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必修一Unit4如何用英语写新闻摘要新闻摘要写作是对一则新闻主要内容的提炼和浓缩,要求学生通过阅读,能理解新闻的主要内容、提炼其关键信息并能概括归纳其要点这种写作方式既要求学生有准确的理解能力,又要求学生具有高度的概括能力新闻摘要写作一般分为以下四个步骤第一步阅读新闻,摘选关键信息通过对新闻内容的仔细阅读,掌握新闻的主要内容和篇章结构,摘出新闻中事件发生的时间、地点、起因、结果以及可能的后续活动等第二步总结新闻各段主旨大意概括总结新闻每段的中心意思,按照顺序列出要点,只保留新闻中的主要事实,省略不必要的事实细节和事例第三步组织语言列出详细的写作提纲,拟出初稿尽可能用自己的语言进行表达,也可以适当借鉴使用原文的某些词语和句子摘要的长度往往是原文本的三分之一,内容只包括文本中重要的信息或事例,不需要加入自己的感情色彩和评论第四步修改内容,定稿作品对初稿的修改包括.看要点是否齐全,观点是否一致;
1.精简摘要中出现的不必要的词汇、短语或长句子;
2.确认拼写、语法和标点符号无误3写作任务阅读下面的新闻,然后写一篇摘要Record-Breaking Floodingin Zhengzhou,HenanExtremely heavy rainfall hitZhengzhou,a cityof millionon thebanks ofthe YellowRiver,on July20,
2021.More than100,000people wererelocated tosafe places,with thousandsof rescueworkers senttoassist in the effort.Due to the deadlyrainfall,people on the street,with waterup totheir hips,workeddesperately topull outpeople trappedin anunderground mallusing ropes.People alsomade ahumanchain to avoid beingswept away by theflood asthey struggledthrough rushingwater.The city§subway(暂停)system,whose carriagesof Subwayline5were washedawaybythe heavyrain,suspended alloperationsafter theincident,said provincialauthorities.After July20,the rainfallstarted toweaken.It causedheavy damagein Henan,with292peopleconfirmed deadand47missing inZhengzhou alone.Of thevictims,189were killeddirectly byfloods(泥石流);and debrisflow54were killedby housecollapses;39drowned inunderground spacessuchas thesubway,the tunneland garages;and10people diedfrom othercauses.“Though floodingduring thesummer monthsis usualin partsof China,recent recordbreakingrainsraised questionsas towhether thecountry isprepared to deal with more extremeand unpredictableweathercaused byclimate changeJ ascientist said.写作指导该新闻报道了河南省郑州市受特大暴雨袭击导致受灾严重的事件通过分析,我们可以发现第一段清晰地列出了暴雨发生的时间(年月日)和地点(河南省郑州市)第二2021720段介绍了特大暴雨发生时灾区的具体情况十万多人被转移到安全地带,数以千计的救援人员前往灾区,被困的人们利用各种方法自救,交通系统也随之崩溃第三段阐述了此次特大暴雨造成的严重损失第四段阐述了科学家对此次特大暴雨的思考本则新闻摘要可从以下三部分来写第一部分交代事件发生的时间、地点;第二部分灾区情况及特大暴雨造成的损失;第三部分科学家的思考范文展示Zhengzhou,the provincialcapital ofHenan,experienced extremelyheavyrainfallon July20,
2021.The deadlyrainfall forcedabout100,000people toleave thecity.The restworked withrescueworkers,doing everythingpossible tosave trappedpeople.Besides,it alsoresulted inserious trafficconfusionin thecity.In all,292people werekilled and47went missingduring therainfall inZhengzhoualone.A scientistsaid thecountry shouldget preparedtodealwithmoreextreme weathercaused byclimatechange.拓展阅读Tonga man survived27hours atsea aftertsunami语篇导读年月,汤加一火山发生喷发并引发海啸,一名残疾男子经历了漂流2022127小时生还的奇幻人生A57-year-old Tongamansurviveda nightin theocean aftera tsunamiwave swepthim outto sea.The incidenthappened afterthe hugeeruption ofa volcanointheisland kingdomof Tonga.LisalaFolau saidthat he was paintinghis housewhen hisbrother toldhim a tsunami wasmoving towardthesmall islandof Atata.Folau isdisabled andhas difficultywalking.He saidhe climbeda treeto escapethe firstwave butwhenhe gotdown,another bigwave swepthim away.I couldhear myson callingfrom land,but Ididntwant toanswer himbecause Ididnt wanthim toswim outto rescueme Jsaid Folau.(漂流)Folau wasswept outto seaat about7p.m.local time.Then,he saidhe driftedor swamanothereight hourstoasecond islandwith noone livingon itbefore finallyswimming againtothemainisland ofTongatapu.The experiencelasted morethan27hours andcovered kilometers.Folau saidthat hewent underwaternine times.On theeighth time I thought,The nexttimeIgounderwater thatsit,because myarms werethe onlythings thatwere keepingme abovewater,“said(原木).Folau.So theninth timeI wentunder andcame upand grabbeda logAnd thatswhat keptmegoing.^^In aninterview,Folau saidhewasfrightened whenthe wavestook himfrom landinto thesea.“What cameinto mymind whenI washelpless atsea wasone thing,he said.That wasmy family.The amazingstory ofFolaus survivalwas sharedontheInternet.And peopledescribed himas areal-life Aquaman”.From:Notesincident:n.an eventwhich isunusualdisabled:adj.unable touse apart ofyour bodycompletely oreasily grab:v.to takehold ofsomeone orsomethingwith asudden movementCultural knowledge(漫画书).Aquaman isa superheroappearing inAmerican comicbooks Inthe story,he canmoveand breathefreely underwater.Self-check
1.What doesthe underlinedword“escape probablymeanA.To siton something.B.To goafter something.C.To experiencephysical ormental pain.D.To getaway froma dangeroussituation.
2.What supportedFolau whenhe wantedto giveupReflectionHow tosurvive ifyou arecaught inatsunami说明黑正体部分为本单元新学词汇;黑斜体为课标重点词汇,学有余力的同学可提前掌握答案Self-check
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2.His family.Reflection。
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