读后续写：内向的女孩从阴影到自信 讲义--高考英语复习写作专项

读后续写内向的女孩从阴影到自信讲义读后续写题目第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Lena hadalways b^en aquiet girlwho struggledlo innkefriends.Al school,whenever someonetried totalk toher,her mindwouldrace withworries:What ifI Mysomething wrongWhal ifthey thinkIm strangeThese thoughtsalways made her stumbleover herwordsor giveawkward replies.Once,after sheaccidentally gavea wronganswer inclass,she heardsome classmatesgiggling（略咯地笑）.Since then,she hadbecome evenmore afraidto speakup.Onerainyafternoon»whilewalkinghomefromschool,shenoticedasmalldoghuddled（蛇缩）underabush.Thedoglookedlostand scared,just likehow shefell whenevershe triedlo joina conversation.It wasshivering,wet,and alone.Ima croucheddown andgentlyapproached it.The dogwagged（摇摆）its tailslightly andcame closer.Lena noticeda blue collar hiddenunder itswet fiir.Something aboutitstrusting eyesmadeherheart ache.She decidedto takeit home.Her parentsagreed tokeep ittemporarily whilesearching forits owner.Lena namedthe dog“Shadow becauseit followedher everywhere,just likeher ownshadows of self-doubt.Asdays passed,Lenanoticed hownaturallyShadowinteractedwitheveryone.Atthepark,hewould approachotherswithcompleteconfidence andmake friendseffortlessly.Even whenhe mademistakes,like accidentallyknocking oversomeone swater bottle,hisfriendly tailwag wouldmake everyonelaugh withhim,not athim.Taking Shadowfor walksgave Lenaunexpected friendships.Emily,a girlfrom herclass,often cameto the park withher owndog.They startedtalking abouttheir pets,and soonEmily becameLenas firstreal friend.Through Emily,Lena metother kidsand graduallyfound herself partof agroup thatwould meetat thepark toplay withtheir dogs.For thefirst time,she feltlike shebelonged.注意

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好.Para1:Out day,a womancarrying aLost Dog:Lucky posterwalked into thepark.Para2:Lena andEmily beganvisiting Luckyevery nowand then.故事梗概是一个内向的女孩，因害怕被别人误解而不敢与他人交流在一次放学的路_t,发现了一只小狗它与她一样害怕和孤独带着回家，渐渐与这只狗Lena Lena建立了感情通过与的互动，开始变得更自信后来，认识了Shadow,Lena Shadow帮助通过狗狗与更多的孩子交朋友，终于感受到了归属感Shadow Lena Lena Emily,Emily人物分析LenaLena•Lena故事的主人公，一个内向的女孩，在学校里很难与人交朋友她总是担心自己的言语和行为会被别人误解她内心充满自我怀疑，害怕与人交往通过与狗狗的互动以及与的友谊，逐渐找到了自信Shadow•ShadoE wmily收养L的e小na狗，最初是一个孤单、害怕的动物象征着的内心世界，但是它L同en时a散发着勇气，自信和友善，帮助克服了S自ha我d怀ow疑LenaLena•Emily在公园遛狗认识的新朋友作为共同的话题，拉近了她们的关系，帮助Le克na服了孤独，找到了自己的一群S朋h友adowLena主题分析.成长与自信通过照顾和归还逐渐克服了自我怀疑，变得更加自信从走出来，拥抱更加自信的敢于的自己，何尝不是一种幸Shadow,Lena运the shadow ofself-doubt speakuplucky续写方向以及难点衔接过渡升华，衔接和升华就是每段的段首和段尾句，这四句话要符合逻辑，符3合主题2，句式1表达有亮3点更佳1para1衔接1观察到上的内容，心里挑了一怕，因为通过海报上的信息发现其实是poster Shadowo过渡Lu1cky心里挣扎，不舍，发现不对，并询问，告知，并决定归还给主人Emily LenaShadow衔接激动跑向主人，觉得自己做了正确的事情出乎意料，女主人邀请和可经常去探望2Shadow LenaLena Emily Luckypara2衔接和去看望时的温馨画面，内心充满了喜悦，同时被洋溢的自信和勇敢鼓舞3LenaEmilyLukcy Lena过渡有了变化，不再是被困在以及Lucky而是自信地参与交流，交朋友2Lena theshadowofself-doubt,shy awayfromspea升kin华g1u p,回顾这段经历，感叹自己的成长，以及感到非常幸运Lena伏笔foreshadowing为了让续写的内容逻辑衔接合理，在情节和结构上与原文匹配、构建完整，考生要善于抓住文本伏笔，在续写中呼应伏笔内容高效化解文本中冲突，实现高质量续写，尤其通过伏笔的内容在续写段落点明主题或结尾，往往会起到画龙点睛的作用，也容易令读者感到耳目一新那么我们该如何发现伏笔呢？

1.关注文本中富含哲理或表达主题的语句当文本出现表达哲理或主题的语句出现时，我们可以做好记录，然后在续写中的内容中，呼应该哲理或主题语句比如读后续写|人与社会中，文章首，句那么等候文出现silver lining+be positive/look onthe brightside或者的时候，应该回应这句话，When thingswent wrong,Fein alwayshad somethingnice tosay.oconfl2ict.关注文p本ro中b的lem物件或环境物件往往有一定的Fe象in征ha意d义ni，ce而th环in境g也st常os用ay来烘托情绪和氛围因此，在对文本理解分析时，我们要注意关注这些物件或环境的表达在续写段落中，将这些物件或环境呈现出来，往往能够成为点睛之笔本文的blue collar就是一个不错的物件伏笔比如读后续写|人与社会---------------------------------------------凶悍外表机车党的铁汉柔情八省联考中，前文出现了（徽章）这一物件，Tough looks,Tender后文可以就利用物件，了解到这是一个动物保护组织hearts insignia

3.关注文本中的人物行为和言语表达观察人物的行为和言语，主要是辅助我们判断人物的性格，从而帮助我们发现潜在的伏笔，为后文续写人物发出的动作，做出的回应更佳有协同性，不造成前后割裂比如这里很害羞胆怯，不敢那么后文她与人交流的变化就是一个很好的伏笔Lena speakup,范文Possible VersionParagraph1:One day,a womancarrying a“Lost Dog:Lucky posterwalked intothepark.Lena*s heartskipped abeat lockedonto theposter.bore strikingraessehmerbleaynecse toOn itwas apictureof adog thlaatideyes ona coldSwhaavdeoowf-ritesafluizra,tpioonsture andeyes.The momentLena thebluecollar,washed overher:unmistakablyswallowed hardherShadow wasLucky.Emily noticedLenas pauseandvoice barelyabove awhisper.gently inquired,Whats wrong”Lena JIthink Shadowis Lucky/bounced towardsReluctantthough shewas topart withShadow,Lenaher withexcited barks.Exceedingly toLenas surprise,walked uptothewoman andreturned Shadow,who immediatelythewoman invitedthem toParagraph2:Lena andEmily beganvisiting Luckyevery nowand then.play withLucky wheneverpossible.[113words]sprinted towardshis tailwagginHgafurdrilyouhsaldy,tehaegyerrefaocrhaedwtahlke.porch whenLucky them,At thehesight ofEach visitbrought Lenaa senseof peaceand enrcaoduiraatgienmgecnot.mpleteconfidence,Luckfeylt mnoaklionnggefrribenudrdsenefefdorbtlyestshleysahnaddowalwoafysself-doubt,nor didsheshied awayfLroenmaspeakingup.Instead,foundherselfengaging inconversations withease,she oncetimid,now rangclear andsure.laughing,andmmaakrvineglendeawt friends.Her voice,LLuocokkyin,g back,shelucky tohohwavfearfosuhnedhadcome andcouldnt helpbut think,I amtoo—my voiceand myconfidence.113words]。