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【题目要求】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David准备组织一个“走进中国Approach to China”的活动，他写信请你帮忙策划一下活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素，以便让他的同学更好地了解中国请你用英文写一封回信要求
1.100字左右；
2.需包括至少两个中国元素，可适当增减细节参考词汇一带一路倡议One Belt and One Road Initiative；吉祥物mascot【优秀满分范文】Dear David,Im gladto knowthat you are launchinga campaignApproach to China“aiming to introduce yourpeers toathriving China and beof somehelp.From myperspective,the activitiesmay range from Chinese calligraphy competition to paper cutting,martial arts,appreciation ofBeijing Operaand soon.As forChinese elements,the GreatWall with a long history symbolizesthenational fightingspirits whilehigh-speed railwayrepresenting thecutting-edge technologytakes thelead in the world.Chinas boomingeconomy ismarked withmobile paymentand OneBeltandOneRoadInitiative.By theway,mascots likepandas andMonkey Kingwill enjoygreat popularityamong participants.Wish yourcampaign asuccess.Yours sincerely,Li Hua本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Linda回邮件，介绍中国的端午节，内容包括
1.端午节的习俗；2,端午节的意义；
3.邀请她前来体验【详解】
1.词汇积累高兴的glad玲delighted举办hold玲host机会chance玲opportunity各种各样的a variety of玲all kindsof
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句People celebrateit inmemory of Qu Yuan,a Chinesepoet.拓展句People celebrateit inmemory ofQu Yuan,who is a Chinesepoet.【点睛】[高分句型l]lzm gladto receiveyour E-mail inwhich youasked meabout the Dragon Boat Festival」运用了“介词+which〃引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]ld like to invite you towatch thedragon boatracing,which takesplace annually.（运用了which弓|导的非限制性定语从句）假设你是李华你的外国笔友Jane打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国人的社交习俗请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍L见面时的问候方式；
2.对赞美的回答方式；
3.接收礼物时的回应方式；
4.餐宴礼节【答案】One possibleversion:Dear Jane,Glad to hear fromyou andyoure welcome toChinain July.The followingare someChinese customs.Firstly,we greeteach otherby sayingHello orasking suchquestions asWhere areyou goingor Areyoubusy toexpress ourcare.Secondly,when praised,we replywith Z/Oh,no!〃or〃lm over-praised toshow good〃manners.Next,when receivinga gift,we usuallysay ltsunnecessary“besides“Thanks toshow politenessand thenputit away.Finally,at dinnerparties,we talkloudly andtouch glasseswhen drinkingto someone/s healthor successtoshow thatwere warm.〃Anyhow,different cultures,different customs.If youDo as the Romansdo whenin Rome,youll enjoymore ofyour stay here.I hopewhats mentioned above might be helpful and wish youa good journey.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国笔友Jane写封信，介绍中国人的社交习俗【详解】L词汇积累高兴的glad-happy首先Firstly-To beginwith收至Ureceive fobtain有用的helpful-useful
2.句式拓展句式转化原句Next,when receivinga gift,we usuallysay Itsunnecessary besides“Thanks toshowpoliteness andthen putit away.拓展句Next,when wereceive agift,we usuallysay Itsunnecessary besidesThanks toshow politenessand thenputit away.【点睛】[高分句型1]If you/zDo asthe Romansdo whenin Rome,youll enjoymore ofyourstayhere.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句[高分句型2]I hopewhat smentionedabovemightbehelpfulandwishyoua goodjourney.假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Daniel准备在他们学校组织一个主题为〃走进中国Come ClosetoChina〃的中国文化节，他写信请你帮忙策划一下活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素，以便让他的同学更好地了解中国请你用英文写封回信要求
1.120字左右；2,需包括至少两个中国元素，可适当增减细节【答案】Dear Daniel,Im more than delighted to knowthat you are launchinga Chinese culture festival,with the theme of”Come closetoChina”,aiming to introduce yourpeers toa thrivingChina.From myperspective,the activitiesmay rangefrom a Chinese calligraphycompetition toan exhibitionof papercutting,and martialarts.Besides,it wouldbe moredesirable ifstudents therecould begiven achance toappreciate BeijingOpera.With ahistory ofnearly200years,its a form oftraditional Chinesetheatre,which isconsidered asthe quintessence of Chineseculture.Yours,LiHua.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Daniel写一封回信，帮他策划一下中国文化节活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素，以便让他的同学更好地了解中国【详解】第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示，时态应为一般现在时要求120字左右；
2.需包括至少两个中国元素，可适当增减细节第二步列提纲（重点词组）be delighted to;launch a Chinese culture festival;the theme of;aim to;peer;a thrivingChina;perspective;rangefrom;calligraphy;an exhibitionof;papercutting;martial arts;desirable;appreciate;With ahistory of;aform of;beconsidered as;quintessence第三步连词成句
1.Km morethan delightedto knowthat you are launchingaChinese culturefestival,with thethemeofCome closetoChina,aiming tointroduce yourpeers toa thrivingChina.
2.From myperspective,the activitiesmay rangefrom aChinesecalligraphycompetitiontoan exhibitionof papercutting,and martialarts.
3.Besides,it wouldbe moredesirable ifstudents therecould begiven achance toappreciate BeijingOpera.
4.With ahistory ofnearly200years,its aform oftraditional Chinesetheatre,which isconsidered asthe quintessenceof Chinese culture.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序:First ofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second...,And then,Finally,In theend,At last
2.表并歹U补充关系What ismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In additionAs wellas,not only...but（also）,including,
3.表转折对比关系:However,On thecontrary,but,Although+clause（从句），In spiteof+n./doing,On theone hand...,On theother hand...Some...,while others...,as for,so...that...
4.表因果关系Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As aresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰第五步润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如With ahistory ofnearly200years,its aformoftraditional Chinesetheatre,which isconsideredasthequintessenceof Chinese culture.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be delightedto;thethemeof;an exhibitionof等全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩假定你是李华你的一位美国笔友Tom对中国人过春节贴春联的习俗非常感兴趣请你给他写一封信，介绍中国人贴春联spring couplets的习俗内容包括:
1.介绍贴春联的习俗时间、意义等；
2.邀请他来华共度春节注意
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头结尾已给出参考词汇红纸red paper毛笔brush书法calligraphyDear Tom,Yours,Li Hua【答案】One possibleversion:Dear Tom,Im gladtohear that youare greatlyinterested inChinese springcouplets duringthe Spring Festival.Therefore,Km writingto tell you something about springcouplets.As theSpring Festivaldraws near;the Chinesepeople areaccustomed toputting upcouplets onthe gatestowelcome theNew Year.This traditionalcustom came into existence thousands of years ago.People usuallywritecouplets on red paper using brushes,which presentsthe beautyofChinesecalligraphy andan atmosphereofhappiness.Besides,what iswritten inthe coupletsalways conveyspeoples goodhopes andwishes for the comingnew year.I hopeyou can come toChinaandenjoy yourselfintheSpringFestival,learning moreabout Chinaand theChineseculture.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于英语问，要求给美国笔友Tom写封信，介绍中国人过春节贴春联的习俗【详解】L词汇积累习惯于be usedto doingfbe accustomedto开始存在come intobeing玲came into existence展现showf present表达expressf convey
3.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句This traditionalcustom cameintoexistencethousands ofyears ago.拓展句This traditionalcustom whichcameintoexistencethousandsofyearsago ispopular allover China.[高分句型1]People usuallywrite coupletsonredpaperusingbrushes,which presentsthe beautyofChinesecalligraphy andanatmosphere ofhappiness.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Besides,what iswritten inthe coupletsalways conveyspeoples goodhopes andwishes for the comingnewyear.（运用了what引导主语从句）
2.北京胡同假定你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Tony要来北京体验中国传统文化，请根据他的问题回复邮件，为他设计北京一日游活动，帮助他体验中国传统文化请描述你们打算去的地方、具体的活动安排、以及这样安排的理由注意
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Hi,Tony!Im gladthat youllcome toBeijing soon.In orderto experiencetraditional Chineseculture better,I dorecommendBeijing Hutongtour.First,we9re goingsightseeing alongthe lanesin Hutong.The housesthere aretraditional,such asSiheyuan.Fromthem,you canimagine howpeople usedto live.Second,were goingto visita Hutongfamily.We canhave lunchandhave ashort talkwith thelocal residents,which can help youlearn aboutmany storiesof the past.Hutongs arethe homesof commonpeople inthepast.It is a goodchoice tolearn abouttraditional Chineseculture.Im lookingforward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua假如你是李华，计划和同学去当地博物馆参观中国瓷器Chinese porcelain展，请你给喜欢中国文化的外教Alice写一封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括以下要点
1.出发及返回时间；
2.活动安排可以了解中国瓷器的历史，欣赏展出的中国瓷器等；
3.请对方告知是否愿意去并期待对方的回复注意L词数100左右；2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Dear Alice,Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Alice,Knowing thatyouarekeen onChineseculture,Kd liketo inviteyou tovisit thelocal museumwith usnextSaturday to enjoy Chinese porcelain.During thevisit,we willlearn abundantinformation aboutits history.On topof that,we willhave achance toappreciate some delicate and rare porcelain,some ofwhich is exhibited forthe first time.As weall know,porcelain is aChinese inventionand famousforthefinest qualityacross theworld.Thus,you willdefinitely have a fantasticfeast foryoureyes.In addition,we shouldbe backaround4pm.If you cancome,please letus knowand wellwait foryou attheschool gateat8a.m.Looking forward to yourearly reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给外教Alice写一封邮件，邀请她去当地博物馆参观中国瓷器Chineseporcelain展【详解】L词汇积累机会chancefopportunity以著名be famousfor=be knownfor极好的fantastic玲wonderful此外:in addition=whats more
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句During thevisit,we willlearn abundantinformation aboutits history.拓展句During thevisit,we willlearn abundantinformation aboutits history,which canbroaden ourhorizon.【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing thatyouarekeen onChineseculture,Kd liketo inviteyou tovisit thelocal museumwith usnext Saturdaytoenjoy Chineseporcelain,（that弓|导宾语从句）[高分句型2]On topof that,we willhave achance toappreciatesomedelicateandrareporcelain,someof whichisexhibitedforthefirsttime.（介词+关系代词引导非限制性定语从句）假定你是高一
（1）班班长李华，你们班想邀请外教Alex来参加主题为“中国剪纸（Chinese paper-cutting）^的班级活动请你用英语写一封邀请信，内容包括L时间和地点；
3.具体活动与意义；
4.期待答复注意
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯【答案】Dear Alex,Im very delightedto write a letter to tellyou somethingabout Chinese paper-cutting exhibition,which willstarton March20,at4pm,in ourclass:Room
402.As iswell-known tous all,Chinese paper-cutting isfamous allover theworld andIm sureyou will beinterested init,so Iplan to inviteyou to paya closevisit.The exhibitionis acollection ofworks created by somefamous paper-cutting artistsin China.During theactivity,I willshow youaround ourschool andthis isagoodchancefor youtoenjoyyourself andlearn moreabout Chinese traditional culture.Would youplease havea lookat theexhibitionwith meId appreciateit ifyou couldaccept myinvitation.Im lookingforwardtoreceiving yourreply assoon aspossible.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文要求考生写一封邀请信，邀请外教Alex来参加主题为〃中国剪纸（Chinese paper-cutting）的班级活动【详解】
1.词汇积累高兴的delighted玲pleasant确定的sure玲certain计划做，打算做plan to-intend to机会chance玲opportunity
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句The exhibitionisacollection ofworks createdby some famouspaper-cutting artistsin China.拓展句The exhibitionisacollection ofworks,which arecreatedbysomefamouspaper-cutting artistsin China.【点睛】[高分句型1]Dear AlexJmverydelightedtowritealettertotellyousomethingaboutChinesepaper-cutting exhibition,which willstarton March20,at4pm,in ourclass:Room
402.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Id appreciateit ifyou couldaccept myinvitation.（运用了虚拟语气）假定你是李华你的英国朋友Peter来信说他的父亲经常腰痛，听说中医疗效不错，特来信向你咨询请你回复一封电子邮件内容包括
1.推荐针灸；
2.简要介绍针灸及其优点；
3.祝愿早日康复注意
1.词数100字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇针灸acupunctureDear Peter,Im sosorry tohear thatyour fatherhas beensuffering fromwaist pain.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,Im sosorry tohearthatyour fatherhas beensuffering fromwaist pain.Now Id liketorecommend themethodof acupunctureto you.Acupuncture isa keycomponent oftraditional Chinesemedicine,which hasa long history ofmorethantwothousand years.This techniquehas beenwidely recognizedas aneffective treatmentfor a varietyofdiseases,such asneckpain,back painand waistpain.Whats more,its apainless procedurewith thinneedles inserted into the body.Ithink yourfathers symptomwillbegone afterseveral treatments.Hope yourfather willrecover soon.And donthesitate tocontact meif necessary.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文要求考生给英国的朋友Peter回复一封电子邮件简要介绍一下针灸【详解】
2.词汇积累推荐recommend玲advise组成部分componentfpart此夕卜whats more玲besides治疗treatment玲therapy
3.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句Whats more,its apainless procedurewith thinneedles insertedinto thebody.拓展句Whats more,its apainless procedurethough thinneedles wasinsertedintothebody.【点睛】【高分句型1]Acupuncture isa keycomponent oftraditional Chinesemedicine,which hasa longhistory ofmorethan twothousand years1运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2]And donthesitate tocontact meif necessary.（运用了状语从句的省略）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Mark来信说对中华传统美德很感兴趣，希望能更多的了解中华传统美德请你给他写封邮件，内容包括
1.中华传统美德就是中华民族的民族精神；
2.中华传统美德有孝敬父母、诚实守信、勤奋刻苦等；
3.你的看法参考词汇:Chinese traditional virtues中华传统美德注意
1.词数100左右；
4.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
5.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数Dear Mark,Im Li Hua,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mark,Im Li Hua,delightedtohear fromyou.Knowing thatyou takeinterest inChinese traditional virtues,I feelhonoredtointroducethe followingtoyou.Extensive andprofound,Chinese civilizationwith alonghistorybehind it,has generatedunique Chinesenationalspirit,among which are Chinese traditional virtues.The coreof those virtues consistsof respectingparents,stayinghonest and faithful,working diligentlyand hard.Those virtuesare not the barriers to prevent us Chinese from strayingoff the track,but motivationsto promoteus tobe better ourselves.As faras Imconcerned,Chinesetraditionalvirtues actas mirrors,with whichwe canadjust ourbehaviors fromtimeto time.As ateenager,its myduty topass onthosevirtues.Hope mybrief introductioncanhelpyou knowmoreabout Chinesetraditionalvirtues.If possible,youcancometoChina toappreciate thosecharming virtuesin person.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生给外国朋友Mark写封邮件，内容包括
1.中华传统美德就是中华民族的民族精神；
2.中华传统美德有孝敬父母、诚实守信、勤奋刻苦等；
3.你的看法【详解】L词汇积累高兴的delightedfglad荣幸的honored玲privileged忠诚的:faithful-loyal由组成consist offbemade upof
2.句式拓展合并简单句原句The coreof thosevirtues consistsof respectingparents,staying honestand faithful,working diligentlyand hard.Those virtuesare notthe barriersto preventus Chinesefrom straying offthe track,but motivationsto promoteus tobebetterourselves.拓展句The coreof thosevirtues consistsof respectingparents,staying honestandfaithful,working diligentlyand hard,whicharenotthebarrierstopreventusChinesefromstrayingoffthetrack,but motivationsto promoteus tobebetter ourselves.【点睛】【高分句型11Extensive andprofound,Chinese civilizationwithalonghistorybehind it,has generateduniqueChinese nationalspirit,among whichare Chinesetraditionalvirtues.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2]As faras Imconcerned,Chinesetraditionalvirtues actas mirrors,with whichwe canadjust ourbehaviorsfrom timetotime.（运用了“介词+which〃引导的非限制性定语从句）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Linda在邮件中向你咨询端午节的相关情况请你根据以下内容给她回封邮件，内容包括L端午节的习俗；
3.端午节的意义；4,邀请她前来体验注意L词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇端午节theDragon Boat Festival；粽子zongzi【答案】Dear Linda,Im gladto receiveyour E-mail inwhich youasked meabout theDragon BoatFestival.As theDragon BoatFestival isapproaching,Km writingtointroduceit toyou.The DragonBoatFestival,one traditionalChinese festival,falls onMay5th inthe lunarcalendar.People celebrateit inmemoryofQuYuan,aChinesepoet.Then peoplein Chinawill holdavarietyof activities,such asholding dragon boatracing,eating tastyrice dumplingsand soon.If thereisachance,welcome toChina toexperience itpersonally.Idliketoinviteyoutowatch thedragonboatracing,which takesplace annually.In thisway,you willhaveabetter understandingof theDragonBoatFestival.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】。
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