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Module7Summer inLos Angeles.单元话题满分范文必背紧张的一学期学习结束后,同学们将迎来轻松愉快的暑假你的暑假计划是什么呢
1.假如你是请你以为题,写出你和你朋友的暑假计划要求Sandy,“Summer Plan”Tony内容必须包括所有提示信息,可适当发挥
1..不少于词(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)260Summer PlanNamesActivities Reasonstravelopen up my eyesSandylearnto dance/draw/...relaxvolunteer getexperienceTonylearn to swim/play basketball/...keep healthySummer PlanHi,Im Sandy.Summer vacationis coming.What areyou going to dothis summerMy friend TonyandI haveour summerplans.【答案】Summer PlanHi,Im Sandy.Summer vacationis coming.What areyou going to dothis suinmerMyfriend TonyandI haveour summerplans.I plan to visitShanghai with my fainily.I want to open upmyeyes.And Imalso going to learntodance during the vacation.I likedancing andI thinkit canmake merelaxed.MyfriendTony wouldlike tovolunteer ina hospitalbecause hewants tobe adoctor.He cangetsome experiencefrom volunteering.He wantsto learntoswimas well.lt canhelp himto keephealthy.【解析】【详解】这是一篇图表作文内容是假如你是以”为题,写出你和你朋友Sandy,SummerPlan”Tony的暑假计划时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,人称主要为第一,第三人Yours,【答案】例文Li Hua】Dear Heny,Im gladto receiveyour letter.Let metell youmy plan for a trip.I amgoingto Beijing becauseitsan interestingplace.I planto gowith my parents andstart outin July.We hopeto gothere bytrain.I willtake amap ofBeijing anda pairof sunglasseswith me.We canvisit manyplaces ofinterest,such asthe GreatWall,the SummerPalace and so on.We canalso enjoykinds ofdeliciousfood likeBeijing RoastDuck.During thetrip,it maycost usa lotof money.So weneed totake20thousand yuan.I believewe willhave a wonderful timethere.What aboutyour planImlooking forward to hearingfrom you!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】【详解】.题干解读本文属于书信作文,主要向你的笔友介绍你的暑假旅行计划,作文采用两段1式第一段介绍你的计划,包括去哪里、交通方式、做什么以及要带什么等等;第二段期待亨利的回信.写作指导全文时态以一般将来时和一般现在时为主,切记不要遗漏要点,可以适当2增加情节使行文连贯写作时多使用所学单词、短语以及句型增加文采,如be goingto,with,等start out,such as,places of interest,what about称在写作过程中,首先要将表格内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来,要涵盖表格中提到的所有要点,同时注意理顺要点,防止漏写为了使句子更通顺完整,需要用上适当的连接词同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,注意不要出现语法错误写作思路考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文其次考生可以按照图表所给出的内容从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点我;旅行,开阔眼界;学习跳舞,画画等,放松
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2.Tony;志愿者,获取经验;学游泳,打篮球等,保持健康用到的重点短语计划做某事plantodo sth开阔眼界openupones eyesmakesb+adj让某人怎样aswell也help sbto dosth帮助某人做某事.假如你是你为即将到来的暑假做了规划,具体内容见下表请以“2Tony,My plan for为题写一篇词左右的短文介绍你的暑期计划开头已给出,不计入the summerholiday”90总词数My planfor the summer holidayTimeJuly10th toSeptember1st.Go to bed early and get up early.Keep goodhabitsDo sportsevery day.Finish my homework.Read somewonderful books.Visit my grandparents.ActivitiesHelp with the housework.Go on atrip.参考词汇精力充沛的energetic Myplanforthe summerholidayThe summerholiday is coming.It willstart【答案】例文The summerholiday iscoming.It willstart onJuly10th andend onSep.1st.I havemadesome plansfor it.Firstly,I willkeep goodhabits.I planto go tobedearlyandgetupearly in the morningso thatI will beenergetic duringthe day.To keephealthy,I willdo sportsevery day.Whafs more,I willnotonly finish myhomeworkcarefully butalso keepon studyingsuch asreading somewonderfulbooks.Besides,when I am free,I willvisit mygrandparents moreoften andhelp mymother withthehousework.If theweather isgood,I planto goonatrip with my goodfriends.Im sureI willspend acolorful andmeaningful summerholiday.【解析】【详解】思路点拨本文是一篇材料作文要求根据表格提示描述自己的暑期计划表格中包含
1.了时间,保持好习惯和活动三个要点,每个要点中的小点都是得分点,一定要写清楚明白同时参考词汇也要运用到作文中去,注意词数控制在词左右90写作指导我们首先要注意人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般将来时为主其次在写作
2.时,可以采取总——分——总的结构,首先简要概述暑假将至自己为之做了一些计划,然后再详细介绍暑假计划,最后再简要表达自己的希望注意逻辑合理,语言通顺请你以为题写一篇英语短文,回忆暑期的游玩经历和感
3.“My SummerHoliday”受,选择一次游历来写作要求
4.Jill Linda要求、自主发挥,语言通顺
1、词以上邮件的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数280Dear Linda,Im very happy thatthe summerholidays arecoming soon.Please write back soon.Yours,Jill【答案JOne possibleversion:Im veryhappy thatthe summerholidays arecoming soon.I stallhave enoughtime todo manythingsof myown.First,I amgoingtospend aweek in the countrysidewithmygrandparents.Ireally missthem.Then Illtravel toGuilin withmy parents.Tm surewell havea greattime!Afterthat,ril comeback andfinishmyholiday homework.Til alsogoingtotake someextra lessonstoimprove mystudies.Besides,Ill takeenough exerciseevery dayto keephealthy.How aboutyourvacation planPleasewritebacksoon.Yours,Jill【解析】【详解】这是一篇应用文写作,写一封电子邮件给出的材料比较简略,我们所要做的首先是围绕要点组织材料,然后应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯考点考查应用文的写作点评注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题,时态一般是一般现在时态,人称是第一人称较多写作中语言要准确、简明,说明有条理,符合逻辑.假设这周你班英语角活动的主题是“我的周末生活”假设你是李梅,请你以5My为题写一篇短文,简单描述一下自己通常是如何度过周末的要点如下weekends参加补习班;
1.约朋友一起出去玩;
2.去图书馆看书;
3.帮父母做家务;
4.看电视、上网
5.参考词汇tutor centre;hang out;reading;housework;watch TV注意
1.词数80〜100;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
6.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称
7.My weekends【答案】例文My weekendsMyname isLi Mei.Iama middleschool student.My weekendsare alwayswonderful.EverySaturday I go toa tutorcentre tostudy Englishfor twohours.Sometimes,I hangout withmyfriends.We maysee movies,play basketball,go shoppingandsoon.Sometimes,Igoto thelibraryto do some reading.Sometimes,I helpmyparentswiththehousework.Sometimes,I stayat homewatchingTV orsurfing theInternet.In myopinion,its importantfor usto havehappy,relaxingweekends.Therefore,we canwork harderin thefollowing days.【解析】【详解】.题干解读本文是一篇话题作文以“我的周末生活”为题,描述自己通常是如何度过周1末的.写作指导本文采用一般现在时先介绍个人信息,再描述周末生活,最后发表自己2的观点写作时要保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误近两个月的暑假结束了假设你叫你给好朋友写了一封邮件告知
6.Han Mei,Liu Ming你是如何度过这个暑假的,并且想知道他在暑期做了哪些事情,感觉如何?注意表达有条理,书写正确,规范
1.词左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数
2.70以下信息仅供参考,请适当加以补充
3.activities Whatdo theythinkvisit grandparentsinthecountry;quiet,naturalHan Meitakea three-week afterschool classboring but usefulLiu MingDear Liu Ming,How wasyour summer vacation Didyou haveany funLooking forwardto seeing you!Han Mei【答案】例文DearLiu Ming,How wasyour summervacation Didyou haveany funactivities duringthe summerholidayNow Iwanttotell yousomething aboutmine.In thefirst monthof theholiday,I visitedmygrandparentsinthecountry.I feltvery happybecause I hadntseen themfbr half a year.What interestedme mostwas thenatural beautyof thecountry.It9s reallyawonderfulplace tobe quietand relaxmyself.Whats more,I tooka three-weekafter-school classbecause ofmy poorEnglish.For me.Ifs boringbutuseful.Thafs allmy activitiesduringthevacation.What aboutyours Pleaseemail meif yourefree.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Han Mei【解析】【详解】题干解读本文是一篇书信作文,题目要求给自己的好朋友写一封电子Han MeiLiu Ming邮件,主要讲述自己暑假的经历并询问对方的经历及感受根据题目可知,本文以第一人称为主,时态为一般过去时例文点评本文开篇点题,介绍作者的写作意图;正文部分以第一人称为主讲述了“我”的暑期经历及感受;文章最后总结全文,并且表示对来信的期待全文层次清晰,LiuMing言语顺畅,紧扣题目要求高分亮点短语natural beauty;Whats more;because of;look forwardto句型(引导的原因状语从I feltveryhappybecauseI havent seenthem forhalfayear,because句)(引导的主语从句)What interestedme mostwas thenatural beautyof thecountry.what.假如你是暑假即将来临,你有什么计划和打算,请用英语给你的朋友7Li Hua,Bob写一封电子邮件分享你的并询问他的暑期计划内容包括和父母去杭州旅行参观名胜古迹,如茶艺博物馆,欣赏茶艺表演……L.成为动物医院的志愿者,并懂得保护濒危动物的重要性……
2.关心父母,与父母多沟通,分担家务……3要求词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
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80.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称2Dear Bob,How isit goingLookingforwardto your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Bob,How isit goingThesummervacationiscoming.Ihave some plansto sharewith you.To beginwith,I willgotosome placesofinterestwithmyparents,such asthe NationalTeaMuseum inHangzhou.Watching thetea artperformance mustbe enjoyable.In addition,I plantobe avolunteer ina localanimal hospital.I knowmany animalsare endangerednow,so wemustunderstand theimportance ofsolving them.Whats more,Iwillcare aboutmyparentsand helpthemdosomechores.If Ihavesomeproblems,Til communicatewith them.How aboutyou Whatis yourplanforthesummervacationLooking forwardtoyourreply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】.题干解读本文是一篇电子邮件,向朋友分享暑假的计划和打算,并询问他的暑1Bob期计划.写作指导本文时态采用一般将来时;人称以第一人称为主写作时涵盖要点提示,2不要遗漏,可适当发挥,使行文连贯,确保无单词语法错误,语句通顺暑期就要来临了假设你是李华,你在新西兰的笔友来信询问你暑期旅行的
8.Henry计划请你根据以下提示,用英语给他回一封信要求•短文须包含所给内容,适当发挥,语句通顺,语法正确;
1.不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称;2词数个左右
3.80Im gladto receiveyour letter.。
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