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第讲合理恰当的细微环节添加1【小试身手寻盲点】依据括号内的提示完成句子
1.However,it seemsthat peopleare notaware of the negativeeffects ofmobile phonesoncommunication.Foe example,many peoplebegin topay lessattention toface-to-facecommunication（比如,许多人越来越不重视面对面的沟通）.
2.At thatmoment,I becamethe focusofthewhole classand wasfull ofgreat prideandconfidence（充溢了骄傲和自信）.
3.I suggestthat theteacher shouldchoose moreEnglish films,thus makingEnglishlearning moreinteresting（这样就使得我们的英语学习更加好玩）.
4.If possible（假如可能的话）,V11take partin socialactivities so that Ican knowmoreabout thesociety（以便我能更多地了解这个社会）.
5.I alsohelped childrenin theneighborhood withtheir Englishlessons.To myjoy,they maderapid progressand theirparents thoughthighly ofme（令我兴奋的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高）.
6.Lets developgood habitsof savingenergy inour dailylife andtry tomake morecontributionsto ourenvironment（尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献）.【要点精析求正解】在书面表达的“留意”中有明确规定
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯这里既规定了词数，又指出了充溢文章的方法，即“适当增加细微环节”适当添加细微环节的详细方法如下
1.列举详细的实例进行补充说明
①我要花一些时间和父母在一起r11spend sometime stayingwith myparents.f Illspend sometime stayingwith myparents,chatting withthem anddoing somehousework.
②我看到了一些不良行为I found some bad behaviours.7foundsomebadbehaviours.Some peoplescribbled onthe wall;some playedon thelawnand somethrew rubbisheverywhere.
③我是一个充溢活力的健康男孩，我特别喜爱体育运动I ama healthyboy fullof energyand Ilike sportsvery much.I ama healthyboy fullof energyand Ilike sportsvery much.Whenever Ihave time,r11go hikingor mountainclimbing withmy classmates.
2.增加相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容
①我有时去村西的小河游泳I wentswimming in the riverin thewest ofthe villagenow andthen.fWeather permitting,I wentswimming inthe riverinthewest ofthe villagenow andthen,in whichthe waterwas veryclear.
②旅行了一周后，他回到了家After aweeks trip,he returnedhome.fAfter aweek，s trip,he returnedhome,tired buthappy.
3.增加相关的缘由、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容
①我须要好好休息，我要做些阅读I needa goodrest.I11do somereading.fl needa goodrest becauseI dofeel tiredafter thehard workof allthese years,r11do somereading forfun,as wellas forknowledge.
②慈善募集的钱将送给急需的人The moneyraised forcharity willbe sentto thosein greatneed.fThe moneyraised forcharity willbe sentto thosein greatneed.This willnot onlyhelpthem throughdifficulties,but alsogive themwarmth andhappiness.
③演讲时要面带微笑；要讲慢些，讲清晰You should wear a smile on your face when you speak.Besides,remember tospeak slowlyand clearly.f You shouldwearasmileonyourfacewhenyouspeak,which willmake yourelaxed.Besides,remember tospeak slowlyandclearlysothat you canleave agood impressiononthe audienceand judges.
4.结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等©Although Iwas verytired thissummer holidays,I feltvery happyfor whatI did.（个人感受）尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我做的感到兴奋
②I thinksuch activitiesare necessaryand meaningful.（评价）我认为这样的活动很有必要也很有意义
（3）1sincerely hopemy advicecan behelpful toyou andthatyou can enjoyyour newschoollife.（愿望）我诚心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享受你在新学校的生活
④As astudent,its ourduty toprotect ourschool environmentand makeitclean.（倡议）作为一个学生，爱护我们校内的环境并使之干净是我们的职责【语篇演练提考能】依据提示，给下列短文增加合理恰当的细微环节假设你是李华，你的美国网友Peter准备到中国留学，他写信询问怎样才能受到中国高校的青睐请你依据下列要点给对方写一封回信
1.语言是道硬门槛；
2.适应实力很重要；
3.爱好爱好被看重留意
1.词数100左右；
4.开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数Dear Peter,In yourletter youmentioned howto getthe preferenceof Chineseuniversities.I believetherewould bethree mainaspects tobe considered.Firstly,mastering Chineseis abasic needto livein China.
1.With thisability,youcan communicatewith nativespeakers easilyand haveaccess tomany resources（有了这种实力，你与当地人沟通就会很简单，而且还可以获得许多资源）.Besides,it isimportant toadaptto thenew environmentquickly.
2.The sooneryou canget usedto thenew environment,themore beneficialit willbecome toyou（你熟识新环境越早，好处就越多）.Finally,personalinterests andhobbies arealso highlyvalued.
3.Youshouldchoose amajor thatyou wanttotake up（你应当选择一个想要从事的专业）.With allthe strengthsI mentionedabove,
4.I believeyoucanovercome allthedifficulties andmake greaterprogress inChina（我信任在中国你能够克服全部困难，取得更大的进步）.Best wishesand goodluck!Yours,Li Hua。
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