tolet the tiger livehere....【答案】Once upona time,there liveda tigerin theforest.All theanimals wereafraid ofhim.Amonkey decidednot tolet thetiger livehere.One day,the monkeysaid to thetiger,“Hey,Mr.Tiger.Do youknow thatanother tigeralso liveshere Hesaid hewasnt afraidof youat all.Thetiger was very angry.He askedthe monkeyto takehim tosee it.The monkeytook thetiger toariver.Look into the river,Mr.Tiger.There heis.The tigerlooked into the river and foundanothertiger waslooking athim angrily.He jumped into the river anddied.【解析】【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文,要求就所讲的故事续写下面的故事,而且故事的开头已经给出本文时态为一般过去时,人称主要为第三人称在写作前要认真阅读材,料,不可遗漏要点,写作时可适当发挥想象力,使文章更加的丰富,充实,增加文章的可读性要注意语句通顺,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性;同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;词汇、句式要丰富多样,避免句式单一;最后要认真检查,看有无拼写错误及标点误用等从前,森林里住着狐狸妈妈和小狐狸有一天小狐狸饿了,狐狸妈妈去给他找食
2.物,后来发生了什么事呢妈妈去了山里的一个村子,终于找到了食物它拿着葡萄赶快往家跑,快到家时,它听到了猎狗的叫声,马上大声喊道:“孩grapes,hunting dog子!快跑!”小狐狸听见妈妈的声音,它赶快跑进了山,结果狐狸妈妈被猎人抓到杀死了hunter请你根据以上所给情节,写篇词左右的英语小作文70【答案】例文Once upona time,there was a foxand her baby in theforest.One daythe babyfox was veryhungry andcried.Mother foxdecided toget some food for herbaby.So shewent toa village in amountain.She gotsome grapesand hurriedto herhouse.When she was nearthe house,suddenlyshe heardthe noisesof thehunting dog.She realisedthe hunterwas comingto killher son.Motherfbx shouted,My dearson,it isdangerous.Run away.Be quick.Baby fbxran awaybut Motherfbxwas caughtand killedby thehunter.【解析】【详解】本文需要写一则英文小故事,情节已经给出,重点的单词也相应给了出来,要注意在描述过去的事情的时候正确使用过去时态,可以用到的短语搭配表达有曾Once upona time经;决定去做;为…找一些食物;decided todo getsomefoodfor avillageina大山里的一个小村庄;匆忙去…;在房子附近;mountain hurriedto nearthe houseRun away跑掉总体来说写作难度不大,重点是正确把握时态的应用,语句连贯,这篇范文完成了要求的写作任务.请根据表格内容,写一则小故事要求词左右;语言表达准确,语义连贯,可适360当发挥汤姆和他的狗主人公一天,汤姆去公园发现了一只小狗,它受伤了,汤姆把它带回家get hurt悉心照故事梗概料,,小狗变强壮了它帮助汤姆看家,拿报纸,并且可以照顾他的小孩【答案】例文One day,Tom wenttothepark,and hefound alittle dog.It gothurt.Then Tomtook it homeand tookgood careof it.With Tomscare,the littledog becamestrong.It likesplaying withTom.The dogcan helpTom watchtheir doorand bringnewspapers to him.It canalsotake careof Tomslittle baby.All thepeople inToms familylove thedog verymuch.They thinkit isan importantmember intheir family.【解析】【详解】.题干解读题目要求根据表格提示,写一则小故事,讲一讲汤姆和他的狗狗之间的故事1可适当发挥.写作指导写作时要结合一般过去时和一般现在时,使用第三人称进行写作可采用2一段式写作,将故事梗概完美展现出来要做到无单词和语法错误花木兰替父从军的故事家喻户晓请你根据下列提示,写一篇英语短文词左右
4.60从前,有一个女孩,名叫花木兰,因家中没有男孩,她只好代替父instead of亲参军在军队里没有人发现她是个女孩,她作战join the army fight,非常勇敢战争结束后她回到家乡,她的伙伴们fought bravelyafter thewar,o才知道她是女儿身partner【答案】例文Once upona time,there wasa girlcalled Huamulan.Her fatherdidnt havea son,so shehad tojointhearmyinstead ofher father.In thearmy,no onenoticed thatshe wasa girl.She foughtverybravely.After thewar,she returnedher hometown.Then herpartners knewshewasa girl!【解析】【详解】题干解读这篇作文要求学生们根据提示,叙述花木兰替父从军的故事题目中已有了完整的故事情节,还有一些词汇和短语,学生们可以用上这些单词,并将这些内容用英语表达出来写作指导审题可知,这篇短文叙述的是一个故事,文章应用一般过去时态,注意谓语动词过去式的变化,尤其是一些不规则动词写作时应注意英语句子的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,以简单句句型为基础,使用恰当的词汇和短语还可以穿插一些并列句或复合句的使用,提升作文档次《守株待兔》的故事家喻户晓,请根据下面的提示词,用英语写出这个故事提示词
5.野兔;洞;撞上;不再hare holeknock againstno longer要求表达正确,逻辑清晰;
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2.60[答案]Once upona time,there wasa farmerworking inhis field.Soon hewas verytired.So hesatnear abig tree.The sunwasveryhot andit wasvery coolunder the tree.A hareran out of ahole.When itsaw the farmer,it wasvery afraid.It ranquickly.It ranso fastthat itshead knockedagainstanother tree.It diedsoon.The farmerwasvery excited tosec it.He pickedup thedead hareand tookithomefor dinner.From thatday,he nolonger worked.Hestayed bythat tree,waiting forhares tocome again.【解析】【详解】.题干解读该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按记叙文格式写在写作时开头介绍一个1农民在田里劳动;接下来讲述他看见一只撞在树上而死的兔子;最后他站在树边,不劳动,只等着兔子再次来.例文点评例文采用两段式;用第三人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般过去时为主,2介绍这个兔子如何撞在树上死的,叙述完整且条理清晰写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.高分亮点3短语;;;;inthefield runout ofknock againstpick upno longero句型句型;时间状语从句there bethere bethere wasa farmerworking inhis fieldWhen itsaw;结果》犬语thefarmerso fastthat itshead knockedagainst anothertree根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上
6.下面是一个名叫《神笔马良》的神话故事,故事后半部分已给出请根据下面提供的故事前半部分的四个信息,写一篇英语短文,将故事补充完整.从前,有个叫马良的孩子,他从小喜欢画画可是家里穷困,他买不起1draw pictures笔brusho.于是,他拿起树枝,在山上、在河边、家里画画从不间断,很快他就画得非常好
2.一天晚上,一个白发神仙老人出现在他面前,送给他一支金光灿灿的神笔3appear golden他马上用笔画了一只鸟,鸟竟活了过来飞走了他又画了一brusho becomealive flyaway□条鱼,鱼也活了起来,在水里欢快地游.马良很激动,决定帮助村子里穷苦善良的人们当他们需要什么,马良就高兴地给他4们画什么消息传到⑹皇帝那里,他人把马良抓了去命令马良给他画株摇钱树,come否则就要杀掉马良马良画了一株又高又大的摇钱树在大海中央一个小岛上,他也画了一条大船,等皇帝带人上了大船后马良不停地画风,风把船吹翻了皇帝也死了马良后来到底去了什么地方,人们不得而知作文要求.不能照抄原文不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名
1.语句连贯,词数个左右作文的开头和故事的后半部分已经给出,不计入总词数、280也不必抄写在答题卡上.书写规范,整洁3Once upona time,there wasa smallboy calledMa Liang.The newscame tothe empire.He caughthim andordered himto drawa treethat couldproducemoney.Or he would killhim,Ma Liangdrew aship and the treein anisland inthe middleofthe sea.When the empire andhis mengot onthe ship,he drewthe strongwind.It blewthe shipstronglyand the ship sank.The empiredied.Ma Liangescaped andnobody knewwhere hewas.【答案】例文Once upona time,there wasa smallboy calledMa Liang.He likeddrawing.He drewpictureswith sticksbecause hehad nomoney tobuy abrush.He drewpictures onthe mountains,by theriverand athome.Soon,He drewvery well.One day,an old man appearedand gavehim agolden brush and saidtohim,Only drawpicturesfbr poor people.After sayingthat,the old man disappeared.Ma Liangdrew abird withthebrushandthen itbecame aliveand flewaway.He knewthat thegolden brushwasamagic one.He feltveryexcited.So hewent backtothevillage anddecided to draw forpoorpeople.When theyneededsomething,hewouldhappily drawsomething forthem.The newscame totheempire.He caughthim andordered himtodrawa treethat couldproducemoney,orhewould killhim.Ma Liangdrew aship andthe treein anisland inthe middleofthe sea.When theempire andhis mengot ontheship,he drewthe strongwind.It blewthe shipstronglyandtheship sank.The empiredied.Ma Liangescaped andnobody knewwhere hewas.【解析】【详解】.题干解读文章属于材料作文,主要是描写神话故事《神笔马良》,内容可以根据题目1中给出的提示进行描述写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语.写作指导文章主要用一般过去时,人称用第三人称展开详细介绍描述马良得到神2笔之前以及得到神笔之后都做了什么的故事写作时语言要简单易懂,文章结构要完整,多使用简单词语描述,意思要通俗易懂同学们对“愚公移山”的故事一定有着很深的印象吧?请根据下面的图片及提示词语,
7.以为题,把“愚公移山”的故事用英语简要叙述一下,并谈一谈你从The storyof Yu Gong故事中学到了什么词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数100提示词语move the mountains,start digging,Zhi Sou,it is impossible...,die,sons,grandsons,continue to move,god,be moved,help,the storyreminds us...The storyof YuGongOnce therelived anoldman called YuGong.Two high mountains stoppedhis familyfromwalking tothe otherside.So YuGong【答案】例文The storyof YuGongOnce therelived anoldmancalled YuGong.Two highmountains stoppedhis familyfromwalking tothe otherside.So YuGong decidedto move the mountains.Although YuGong wasold,he decidedtomove themountainswith hisfamily.So YuGongstarted digging.At thattime,a“clever“mancalledZhi Soulaughed athim andtold himthat itwasimpossible tomove suchhighmountains.But YuGong didntlisten tohim andsaid thathis sonsandgrandsons wouldcontinue tomovethemountains afterhe died.Then agod wasmoved byYuGongso hesent twogods tohelp himmovethemountains.The storyreminds usthat nothingisimpossibleas longas wework hard.We shouldnotgive up.【解析】题干解读本文主要讲述“愚公移山”的故事,写作时可根据图片所给提示以及常识进行L写作,要注意故事的顺序,题中给出了提示词语,写作时要适当运用,也可适当增加细节,使文章更丰满.写作指导本文主要讲述“愚公移山”的故事,描述故事内容用一般过去时,讲述故事告2诉的道理时用一般现在时第一段讲述愚公打算移山;第二段讲述愚公移山的过程;第三同的句式,不要出现拼写和语法错误下面四幅图片描述了一个小故事,开请你根据图片内容及所给词语提示,适当展
8.想象,写一篇词左右的小故事70要求语句规范、通顺,情节合理、完整段讲述愚公移山告诉人们的道理文章的逻辑比较清晰,写作时注意运用不❶play inthe tree❷fall in!otheriver【答案】例文Once upona time,a monkeyplayed inthetreenear ariver.It washappy andjumped againandagain.Then,it fellinto theriver.It criedfbr helpbecause itcouldnt swim.A doghappened toplaynear theriverandsaw it.The dogjumpedintotheriverand helpedthe monkeyoutofthe water.They becamegood friendslater.【解析】,题干解读本文是一篇看图作文根据所给的四张图片写一篇小故事
1.写作指导本文采用第三人称,时态采用一般过去时在讲述故事时,耍生动有趣,2注意主谓要保持一致,逻辑性要强,做到无语法和标点错误。
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