高考英语复习写作专项之故事续写爱德华新年故事 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文One pleasantNew-year morning,Edward rose,and washedand dressedhimself ina hurry.Hewanted to be thefirst towish ahappy New Year to his family.He turnedup atevery doorof thehouse,and shoutedthe wordsof“Happy New Year“in anexcited voice.After aquick breakfast,he hoppedalongthe streetlike ahappy bird,greeted andrepeated thewords to those hemet.When hecame back,his fathergave him50dollars,saying hecould buywhatever he had beenwishingfor.His facelighted upas hetook them.He hadwished fora long time tobuy someinterestingbooks thathe hadseen atthe bookstorelocated nearthe riverthrough thecity.He thankedhis fatheranddanced outof thehouse againwith alight heart,intending tobuy thosebooks.As heran downthe street,he noticeda poor family,the father,the mother,and threechildrenshivering withcold in the winterwind.I wishyou ahappy NewYear,“cried Edward,as hewas happilypassingon.The mantook alook atthe happyboy andshook his head sadly.Edward stoppedand said,“It seemsthat youdo notbelong tothis country.^^The managain shookhishead,a confusedexpression flashedover his face,for hecould notunderstand orspeak English.But thepoor manpointed tohis drymouth,and to the childrenwith hungrylooks,as ifto say,“These littleones havehad nothingto eatfbr alongtime.”（贫困）.注意.续写词数Edward quicklyrealized that these poorpeople werein distress1应为左右；150请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

2.He tookout hisdollars,and gavethem allto theman.My dearboy,said his father,“Here area dozenof booksfor you.爱德华新年故事续写续写要点第一段要点着重描写把钱给穷人时的动作细节，如毫不犹豫地掏出钱，双手递Edward上细致刻画穷人收到钱时的表情和反应，从最初的不敢相信到满心感激，可能会有颤抖的双手、湿润的眼眶等表现还要描述看到穷人去买面包和衣服时的心理活动，以及周围Edward环境的变化，如冬日的阳光似乎变得更温暖，周围的人投来赞许的目光等，突出他内心的满足第二段要点深入描绘父亲送书时的场景，包括父亲的神态、语气，是满脸笑容、语重心长地表达对的骄傲详细描写的反应，从惊讶到喜悦再到感动，可能会有激动Edward Edward得说不出话、眼眶泛红等细节最后阐述对幸福含义的深刻思考，可回忆之前渴望买Edward书的心情，对比现在的感受，突出他思想的转变情感线起初，满心欢喜地准备用父亲给的钱去买向往已久的书，心情充满期待与兴奋当Edward看到贫困家庭时，他心生怜悯，毫不犹豫地把钱给了他们，此时内心是纯粹的善良与同情之后，他因帮助他人而感到温暖和幸福，尽管没买到书，却收获了满足感最后，父亲送书并表达对他的认可，他的喜悦达到高潮，还深刻领悟到幸福的真谛，情感得到升华故事线新年愿望新年早上，收到父亲给的美元，打算去买一直想看的书Edward50偶遇穷人:他在街上看到一个贫困家庭，父母和三个孩子在寒风中瑟瑟发抖,饥寒交迫慷慨相助意识到他们的困境，把所有钱都给了这个家庭，帮助他们购买食物和衣Edward物父亲嘉奖父亲看到了的善举，为他感到骄傲，送给他一打书作为奖励Edward感悟幸福抱着书，深刻理解到幸福不只是得到自己想要的，更是给他人带来快乐Edward传递温暖他迫不及待地想和家人朋友分享书中故事，传递善良的温暖主旨升华句Edwards experienceon thatNew-Year daytaught usthat truehappiness liesnot in the pursuitof（爱德华在新年personal desires,but inthe selflessact ofbringing hopeand warmthtothosein need.那天的经历告诉我们，真正的幸福不在于追求个人欲望，而在于无私地为那些有需要的人带来希望和温暖）This storyreminds usthat asimple actof kindness,like Edwardsdonation,can havea profound（这个故事提醒我们，像爱德华的impact onothers livesand bringimmeasurable joyto ourselves.捐赠这样一个简单的善举，就能对他人的生活产生深远影响，并给我们自己带来无尽的快乐）Through Edwardschoice,we cometo understand that thevalue ofmoney isnot inwhat itcan buy（通过爱德华的选择，for ourselves,but inhow itcan beused tomake adifference inthe livesof others.我们明白金钱的价值不在于它能为我们自己买到什么，而在于它如何能改变他人的生活）Edwards encounterwith thepoorfamilyand hissubsequent actof givingillustrate that the greatest.（爱德treasures inlife arenot materialpossessions,but thelove andcompassion weshare withothers华与贫困家庭的相遇以及他随后的善举表明，生活中最宝贵的财富不是物质财富，而是我们与他人分享的爱和同情）In theend,Edward learnedthatthetrue essenceof happinessis foundinthemoments whenwe putothers1needs beforeour own,andthatis alesson wecan allcarry withus.（最后,爱德华明白了幸福的真正本质在于我们把他人的需求置于自己之上的时•刻，这是我们都能铭记的一课）写作示范一第一段续写He tookout hisdollars,and gavethem allto theman.His handstrembled slightlyas heplaced themoneyfirmly into the mansrough palm.The manseyes widenedin shock,his mouthagape.A tearrolleddown hischeek ashe staredat Edward,his lipsquivering withemotion.Edward,with agentlesmile,patted theman onthe shoulderand said,nHappy NewYear!May thisbring yousome comfort.nDespite thecold wind,Edward felta warmglow spreadingin hischest.He watchedas theman quicklyherdedhis familytowards asmall grocerystore.The children,who hadbeen sobbingsoftly,now lookedatEdward witheyes fullof hope.As the family disappearedinto thestore,Edward knewthat thisNewYear wouldbe unforgettablefor them.第二段续写My dearboy,n said his father,nHere area dozenof booksfor you.1Edward frozein histracks,hiseyes widewith astonishment.His fatherwalked towardshim,a proudsmile onhis face.nI saweverythingyou did.Youve shownmore kindnessthan Icould haveever expected.These books are atokenof mypride inyou.”Edwards eyeswelled upwith tearsof joy.He threwhis armsaround his father,hugging himtightly.nThank you,Dad.n Holding the books,he felta newsense ofpurpose.He realizedthatthe storieswithin thesebooks wouldnow beeven moremeaningful,as they were asymbol of hisnew-found understandingof happiness.写作示范二第一段续写He tookout hisdollars,and gavethem alltotheman.Without a moments hesitation,he thrustthemoney intothe manshands.The manwas completelytaken aback,his eyesdarting betweenthe moneyandEdward*sface.A floodof emotionswashed overhim-shock,gratitude,and relief.Edward grinnedathim andsaid cheerfully,nHappy NewYear!Use thisto takecare ofyour family.1Although thethoughtof notgetting thebooks hedbeen dreamingof flashedthrough hismind,it wasquickly replacedbya senseof contentment.He watchedas theman rushedinto aclothing store,emerging shortlywithwarm coatsfor hischildren.The kidsput onthe coats,their facesbeaming withhappiness.Edward feltadeep senseof satisfaction,knowing thathehadmade thisNewYeara littlebrighter forthem.第二段续写My dearboy,said hisfather,HHere area dozenof booksfor you.Edwards jawdropped insurprise.His fatherstepped forward,his eyestwinkling withpride.nI witnessedyour kindact.Youvemade theright choice,and thesebooksarea rewardfor yourgoodness.H Edwardwas overjoyed.Hehugged thebooks closetohischest,as ifthey werethe mostprecious treasuresintheworld.At thatmoment,he understoodthatthehappiness hefelt nowwas fargreater thanthe simplejoy ofbuying thebooks.These bookswere notjusta purchase;they werea recognitionofhisgrowth andthe beginningofa newchapter inhis life,filled withthe spiritof giving.【答案】He tookout hisdollars,and gavethem alltotheman.The manwas somoved thathe stoodthere,failing tosay anywords.A brightsmile spreadacross themans face.He smiledback atthe father,wavedgoodbye tothefamilyand wenthome delightedly.When Edwardcame home,hisfatherasked whatbookhe hadbought.He hunghisheadamoment,but quicklylooked up.I havebought nobooks,“he said.Igave mymoney toa poorfamily,who seemedtobebadly inneed ofhelp.T thinkT canwait formybooks untilnext NewYear.”“My dearboy“saidhisfather,“Here area dozenof booksfor you.Edward cantbelieve it!“I givefthemto you,more as a rewardfor yourgoodness ofheart thanasaNewYeargift.Always beready tohelppeople aroundyou!”hisfatheradded.Holdingthebooks,Edward felttheywerethe bestgift intheworld.。