2024高考英语一轮复习层级1基础写作第2讲写作常见的3类错误及防范措施教学案新人教版

第讲写作常见的类错误及防范措施23【小试身手寻盲点】改正下列句子中的错误

1.People throwedcans,paper,bags and so oninto theriver,throwed—threw

2.During mysummer vacation,I spenthalf amonth in the countryand playedveryhappy,happy—happily

3.We mustpay attentionour pronunciationwhen wespeak English,attention后力口to

4.Its hightime wedo somethingto reducetraffic accidents,dofdid

5.There havebeen moreand moreroad accidentshappened inrecent years.happenedfhappeni ng

6.Dr.Smith,together withhis wife,are toarrive on the eveningflight,are fis

7.Would youplease meetmy uncleat theairport becausethis ishis firsttime visitto the US去掉time

8.I havemany collectionsof stamps,some ofthem aremy favorite,some前力口and或thenif which【要点精析求正解】

一、考场作文常见的3类错误考场写作常见错误主要分为三类词汇类错误、语法类错误和汉语式英语

（一）词汇类错误考试时，学生很简单出现词形改变错误，而词性不清和词汇运用方面的错误主要还是受汉语的影响其应对措施是在备考时多留意简单拼错或简单出现词形改变错误的单词，真正专心去体会英语词汇的词性和运用，对一些固定习语更不要想当然地改动

1.词形改变错误误The carhitted theold manand drivedaway.正The carhit theold manand droveaway.

2.词性不清错误误Doing apart-time jobprobably effectsyour studies.±EDoing apart-time jobprobably affectsyour studies.

3.词汇运用错误误He openedthe light after he entered the room.正He turnedonthelightafterheenteredtheroom.

4.擅自改动习语误We lostthe game,but wedidnt loseour heart.正We lostthe game,but wedidn，t loseheart.-语法类错误一个正确的句子除了用词得当外，语法上也应当精确无误假如语法上不正确，再好的构思也难以正确地加以表达，语法错误的多少会干脆影响作文得分档次英语写作中语法类错误主要表现在如下几个方面L时态错误误In themorning,we hadbicycled tothe suburbs to plant trees.正In themorning,we bicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees.

5.语态错误误Children whoraise in poor families can generally deal with problems moreeffectively in their adult years.正Children whoare raised inpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyin theiradultyears.

6.非谓语动词运用错误误Comparing withother countries,the countrypays littleattention tothepollution.±ECompared withother countries,the countrypays littleattention tothepollution.

7.主谓一样错误误My hobbyis widespread,which includedrawing,collecting stampsand soon.正My hobbyis widespread,which includesdrawing,collecting stampsandsoon.

8.比较级运用错误误With thedevelopment oftransportation,the worldseems tobe gettingmore andmoresmaller.正With thedevelopment oftransportation,the worldseems tobe gettingsmallerand smaller.三汉语式英语一般来说，英汉两种语言既有很多相像之处，又有很多不同之处在写作时假如想当然地去写，会出现很多汉语式英语、其中主要包括如下几个方面L纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序误At this school studying,I really very happy.正Studying atthisschool,I amreallyvery happy.

2.句子成分残缺误There aremany studentsdon，t supportthe project.正There aremany studentswho don，t supportthe project.

3.句子粘连误On theother hand,dogs areour bestfriends,bring us a lot of fun.IEOn theother hand,dogs areour bestfriends,which/and bringusalotoffun.

4.搭配不当误Under thehelp ofthe teacher,I havemade greatprogress inmy English.正With thehelp ofthe teacher,I havemade greatprogress inmy English.

二、防范出现错误的2个措施

（一）确定主语英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语（祈使句省略了主语you）动手写句子之前首先要确定主语，其次要特殊留意汉语与英语在表达方面的区分例如

1.北京八月多雨误Beijing rainsmuch inAugust.正It rainsmuch inBeijing inAugust.

2.写得很匆忙，我们发觉书中满是错误误Written ina hurry,we foundthe bookfull ofmistakes.正Written ina hurry,the bookwas foundfull ofmistakes（by us）.

（二）确定谓语动词英文中没有动词就构不成句子，但英语动词千变万化，稍不留意就会写错句子在写句子时应特殊留意以下几个方面

1.留意及物与不及物动词的正确运用误The livingstandard ofthe peoplehas raisedinthe past twenty years.正The livingstandard ofthe peoplehas risen/has beenraisedinthepasttwentyyears.

2.留意持续性与非持续性动词的正确运用误He hasleft hishometown fortwenty years.正He hasbeen awayfrom hishometown fortwentyyears.

3.留意一些不行用于被动语态的动词误Many starsare appearedinthe sky at night.正Many starsappear intheskyatnight.【语篇演练提考能】下面的学生作文中有8处错误，请改正Dear Arthur,It isthree weekssince yougone tohospital.How areyou feelingnow Hopeyou willrecoversoon becauseall ofour classmatesvery miss you.As you may knowit,we havejust finishedour mid-term exam.I amveryhappyto saythatI madea greatprogress this time.I reallythank yourencouragement.Besides,our schooTs sportsmeeting willbe holdednext Friday and Saturday.Our classdidWe arelooking forwardto yourcome back.really goodlast yearand Ibelieve wewould getmore prizesthis yearif youwereto join us.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Arthur,goneIt isthree weekssince you\伯.i tohospital.How areyou feelingnow Hopeyou.very missyouwill recoversoon becauseall ofour classmates--------------------------------missyouvery muchAsyoumayknow,we havejust finishedour mid-term exam.I amvery happyXthankgreat progressthistime.I really-----------------------------------------------------------:----your“appreciate「.…holded「.encouragement.Besides,our schools sportsmeeting willbe~n nextFridayandheldgoodSaturday.Our classdid really.last yearand Ibelieve wewould getmore prizes•»D1A-Xthis yearif youwere tojoinus.comeWe arelooking forwardto your-------:—back,comingYours,Li Hua。