2025版高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练二十三短文改错

专项技能保分练

（二十三）短文改错Test1[2024•成都其次次诊断]Last year,my friendand Iwent tovisit theYellow Mountain.We carriedtwo backpacks,that turnedout tobe prettyheavier forthe hike.I amnot anexperiencinghiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the safe andcomfortableground.But my friend encouragedme great.Look,the topis comingcloser and closer.We arealmost there.”I pulledme togetherand keptgoing.After three-hour exhaustinghike to thetop,but withwonderful scenerieson theway,we gotto the top finally.For ourpleasure,we alsofound ahotel thatlooked very much inviting.答案与解析Last year,myfriendand Iwent tovisit theYellow Mountain.We carriedtwobackpacks,that turnedout tobe prettygcviec forthe hike.I amnot an©which

②heavyexperiencing hikerandthoseendlessstepsmakemewanttoreturnto thesafe©experienced

④madeand comfortableground.But myfriend encouragedme great.Look,the topis©greatlycoming closerandcloser.We arealmostthere.I pulledme togetherand kept

⑥myselfgoing.After Athree-hour exhaustinghike to thetop,but withwonderful yqeneries

⑦a

⑧sceneryon theway,we gottothetop finally.For ourpleasure,we alsofound ahotel thatWblooked veryinviting.

①that改为which考查定语从句分析句子结构可知，此处是一个定语从句，先行词是backpacks,应用which引导该非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语

②heavier改为heavy考查形容词分析句子结构可知，此处pretty是副词，相当于very,并没有比较的含义，故用形容词原级即可故将heavier改为heavy

③experiencing改为experienced考查形容词依据句意可知，此处表示“我不是一个阅历丰富的远足者”，应用experienced“阅历丰富的，有阅历的，experiencing没有这个意思

④make改为made考查动词的时态与上文中的“Last year”呼应可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时

⑤great改为greatly考查副词一般用副词修饰动词，在句子中作状语，故用greatly修饰动词encouraged”

⑥me改为myself考查反身代词与句子的主语I呼应可知，此处应用I的反身代词myself作动词pull的宾语，表示“使自己振作起来”

⑦After后加a考查冠词hike是可数名词,被“three-hour exhausting”修饰,表示“一次三个小时的令人力倦神疲的远足”，且three-hour的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a修饰

⑧sceneries改为scenery考查名词scenery是不行数名词，没有复数形式

⑨For改为To考查固定搭配表示“令某人欢乐的是应用to onespleasure,介词to在此表示“某事发生时某人的反应”⑩删除much考查副词veiy是副词，可修饰形容词，在句子中作状语，而much是副词，一般修饰形容词的比较级，此处修饰形容词inviting应用副词very,故删除muchTest2[2024•河南五校联考]Dear Daniel,r mreally delightedto learnthat youhave won first prize in your schooT sChineseTraditional Culture Quiz last week.Im writingto offeryour congratulationsto you from thebottomsof myheart.I knowthat youhave alwaysbeing interestedin Chinesetraditional culturesince youcamefrom China.Learning Chineseis noteasy foryou,and youkeep onstudying it hard.Nowyour efforts have paid off.There isyour hardwork thatleads youto soa great success.Imsure you will achieve an even greatsuccessin your future studies.Wish youhappy stay in China!Yours,Li Hua答案与解析Dear Daniel,r mreally delightedto learnthat youwonfirstprizeinyourschooTsChinese TraditionalCultureQuizlast week.Im writingto offeryour

②my congratulationstoyoufrom the bottomsof myheart.

③bottomI knowthat youhave alwaysbping interestedin Chinesetraditional culture

④beensince youcame在oc China.Learning Chineseis noteasy foryou,arq youkeep§to@but/yeton studyingithard.Now youreffortshavepaidoff.There isyour hardwork thatWFleads youto soa greatsuccess.Im sureyouwillachieveanevengreat

⑧such©greatersuccess inyourfuturestudies.Wish youA happystayinChina!⑩aYours,Li Hua

①删除won前的have考查时态句中有明确地表示过去时间的状语lastweek,因此不能与现在完成时连用，只能用一般过去时

②your改为my考查代词依据语境可知，此处表示“我写信向你表示我真心的庆贺”，故congratulations前的物主代词应用my

③bottoms改为bottom考查名词的单复数fromthebottom ofones heart“从内心，真心地”，是固定搭配，bottom用单数形式

④being改为been考查时态依据时间状语从句since you...China可知，此处应用现在完成时，故将being改为been

⑤from改为to考查介词依据语境可知，Daniel从国外来到中国，故用to

⑥and改为but/yet考查并列连词句意学中文对你来说并非易事，但是你坚持努力学习前后分句之间存在语意上的转折关系，故用but/yet

⑦There改为It考查强调句依据后面的that和语境“正是你的努力带领你取得如此大的胜利”可知，本句是强调主语部分的强调句结构，故只能用II

⑧so改为such考查限定词so-\~adj.+8/@0+单数可数名词=511±+8/211+己/+单数可数名词，表示“如此……的……”，故此处要用such

⑨great改为greater考查形容词的比较级上文提到Daniel取得了很大的胜利，此处表示“我确信你会在将来的学业上取得更大的胜利”，语意上有递进关系，故用形容词的比较级⑩happy前加a考查冠词stay作“停留，逗留，暂住”讲时，为可数名词Test3[2024•石家庄一模]The otherday,we movedtothe new school yard,where liesin thefar north ofthe city.We wereall onhigh spirits.It ismuch bigthan theold one.The classroomsare bright and clean.We havea lotof modernequipment,making convenientfor students tolearn everysubject.Now wecan havea lotof after-school activityon the new playground.Our teachersoften playthe basketballand soccer together with us.As springapproached,theflowers newly planting in the yardhave justcome out.With such many green trees and fragrantflowers around,we feelit lesshardly tostudy andour schoollife moreenjoyable.答案与解析The otherday,we movedtothenew schoolyard,where liesinthefarnorthDwhichof thecity.We wereall onhigh spirits.It ismuch bigthan theold one.

②Tn

③biggerThe classroomsarebrightandclean.We havea lotof modernequipment,making A@itconvenient forstudentstolearn everysubject.Now wecan havea lotof after-school activityonthenewplayground.Our teachersoften playthe basketballand©activities

⑥soccertogetherwithus.As springqpproached,the flowersnewlyplantingin©approaches©plantedthe yardhave justcome out.With911chmanygreentreesandfragrantflowers around,

⑨sowe feelit less忸rdly tostudy andour schoollife moreenjoyable.Whard

①where改为which考查定语从句分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句,先行词为thenewschoolyard,在从句中作主语，故应用which引导该定语从句

②n改为in考查介词句意我们都兴致勃勃in highspirits为固定搭配，意为“心情高”

③big改为bigger考查形容词的比较级依据该句中的“much”“than”可知，此处应用形容词的比较级

④making后加it考查代词分析该句结构可知，making后缺形式宾语来指代动词不定式tolearn everysubjecto

⑤activity改为activities考查名词的单复数此处activity“活动”为可数名词,依据该句中的“a lotof”可知，该处应用复数形式

⑥删除the考查冠词表示球类、牌、棋等嬉戏名称的名词前用零冠词

⑦approached改为approaches考查动词的时态和主谓一样依据语境可知，该处描述的是当前的状况，故用一般现在时；主语spring为第三人称单数，故用approaches

⑧planting改为planted考查非谓语动词动词plant和其逻辑主语the flowers之间为动宾关系，故用过去分词形式作后置定语

⑨such改为so考查副词依据many可知，该处应用副词so⑩hardly改为hard考查形容词句意有这么多绿色的树和芳香的花在四周，我们觉得学习不那么困难了，我们的学校生活更开心了依据句意和前面的副词less可知，该处表示“不那么困难”，应用形容词hardhardly为副词，表示“几乎不”，不符合语境Test4[2024•太原一模]My seniorhigh schoollife isalmost over.Although lookedforward toenteringcollege,I cant help missing those good old daysverymuch that Ifeel sad.Im unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar.However,I cometo realize nature never stood still.Different seasonscome andgo.Plants andanimalsdie and new one come to life.We,like everythingin nature,has toadapt tothe changes.Before knowingit,I ama kind of calm.Now Idlike torecall the most wonderful thingswhat have happened,and accepthappy whateveris to happen.答案与解析•My seniorhigh schoollife isalmost over.Although lookedforward to©lookingentering college,I can，thelpmissingthosegoodolddays yqrymuchthatI feelsad.r munwillingtosaygoodbyetoeveryoneandeverythingI amfamiliar A.

③withHowever,I cometorealizenatureneverstoodstill.Different seasonscome and

④standsgo.Plants andanimals dieandnewonecometolife.We,like everythingin nature,

⑤ones[as toadapt tothe changes.Before knowingit,IamX kindof calm.Now Id

⑥have

⑦After

⑧like torecall themost wonderfulthings whathavehappened,and accepthappy

⑨that⑩happilywhatever istohappen.

①looked改为looking考查现在分词分析句子结构可知，look和其逻辑主语I是主谓关系，所以把looked改为lookingo

②very改为so考查固定用法依据句意可知，此处是so...that...结构，意为“如此……以至于……”，所以把very改为so

③familiar后加with考查介词依据句意可知，此处应为be familiarwith sth.“熟识某事物”所以在familiar后加with

④stood改为stands考查时态依据语境可知，此处为客观描述，应用一般现在时，所以把stood改为standso

⑤one改为ones考查代词分析句子结构并结合语境可知，此处指代“Plants andanimals”,所以用ones

⑥has改为have考查时态和主谓一样句意像自然界中的一切，我们不得不适应改变此处为一般性描述，应用一般现在时，且主语是We,谓语动词应用复数，所以把has改为have

⑦Before改为After考查介词句意知道了这一点之后，我有点儿冷静了依据句意可知此处应用Aftero

⑧删除kind前的a考查冠词句意参见上题解析kindof表示“有点儿”，为固定用法，故a多余

⑨what改为that考查定语从句分析句子结构可知，此处引导定语从句，指代前面的最高级形式themostwonderfulthings，所以把what改为that⑩happy改为happily考查副词修饰动词一般用副词，故用副词happily修饰动词accepto。