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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为左右150Whether wenotice itor not,our childis alittle reflectionof ourselves.They growuplooking moreand morelike us.They evenhave similarpersonalities andhobbies,and insomecases,the standardof choosinga goodfriend.One day,my10-year-old Janesaid,Mom,I madea new friend atschool today.Canshe comeover tomorrow”Her wordsmade meextremely happybecause Janewas ashygirl and I wantedher tomake somefriends to bring herout ofher shell.“Sure,honey,that soundsgreat.I said,thinking backto myown childhoodbestfriend,Susan.We livedacross thestreet fromeach otherin Washington Heights,NewYork.We metat theage of10,too.Like my daughter,I wasshy andhad troublemakingfriends.But Susandrew meout.She wasone of the friendliestpeople inschool,with shinyblackhair anda mile-wide smile.Thanks toSusan.I washappy everyday.In seniorhigh school,Susan wenton atrip toFlorida.This wasthe firsttime we had tobeaway fromeach otherfbr afew days.Til beback soonand Iwill writeto youas soonasI arrive.she toldme.But Ididnt gether phonecall norreceive anymail fromher.Soon,my familymoved toNew Jersey,making myhope ofseeing Susanimpossible.Whenever Ithought ofher,tears cameinto myeyes.The nextday Janebrought hernew friendhome.“Hi,Mrs.Smith.the littlegirl said.Her hairwas soshiny andblack and she gaveme abig smile.“My nameis Jo.My momwillpick meup2hours later.”注意续写词数应为左右
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2.Paragraph1:I waspuzzled becausemy daughtersnew friendlooked sofamiliar.Paragraph2:Two hourspassed reallyquickly,and there was a knock on the door.友谊的续写第一段续写分析故事线“我”看到女儿的新朋友,因她的外貌和性格特点,感觉似曾相识J在与的交谈中,得知她母亲曾住在华盛顿高地,“我”瞬间意识到可能的关联,Jo便询问她母亲的名字,果然证实了“我”的猜测,原来是命运让两个孩子走到Jo了一起短语(确切指出)put onesfinger on(出于好奇)out ofcuriosity(过去常常)used to(突然意识到)a suddenrealization(碰巧)happen to(情绪激动)be overcomewith emotionbring...together(使.......相聚)(看起来熟悉)look familiar主旨升华句Sometimes,life hasa mysteriousway ofbringing backwhat wasonce lost,and this(有时候,生活以一encounter between our daughterswas a beautiful reminderof that.种神秘的方式带回曾经失去的东西,我们女儿之间的这次相遇就是对此美好的印证)The similaritybetween Joand Susanwasnt justa coincidence;it was a signthat(和之间的相friendship cantranscend time and distancein unexpectedways.Jo Susan似并非仅仅是巧合,这是一个信号,表明友谊可以以意想不到的方式跨越时间和距离)This chancemeeting mademe believethat the connections weform inlife,even iftheyseem tofade away,can bereignited throughthe mostunlikely circumstances.(这次偶然的相遇让我相信,我们在生活中建立的联系,即使看似消逝,也能在最意想不到的情况下重新燃起)Its amazinghow theuniverse workstobringpeople together,and inthis case,it wasthroughthe friendshipof ourchildren that the pastand presentcollided in the most(宇宙让人们相聚的方式令人惊叹,在这种情况下,正是通过我们wonderful way.孩子的友谊,过去和现在以最美妙的方式交织在一起)Our daughters*friendship becamethe bridgethat reconnectedtwo oldfriends,(我们女儿的showing thatthe circleof friendshipis unendingand canspan generations.友谊成为了重新连接两位老朋友的桥梁,表明友谊的圈子是无尽的,并且可以跨越几代人)第二段续写分析故事线两个小时很快过去,有人敲门,“我”打开门看到了两人都Susan,震惊不已,随后激动相拥,泪流满面在孩子们困惑的目光中,我们坐下来分享过去的故事,从年少时的时光到如今孩子们成为朋友的奇妙缘分,我们明白多年前失去的友谊因女儿们得以重燃短语(很快过去)pass quickly(有人敲门)therewas aknock on the door(一位中年妇女)a middle-aged woman(震惊得呆住)freeze inshock(冲向)rush towards(紧紧拥抱)embrace tightly(分享某人的故事)share one*s stories(被重新点燃)be rekindled主旨升华句This reunionwas morethan justa meetingof oldfriends;it was a celebrationofthe(这次重逢不仅仅是老朋友的相power offriendship andthe unexpectedtwists offate.聚,更是对友谊的力量和命运意外转折的一次庆祝)Through theeyes ofour confuseddaughters,we sawthe beginningof anew chapter.(从in ourfriendship,one thatwould bestrengthened bythe bondbetweenourchildren我们困惑的女儿们的眼中,我们看到了我们友谊新篇章的开始,这将因我们孩子之间的纽带而更加牢固)The tearswe shedwere amix ofjoy andnostalgia,symbolizing thejourney ofour(我们流下的眼泪是喜悦和怀friendship thathad comefull circleafter allthese years.旧的混合,象征着我们的友谊在历经这些年后圆满回归的旅程)Our daughters*innocent friendship had unwittinglygiven usa secondchance tocherishthe friendshipwe oncehad,proving that sometimes,the mostprecious giftscome(我们女儿纯真的友谊在不知不觉中给了我们第二inthemost unexpectedpackages.次珍惜曾经友谊的机会,证明了有时候,最珍贵的礼物往往以最意想不到的方式出现)This magicalreunion taughtus thattrue friendshipendures,and evenwhen separatedbytimeandspace,it canfind away tothrive again,thanks to theconnectionswe makein(这次神奇的重逢告诉我们,真正的友谊经得起考验,即使被时间和空间分隔,life.它也能找到再次蓬勃发展的方式,这都要归功于我们在生活中建立的联系)写作示范一第一段续写I waspuzzled becausemy daughtersnew friendlooked sofamiliar.Her mannerisms,as shetalked andlaughed,were uncannilylike someonefrom mypast.As wesat intheliving room,I couldnthelp butbe drawnto Jo.Her storiesabout schooland herhobbieswere toldwith suchenthusiasm,just likeSusan usedto.When Icasually asked about herfamilysorigin,andshementioned WashingtonHeights,my heartskipped abeat.I leanedforward,my voicetrembling slightly,Does yourmom happento beSusan Josface litupwith surprise.Yes!How didyou know”I felta lumpform in my throat.It wasas iftheuniverse hadconspired tobring ourworlds together.第二段续写Two hourspassed reallyquickly,and therewasaknock onthe door.My handsshookas Iwalked towardsit,anticipation fillingevery fiberof mybeing.When Iopened the door,there stoodSusan,a bitolder butstill unmistakablyher.Our eyeslocked,and fora moment,time stoodstill.Then,a sobescaped mylips,and werushed intoeach othersarms,holdingon tightlyas ifwe wereafraid tolet go.Our daughtersstared atus inwide-eyed wonder.We satatthekitchen table,cups oftea inhand,and sharedour stories.From theadventureswe hadas kidstothechallenges ofmotherhood,and howour daughtershad unknowinglyreconnectedus.It wasa momentof puremagic,a giftfrom thepast thatwe wouldcherishforever.写作示范二第一段续写I waspuzzled becausemy daughtersnew friendlooked sofamiliar.Jos shinyblackhair swayedas shemoved,and herinfectious smileseemed tohold amemory thatwas justoutof reach.As wechatted,I noticedher kindand friendlynature,which wassoreminiscent ofSusan.My curiositygot thebetter ofme,and Iaskedabouther familybackground.When Jomentioned thather momwas fromWashingtonHeights,a shiverrandown myspine.I tooka deepbreath andasked,“Is yourmom Susan”Jos eyesgrew asbigas saucers.uYes!How doyou knowher”A waveof emotionwashed overme.It wasclearthatsomeunseen forcehad broughtour daughterstogether,andIcouldnt waitto seewherethis wouldlead.第二段续写Two hourspassed reallyquickly,and therewasaknock onthedoor.My heartpoundedinmychest asI mademy wayto answerit.When Iopened thedoor,Susan stoodthere,a lookof shockand recognitionon her face.Without aword,we threwour armsaroundeach other,our bodiesshaking withemotion.Our daughterswatched inconfusionas weheld each other tightly.We satonthecouch,our handsclasped together,andrecounted theyears thathad passed.We laughed,we cried,and wemarveled athow ourdaughters1friendshiphadrekindled ourown.It wasabeautifulreminder thattruefriendship neverfades,no matterhow muchtime passes.参考答案I waspuzzled becausemy daughtersnewfriendlooked sofamiliar.But I was surethatI hadnever metJo before.She toldme thather familyjust movedfrom Los Angeles,which puzzledme evenmore becauseI hadnever beento LosAngeles andwehadnorelatives livingin LosAngeles,either.I convincedmyself thatit wasonly myimagination.The twogirls goton verywell andthey giggledfrom timeto time.I watchedthem playandfelt sohappy formydaughterfrom thebottom ofmy heart.Two hourspassed reallyquickly,and therewasaknockonthedoor.It wasJos momcomingto pickher uplater thatafternoon.On seeingherface,Iwasshocked.“Judy!”shecried.Its me,Susan!”We embracedeachother.It turnedout thather fatherscompanysent hisfather toLosAngelesbefore theysettled inFlorida.She triedcalling melater butwehad moved.The twolittle girlswere happyto seetheir mothersbecame goodfriends atoncebefore wetold themour story,with happytears rollingdown ourcheeks.。
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