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人教版选择性必修读后续写作业3Unit2Healthy Lifestyle课文素材库In我叫土士幺匕微技能语料出处动作描写
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31.It tookthe surgeonthree hoursto finishmy motherslung surgery.
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3.But thenI alwaysfeel tootired tocontinue!
44.Dont keepthe phonein theroom soyou wontpick itup beforebed.
5.Other timesI jumpedon myskateboard androde aroundmyneighbourhood,or justtook along walk.
1.To reachthe goalof change,a personmust showsome discipline
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3.I feelmore dynamicand strongerthan ever,in bothbody andmind.2心理描写
4.Best ofall,in myopinion,is howI feelabout myself.
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5.Page20Text2Para1Line1started to analyse my choices,especially whatI didto relaxand howit
6.Page20Text2Para3Linewas affecting my whole life.
36.However,I realizedthat tosucceed inquitting,I had to replace itwith somethingelse.So Ithought aboutwhat to try.Rock climbing,bowling,watching comedies,and playingbasketball were the things Ithought ofdoing instead.
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1.To preventharmful habitslike thesefrom dominatinga teenagers
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32.Life iscomposed ofmany elements,such asfamily,friends,study,
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33.If oneelements dominatesyour lifeand theothers areignored,youwill losebalance andnot feelgood.
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1.The rewardmakes usmuch morelikely tocontinue thecycle,and
2.Page18Exercise2the bad habit ofrelying onunhealthy snacksis formed.
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32.Student1has troublesleeping becauseof usingthe phonebeforegoing to sleep.
3.I gotso absorbedthat Iplayed thegames day and night.Playing wasfun,but Ifelt even more worn out afterwards!
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11.In manyways,our lifestyleis thesum ofchoices we have made.
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12.To facilitatea positivechange in our bad habits,we mustfirst
4.Page16Exercise3examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them.
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3.Many ofus tryto changebad habitsquickly,and ifwe arenot
6.Page16Exercise3描写successful straightaway,we oftenbecome pessimisticand giveup.
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14.Slowly facilitate changes inyour lifestyle by using a step-by-step
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15.You donthave to change everything atonce.
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26.Make smallchanges eachday andyour lifestylewill becomehealthier.
7.To changebad habitsis nevereasy.
8.To makechoices about myself iswithin my own power.
9.It was a bigstruggle notto join my friendsin playingonline gamesasIm mad for them.
10.It hasenhanced thequality of my life,improving myhealth andincreasingmy happiness.语言训练场IIQ4呼应主旨It taughtme the importance ofresilience,gratitude,andthe powerof loveand support.［素材积累】Para
11.My fathertelephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told methat...（引导时间状语从句）as从某地返回
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1.That waswhen itstruck me that Ireally mightlose my mother.when I句；作形式主语，引导主语从句）it that被迫离开；停止参与某事
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2.out of danger【参考范文】My mothersreturn homewas ablessing forus all,but itmeant someunaccustomed responsibilitiesfor me.I wouldfeed her,bathe herand helpher to the bathroom.I struck me that I waspretty muchplaying therole ofmother to myownmother.Thedifficult partfor mewas trying to bealways upbeat,and tokeep my mothers spiritsup whenshe becamefrustrated withthe painandher inabilityto dosimple thingsby herself.Looking aftermy motherwasn*t muchfun,but itfelt goodtobethere whenmy（）mother really needed me.84wordsMy mothers reliance onme changed our relationship.In thepast,we hadmore thanour shareof thestrains ofmother-daughter relationships.The accidentthrew usinto arelationship ofinterdependence.To getmy motherback,I hadto helpregain her strengthand abilityto resumean independentlife.She hadto acceptmy helpas wellas thefact that I wasno longerachild.Since then,wehavebecome theclosest friends,genuinely listeningto oneanother andtruly enjoyingeach otherscompany.（）81words技能锻造营IV（暗喻）Metaphor定义
1.暗喻（）也称隐喻，是依据比喻和被比喻两种不同事物的相似或相关关系而构成的修辞格无需借助比喻词，metaphor直接将甲事物当作乙事物来描写例如★然而，能帮助你的“魔力丸”或删除键并不存在However,there isno“magic pillor delete”button thatwill helpyou.作用
2.这里的和均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改变坏习惯的良策二此处的暗喻运用巧妙，让magicpill deletebutton“quick and的直白意义顿时形象生动起来，给文字平添一份感染力effective way”用法
3.★生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既会遇到晴天，也会Life isa shipon theocean meetingboth sunnydays andstormy days.遇到暴风雨天★Laughter is the sunthat driveswinter fromthe humanface.笑是驱走人们脸上寒意的太阳★She isgoing througha rollercoaster ofemotions.她正经历着情感的过山车★At once,the Easternand WesternChang9an Roadsbecame roaringoceans.霎时间，东西长安街成了喧腾的大海由以上各例可知，暗喻没有引导词，这是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大区别换句话说，有为明喻，没有为暗喻如,前句是暗喻,后句是明喻暗喻时，比喻物和被比喻物之间的相He has a heart of stone.He hasa heartlike stone.^®似点较为含蓄，猛一看它们毫无关系，实际却有着某种内在联系实践英译汉
4.1a bedof roses2clean hands3curtain-lecture4mushroom fame/millionaire5He isa regularoyster.安乐窝1两袖清风2枕头风3一夜成名/暴发户4他总是守口如瓶5汉译英接下来的几个月里，充满了物理治疗、预约医生和对母亲的不断照顾（）
1.be filledwith弟成为了她的主要照顾者，帮助她处理生活中的方方面面（做状语）51v-ing不若时候，这让我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必须要坚强地支撑着她（并列复合句）在此期间，我还必须学会如何平衡我的新责任与学业和社交生活（特殊疑问词+动词不定时•）丁飞顾我的母亲成为了我的首要任务（）priority五种增加的沟通和共同决策加深了我们对彼此需求和关切的理解（）1deepen厂房到母亲经历康复的困难使我更加耐心和理解她的挣扎（作主语）v.ing同样，我的母亲欣赏我的努力，并对我的关心和支持表示极大的感激（）Likewise「每次经历让我们更加亲密，加强了我们作为家庭成员的联系的重要性（）6reinforcePhysical assistance:Help your mother with everyday tasksthat shemay finddifficult due to herinjuries.This caninclude preparing meals,assisting with,提供身体上的帮助帮助母亲完成因伤势而困bathing and dressing,and helpingwith mobilityexercises orphysical therapy难的口常任务这可能包括准备饭菜、协助洗澡和穿衣，并帮助进行运动或物理治疗Emotional support:Offer alistening earand bethere toprovide emotionalcomfort duringthis difficulttime.Encourage herto expressher feelingsand.提供情感支持倾frustrations,and validateher emotions.Remind herthat herrecovery isa journeyand thatprogress takestime听她的倾诉，并在这段困难时期提供情感上的安慰鼓励她表达自己的感受和挫折，并验证她的情绪提醒她康复是一个过程，需要时间来取得进展Attend medicalappointments andcommunicate withhealthcare professionals:Accompany your mother todoctors appointments,therapy sessions,or anyother medicalvisits.Take notesduring appointments,ask questions,and stayinformed abouther treatmentplan.Be anadvocate forher bycommunicating herneeds andconcerns to陪同就医并与医疗专业人员沟通陪同母亲去看医生、治疗或其他医疗事务在就医过程中做笔healthcare professionals.记、提问，并了解她的治疗计划通过向医疗专业人员传达她的需求和关切Create asafe andcomfortable environment:Make necessaryadjustments inyour hometo ensureit isaccessible andsafe fbryour mothersrecovery.This mayinvolve.仓造——个安全舒适的环境根据需rearranging furniture,installing grabbars orhandrails,or removingtripping hazardsU要在家中进行必要的调整，以确保母亲的康复环境无障碍且安全这可能包括重新布置家具、安装扶手或扶手，或者清除绊倒隐患Encourage ahealthy lifestyle:Promote anutritious dietand encourageyour mother to engagein lightexercise orphysical activitiesas recommendedby her.鼓励健康的生活方式healthcare provider.Help hermaintain abalanced routinethat includesrest,relaxation,and propersleep推广营养均衡的饮食，鼓励母亲按照医疗专业人员的建议进行轻度运动或体育活动帮助她保持一个平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠Seek additionalsupport ifneeded:Reach outto supportgroups orcounseling servicesthat specializein helpingindividuals recoverfrom traumaticexperiences or如有需要，寻求额外的支持accidents.They canprovide valuableguidance andemotional supportfor bothyou andyour mother.寻找专门帮助个人从创伤经历或事故中康复的支持团体或咨询服务他们可以为您和母亲提供有价值的指导和情感支持美文体验馆IIIIt was a chillyFriday night,and I had justreturned fromclimbing oneof thered rocksof Sedona.My fathertelephoned me asI walked through the arches to my dorm room and told methat my mother had been in a terriblecar crashand hadbeen takento the重症监护病房intensive careunit ofa nearby hospital.When I got tothe hospital,my fatherled medown awide hallwaywith machinesall around.A strong smell of medicine形容枯槁的brought a sick feelingto myalready turningstomach.As I turned intomy mothersward,the cadaverouscondition ofherbody shocked me.Her facehad swollen,her eyeshad hugedark bruise,and shehad tubesdown herthroat andin herarms.Gently holdingher coldswollen hands,I said“hi”inacalm voice,controlling myurge tocry out.She kept looking at me asshe poundedher hand against the bed,looking painful.I turnedmy faceaway from her,trying tohidethe tearsthat wererolling downmy face.That waswhen itstruck methat Ireally mightlose my mother.From thatnight on,my lifecompletely changed.Up tothat point,Id hadthe luxuryof justbeing akid,having todeal withonlythe exaggeratedmelodramas ofteenage life.As mymother struggledfirst tostay aliveand thento relearnto walk,my senseofpriorities changed sharply.My motherneeded me.The trialsand troubleof mydaily lifeat school,which hadseemed soimportantbefore,now appearedinsignificant.My motherand I had faceddeath together,and lifetook on a new meaning for both ofus.After aweek oftreatment inintensive care,my motherscondition improvedenough tobe movedto a regular hospitalward.She wasfinally outof dangerbut,because herlegs hadbeen crushed,there wasdoubt whethershe wouldbe ableto walkagain.Iwas just grateful that she was alive.Two monthslater,a sortof hospitalsuite wasset up in our family room,and shewas allowedtocome home.Paragraph1:My mothersreturn homewasablessing farus all,but itmeant someunaccustomed responsibilitiesfor me.Paragraph2:My mothers reliance onme changed our relationshiptoo.主题语境人与自我文章出处苏州市高三上学期英语期初调研考试2024词数正文英文词数续写第一段首句个单词，续写第二段首句个单司364,1891OOpening Para.1Build-up Para.2-5故事脉络What ClimaxUseone sentence（续写第一段）...but itmeant someunaccustomed responsibilitiesfor me.to summarizethemain ideaof eachResolutionEndingOur relationshipchanged forthe better.续写第二段paragraph故事主题Why写作手法How“我”My doctorShe keptlooking atmeas sheA strongsmell ofmedicinebrought asick feelingpoundedher handagainst thebed,人物分析The cadaverouscondition of my mothers bodylooking painful.I turnedmy faceshockedme.away fromher,trying tohide thetearsthat wererolling downmyMy senseof priorities changedsharply.face.电物乐IN语言风格□平实质朴口含蓄隽永口幽默风趣这里的Para1:a sortof hospitalsuite set up inour family room hospitalsuite伏笔/照应说明作者家里的摆设发生了什么变化？续写第二段的首句说明了作者和母亲的关Para2:changedour relationship系会怎么样？Ql:How didthe hospitalsuite functionin myfamily room谋篇布局续写段Q2:What weremy responsibilitiesHow was I accustomedto them落Q3:How doI feelabout my mothersrelianceWhat kindof changedid itbring Q4:What wasmyreaction and feeling【素材积累】Para1（弓「导时间状语从句）My fathertelephoned measIwalkedthrough thearchestomydormroomandtoldmethat...as return从某地返回fromPara2（作状语）Gently holdingher coldswollen hands,I saidhiin acalm voice,controlling myurge tocry out.v.ing；催促；竭力主张强烈的欲望；冲动u gev.n.Para3（引导表语从句；作形式主语，引导主语从句）、That waswhen itstruck methat Ireally mightlose mymother.when itthat被迫离开；停止参与某事turn awayfromPara4从那晚开始From thatnight on到那个时候为止Up tothat pointPara5（弓|导同位语从句）脱离危险...there wasdoubt whethershe wouldbe ableto walkagain.whether outof danger技能锻造营IV（暗喻）Metaphor定义
1.暗喻（）也称隐喻，是依据比喻和被比喻两种不同事物的相似或相关关系而构成的修辞格无需借助比喻词，metaphor直接将甲事物当作乙事物来描写例如.★However,there isno“magic pillor delete button thatwill helpyou.然而，能帮助你的“魔力丸”或删除键并不存在作用2应里的和均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改变坏习惯的良策”此处的暗喻运用巧妙，让magic pilldeletebutton“quick and的直白意义顿时形象生动起来，给文字平添一份感染力effective way”用法
3.★Life isa shipon theocean meetingboth sunnydays andstormy days.生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既会遇到晴天，也会遇到暴风雨天★Laughter isthe sunthat driveswinter fromthe humanface.笑是驱走人们脸上寒意的太阳★She isgoing througha rollercoaster ofemotions.她正经历着情感的过山车★At once,the Easternand WesternChangan Roadsbecame roaringoceans.霎时间，东西长安街成了喧腾的大海由以上各例可知，暗喻没有引导词，这是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大区别换句话说，有为明喻，没有为暗喻如He.很显然，前句是暗喻，后句是明喻暗喻时，比喻物和被比喻物之间的相似hasa heartofstone.He hasaheartlike stone点较为含蓄，猛一看它们毫无关系，实际却有着某种内在联系实践英译汉
4.（）1a bedof roses（）2clean hands（）3curtain-lecture（）4mushroom fame/millionaire（）5He isaregularoyster.答案解析…文素材库微技能语料出处l.It tookthe surgeonthree hoursto finishmy motherslung surgery.
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2.Before exercising,always doa fewwarm-ups tobegin with.
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33.But thenI alwaysfeel tootired tocontinue!
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34.Dont keepthe phonein theroom soyou wontpick itup beforebed.
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25.Other timesI jumpedon myskateboard androde aroundmy neighbourhood,or just
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312.However,I realizedthat tosucceed inquitting,I hadto replaceit with somethingelse.So Ithought aboutwhat totry.Rock climbing,bowling,watching comedies,andplaying basketballwere thethings Ithought ofdoing instead.
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8.If oneelements dominatesyour lifeand theothers areignored,you willlosebalance andnot feelgood.
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20.It hasenhanced thequality ofmy life,improving myhealth andincreasing myhappiness.语言训练场II汉译英（）.接下来的几个月里，充满了物理治疗、预约医生和对母亲的不断照顾be filledwith1The nextfew monthswere filledwith physical therapy sessions^doctorappointments^and constantcare formymother.我成为了她的主要照顾者，帮助她处理生活中的方方面面（做状语）.v-ing2Itook on therole ofher primarycareqivei;helping herwitheveryaspect ofdailylife.有时候，这让我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必须要坚强地支撑着她.3（并列复合句）It wasexhaustinq andoverwhelminq attimes,but Iknew thatI hadtobestrongfor her.在此期间，我还必须学会如何平衡我的新责任与学业和社交生活（特殊疑问.4词+动词不定时）During thistime»I alsohadtolearn howto balancemy newresponsibilities withmyschoolwork andsocial life.照顾我的母亲成为了我的首要任务（）.priority5Taking careofmymother becamemy tupprior®.这种增加的沟通和共同决策加深了我们对彼此需求和关切的理解（）6deepenThis increasedcommunication andshared decision・making deepenedour understanding of eachothers needs andconcerns..看到母亲经历康复的困难使我更加耐心和理解她的挣扎（作主语）7v.ingSeeing mymother gothroughthedifficulties ofrecovery mademe morepatient andunderstandingofher struggles..同样，频的母亲欣赏我的努力，并对我的关心和支持表示极大的感激（）8LikewiseLikewise,mymotherappreciated myefforts andshowed immensegratitude formy careand support..这次经历让我们更加亲密，加强了我们作为家庭成员的联系的重要性（）9reinforceThe experiencebrought uscloser togetherand reinforcedtheimportanceof ourbond asfamily members.Physical assistance:Help yourmother witheveryday tasksthat shemay finddifficult dueto herinjuries.This caninclude preparingmeals,assisting提供身体上的帮助帮助母亲完成因伤with bathing anddressing,and helpingwith mobilityexercises orphysicaltherapy.势而困难的日常任务这可能包括准备饭菜、协助洗澡和穿衣，并帮助进行运动或物理治疗Emotional support:Offer alistening earand bethere toprovide emotionalcomfort duringthis difficulttime.Encourage herto expressher feelings提供情感支and frustrations,and validateher emotions.Remind herthat herrecovery isa journeyand thatprogress takestime.持倾听她的倾诉，并在这段困难时期提供情感上的安慰鼓励她表达自己的感受和挫折，并验证她的情绪提醒她康复是一个过程，需要时间来取得进展Attend medicalappointments andcommunicate withhealthcare professionals:Accompany yourmothertodoctors appointments,therapy sessions,or anyother medicalvisits.Take notesduring appointments,ask questions,and stayinformed abouther treatmentplan.Be anadvocate forher bycommunicating herneedsandconcerns to陪同就医并与医疗专业人员沟通陪同母亲去看虚生、治疗或其他医疗事务在就医过程中做healthcare professionals.笔记、提问，并了解她的治疗计划通过向医疗专业人员传达她的需求和关切Create asafe andcomfortable environment:Make necessaryadjustments inyour hometo ensureit isaccessible andsafe fbryour mothersrecovery.This mayinvolve.仓造——个安全舒适的环境根据rearranging furniture,installing grabbars orhandrails,or removingtripping hazardsll需要在家中进行必要的调整，以确保母亲的康复环境无障碍且安全这可能包括重新布置家具、安装扶手或扶手,或者清除绊倒隐患Encourage ahealthy lifestyle:Promote anutritious dietand encourageyourmotherto engagein lightexercise orphysical activitiesas recommendedby her鼓励健康的生活方式healthcare provider.Help hermaintain abalanced routinethat includesrest,relaxation,and propersleep.推广营养均衡的饮食，鼓励母亲按照医疗专业人员的建议进行轻度运动或体育活动帮助她保持一个平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠Seek additionalsupport ifneeded:Reach outto supportgroups orcounseling servicesthat specializein helpingindividuals recoverfrom traumaticexperiences or.如有需要，寻求额外的accidents.They canprovide valuableguidance andemotional supportforbothyou andyourmother支持寻找专门帮助个人从创伤经历或事故中康复的支持团体或咨询服务他们可以为您和母亲提供有价值的指导和情感支持美文体验馆IIIIt wasa chillyFriday night,and Ihad justreturned fromclimbing oneof thered rocksof Sedona.My fathertelephoned measIwalkedthroughthearchestomydormroomandtoldmethat mymother hadbeen ina terriblecar crashand hadbeen taken（重症监护病房）totheintensive careunit ofa nearbyhospital.When Igot tothe hospital,my fatherled medown awide hallwaywith machinesall around.Astrongsmell ofmedicine（形容枯槁的）brought asick feelingtomyalready turningstomach.As I turned intomy mothersward,the cadaverousconditionof herbody shockedme.Her facehad swollen,her eyeshad hugedark bruise,and shehad tubesdown herthroat andinherarms.Gently holdingher coldswollen hands,I saidhiin acalm voice,controlling myurge tocryout.Shekeptlooking atmeasshe poundedher handagainst thebed,looking painful.Iturnedmy faceawayfromher,trying tohidethe tearsthat wererolling downmy face.That waswhen itstruckmethatIreally mightlose mymother.From thatnight on,my lifecompletely changed.Up tothat point,Id hadthe luxuryof justbeingakid,having todeal withonlythe exaggeratedmelodramas ofteenage life.As mymother struggledfirst tostay aliveand thento relearnto walk,my senseofpriorities changedsharply.My motherneeded me.The trialsand troubleofmydaily lifeat school,which hadseemed soimportantbefore,now appearedinsignificant.My motherand Ihad faceddeath together,and lifetookona newmeaning forbothof us.After aweek oftreatment inintensive care,mymotherscondition improvedenough tobe movedtoaregular hospitalward.She wasfinally outofdangerbut,because herlegs hadbeen crushed,there wasdoubt whethershe wouldbe ableto walkagain.I wasjustgratefulthatshewasalive.Two monthslater,a sortof hospitalsuite wassetupinourfamilyroom,and shewasallowed tocome home.第一段My mothersreturn homewasablessing forus all,but itmeant someunaccustomed responsibilitiesfor me.第二段My mothersreliance onme changedourrelationshiptoo.主题语境人与自我文章出处苏州市高三上学期英语期初调研考试2024词数正文英文词数续写第一段首句个单词，续写第二段首句个单词364,189My motherhadbeenin theintensive careunit ofnearbyhospitalduetoa carcrash.Openin gPara.1故事脉络WhatWhat happenedin the hospitalUse onesentence Build-upto summarizethe Para.2-5main ideaof each...but itmeant someunaccustomed responsibilitiesfor me.（续写第一Climaxparagraph段）ResolutionOur relationshipchanged forthe better.续写第二Ending段After facingdeath together,I andmymotherunderstand anewmeaningof ourlife.故事主题Why写作手法第一人称、记叙、描写How“我”My doctorThatwasShe keptlookingatmeassheA strongsmellofmedicine Mystomach whenitpounded herhandagainstthebed,struck mebroughtasickfeeling turned...looking painful.Iturnedmy facethat Ireallyawayfromher,tryingtohide theThecadaverousmight losetearsthat wererolling downmycondition ofmy Gentlyholdin gmyface.mother.mothersbodyshockedme.her coldswollen人物分析hands,I saidhiina calmvoice,controllingmy urgeto cryout.My motherMysense ofneeded me.prioritieschangedsharply.场景in thehospital语言风格平实质朴Para1:a sortof hospitalsuite setupinourfamily更适合患者康复治疗，但是会给家人带来不这里的说明作者家里的摆设room hospitalsuite便发生了什么变化？伏笔续写第二段的首句Para2:changedourj relationship印以前相比，家人的关系更亲近同时，作说明了作者和母亲的关系会[怎么样？者对生活和亲情重要性的新仄识和理解[Q1:How didthehospitalsuite functioninmyfamily roomQ2:What weremy responsibilitiesHow wasI accustomedto them问题素材功能To reachthe goalof change,a personmust showsomediscipline/patience andrepeatedlytakemanysmall心理描写表现作者内心steps.活动动词不定式作目的状语Qi谋篇布局续However,I realizedthat tosucceed inadjusting,Ihadto心理描写作者的心理活写第一段replaceitwithsomethingelse.So Ithought aboutwhat动totry.情节发生转折However具体动作描写推进情节Preparing meals,assisting withbathinganddressing,发展and helpingwith mobilityexercises orphysical therapyQ2werethethingsIthought ofdoing instead.作形式主语，动词不定It式作真正主语It isnecessary tobe incontrol ofwhat mymother eat.Q3:How doI feelaboutmymothersrelianceWhat kindof changedid itbringQ4:What wasmy reactionandfeeling问题素材功能心理描写作者的心理活It wasa difficultadjustment,but Iknew thatmymother动neededmemore thanever.That experiencechangedQ3me inways Icould havenever imagined.谋篇布局续心理描写作者的心理活You donthave tochange everything atonce.Slowly写第二段facilitatechangesinmylifestylebyusinga动step-by-step process.动作链推动情节发展，结Ihadlearned howto assisthe withouther havingto ask,合表达情绪的形容词反such asgetting dressed,preparingmeals,and takingmedication.应人物情感。
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