故事续写凯文与兰迪故事 讲义素材-高考英语复习写作专项

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Years ago,back in the middle2010s,I movedto ahillside houseand drovedown towork everymorningat abouteight o,clock andcame homeat aroundfive thirty.Each timeI droveby,I wouldsee ayoungboy atabout age15and alarge dogwalking alongthe road.When carswould passhim on theother side,he madeeye contactand wavedwith atoothy smile.I sawhim almostevery day,walkingalong the road andwaving atcars.AmazingOn arainy day,I sawhim,along withhis dog,sitting atthe roadside.I stoppedmy carand gotoutto askwhat hadhappened tohim.Nothing.I justwant totake abreak,the boyresponded.I thenasked ifhecould need a ride.The youngboy,Kevin,saidJTm notreally goinganywhere,just walking,thank youanyway,sir.I usedto enjoywalking in the countrysidemyself,so Ithought itwasnt tooodd.In caseofsome emergency,or ifyou everneedaride orhelp JI toldKevin,“flag medown andril dowhateverI can.Kevin thankedme and went onhis way.Over thefollowing days,each timewe met,I wouldstopfor awhile andhave aquick talkwith Kevin,and hissweet dogRandy.One afternoon,I suddenlyfelt avoice insidemy mind:Go backhome now!^^There wasstill onehourfor work.But I asked for an earlyleave and drove backfaster thanusual.Again,I sawKevinwalking alongtheroad.But thistime hedidnt havehis usualsmile andwas pacingrather thanwalking.When hesaw mycar,he violentlyflagged medown.As Igot closer,I couldsee hewas crying.Whatswrong,Kevin”Iasked.注意L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答“We werejust walkingbut Randysomehow dropped,Kevin said in tears.As Idrove to the animalhospital,Kevin satin theback andkept talkingto the dog.凯文与兰迪故事分析与续写素材续写要点第一段要点深入描绘Kevin讲述Randy倒下时的悲痛模样，包括他的语言、表情和动作细节，如声音颤抖、泪流满面、双手颤抖地比划着接着描述“我”看到Randy毫无生气的状态时的震惊与担忧，细致刻画“我”的反应，如迅速蹲下检查、毫不犹豫决定送医等，突出紧张氛围第二段要点着重刻画去医院途中Kevin对Randy的深情呼唤，通过他的话语展现内心的恐惧与不舍，如不断回忆和Randy的过往、祈求它醒来到达医院后，描绘Kevin在等待室的焦急状态，如来回踱步、坐立不安、眼神焦虑最后以医生宣布Randy获救，Kevin转悲为喜的场景结尾，展现情感的巨大转变情感线起初，“我”与Kevin只是在路上偶遇并简单交流，情感较为平淡当Randy突然倒下，Kevin陷入极度的悲痛与无助，“我”也被他的情绪感染，变得担忧和焦急在送医途中，Kevin的恐惧和不舍达到顶点，而“我”则全力安慰他等待救治时，大家都处于紧张的情绪中当得知Randy获救，Kevin和“我”都感到无比欣慰和喜悦，“我”也因帮助他们而收获温暖，Kevin与“我”的关系因这次经历变得更加深厚故事线日常相遇“我”每天开车上下班，经常看到Kevin和他的狗Randy在路上散步，Kevin会热情地向过往车辆挥手雨天交谈一个雨天，“我”停车询问路边休息的Kevin,还表示若有需要可为他提供帮助，之后每次相遇都会简单交流紧急求助:一天下午「我”提前下班回家，看到Kevin神情异常,他焦急地拦下“我告知Randy突然倒下送医途中“我”和Kevin迅速将Randy抬上车送往医院，途中Kevin不断呼唤Randy,充满担忧医院等待到达医院后，Kevin在等待室焦急踱步，等待Randy的救治结果最终获救医生成功救治Randy,Kevin和“我”都松了一口气，彼此的关系更加紧密主旨升华句This experiencetaught usthat thebond betweenhumans andanimals is a preciousgift,filled withlove,loyalty,and unwaveringcompanionship.（这次经历让我们明白，人与动物之间的纽带是一份珍贵的礼物，充满了爱、忠诚和坚定不移的陪伴）In theface ofRandys crisis,the unityand kindnessbetween Kevin and medemonstrated thepowerof humanity,showing thatwe arealways readyto lenda hand in timesof need.（在Randy的危机面前，Kevin和我之间的团结与善良展现了人性的力量，表明我们在需要时总是乐于伸出援手）The storyof Kevinand Randyreminds usthat everylife isprecious,whether it*sahuman orananimal,andweshould cherishand protectthem withall ourhearts.（Kevin和Randy的故事提醒我们，每一个生命都是宝贵的，无论是人类还是动物，我们都应该全心全意地珍惜和保护它们）Through thisevent,we realizedthat eventhe mostunexpected connectionscan bringwarmth andmeaningto ourlives,and thathelping othersis asource oftrue happiness.（通过这次事件，我们意识到，即使是最意想不到的联系也能为我们的生活带来温暖和意义，帮助他人是真正幸福的源泉）The loveKevin hadfor Randyand thesupport Ioffered notonly saveda lifebut alsodeepened our（understanding ofcompassion andthe beautyof therelationships weform withthose aroundus.Kevin对Randy的爱以及我提供的支持，不仅拯救了一条生命，还加深了我们对同情心的理解，以及我们与周围人建立的关系的美好）写作示范一“We werejust walkingbut Randysomehow dropped,n Kevin saidin tears.His voicewas chokedwithgrief,and his hands trembleduncontrollably ashe gesturedtowards themotionless dog.“I triedeverything,calling hisname,shaking himgently,but hejust wouldntwake up.I croucheddownbeside Randy,my heartsinking atthe sightof hisstill body.His breathingwas shallow,and hiseyeswere glazedover.Without asecond thought,I said,“Kevin,we haveto get him to the vetright now.Theres stillhope.With greatcare,we liftedRandy into the car,his limpbody aheavy weightin ourarms.As Idrove tothe animalhospital,Kevin satin theback,his facepale withworry.He keptmurmuringto Randy,“Come on,boy.Youve gotto beokay.Weve beenthrough somuch together.Icant loseyou.His wordswere adesperate plea,filled withthe depthof hislove forthedog.When wearrived,the vetsrushed Randy intotheexamination room.Kevin pacedthe waitingarea,his eyesneverleaving thedoor.Every passingminute seemedlike aneternity.Finally,the vetemerged witha smile.Hes stablenow.We managedto revivehim.”Kevin rushedforward,his eyesbrimming withtears ofjoy.He huggedRandy tightly,andinthat moment,I knew that thebond betweenthem wasunbreakable.写作示范二“We werejust walkingbut Randysomehow dropped,Kevin saidin tears.His shouldersslumped,and helooked completelylost.I dontknow whatId dowithout him.He*s mybest friend.I couldfeelthe painin hisvoice,and ittugged atmy heartstrings.I quicklyexamined Randy,but hewasunresponsive.u Wecant wasteany time,v Isaid.u Letsgethimtothehospital.v Wecarefully placedRandyinthebackseat,and Isped offtowards thenearest animalhospital.As Idrove tothe animalhospital,Kevin satbeside Randy,his handsgently strokingthe dogsfur.Youre goingto beokay,Randy.I promise.Just holdon alittle longer.”His voicewas softbut filledwithdetermination.When wereached thehospital,the vetstook Randyin immediately.Kevin satin thewaitingroom,hishandsclasped tightlytogether,praying silently.After whatfelt likean endlesswait,the vetcame out.Hes goingto befine.He hada closecall,but hesa strongdog.”Kevin*s facelit upwithrelief,and helet outa long-awaited sigh.He thankedme profusely,and Iknewthatthis experiencehadbrought uscloser together,bound bythe loveforafurry friend.【参考答案】“We werejust walkingbut Randysomehow dropped/9Kevin saidintears.Where isit now”Iasked.Just atmy house,“he answered.We quicklygot intothe caranddrove to hishouse.It wasasmall oldfarmhouse.As weapproached,I sawRandy justlying outsidethe doorway.We hurriedto haveaclose lookat it.Hes stillalive!”Kevin cried,“We needa vet!”We twoquickly carriedRandyintothecar.As Idrovetothe animalhospital,Kevin satintheback andkept talkingtothedog.Luckily,Randywas savedin time.Randy!Youve comeback tome!”Kevinsaidinachoked voice.Then heturned tomeand saidgratefully“If youhadnt comeearlier,Randy wouldhave gone!Thank youvery much...”Tears welledup inhis eyes.Its nothing,Kevin.1patted himontheshoulder.Just atthat moment,Irealized:There isalways awhispered urgingin ourheart andmind todo somethinggood.。